WOW! I don't know much about writing but in my opinion this one was short, sweet, and to the point! You should publish this poem or something! Seriously!! I especially like the bluebirds part of the poem because it made me think about the other day when I was walking my dog and there were these two birds quietly perched on a telephone wire and they weren't making any sounds but they looked like they were talking to each other about something like small talk. lol! It made them seem like people. (you might of had to be there!)
anyway, your poem is very good and in my opinion should be published or something because it's just SO good!
keep writing!
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I don't know much about writing but in my opinion this one was short, sweet, and to the point! You should publish this poem or something! Seriously!! I especially like the bluebirds part of the poem because it made me think about the other day when I was walking my dog and there were these two birds quietly perched on a telephone wire and they weren't making any sounds but they looked like they were talking to each other about something like small talk. lol! It made them seem like people. (you might of had to be there!