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122 Public Reviews Given
125 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
Reader-reflected and imagery. I review according to the way the writer writes and the affect it has on the reader...does the story grab my interest, or is it lacking something? Plus, I am honored to be called a WDC Power Reviewer.
I'm good at...
Making the author think by asking reader-reflected questions, giving out suggestions, and comparing the author's writing with the rules of grammar and spelling, as well as dialogue and speech, and the overall impression. I am well-rounded--I encourage and point out lines I love just as much as the ones I see need improvement on. In short, I give the kind of review I would like to receive, which would be a review containing notes of improvement, respect, encouragement and correction.
Favorite Genres
*Star* Fantasy, Young Adult, Emotional, Action/Adventure, Mystery, Thriller/Suspense, and I am okay with a slight Horror/Scary and Romance genre, as I tend to write it myself at times.
Least Favorite Genres
LGBT, Erotica, Death, and I am not the comedian so I'll exclude Comedy too.
Favorite Item Types
Books and static items
I will not review...
Erotica and Gay/Lesbian genres, and my rating limits are E, ASR, and 13+
Public Reviews
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Review of Our Lady's Tears  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is so good! I love it!!!! Thank you for this amazing poem.

Khariyya
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this!!!!!!! It's SOOOO good! And so true!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I LOVE this!! It's amazing. Do you have more?
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you so much for writing this! I have wanted to be a missionary to the Far East and India ever since I was ten. This really encourages me and reminds me of what God requires me (and all of us) to do.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I LOVE THIS!!! I've been looking for this kind of advice, especially at this time of my life. I am a 13 year old girl who struggles with this and sometimes goes through mysterious depression. Thank you SO much!!!

Khariyya
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Review of I believe that..  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Amen!!!!!! This is AWESOME!!! I believe in EVERYTHING you just listed. I also believe that God has led me to your portfolio for a reason. You are truly a blessing to me. I am currently writing a folklore story about a princess in Japan and how she switched from Buddhism to Christianity, and the moral of the story is, God can turn lions into lambs, and that anyone can turn to Him for help. It's a long story, and I'm still working on it, so I'm not completely finished yet, but it explains a lot. I can't wait to read more from you! May Jesus bless you!

Khariyya
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Review of From The Cats  
Rated: E | (3.5)
Cute pics of cats! But I don't really get it. What's this supposed to be?
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Review of A Spring Haiku  
Rated: E | (2.5)
That was good detail, but it was a little too short. Do you think you could add some more?


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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Review of Free to Write  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hello! What a wonderful idea! I have a poem I'd like to share with you, called "Mirror"...

Mirror, Mirror, on the wall,
Who's the fairest one of all?
Oh, I hope it's me,
For all can see,
I'm dressed in riches and
wear a crown of gold,
Oh, Mirror, the compliments
never get old.

Mirror, Mirror, on the wall,
Please don't make we wait long.
For I want to hear your praise to me,
Please just spit it out!
I can't wait any longer,
My mind if filling up with doubt.

Queen, my Queen,
you are indeed rich,
but fame is not what you should seek.
Instead, be yourself and unique.

Queen, oh Queen,
You are the fairest no longer,
For you self-seeking, and it just
gets wronger and wronger.

Thank you!!!
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