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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi, Happy to write

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and one of the judges in the
 
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*Exclaimb* Please note that I am not a professional reviewer, anything I say here is just my humble own opinion and views, don't forget that this will be changed by others' perspectives also. Take it if you like and drop it if you don't like it. *Smile*

MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:
The given title is intriguing and linked to the given prompt of the story just like the created body.
It's in narrative style and you did well in showing about the life of a troll and how they Express their selves to others.
I only know now that trolls are never to be trusted, I believe you did great research on them.

You did well in making the story interesting, though it's just simple and light but the sequence and the flow are good and the language that was used can reach everyone.
Well done!


MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:


Here are some of my doubts:

The given title it's in the Interrogative style, so you should add a question mark at the end.

I have also doubts about the part of the dialogue, there are only a few.
Dialogue is one of the important parts of a story, it makes the story lively and can moderate the dullness.

Here are some of the few sentences that I also have doubts,
I marked them in red color and green are my suggestions.

However that all change one day in late July when a weird truck with slime covering it and large amounts of thick black smoke coming out of it's tail pipe pulled up

However that all changed one day in late July when a weird truck with slime covering it and large amounts of thick black smoke coming out of it's tail pipe pulled up

This would be a shock because trolls never shared they just take
This would be a shock because trolls never share they just take

Thank you for your participation in the contest.
I hope to see and read more of your works again!

Just keep On smiling while staying in WRITING! *Smile*



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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, Showering Dutchessbarbie. *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review as part of the gift basket that your Secret Valentine *Cupidheart* purchased for you in the "The Teddy Bear Gift Basket-CLOSED

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it if doesn't fit your taste. *Wink*

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title is enticing from the word encouragement, so I chose this piece to give my review because I always loved to be encouraged.
And wow the created body gives a motivation in writing because it was stated there the words that are powerful to keep and can encourage us. I also liked how you used the Acronyms style of Poetry, you did well in formatting and arranging the words. Well Done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while staying in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of Poetry  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, Showering Dutchessbarbie. *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review as part of the gift basket that your Secret Valentine *Cupidheart* purchased for you in the "The Teddy Bear Gift Basket-CLOSED

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The poem is simple, even the given title and the given body are simple, but when we look deeper within the words, it is composed of different kinds poetry.
You did well in arranging them. I try to make it to format it in the center and it looks good, it forms like a lantern.
And the closing line is challenging, it is like asking for a puzzle, in where it refreshes my mind. Well Done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of Hello?  
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A pleasant hour, Sum1 *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review as part of the gift basket that your Secret Valentine *Cupidheart* purchased for you in the "The Teddy Bear Gift Basket-CLOSED

*FlowerR*from your Secret Valentine*FlowerR*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title is simple but gives a good impression, hello is always a good greeting and as I read the created words in the body, I can say that the words flow smoothly and some lines change their rhythm or speed each time there is an emotion that was stirred.
I always create a story within which expresses loneliness, sadness, disturb, and wanting.
I also like the breaking of lines it enhances the created emotions and its moving
Good job!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while staying in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of Victory  
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A pleasant hour, Sum1 *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title is a good word and creates good imagery, which reflects being a winner. The created body links also to the given title in which it uses firm adjectives that describe the subject which creates good imagery and stir emotions and moods, using words with feelings enhance the mood of the poem.
This is my favorite line:
To not have you near is so unreal.



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while staying in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of Snow's Blanket  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, Richard ~ Shenanigans INC. *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review as part of the gift basket that your Secret Valentine *Cupidheart* purchased for you in the "The Teddy Bear Gift Basket-CLOSED

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

It looks like that snow is sometimes warmth because of the given title, a blanket mostly gives us comfort, looking at the given title reflects warmth and comfort.
The created words in the body are beautiful, I reflect encouragement and light in darkness in the line:
blankets white the night, and give a smooth and calmness on the next line, which creates a good imagery and it can stir emotions like peace, magical, and mystery. Well Done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

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Review of Hope Eternal  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, Richard ~ Shenanigans INC. *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
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*FlowerR*from your Secret Valentine*FlowerR*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title is interesting and it gives an encouraging reflection because of the word Hope and blending it with eternal.
And as I ponder the created words in the body, you did well in following the rule of Poetry in which the words flow smoothly and create good imagery that stirs emotions like courage, faith, joy in times of troubles, peace, endurance, and yes hope. Well Done!

my favorite lines:
If adversity causes stings,
Remember Hope Eternal springs.


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*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
A pleasant hour, KingsSideCastle *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review as part of the gift basket that your Secret Valentine *Cupidheart* purchased for you in the "The Teddy Bear Gift Basket-CLOSED

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title is interesting to me, because it talks about valetines or heart day, the trendy this month of february, and as begin to ponder the created words in the body, you did well in following the rule of acrostic poetry in where it flows fluently and created a good imagery and stir emotions.
These are my favorite lines:

Newfound emotions to which you respond.
Embers of romance that burn like the sun.



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I have some few doubts for you to consider, I marked them in red and my suggestion is in green. *Thumbsupr*

Surprises still possible...it's so much fun.
Surprises are still possible...it's so much fun.

Delightful, amusing, it's not one to miss.
Delightful, and amusing, it's not one to miss.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

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Review of Chess Pieces  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, KingsSideCastle *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review as part of the gift basket that your Secret Valentine *Cupidheart* purchased for you in the "The Teddy Bear Gift Basket-CLOSED

*FlowerR*from your Secret Valentine*FlowerR*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it if doesn't fit your taste. *Wink*

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I choose this piece of yours to give my review because the given title is interesting and challenging, it gives me an impression of adventure and reaching for the top to win, that's chess playing, and when I begin to muse the created words in the body of the piece, it gives a light aura and the words flow fluently and creates a good and challenging imagery, which stirs the emotions of being spirited. Well Done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

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Review of Autumns Fall  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, tj ~ endeavors to persevere! *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review as part of the gift basket that your Secret Valentine *Cupidheart* purchased for you in the "The Teddy Bear Gift Basket-CLOSED

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*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it if doesn't fit your taste. *Wink*

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I always like autumn, so this piece interests me to give my review.
I think this is prose, a combination of poetry and story, and I do like how you express it in words, it's beautiful and classy.
The words that were used give a good flow and wonderful imagery which stirs the emotion while reading, you did well in turning a mundane autumn into a magnificent autumn with lots of hues that make it more beautiful.
And at the ending part, you did well in expressing how autumn falls when winter is coming- very sad and lonely.

Here is my favorite line:
On the painted canvas of lawn, leaves leap up from the ground and dance in the spotlights of sun shining through the branches of half barren trees.

leaves leap up from the ground and dancing in the spotlight of the sun- I can imagine that, well done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, tj ~ endeavors to persevere! *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review as part of the gift basket that your Secret Valentine *Cupidheart* purchased for you in the "The Teddy Bear Gift Basket-CLOSED

*FlowerR*from your Secret Valentine*FlowerR*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just likes to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it if doesn't fit your taste. *Wink*

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I was hooked on this piece of yours to give my review, cause the given title gives imagery about nature, and nature always refreshes us.
And as I begin to be a part of your musing through the words in the body, it reminds me about good memories, like the leaves floating when memories fill our mind, we like to follow and flow unto it, because it stirs something in our heart, especially if that memories are good to think about. The good thing that I like is the hope and praying on the last part.
The words that were used give a good flow like the imagery of a leaf and just like I've said, it stirs something in our emotions, though it's short you did well in expressing it. Well Done!

Here are my favorite lines:
We're leaves in a river
It’s constantly flowing




*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

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Review of Nightwatch  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Beholden

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and one of the judges in the
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Thanks for entering in the contest.*Smile*


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MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:

The story is good and the created words give good
imagery to the reader. Sometimes good imagery especially if it touches the reader's heart through their experience, visions, dreams, likes, and inspiration can stimulate their emotions to like and love as well as be hooked on the given title of a piece.

You did well in hooking your reader about the mysterious lights that come in the wood and at the end of the story they are wolves.
The proper using and choosing of words and blending them can create vivid imagery and evoke emotions. This will enable the reader to be a part of the story.
The crafted words are good for me, they create vivid imagery.

Great Work! Good luck!
MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:

I have a few thoughts for you to consider, I colored them with red and my suggestion is in green.


Jim realised that they looked like eyes,
Jim realized that they looked like eyes,


Could it be the Werwolf?
Could it be the Werewolf?

Thank you for your participation in the contest.
I hope to see and read more of your works again!

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING! *Smile*

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Kåre Enga in Montana

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and one of the judges in the
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Thanks for entering the contest.*Smile*


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MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:

The given title gives an impression to be magical, folktales as well as mystery and ancient.
The created body is good even if it's short it links to the given title and to the prompt of the contest,
in where it flows smoothly and vividly and creates a good imagery.
You did well also in personifying the glass and develop its character through reflecting his feelings, grief and thought.

Great Work! Goodluck!

MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:


I have a few doubts for you to consider, I colored them in red and green is my suggestion.

Fireflies aglow?
are Fireflies aglow?

This is where she had died.
This is where she died.

We soon saw their fear mirrored by our face. I winked out; but..
We soon saw their fear mirrored by our faces. I winked out; but..

were chatty and spoke of other lives as branch and twig.
were chatty and spoke of other lives as branches and twigs.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, LightinMind

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Thanks for entering the contest.*Smile*


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MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:

The title of the story gives me the impression of a memoir or remembrance because it is the header of a letter.
The created body is in the first point of view and you did well in expressing the emotions smoothly and gradually on the first part or beginning part you hooked the reader about the simple biography of the main characters.

The story flows smoothly and in the middle part, it stirs emotions like concern and sympathy.
There is only one character with sub characters mentioned in the letter, and you did well in developing and introducing it, through the way the character acts and think through is biograpjy letter in the story.

Great Work! Goodluck!

MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:


I have some few doubts for you to consider, I colored them in red and my suggestion is in green.

their phony compassion and nosey concern did for me was train me how to fake it with
their phony compassion and nosey concern did for me was trained me how to fake it with

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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi, PureSciFi

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and one of the judges in the
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Thanks for entering the contest.*Smile*


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MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:

The story is good, mystery, horror, and adventurous, it gives me an impression of being in another place and another era of time.
You did well in hooking me at the beginning and gradually created a mystery in the middle part and a good conclusion and solution at the ending part.

The characters were properly developed and introduce in the dialogue part which reflects there each one personality that makes the story more interesting.

The sequencing of the scene was related to each other and created a breathtaking or suspense experience.

Great Work! Goodluck!

MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:


I have a few doubts for you to consider, I colored them in red and green are my suggestions.

It was hard to see it because their oblong oval mouth didn’t move.
It was hard to see it because their oblong oval mouths didn’t move.


The whole residence was feeling the Extreme Hot become that DeathBringer was running around that residence wildly.
The whole residence was feeling the extremely hot become that DeathBringer was running around that residence wildly.

Only now she did it with three Young One who were surrounding her
Only now she did it with three Young Ones who were surrounding her


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Happy to write

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and one of the judges in the
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Thanks for entering the contest.*Smile*


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MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:

The story is simple but you did well in capturing the essence of Christmas with a link to the given prompt of the contest.
It straight to the point flows smoothly and creates good imagery, which reflects good emotions during the best and happiest day of the year,
where we always won't forget it.
There is also a magical aura in which it links to the given prompt.

Great Story! Good luck!

MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:

I have some few doubts for you to consider, I colored them in red and green is my suggestion.

This is about the day I learned that we aren't alone and there's more to life then what is seen.
This is about the day I learned that we aren't alone and there's more to life than what is seen.

When i heard a small sound like a tiny choir raising
When i heard a small sound like a tiny choir raising


All the stars started to move just a little at first then alot spelling out Merry Christmas is what they wrote.
All the stars started to move just a little at first then a lot spelling out Merry Christmas is what they wrote.

I look closer rubbing my eyes and this little small star was moving very fast towards me.
I looked closer rubbing my eyes and this little star was moving very fast towards me.

Hello, it say and yeah you aren't alone here on earth we are real;
Hello, it says and yeah you aren't alone here on earth we are real;

She explained to me that she liked some of the activities surrounded around our Christmas holiday
She explained to me that she liked some of the activities surrounding our Christmas holiday


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Review of A decided throne  
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Hi, Beck Firing back up!

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Thanks for entering the contest.*Smile*


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MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:

The story is a mystery and full of adventure which is linked to the given prompt of the contest inwhere it reflected a magical moment with those snowflakes on a dim night.

You did well in showing it through your words as well as the proper sequence of the story is in order which flows smoothly and not in force but naturally.
The characters were developed well their personality in the dialogue scene and the way they act.

And I liked the ending part, we have the free will to choose our path.
W can choose our path if that is what makes us happy.

Great Work! Good luck!

MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:


I have some few doubts for you to consider, I colored them in red and in green are my suggestions.
The snow had picked up and the woods seemed ominous on this night.


Jenna thought back to the snowflakes that light up with a brilliant light.
Jenna thought back to the snowflakes that lit up with a brilliant light.

“Designed? I am not understanding.”
“Designed? I do not understand.”


Thank you for your participation in the contest.
I hope to see and read more of your works again!



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Review of Runaway  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Amethyst Angel🌸📝🪽

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and one of the judges in the
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Thanks for entering the contest.*Smile*


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MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:

This is so beautiful story and you did well in showing it.
It flows smoothly from the beginning hooking me to wonder about the little girl and the homeless man and I am not expecting in the end that they were related to each other-father and his long-lost daughter.

I can relate to this, and I liked the emotions that were stirred at the ending part, you did well in arranging the scene and the parts of the story to be in order.
You did well also to reflect the prompt to be especial and momentous.

This reminds me that God shows His love wonderfully, especially to simple things and through little children, those who are weak and helpless.

Good job!

MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:


I have a few doubts for you to consider, I colored them in red and my suggestion is green.


patch of woodsy brush the city called a park.
patch of woodsy brush in the city called a park.


"That's too bad," Alice looked me over. "
That's too bad," Alice looked at me over. "


She spoke with such simple confidence, I didn't have the heart to argue.
She spoke with such simple confidence, that I didn't have the heart to argue.


Maybe it was time to man up, get my life together.
Maybe it was time to man up, and get my life together.

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Review of Arctic Spirit  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A pleasant hour, Damon Nomad *Smile*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The story is good and it links to the given title. The plot is also good and it links to the given prompt image of the contest. The story flows smoothly, and you did well in orderly arranging the scene with its dialogue.
The personalities of each character were also introduced through the dialogue in each scene.



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I have some doubts for you to consider, I colored it in red and my suggestions are in green.

In the middle of rugged arctic wilderness with no way to communicate or navigate on a moonless night.
In the middle of the rugged arctic wilderness with no way to communicate or navigate on a moonless night.

What's it doing out here in the middle of nowhere?
What he is doing out here in the middle of nowhere?

You can help me and we get you to a safe place."
You can help me and we can get you to a safe place."

"I don't mean you any harm or to cause you any trouble."
"I don't mean to harm or to cause you any trouble."

Join us for holiday dinner in the celebration hall.
Join us for a holiday dinner in the celebration hall.

He paused a moment as the chopper lifted off the ground. "Either of you believe in miracles?"
He paused for a moment as the chopper lifted off the ground. "Either of you believe in miracles?"

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while staying in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, Scarypotato being childish *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review as part of the gift basket that your Secret Santa purchased for you in the "The Teddy Bear Gift Basket-CLOSED

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION


I picked this piece of yours to give my review because it talks about Positivity and the blended word progressive adds more meaning and gives good imagery.
And you did well, in expressing from the given title to the created body.
There is a smooth flow within the words which creates good imagery and stirs emotions to encourage and lift one's spirit.

And these lines are my favorite:

find the small birdsong,
Focus there and in time,
You will see the view from the top.


Great Work!





*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

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I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

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Review of I never Knew  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, Scarypotato being childish *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review as part of the gift basket that your Secret Santa purchased it for you in the "The Teddy Bear Gift Basket-CLOSED

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Though, the given title of the poem is simple, and it same as the body, it has a smooth flow naturally which creates good imagery and can stir emotions.
And at the ending part, you leave the reader to have the conclusion of its wondering on the beginning part.

These are my favorite lines:

never knew how love could meld,
I never knew the power joy could wield,

Great Work!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

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Review of Each Day  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, dogpack:saving 4 premium: DWG *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
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*FlowerR*Congratulations on your 21 check-ins at "Habit Heroes *FlowerR*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title is simple, but it gives a calm and peaceful effect because the word day gives a good imagery for me like sunshine and a good morning.
The created body is also simple but it reflects the secret of a good day, that is when we cling to Jesus, so that the Spirit that He sends for us to be our companion will guide and abide us.
There is also have a calm and peaceful effect while reading it.

Great Work! .



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
A pleasant hour, Carol St.Ann *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title lured me, because of the word surprise, where which gives me a curiosity, maybe I am aiming to ride also to a sleigh ride, and that's why I picked it up. *Smile*
And when I open and peek at your piece, the first thought that comes into my mind is Wow! because of the wonderful and surprising formation of the words just like a Christmas tree, and the blending of words are also neat and creates a good imagery, in where it stirs emotions. Great Work!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

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Review of Child of Joy  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, Kit *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title hooked me to choose your piece to give my review because it reflects a child, and this always gives us good imagery.
The word child reflects. happiness, joy, freshness, innocence, fragile, funny, sweet, and twinning it with the word joy, wow it will give a pleasant imagery.
The created body is simple but full of fun and innocent.
I think this is a description or you adapted the description from the personality of someone, and that is really good and you captured it, fluently and naturally, in where you did well in stirring the emotions that isk in the given title.

These are my favorite lines:
Hannah is a ray of light
on a cloudy winter day;
caring, gentle and so bright,
it's a joy to watch her play.


Congratulations on the awardicon, it deserves it because this is great work.



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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Review of Summer Fields  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, Amethyst Angel🌸📝🪽 *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

This piece gives a lively feeling, maybe on how the way the lines were arranged and the rhythm of the words were created.
It gives also a good imagery using those words that link to summertime and in the fields, in where this helps to stir the emotions that makes this become beautiful and alive.
These are my favorite lines:

Walking in a summer flower field
In the meadow we can build a stick hut
And deck it all around with posies

Great Work!




*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

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