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I like the dream like quality that you have endorsed this poem with... I woke up and seen beyond this nice green pasture that you have painted so eloquently for us to graze upon...
Their truths are as empty as a a campaign promise... I believe that its the good old boy school of hurray for me scr*w you, when one elected... they don't have to rely upon social security to retire they have their own retirement... A politician could get arrested selling cocaine in a school yard and it would get dismissed as they are above the law...
I don't mean to belittle your poem it just seems a bit naive..
LOL I like this!!!! As an electrician I can totally relate only too well
Nice poem and story that you have permitted us to view here. I wrote something once about tools... Its not quite the same... I might should give a shot at something of this type...
Something that caught my attention was the '69 camero in you bio.. I had a 69 camero one time and it was the favorite of all my vehicles... I love el camino's but this was the Icing on the cake Mine was a super sport... I always wanted a rally sport but I like the SS anyway... I raced it and it was a street rod too.
I didnt see that coming you really blind sided me on that story
I see you have added a few things here since my last visit. I am glad I stumbled around in here and I am also glad to see you branching out here at WDC.
Its always cool to see someone get better at something they enjoy doing
Your words show that you yourself are a poet for within your verses they expose the person that is you.
I like the comments and perceptions and insight that you show in writing this simple yet descriptive poem of verse to make us think and wonder how you came to view this the way you do... It is quite evident that you are a poet after reading this and I am glad to call you friend
You definately have some very interesting and cool polls here. I find that those that you actually learn something from are worth the time to take them....
This is only my second poll of yours I have taken but I am sure I will find more to check out in your cool port
John
The truth is stranger than fiction. It is funny that given the absolute power to plan and experiment on populations goes unchallenged.
Also its curious where and how did the intelligence of these times come upon the theories and ideas that certain events could change the way people think and act...
Your wonderful tribute to a friend is something not soon forgotten!!!
I enjoyed the positivity in your words. The shout of joy after the pain of suffering and this is a great story. It shows that perserverance can obtain many goals that many miss... because of their lack of hope and tolerance.
What a wonderful tribute!!! And the message can't be missed here
I like this poem very much... Something about the smell of fresh cut grass really takes me on a trip back to a time when innocense was a current condition...
I Thank you for your poem and I would also like to welcome you to WDC!!!! Im glad I stumbled into your port today
The life of a poet... How elusive a word or a phrase can be. It can take on porportions way beyond the measure of mere words. You poem interprets this aspect very well!!!
I found the truth in this poem is something anyone that strives to write a poem can readily identify with
The eloquent portrayal of this wonderous poem speaks volumes to me!!!
This simple yet complex read sent light around me and in this light I can see that you are certainly gifted and I hope to see you use this gift and keep writing and posting when you can!!!
I think (maybe since Im knocking on a door of nearing that age) That this is a wonderful story!!!!
A real true written from the heart write!!! Nothing like the sentments and insight that you detail in a manner that speaks volumes to us that are near that border or slightly past that milestone...
Im sure one day maybe on another flight or on a cloudy day or in a dream the right words will find their way to show you they were just waiting for the right moment in time to make their apperance known...
Whisper clouds will return you to a place that you will reconnect with them one day....
This my first time to stumble around in your port I found this unusual poll. I see that there are two votes for im not sure... I wonder why someone would even take the time to poll if they already know the question up front... can we say duh in harmony of a duet LOL
This style you use here really sets the tone for this wonderful poem about nature!! It is almost surreal in the tone you use here to reinforce the qualities of each stansa!!!
Im glad I stumbled around in your port Ill be back my friend
Your friend
John
I read this and Im sure others that read it will also find it to be a poem of times gone by and putting them behind us is not ever that easy. It takes its toll not only on our souls and heart but also when a trigger sends our minds back to a point that hurts us...
Thank you for your post and I hope to read more of your posts!!
Welcome to writing.com I enjoy my visits here and I hope you will too
Emil
Im sure should you decide to continue your story it will also shine!!! I like the sureal feel you give this storyline and I hope you let me know if you add to this story!!!
Im glad in my stumbling around that I found this to read
I thank you for this helpful post to help all of get more ratings
It is those like yourself that help those of us to acheive our dreams.
I am glad I read the newsletter and found this. I am bookmarking this page as a fave so I can come back to it from time to time!
Your friend
John
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