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Review of Broken Government  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like the dream like quality that you have endorsed this poem with... I woke up and seen beyond this nice green pasture that you have painted so eloquently for us to graze upon...

Their truths are as empty as a a campaign promise... I believe that its the good old boy school of hurray for me scr*w you, when one elected... they don't have to rely upon social security to retire they have their own retirement... A politician could get arrested selling cocaine in a school yard and it would get dismissed as they are above the law...

I don't mean to belittle your poem it just seems a bit naive..

Your friend
John
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Review of Sam The Plumber  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
LOL I like this!!!! As an electrician I can totally relate only too well *Smile*

Nice poem and story that you have permitted us to view here. I wrote something once about tools... Its not quite the same... I might should give a shot at something of this type...

Something that caught my attention was the '69 camero in you bio.. I had a 69 camero one time and it was the favorite of all my vehicles... I love el camino's but this was the Icing on the cake *Smile* Mine was a super sport... I always wanted a rally sport but I like the SS anyway... I raced it and it was a street rod too.

Again I welcome you to WDC.
Your friend
John
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Review by Emilbus™
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
LOL good one!!!!

I didnt see that coming you really blind sided me on that story *Smile*

I see you have added a few things here since my last visit. I am glad I stumbled around in here and I am also glad to see you branching out here at WDC.

Its always cool to see someone get better at something they enjoy doing *Smile*

Your friend
John
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Review of What Is A Poet  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.5)
Your words show that you yourself are a poet for within your verses they expose the person that is you.

I like the comments and perceptions and insight that you show in writing this simple yet descriptive poem of verse to make us think and wonder how you came to view this the way you do... It is quite evident that you are a poet after reading this and I am glad to call you friend

Your friend
John
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Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (5.0)
You definately have some very interesting and cool polls here. I find that those that you actually learn something from are worth the time to take them....

This is only my second poll of yours I have taken but I am sure I will find more to check out in your cool port *Smile*
John
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Review by Emilbus™
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The truth is stranger than fiction. It is funny that given the absolute power to plan and experiment on populations goes unchallenged.

Also its curious where and how did the intelligence of these times come upon the theories and ideas that certain events could change the way people think and act...

This is trully a scary place this world of today

Your friend
John
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Review of To a friend  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.5)
Your wonderful tribute to a friend is something not soon forgotten!!!

I enjoyed the positivity in your words. The shout of joy after the pain of suffering and this is a great story. It shows that perserverance can obtain many goals that many miss... because of their lack of hope and tolerance.

Thank you for this fine story my friend
John
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Review of Open Window  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.5)
What a wonderful tribute!!! And the message can't be missed here *Smile*

I like this poem very much... Something about the smell of fresh cut grass really takes me on a trip back to a time when innocense was a current condition...

I Thank you for your poem and I would also like to welcome you to WDC!!!! Im glad I stumbled into your port today

Your new friend
John *Smile*
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Review by Emilbus™
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
WOW Im in awe of your storytelling abilities.

I applaud you and you gift of sending the reader into your world if but for a moment in this life...

Prompts really bring out alot in a writers mind...

I havent tried this... Perhaps one day I will tire of poems and try something different if so this is what I'll try...

Thank you my new friend

Your friend
John
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Review of Elusive Word  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.5)
The life of a poet... How elusive a word or a phrase can be. It can take on porportions way beyond the measure of mere words. You poem interprets this aspect very well!!!

I found the truth in this poem is something anyone that strives to write a poem can readily identify with *Wink*

Thank you for this amazing post!!!
John
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Review of Society  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (5.0)
Bravo my friend!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love it when I find that there are those that dont have to wear a designer pair of jeans to know who they are.

I love it when there are those such as I that look beyond the mere flesh to get a glimmer of what lies inside...

I thank you for this poem that I trully feel is written from the heart *Smile*

Your friend
John
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Review of River of Light  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.5)
The eloquent portrayal of this wonderous poem speaks volumes to me!!!

This simple yet complex read sent light around me and in this light I can see that you are certainly gifted and I hope to see you use this gift and keep writing and posting when you can!!!

Your friend
John
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Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.5)
Sorry it took me longer to get back to you than normal. I like this poem. The delivery, the pitch, and the swing!!!

You sum it up very well and I am glad that i found my way to your port today!!!!

Keep on writing and Ill keep on reading my friend
Your friend
John
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Review of Amazing Grays  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.5)
I think (maybe since Im knocking on a door of nearing that age) That this is a wonderful story!!!!

A real true written from the heart write!!! Nothing like the sentments and insight that you detail in a manner that speaks volumes to us that are near that border or slightly past that milestone...

Thank you for this article
John
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Review by Emilbus™
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
You sir sound as though you might be a newpaper columnist or a writer for Andy Rooney LOL...

Im glad you didnt use really big words... as it is it takes me two hours to watch 60 minutes...

I like your style and you do it well I may add... I just dont do subtraction and multiplaction well...

I welcome you to WDC and hope you enjoy it here as much as I do *Smile*
Your friend
John
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Review of Summer Seashore  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
The alliterations are righteous in this fine tale told in verse!!!!!

I like your style and the poem was richly enhanced by the form you put it in *Smile* You did justice in "S" form *Smile*

I'm glad that I stumbled into your illustrious port!!!

Thank you for your grand write *Smile*

In the description you spelled Humorous wrong... I'm sure it was just a little typo *Wink*

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Review of Boys with guns  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.0)
I totally enequivically agree with the sentiments you have here...

I think you could describe it in a slightly different form or style and your statement would present itself in a better manner.

This is just my thoughts on this issue that really deserves the attention that you trying so valiently to display..

Welcome to writing.com and I hope to venture into your port again soon *Smile*
John
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Review of Sheep  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
LOL your humorous poem did bring a smile to my face and its a good feeling...

The meter was slightly off in places... But Im sure you can iron out some of the wrinkles with out losing your message *Smile*

Ill be back to stumble around in here again soon *Smile*

Have a wonderful day my fellow member
John
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Review of Memory  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.5)
Reminiscing times of loss are quite enlightning to us when we step back and take a good long hard look at what we had and what we now miss...

Welcome to writing.com and I hope to read more from your portfolio soon *Wink*

I like this poem it establishes you as a writer in my mind
Your friend
John
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Review of Whisper Clouds  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (5.0)
Im sure one day maybe on another flight or on a cloudy day or in a dream the right words will find their way to show you they were just waiting for the right moment in time to make their apperance known...

Whisper clouds will return you to a place that you will reconnect with them one day....

John
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Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.5)
This my first time to stumble around in your port I found this unusual poll. I see that there are two votes for im not sure... I wonder why someone would even take the time to poll if they already know the question up front... can we say duh in harmony of a duet LOL

Good poll..
John
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Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.5)
This style you use here really sets the tone for this wonderful poem about nature!! It is almost surreal in the tone you use here to reinforce the qualities of each stansa!!!

Im glad I stumbled around in your port *Smile* Ill be back my friend
Your friend
John
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Review of Remember  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.0)
I read this and Im sure others that read it will also find it to be a poem of times gone by and putting them behind us is not ever that easy. It takes its toll not only on our souls and heart but also when a trigger sends our minds back to a point that hurts us...

Thank you for your post and I hope to read more of your posts!!

Welcome to writing.com I enjoy my visits here and I hope you will too *Wink*
Emil
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Review of Wingless Angel  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Your intro really shines!!!

Im sure should you decide to continue your story it will also shine!!! I like the sureal feel you give this storyline and I hope you let me know if you add to this story!!!

Im glad in my stumbling around that I found this to read *Wink*

Your friend
John
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Review of How To Get Viewed  
Review by Emilbus™
Rated: E | (4.5)
I thank you for this helpful post to help all of get more ratings *Wink*
It is those like yourself that help those of us to acheive our dreams.
I am glad I read the newsletter and found this. I am bookmarking this page as a fave so I can come back to it from time to time!
Your friend
John
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