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Review of ANCIENT GIFTS  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I applaud your words and thoughts. These are the thoughts that I too have many times. It is up to us to let others know that science isnt the only gift we have but that many things have been learned in times before.

You do a great job expanding in this area *Smile*

Your friend
John
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Review of Who Am I  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.5)
Your sentiments really flow well in this emotional poem!!!

Your words depict loss and appreciation for the things that you have and also is a well worded poem!!!

Welcome to WDC and I am glad that we met. I will be back to your port soon.

If you need some help feel free to email me or one of the moderators here. When you get here it is quite overwhelming... at least for me it was *Smile*

Take care my new friend
John
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Review of Martial Arts Poll  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (5.0)
Jeet kune do and Shotokan are two martial arts I have trained in and appreciate the peace of mind and knowledge that they have helped me to achieve. I learned these techniques and ended up breaking my instructors arm in the full contact version of this training.

Nice poll.
John
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Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.5)
I have been amiss to returning your reviews for both me and my son's writing. I am hopeing that today I can make up for this.

I found this style and form quite encompassing and also the subject is one I havent really contemplated.

Its with favor that I return my review of your poem. I really enjoyed this as you can use this as a metaphor to many thing.

Nice Post!
Your friend
John
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Review of Shelby Lynn  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Wink* I think that having read the contents of this folder gives me the right to rate the folder.
I enjoy reading and I am glad to have read your daughters wonderful poem. It is interesting what inspire those who choose to write whether its poems, books, stories, or experiences.

I thank you for posting this fine folder *Smile*
John
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Review of To dream.....  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.5)
It looks like a good poem to teach those who read poetry.

I like the origionality of reading writings that we ourselfs create personally.

I used to have a folder of quotes that others had and then I had a thought why not just wipe it clean and use my own. I felt like me getting ratings for others writings wasnt right for me.

I have had numerous ratings of my own quotes now and I am glad I chose to change it... But that is just me.

I thank you for posting a poem that you enjoy *Wink*
John
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Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.5)
You make some very valid points, many worth considering!!! And taking with us every day of our lives.

I really like the closure you put with this excellent read. The quote by Enigma-AWESOME!!!!!

I see now it has been way toooo long since I have been to your port. I wont let this happen again I assure you!!

Your friend Always
John
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Review of Anticipation  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.5)
I had forgot how intense playing hide and seek could be *Smile*

Today Im sure it is probably the playstation games that keep our young glued to the tube.

Its refreshing to see that the games I played when I was young are still out there and being played!!!!

John
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Review of KEYBOARD  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (5.0)
Now this is pure excellence!!!!

I have yet to be able to have an acrostic rhyme with the style and meter you have shown here!!!!

This is a grand read and entertaining as many truths can get *Smile*

I apologise for my not getting to your port more often my friend

Your friend
John *Smile*
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Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (5.0)
I previously tried to R&R this but Netzero didnt like my r and r I suppose and disconnected me...

Aint that the truth *Smile*

I have noticed that lately it seems we are becoming our own doctors. Dont think so? Watch the tv and then watch all the adds the pharmecutical companies are bombarding us with.

It starts out showing people in the prime of their lives in a park or on some outing all smiles and happiness. Pushing their children in the swing or golfing or many other activities we might enjoy.


I congratulate you on a well written story my friend *Smile*

Your friend
John

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Review of Poetry  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I see your a well read author here and I can understand why *Smile*

I feel all folders should be rated to help others and your exposure!!!

I was looking for the post you suggested I check out. Ill keep stumbling around. I am sure Ill find it my friend

Your friend
John
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Review by Emilbus™
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I found this in the public reviews!

I lost my father and I can relate only too well to what a loss this is.

I have worked in and on many facilites in Texas that are "Assisted aid facilities for the dementia and alzheimer impared patients" To me these are one and the same. The only difference being is that the parents here dont always remember their children. You are very fortunate it seems.

Your writing shows alot of caring and that you are a giving person. I like both of those qualities *Smile*

Your friend
John
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Review by Emilbus™
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Ahhh yes... I too was at the mercy of the "Weather forcasters" (for many moons) lol. I now reffer to this form of employment for many and I suggest we call them their true name... The weather-guessers. I personally use the rock method to determine the state of our weather. If there is a shadow beside the rock... Its sunny, if the rock is wet... Its rainy, if there is snow on the rock... well there really is a problem with that here in Texas but anyway... its snowing! LOL

Thank you for this endearing read!!!

John

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Review of Just For Today  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.5)
Exceptionally written!!! It has a very positive feeling and leaves this reader feeling like wanting to follow in the direction your leading!!!!

This is a talent, for someone to take words and after reading them the reader feels something. I enjoyed this read!!!

See you in the reviews *Smile*

John
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Review of Ecstasy  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
These feelings that you have experienced really tells a story!!! I like this poem it shows that with love that two can go places that single people cannot.

I like the way you bring closure to this... It is a nice touch to place this ending on it!!!

Your friend
John

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Review of La Belle Dame  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.5)
Ahh the story in poetry! This is a ride that we all must make. I pray I get on the right train and not the train of the insane...

I have been on the latter and it wasnt a joyride by any means. I have reffered to it in a few poems and they take on a dark side from time to time... This however balances the scales to show the human side that can change from one to another side.

I suggest others read this and look deep into the lines...
John
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Review by Emilbus™
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
I like the premise of what you got going here, and I qualify for this group if age is a part of it LOL

I see many here who I have interacted with and have enjoyed reviewing!!!

I will be back now I know where this cool place is *Smile*

Your friend
John
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Review of Where were you?  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.5)
In the arms of another woman of course. I have seen it from the male side all too often. Its not just a one way street in a relationship. The traffic goes both ways.

Too often we find this out about one we have chosen to be our partner after its too late.

I can readily relate to this poem and as sure as I am typing this to you right now its going on in thousands of circles around us.

Thank you for this post!!!

John
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Review by Emilbus™
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Poems of a spiritual nature touch me many times. This one does for a fact. I needed to read this today. I believe Angels come in all forms and I believe this with my heart.

I welcome you to this WDC community and I hope that you meet many kind folk here as I have. Many have helped me get more knowledgeble about writing and grammar and I cant say enough about them.

I hope to see you around here from time to time *Smile*

John
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Review of I Lost Someone  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | N/A (Unratable.)
You have learned English well. However your sentence structures are weak in a few places. I am sure that in time this will become a thing of the past and you will grow into this English language!!!
john
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Review by Emilbus™
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Someone has to review the reviewers *Smile*

This had me guessing who it was... I am publicly reviewing this so I wont go into detail who I thought it was.

Your story is a cliff hanger though and its quite different in that it takes us to a place not often visited!

Keep on writing and I'll keep on reading!!!

Your friend
John
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Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is quite a sig!!!! I like it too.

Many people make sigs here and I admire them for that... I for some reason unknown to me cant even make a stick man on the paint program... I may need a different program but I dont think its a program error LOL'
Your friend
John
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Review of Reclamation  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Lou your writing lends credibility to the places you have been and the places you write about!!!

I have enjoyed each word I have read from your pen and I will find my way back here even if I have to swim a bayou or two *Smile*

Always your friend and fellow poet
John
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Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you My dear friend!!!! You will never know how this will touch others lives *Smile*

I feel honored you mentioned me in your summary *Smile*

Its always a joy to peer into anothers thoughts and words and see how you yourself seem to be able to see yourself like looking in a mirror that has aged with the years that have gone by...
Again I thank you

Yours
John *Smile*
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Review of Midnight Show  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
I have met a most wonderful woman here that was a police officer. This reminded me of some of her writing. Your style is different (of course) but it leads to many of the same conclusions that this poem sends me to.

Maybe you remember her from a while back Remmington. I think it would be wild to ride with the police especially here in Houston. My uncle was a houston Police officer for almost 30 yrs and so I have been told many war stories. Thank you for this post Nikola

Your friend
John
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