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Review of The Village  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, Maineiac *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review to celebrate 21st WDC Anniversary.

*FlowerR*Happy 21st WDC Anniversary!*FlowerR*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

THE TITLE- The given title is simple but it sounds mystery to me, it creates an imagery of there is something's happening in that particular place, by highlighting the village as the given title.
Village reminds me of a small place or a rural, where in many mystical things were still taken place. That interest me and fascinates me to find about it.

THE BODY
First of all I would like to concentrate more most on the given thoughts and feelings of the story.


PLOT - The story is a scene about a certain Doctor of the village, and explain there why that place to be the focal point or the main interest, just because of the people living their and their activities,that makes to become a mystery.

IMAGERY -The proper using and choosing of words and blending them can create a vivid imagery and evokes emotions. This will enable the reader to be a part of the story.
The crafted words are good for me, it creates a vivid imagery.

CHARACTERS and the POV- The characters have their own standing, and I liked how you introduced them,

SETTINGS- just like the character, the setting is good also, they are not obvious too, they are normally been delivered through the activities of the characters.

DIALOGUE- One of the important part of the piece is this. I liked to read story when there is a dialogue, and correct spacing too of the paragraph. Dialogue can make the story to be lively, and in moving, just like when we watch.




*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. The awardicon deserves well. Congratulations! *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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Review of humidity  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, Rhyssa *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review to celebrate 21st WDC Anniversary.

*FlowerR*Happy 21st WDC Anniversary!*FlowerR*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title "humidity" enticed me to read this piece of yours, it reminds me about summer-where humidity is high.
and my first impression is correct, this talks about nature and the season of summer, I like how you personify some of the noun like the summer who breathes, wind that catch, hurricanes that mar, and raindrops vanish into haze. Those noun when blended with correct adjectives can create a good imagery and enhance the emotion within.
Here is my favorite lines:

and look ahead to autumn’s gentle bliss
that switches rage to peace through his sweet kiss



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, Open thoughts *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review to celebrate 21st WDC Anniversary.

*FlowerR*Happy 21st WDC Anniversary!*FlowerR*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste. *Wink*

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I was stumbled your piece while looking for something to read in your portfolio, and it hook me on the given title which gives me an impression about life.
I like the story within, specially in the ending part, it's true that we will always find God in our lowest point of life, as He had said that His power is made perfect when we are in our weakness.
So, He is there when times that we thought we are already giving up, but God will not giving up on us, cause He is faithful and good.
I pray and wish you to continue abide in His Word and follow His good desire and plan for you, God bless you.



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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Review of Goodnight  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, Intuey *Smile*


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I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review to celebrate 21st WDC Anniversary.

*FlowerR*Happy 21st WDC Anniversary!*FlowerR*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title is simple but gives a good impression- good night means is a fine night or a greeting before going to sleep.
Just like the given title the scribbled body is more good that the given title, I like how the poem flows smoothly and naturally, it creates it owns rhythm and rhythm.
The created imagery links to the given genre, but at the middle part there is hope-like a pray.
I like the story on it.
here's my favorite stanza
Oh Lord, please protect me,
I know you can,
for you have done it over and over again.




*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, Hocus-Pocus-Jeannie πŸ¦‡ *Smile*


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I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
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*FlowerR*Happy 21st WDC Anniversary!*FlowerR*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I was interested to read this wonderful piece of yours while strolling around in your portfolio, because the word Grackle hooked me, it's not really familiar to me, but the rhyme when wording the word grackle reminds me of Gretel from the story Hansel and Gretel..*Smile*
and as I've read the weaved words in the body, though this bird is not familiar to me, but through your words, and chosen adjective words this kind of birds became familiar to me.
I like how the way you see it, made me the impression that all living things has its own uniqueness that God bestowed in each of them. Well Done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, Khariyya Jia Li ~ Studying 247 *Smile*


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I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review to celebrate 21st WDC Anniversary.

*FlowerR*Happy 21st WDC Anniversary!*FlowerR*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste. *Wink*

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title is poetic and deep- it is a good personification of the wind, that it has soul.
The scribbled words in the body gives a good meaning, it talks about what is your impression about the wind, you did well in showing it through your own poetic words.
I like the way how you used the same line, it just simple but the descriptive words you used makes it to be meaningful. The flow is smooth also and creates a good imagery. Well Done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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Review of Paint  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, S Ferguson~ Prepping for Prep *Smile*


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I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
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*FlowerR*Happy 21st WDC Anniversary!*FlowerR*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste. *Wink*

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title is simple but creates a good imagery, paint gives an impression to be colorful and lively.The scribble words in the body is simple but you did well in showing, the first paragraph is captivating, and the ending part is surprising. It flows fluently and the imagery that were create is just fine. Well Done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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Review of The Oak Tree  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, Fran πŸ…πŸ‡¬πŸ‡§πŸ‡¬πŸ‡§πŸ… *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review to celebrate 21st WDC Anniversary.

*FlowerR*Happy 21st WDC Anniversary!*FlowerR*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

This piece talks about a tree and its characteristic, I like how you choose the right descriptive that creates a good imagery and enhance an emotion. You did well in showing on how you see an Oak Tree in a poetic manner.
I also link this to each one gealogy- or where we came from, in where the more years we have in every generation-the more it is historical and sturdy.
My favorite part is:
Gold gleaming leaves drop but not before time
Embodied strength never once wavering




*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. Well Done! *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, S.z.kamoonpuri *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review to celebrate 21st WDC Anniversary.

*FlowerR*Happy 21st WDC Anniversary!*FlowerR*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumbled your poem while roaming in your portfolio, it hooked me on the given title-Taj Mahal is a beautiful place- Mahal means for us in our language is Love.
The created words in the body is nostalgic and poetic.I liked the created rhyme and rhythm, it flows naturally and not been forceful by the chosen words that were used.
I also reflect a music on it- maybe by using those expression that moves the emotions.Very beautiful, well done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
A pleasant hour, WakeUpAndLive~SpooctacularπŸ‘» *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review to celebrate 21st WDC Anniversary.

*FlowerR*Happy 21st WDC Anniversary!*FlowerR*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble your piece in my Review Tool, I think it waits for me to review it, so here is now.
The given title is mystery for me, and when I look deeply on it- it talk about a crime, and different scenes of a crimes.

Each scene is simple, it reminds me just like an investigation but it's fine cause it links to the given genre.

The story is good, mystery and full of suspense. Though, I don't understand some of it because of detailing, and the range of words to readers but, in adding more features and adjective words, I'm sure this story will be more good.



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I didn't find words that can distract the flow, I only doubt on the detailing-maybe adding more details to your characters features and each scene, other than that- this will be more awesome. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
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Review of Arlene  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, Jeff *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review to celebrate 21st WDC Anniversary.

*FlowerR*Happy 21st WDC Anniversary!*FlowerR*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Using name as title is interesting, because names can draw us to know more about what is behind in them and the importance of it in the creator on why they've include them.
I can say that you did well in following the format and requirement of the Rondel form of poetry. I liked its naturalism flow and not forceful, it juts flow smoothly, you did well in choosing words that were blended with each other.
The poem is not vulgar too, though it is understandable-this talks about and shows well an emotions and links to nature.
You did well in reflecting an emotions through the help of nature, that makes it not to be vulgar, but became classy.It reminds me of a beach with the color of aquamarine of bodies of water.
This stanza is my favorite:

Red rocks and rapids fill the scene,
Carrying me ever closer to thee;
Azure will soon replace the green,
When this fresh water meets the sea.




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I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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Review of Poetic Canvas  
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hello, I'm Samberine Everose , your friend here in WDC. and I'm here to give you a review as part of the 21st WDC Celebration!.

I'm not expert in reviewing, this are just only my personal thoughts and humble opinion, who just likes to read writings of other specially poetry, please try to chew, and ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste. *Smile*

THE TITLE
The title is an eye catching, I liked the combination of the two words, they are fit together. Poetic and canvas, its true that it is interesting, because you used an inquiring tone, anyone would like to know what is all about a poetic canvass- it may reflect also the nature.
You did well in hooking me as a reader. *Thumbsup*

THE BODY
I like the meaning on this piece of yours.
My expectation and impression gives more meaning in the body about the beauty of a poetic canvas, in where it talks about the beauty of nature. The blending of words also flows smoothly and enhance the imagery that were created.

I will not comment any grammar issues, because I see that there are no words that can distract the flow, and even a thought on any of the lines.
I like how it was created. *Thumbsup*

Overall, Thanks again for sharing this piece of yours,
you are always giving an inspiring piece.

Just always remember, to keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing. *Smile*

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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, Jeff *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review to celebrate 21st WDC Anniversary.

*FlowerR*Happy 21st WDC Anniversary!*FlowerR*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste. *Wink*

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumbled this piece of yours in my review tool, it was one of those that were stored, I got interest to the given title maybe that is why I've stored it in there.
The given title reminds me of a tagalog song here in our country- castle in the sand which means promises that were broken- so my first impression is maybe this is about romance.
But when I read the created body, this talks about a contest and success.
You did well in forming the required poem form- and also the blending of words which creates a good imagery.
I liked the first imagery which links to nature.Well Done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of Treason  
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A pleasant hour, Ahmad Danial *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review to celebrate 21st WDC Anniversary.

*FlowerR*Happy 21st WDC Anniversary!*FlowerR*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I've stumbled your poem while checking in my Review Tool, and made me intrigue to see it - cause anything that I've stored in my review tool that waits to be reviewed is interesting to me.
The given title is good-very deep, same as to the created body, but I liked how you formed it, it has its own rhyme and rhythm and i can say it is in free verse.
But the main that gives an impact is the thought that it gives, which creates also a good imagery and you have a point. Well done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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A pleasant hour, lovesglee *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review to celebrate 21st WDC Anniversary.

*FlowerR*Happy 21st WDC Anniversary!*FlowerR*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I found your piece in my Review Tool, I know your piece interests me before so I stored it in my review tool, for me to review when I have time, so here is it.
The given title is interesting- this gives me an impression of mystery, romance, and rare nest.
And as I read the story- it links on the given title in which it shows mystery and only have two main characters Maria and the shape shifter.
The plot is simple, it gives me the reader in wanting to know more about the shape shifter, and the ending part makes me the reader to have a little bit of surprise.



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
My doubt is the detailing- you might like to add more details with your characters and the shapeshifter, you might like to show it more to your readers, other than that I know this will be a good story.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, Fangus *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review to celebrate 21st WDC Anniversary!

*FlowerR*Happy 21st WDC Anniversary!*FlowerR*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I find this article while roaming around in your portfolio, and it hooked me cause the given title is interesting, and the brief statement stating what the world needs and lacking.
And as Ive read your article, i can say it's good and you have the point that the world needs is LOVE. LOVE is GOD and we are only be completed when we have found the great Love of God.
The article shows and demonstrate a keen opinion and observation, it's good that it stated here a familiar everyday in our life though it is simple, but it can meant a lot to others. Well Done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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Rated: E | (3.5)
A pleasant hour, BlueMoon *Smile*


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I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review as a part of celebrating WDC 21st Anniversary!

*FlowerR*Happy 21st WDC Anniversary! *FlowerR*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title -diversity hooked me to read this piece of yours, because it means for me- a variety, and when I read the scribbled created body, its true that it is diversity-the topic contains of many subject and issues that can be chopped and created into pieces and gives a broad meaning on it. The length is too short, you might like to add more of each topic that were emphasized.



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, I only have doubt on how the each topic were being expressed, I think you might like to add more so that the topic will be more specific.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, Danial Lucas *Smile*


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I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review to celebrate with you 21st WDC friendship and anniversary!

*FlowerR*Happy 21st WDC Anniversary.*FlowerR*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title is good- providence means blessing- so I was interest to read it-cause it hook me, and the scribbled words is more beautiful than the given title, though it is emotional and a feeling of sadness, because of the words alone, silence, plea, but it the end the word peace and calm reflects also.
Though, its only in short length, but you did well to show and express it. Well Done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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Review of TIME  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, Fangus *Smile*


*Party* This is a review to celebrate Writing.Com's 21st Birthday with "All Grown Up *Party*


I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review to celebrate WDC 21st Anniversary.

*FlowerR*Happy 21st WDC Anniversary! *FlowerR*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The story is simple but has a beautiful imagery and good plot.
The emotion gives a sadness appeal but in the end it gives hope, especially when the purple flower mentioned in there. It is like- it is the life in there.
I like how some words were colored-it gives a good effect-it enhance the emotion of the story. The words are fluent and naturally expresses.
Simple plot but full of emotions. Well Done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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Review of The Rainbow Weeps  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour! Snow Vampire *Smile*

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*BurstP**ConfettiG* Happy 21st Wdc Feastivity! *BurstP**ConfettiG*

Meet your friend Samberine Everose, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being awesome here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. *Smile*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title creates a good imagery- a good personification about rainbow-gives me an impression that even rainbow who has different colors also have the possibility to become dull.
And the created body links to the given title which shows the emotion when a hero died.The rhythm is good and I like how the beat is in slow. Well Done!


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. The awardicon deserves well. Congratulations.*Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,Bubblegum Jones , *Smile*

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*CakeB* celebrating HAPPY 21st WDC ANNIVERSARY *CakeP*


I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC, and I'm here to give you a review to celebrate WDC 21st.


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*Thought*THE TITLE

The given title stated about a famous author- Dr Seuss- I've also read one of his book, and it's good to know fun facts about him here.
You did well in the researching, I can say that you are a fan of him also for his great research.
His book that I've read from him is the cat in the hat, and the story is good.
Thank you for sharing this facts about him. Well Done creating this article.

*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, ruwth *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review as part of the celebration for WDC Festivity with the following message:

*FlowerR*Haappy WDC Festivity!*FlowerR*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I always loved to read the letters and gospel of Apostle John about our Lord Jesus Christ, on how he look and know Him. It is in deed express in his letters about a relationship with the Lord, that is why I've concluded that John is the closest apostle of the Lord.
And I do like how you show it here, enlightened it here on your piece on the Gospel that John wrote. The lines and the happenings are in order, other than it flows naturally and not forceful.
And it compacted with emotions, it is like the personality of John that reflects in the Gospel in the Bible is here in this piece. Absolutely beautiful. Well Done!



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I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, teacher Jay O'Toole *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review as part as a Celebration of WDC Festivity.

*FlowerR*Happy 21st WDC Festivity! *FlowerR*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

This piece hooked me when I've visited your portfolio, I am curious especially the word foundation in the brief description. Foundation as a poet- which Ive concluded that this is one of your first poem.
The scribbled words in the body is simple, but I like the blending of words that expresses a good imagery like heart, rocket,heart, exuberance, shatters in infinite pieces, and put in the pocket. It's simple but it's sweet. Well done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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Review of High in the Sky  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, TheLegendaryMaskedRider *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review as part of the celebration with you with WDC festivity with following message:

*FlowerR*Happy WDC festivitiy! *FlowerR*


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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title gives a refreshing feeling, maybe because of the imagery of blue sky- so vast, calm and wide.
The created body is simple, and yet gives an impact. It links on the given title- emotions and imagery- peaceful, calm and vast.
It's beautiful, and ethereal. Well Done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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Review of A foggy day  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, HollyMerry *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you again a review to celebrate WDC Anniversary!.

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I've just found again this beautiful poem of yours and i think its about nature,
The given title reminds me of winter of course, that Christmas is coming,
the words you used are creative and well chosen, because they creates a good imagery,example of these are:
Swell like blue fungus above the trees.

Amongst the skeletons of summer thistles

Of a fallen army rising from their graves.


They are beautiful, and it creates something a mystery of nature.
It flows naturally and smoothly.


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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