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Your message isnt one of the most promising type, but it says what you wanted it to say. I am sure there are many out there that readily identify with this and know the deptths that this took you to.
I was just stumbling around and was interested in checking out your port as you sent me an email and to my knowledge, I hadnt interacted with you before.
I am glad to meet you and I hope to visit your port again soon
I have several relatives that live in Slidell and Pearl river. Most of them evacuated to my house here in east Texas during the time of Katrina.
I have been to New Orleans many times and it was a place of fantasy to a point. It was the old pirates place of enjoying their stolen goods and trophys. It was many things and I feel that it still is but soon to be modernized. I get the feeling that Bush didnt do much to help during their time of desperate need but watched on tv like the rest of the boob tube population. He must have at one point said "Glad we arent there now" lol.
I have had many of my cousins tell me of bodies floating in the waters as they reseded. Others tell me of automatic gunfights that took many of the hoodlums live only to put more bodies floating in the waters there, and a few Nation Guard men died there as well but they were pulled out for a proper burial.
I had some one tell me this a while back and its a quote from a movie. "Life aint easy Wyatt, its just life. Live it.
I can identify with this at many times these days. I know that we live in the greatest country on this planet, but sometimes it really makes you wonder dont it. Personally I hope to retire to Belize
I thank you for sharing your opinion with us here Judy!
I must apologies for the tardyness of my review... I have been pc'less for a while and now just got back online... Soon I must depart once again to work and Ill be checking from a library somewhere... I miss our visits to each others ports
Moving right along...
I feel the thoughts you have posted to read
I have been blessed to have enjoyed his deed
I like the reverence that you choose to reveal
I waller in the presents you can feel
I thank you for this wonderful poem my dear friend
John
I seen this coming... Its like the old joke Ill be the front and you can be yourself
I am sorry it took me so long to repay your visit to my humble port... After my pc crashed and burned I was without internet unless I went to the library and the time spent there goes so quickly...
I like this poem and it shows alot of creativity
Your friend
John
Jhen this is a wonderful poem and a very thought provoking read
Its seems like lifetimes since my pc crashed and I was able to visit your port and chat with you.
I hope to hear from Crow soon I have sent him many emails.
Hope to hear from you soon too my dear young friend
John
Your writing is amazing!!!!
I can readily identify and can picture the scene you paint so well in my minds eye
I have been homeless at one point so perhaps I can read more into this than others in your vast representation of how things could be or is...
I thank you for your kind reviews and I am now back at home so for a little while Ill be stumbling around in your port and I can already look forward to it
Y0ur
friend
John
Kitty cats... lol you cant let them always get over on us LOL
I found this quite different... Here is this Biker guy and he gets adopted by a mere cat... but I too am guilty of this so I almost didnt review this and only rated it
My cat had me trained pretty well after 15yrs... he was pretty special I got to admit
Nice poem and I will be back soon to read more my friend
John
I love the phrase " I wont lend faith to the fiction"
I liked the poem also as a whole its just that one line really cinched the poem and drew the tethers together for a really finished effect... What a great tool to use to instill within the readers mind these few but illuminating words
I have read a few but this one stands out in my humble opinion
I am stumbling around aimlessly this morning and I am glad to have ventured into your wonderous port... for if I hadnt I wouldn't have found this amazing post!!!
How simple yet intensely told poem. When you can describe a stick of gum like this then there is no doubt that your talented in this thing we call poetry.
I am glad I stumbled into your port today. I hope to do so again in the near future my friend
Your friend
John
I understand this so very well. I let my old silverado ('76 model) sit in the yard only to come home one day from being off working in the "big" city to find that it had been sold by my mother... It is still a matter of controversy...
It was in my Fathers and he gave it to me but I just never took the time to put it in my name... (for reasons I wont go into at this point). She was 30 this year and she gave it to a guy driving a wrecker because she didnt want it to look like a used car lot at her house. It was my favorite truck and a tree from Rita took out my elcamino. I am stranded now at this point...
Nicely written story and I totally relate to each word of it.
Now this is something that I enjoy to read about when stumbling around on our site... Its thinking outside the box so-to-speak.
It shows alot of imagination and leaves the reader with a positive outlook and a hope filled heart
One thing you might want to look at is this part here... "when I'm blue I simple," I think you might have meant "simply"... However I could be wrong and it is your poem.
Have a good one and keep on writing
your friend
John
I feel your pain. I too have lost alot of my hearing unfortunately due mostly to my work environment. I worked construction for the last 30+ yrs. I had some tests taken at a petro-chemical plant I worked at and they found this problem. I have lost some at both ends of the spectrum.
I can understand you fear. I may one day get a hearing aid of some type. This is something I took for granted while listening to Ted Nugent at 1,000,000 watts they said at one of the concerts that I attended. I attended too many more to even mention here and none of them were quiet concers...Not even Quiet Riot LOL.
It is definately something we should look into when we get to the big four oh.
You have depicted this quite well and show alot of talent in this poem. It has a surreal quality about it in the way you tell it and the way you project it.
Welcome to writing.com!!! I find it a nice thing to find a "newbie" to read I hope you enjoy being here, I know I do
I have many fond memories of different fairs and i wrote a poem about them a year or two back... Its in my port somewhere... If you want ill find it and send you a link
I really like this poem and I will be back soon to read more from your port
Your friend
John
Btw Welcome to WDC I hope this helps some !
The underlying currents of this peice are exposed when you sum it up so eloquently
Im glad I found this in the Items to review forum... I had never used this before.
The poem looks a little stark at first but when read it really comes to life!!!
Thank you for posting this
Your friend
John
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