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Rated: E | (4.5)
A pleasant hour, LegendaryMask❤️isExcited *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review as part of the gift basket that your Secret Santa purchased it for you in the "The Teddy Bear Gift Basket-OPEN

*FlowerR*Happy new Year from your Secret Santa*FlowerR*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste. *Wink*

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

This is a poem that is full of emotions and it reflects love and fun together with the person we loved most.
I mostly like the chosen background of the scene and how the poet describes it in much vivid and good imagery which enhances the emotion.
These is my favorite lines:

You look deep into my eyes, searching for a sign of the same.
A soft sweet smile upon my lips with a twinkle in my eye, you did find.

Well Done!




*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I have some few doubts for you to consider, I marked them in red and green is my suggestion. *Thumbsupr*


A flock of seagulls fly overhead.
A flock of seagulls flies overhead.

The sounds of laughter ringing in your ears.
The sounds of laughter ring in your ears.


Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

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Review of The Royal Wedding  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A pleasant hour, LegendaryMask❤️isExcited *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review as part of the gift basket that your Secret Santa purchased it for you in the "The Teddy Bear Gift Basket-OPEN

*FlowerR* Happy new Year from your Secret Santa*FlowerR*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

This is a beautiful story about a wedding day, and you captured it in a poem, even if the lines were few, but the words you used in describing and showing it is full of imagery and has emotion. This reminds me that every wedding day is always a beautiful and wonderful moment, especially for every lady who is inlove. Well Done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I have a few doubts for you to consider, i marked it in red and green is my suggestion.

Prince Harry very handsome in his Blues and Royals uniform.
Prince Harry is very handsome in his Blues and Royals uniform.

Every girls dream is to marry her Prince Charming (Harry),
Every girl's dream is to marry her Prince Charming (Harry),

and walk down the isle, in her beautiful gown of white.
and walk down the aisle, in her beautiful gown of white.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of Her Deepest Wish  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, ♫~ Kenword~♫ *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review as part of the gift basket that your Secret Santa purchased it for you in the "The Teddy Bear Gift Basket-OPEN

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

You did well in creating the given title because it is interesting to me, it creates an intriguing appeal, cause it makes me wonder what was her deepest wish. And as read the body,
emphasize here the seeking and each one desire on serving God. It's good that it is divided into different subjects which gives the reader an easy to comprehend it. Well Done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

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Review of First Love  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, ♫~ Kenword~♫ *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review as part of the gift basket that your Secret Santa purchased for you in the "The Teddy Bear Gift Basket-OPEN

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

While looking for a piece to review in your portfolio, this one hook me, the words gave an endearment to me which creates a good imagery of our first love, and the most striking word was when I found out the Name Jesus which gives me the confirmation that my expectation and impression is true, Jesus is always our first Love and will never die.
The article is short but the content is meaningful and testifies something about our Lord and Savior who saved us and redeemed us, our only Hero. It is encouraging and full of hope which uplifts the soul. Well Done!




*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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Review of A Love Within  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, LegendaryMask❤️isExcited *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The poem is simple and short but the message is full of meaning and can enhance emotion as well as create good imagery.
It can create a 'beat in the heart, which reflects sweetness and mystery. Adding the imagery of a rose flower also enhance the emotions and can make the poem appealing as well as the breaking and spacing of the words and line. Well Done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking at and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, The Puppet Master *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review as part of the gift basket that your Secret Santa purchased it for you in the "The Teddy Bear Gift Basket-OPEN

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I see this as a beautiful testimony of God's greatness and goodness, through your words, you testify the goodness of God and He is always our anchor in the storm of our life. The way how the story is narrated is not only by telling but it was shown. Simple but the message is meaningful. The awards deserves well, Congratulations!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, Zehzeh

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and one of the judges in the
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and I'm here to give you a review of your entry.
Thanks for entering the contest.*Smile*


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MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:

The travel adventure is good, I have a great time following the scene even if I only read it. I like the energy or active emotions that were in the short story, it makes me so eager to find out more about it.
The way how you convey your reader's attention is good using the narrating style in storytelling, it is just simple, with lots of scene and descriptions. I find the storyteller to be a tourist guide wherein even if I haven't yet come and seen those places that were mentioned, I've already seen them through your vivid way of describing them.

MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:

I have a few errors for you to consider. I colored them red and green is my suggestion

There's lots of famous people pushing up daisies there.' You might mean There are
Coo!' Himself loves travelling by train. What do you Himself, you might mean He to be more emphasized,
should be traveling.
a good roll in their graves. you might mean role
country bumpkin come to oogle at the Big City and be overawed by the percipacity of young,
google, perspicacity
whacking great parade as wot became The Lord Mayor's Show.' We certainty had picked a
with, certainly

Other than that I have no doubts arise. Goodluck!

Thank you for your participation in the contest.
I hope to see and read more of your works again!

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi, Damon Nomad

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and one of the judges in the
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and I'm here to give you a review in your entry.
Thanks for entering the contest.*Smile*


*Exclaimb* Please note that I am not a professional reviewer, anything I say here is just my humble own opinion and views, don't forget that this will be changed by others' perspectives also. Take it if you like and drop it if you don't like it. *Smile*

MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:
The story is good and easy to follow every scene. It links to the given prompt of the contest. The character is in the first Point of View which makes the reader be in the character shoes, to feel and think the character's thoughts. I also like the way how the characters were introduced emphasizing their own personalities that link to genealogy.


MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:


I have some thoughts for you to consider.

The written presentation is dull, though appearance or the use of writing tools like font, size of letter, or spacing is not the main that we consider in our writing but it may have the possibility for a reader to hook it. Using too small sizes of letters gives the impression of boringness,

and some grammatical error
I colored my suggestion in green.

Separated by almost five years and as different as night and day.
Separated by almost five years and are as different as night and day.

I was my father's side of the family,
I was on my father's side of the family,

I got good grades in school and went to public university just a few hours from home.
I got good grades in school and went to a public university just a few hours from home.

Other than that I have no doubt arise. Goodluck!

Thank you for your participation in the contest.
I hope to see and read more of your works again!

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Review of Dream Vacation  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi, Grayt Expectations for 2023

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and one of the judges in the
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and I'm here to give you a review in your entry.
Thanks for entering in the contest.*Smile*


*Exclaimb* Please note that I am not a professional reviewer, anything I say here is just my humble own opinion and views, don't forget that this will be changed by others' perspective also. Take it if you like and drop it if you don't like it. *Smile*

MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:
This is a combination of historical, thriller adventure story, and I really enjoyed reading it. The technique that were used on how the author tell and showed to the readers is something alive and active by using the dialogue technique, it is like I am watching on a television. The characters were introduce naturally as part in the story and not being so obvious. The sequences or scene is simple and easy to follow,and the language that were used is for everyone.


MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:


There are some few doubts for you to consider, I marked them in red and green is my suggestion.

He not only filled the seat, he dominated it with solid muscle. His calm gaze from clear blue eyes turned her warm and pink with blush.
He not only filled the seat, but he also dominated it with solid muscle. His calm gaze from clear blue eyes turned her warm and pink with blush.
I would love to see you settled in, Senorita, but I must go to assist others.
I would love to see you settle in, Senorita, but I must go to assist others.

her favorite shampoo and luxurious body wash sluiced off much of her fatigue and restored her hopeful
her favorite shampoo and luxurious body wash sliced off much of her fatigue and restored her hopeful

Dared only watch, eyes glazed in silent horror,
Dared only to watch, eyes glazed in silent horror,

Other than that I have no other doubt arise.

Thank you for your participation in the contest.
I hope to see and read more of your works again!

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Review of The Traveler  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, LightinMind

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and one of the judges in the
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#1803133 by Writing.Com Support

and I'm here to give you a review in your entry.
Thanks for entering the contest.*Smile*


*Exclaimb* Please note that I am not a professional reviewer, anything I say here is just my humble own opinion and views, don't forget that this will be changed by others' perspectives also. Take it if you like and drop it if you don't like it. *Smile*

MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:

The story is good and it flows smoothly, I like also the way how the story was shown using a combination of narrating style and dialogue technique at the end. The language that was used is easy to grasp because it is a combination of common and noteworthy, the story links to the given prompt and a combination of mystery and yes supernatural.

MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:


There are a few doubts for you to consider, I marked them in red and my suggestion is in green color.

back of his rucksack, that he had collected as he walked,
back of his rucksack, which he had collected as he walked,

He created a circle of stones and then, using the dry brown grass as starter fuel, lit a match.
He created a circle of stones and then, using the dry brown grass as a starter fuel, lit a match.

Other than that, there are no other doubts arise. Goodluck!

Thank you for your participation in the contest.
I hope to see and read more of your works again!

Just keep On smiling while staying in WRITING! *Smile*



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Review of The Journey  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Thankful Sonali WDC Power!

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and one of the judges in the
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and I'm here to give you a review of your entry.
Thanks for entering the contest.*Smile*


*Exclaimb* Please note that I am not a professional reviewer, anything I say here is just my humble own opinion and views, don't forget that this will be changed by others' perspectives also. Take it if you like and drop it if you don't like it. *Smile*

MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:

The beginning of the story hooked me, though it was just a simple sentence it introduced then what may I was expecting, and the impression, that it's through the story is about traveling and it links to the given prompt. The flow of the story is smooth, in the beginning, there is a sudden emotion but in the last part, it becomes funny and enjoyable. The characters are only a few, and you did well in introducing them in their way of speaking and moving through dialogue techniques in the story. The language that was used is easy to grasp, indeed it is for everybody.

MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:


I have some doubts for you to consider, I marked them red and my suggestion is in green.

It's strange because it hasn't been that long, our friendship.
It's strange because it hasn't been that long, since our friendship.

Sumita put her pen down. She almost hurt her eye, brushing the tear away.
Sumita put her pen down. She almost hurt her eye, brushing the tears away.

who the fellow passengers in the train were,
who the fellow passengers in the train were,

Other than that, I have no doubt arise. Good luck!

Thank you for your participation in the contest.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi, PureSciFi

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and one of the judges in the
SURVEY
Journey Through Genres: Official Contest  (E)
Write a short story in the given genre to win big prizes!
#1803133 by Writing.Com Support

and I'm here to give you a review in your entry.
Thanks for entering the contest.*Smile*


*Exclaimb* Please note that I am not a professional reviewer, anything I say here is just my humble own opinion and views, don't forget that this will be changed by others' perspectives also. Take it if you like and drop it if you don't like it. *Smile*

MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:

I enjoyed reading this short story, it links to the given prompt of the contest. It talks about traveling through one's life in its various ages. I imagine about time machine while reading. The characters were few but this doesn't distract the flow but enhances to make the story concretely. I like also the different numbers that were used in every chapter, it gives breathing space which allows the reader to comprehend slowly the imagery that was created.

MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:


I have some doubts for you to consider, I marked them red and my suggestion is green.

The ones I have been at all looks exactly like this one.”
The ones I have been at all look exactly like this one.”

Brai couldn’t stopped staring at his Youngest One.
Brai couldn’t stopped staring at his Youngest One.

She pointed at one of those business.
She pointed at one of those business.

I was forty-six, and because of an accident I hadn’t been able to work in almost a year.
I was forty-six, and because of an accident, I hadn’t been able to work in almost a year.

Other than that, I have no doubt arise. Goodluck!

Thank you for your participation in the contest.
I hope to see and read more of your works again!

Just keep On smiling while staying in WRITING! *Smile*



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Review of Santorini Magic  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, debmiller1

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and one of the judges in the
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Journey Through Genres: Official Contest  (E)
Write a short story in the given genre to win big prizes!
#1803133 by Writing.Com Support

and I'm here to give you a review of your entry.
Thanks for entering the contest.*Smile*


*Exclaimb* Please note that I am not a professional reviewer, anything I say here is just my humble own opinion and views, don't forget that this will be changed by others' perspectives also. Take it if you like and drop it if you don't like it. *Smile*

MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:

I reflected not only on traveling in the story but also about a new romance, the story is simple but enjoyable. The flow of the story is smooth and every scene is needed as a part of the story, wherein it links to the given prompt. The words that were used enhanced to make the story to be enjoyable to read especially the ending part when a new romance was beginning. The way how the characters were introduced is good and it's not in an obvious manner. I enjoyed reading the story.

MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:


I have some doubts for you to consider, I marked them red and green is my suggestion.

If only she could find such an enduring love.
If only she could find such enduring love.

She had a business which required her to travel.
She had a business that required her to travel.

Other than that, I have no doubt arise. Good luck!

Thank you for your participation in the contest.
I hope to see and read more of your works again!

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING! *Smile*



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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi, Christopher Roy Denton

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and one of the judges in the
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Thanks for entering the contest.*Smile*

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MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:

Hey, long time no see friend, I haven't easily recognized you. *Smile*
Here's my thought and impression:

I can say that this story is great, and it was enjoyable to read. I like the way how it was written, making your reader to just follow the scene in every story, not expecting things that create a surprise like emotions that reflects Devorah.
You did well in introducing the character’s personality, not obvious but in a natural manner, or it was blended or part of every scene of the story. You use also a good Point of view, or in the First Person- using Devorah’s POV, and properly established the first part of the introduction to link to the reader’s thought. And the last part leaves a good thought and wanting to see what’s next.
The range of language that were used was not filtered, understandable and it is for everybody. Well Done!


MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:

I have some doubts, I colored it red, and my suggestion will be the colored green.

this could provide valuable experience
this could provide a valuable experience- you might like to add an article a so that it will give a most emphasize experience, but if there are many experiences then there will be s in the last of the word experience.

he wasn’t the handsomest or hunkiest guy she’d met,
he wasn’t the most handsome she’d met, - two adjective words will weaken on how it was describes, use only one word so that the description would be firm.

Other than what I've stated, there are no more doubts arise.
Thank you for your participation in the contest.
I hope to see and read more of your works again!

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Review of The Boat  
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Hi, Graham B.

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Thanks for entering the contest.*Smile*


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MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:

The story is good and I can say that it is a story that is full of suspense and mystery.
You did well in introducing your character’s personalities through the way they talk and their action.
Each scene is simple but it is needed in the story, they were arranged properly and it flows smoothly. The language there was used is just fine, but there are a few that were filtered by using some words in where it blocks the reader’s understanding.
Other than that, I can say that it is a good story.

MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:


I have a few doubts for you to consider, I colored it red and my suggestion will be the color green.
“Everybody who was around back when Bush ’41 was still in office knows it!”
“Everybody who was around back when Bush ’41 was still in the office knows it!”


“I saw Wilhelm! But he was at the shed over there, and the light was on inside.
“I saw Wilhelm! But he was at the shed over there, and the light was on the inside.

“Daphne’s sounding off again, eh? I’ll put it rest right now
“Daphne’s sounding off again, eh? I’ll put it to rest right now

“Is there something else you want fixed?
“Is there something else you want to be fixed?

Other than that, I have no doubt arises. Goodluck!

Thank you for your participation in the contest.
I hope to see and read more of your works again!

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Review of Blue Crayon  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Thankful Sonali WDC Power!

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and one of the judges in the
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Thanks for entering the contest.*Smile*


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MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:

The way how the story is created is beautiful, it's a combination of prose and dramatic style. You did well in holding the emotion that was created.
I like how the story started, you did a good technique in hooking me-the reader, by giving a scene that intrigues me, and the involvement of the prompt of the contest. It blended fully into the whole story.
The way how you introduced your characters is meaningful also, especially the main and the other characters that support it. You did well, cause the way how you present their personality is not in an obvious manner, but articulate.
It is also mysterious when they go with grandma to the attic and explain the deep meaning of the crayons and other artists' tools.

MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:


I have a few doubts for you-
I highlighted it with red and green color is my suggestion.

because the crayons themselves sense that one of their number is no longer whole,
because the crayons themselves sense that one of their numbers is no longer whole,

The feasting done, the presents were opened and Grandma
The feasting is done, the presents were opened and Grandma


And I wonder what's the girl name, I haven't seen it in the story.

Other than the stated above, I don't have any doubts arise. Goodluck!

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi, PureSciFiPlus

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Thanks for entering the contest.*Smile*


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MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:

This story talks about how our hobby is important to us, and sometimes we choose to do it first or do it with as our routine every day.
It has a simple scene and has few characters. You did well in stuffing the character's element in where it encourages the emotions that reflects in the story.

MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:

My only doubt is the appeal is in a moderate manner,
you might like to add some twist or anything that surprises or left your reader me with an awe feeling.
Other than that, I have no doubts already. Good luck!

Thank you for your participation in the contest.
I hope to see and read more of your works again!

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Review of The Collector  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi, Sumojo

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and one of the judges in the
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Thanks for entering in the contest.*Smile*


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MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:
The Story is good and it flows smoothly.
I like the author's idea about obsession to a collection that was linked in the given prompt of the contest. The way the author introduced the character of the story is something brief, it is good that the author shows it through the likes and characteristics of the character of the story.
I also like the ending part. it shows a surprise, not expecting it to be its end.


MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:


There are some words for you to check out that left me in doubt upon reading the story.
I marked it red and color green is my suggestion.

neither would she partake of the brew in anything
you might mean 'nor

The young couple married and set up a home in the Derbyshire countryside,
adding an a emphasize more.

Albert, by this time, had realised he had been a minor player in his wife’s story and left the marital home and Edith with her obsession.
= realized

Seriously though, do you think we should we be doing something?” Anne asked her brother.
Seriously though, do you think we should be doing something?” Anne asked her brother.

Other than that I've stated, I have no more issues arise. Goodluck!

Thank you for your participation in the contest.
I hope to see and read more of your works again!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, 𝓑rian KCompt-Interrupted

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and I am reviewing your great poem being as one of the judges in the
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MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:
I find this piece as classy and sweet, which stirs the emotion and throb the heart.
I also like the drama within, the poet doesn't only tell but show it, trough great scene that
enhance more the emotion, that is why it throb the heart.
The words flows smoothly and natural, the combination of words were blended with each other,
it helps to stir also the emotion. It's not mushy by classy.
I'm sure your loved ones will going to love this piece.


MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:

I didn't find words that may distract the flow and no doubt arise. Good luck!

Thank you for your participation in the contest.
I hope to see and read more of your works again!

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Review of Absent Love  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Pumpkin

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and I am reviewing your great poem being as one of the judges in the
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MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:
I reflected sweetness within this piece which stirs the emotions that throb the heart.
The words flows naturally and not force full, each words blended with each other which reflects romanticism.
I'm sure your loved ones will really love this piece.
I like this line so much:
My heart burns for you with smoldering fire.


MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:

I didn't find words that may distract the flow and no doubt arise.Good luck!

Thank you for your participation in the contest.
I hope to see and read more of your works again!

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Review of A BURNING LOVE  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Monty

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and I am reviewing your great poem being one of the judges in the
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MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:
I find sweetness in this piece of yours, the words that were used reflects sincerity, there is also a smooth flow within the words and they are naturally expresses not force full.
each word blended with each other in where it stir the emotion and throb the heart.
I'm sure your loved ones will going to love this piece.


MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:


I didn't find words that may distract the flow and no doubt arise. Good luck!

Thank you for your participation in the contest.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, GERVIC

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and I am reviewing your great poem being as one of the judges in the
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MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:
I find this piece as sweet and classy, because it reflects sincerity and really it throb the heart.
I also like the story within this poem, and the way how the poem flows is smooth and consist vivid imagery.
The words that were used enhances the emotions within the poem.
I'm sure your loved ones will really love it.


MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:

I didn't find words that may distract the flow and no doubt arise. Good luck!

Thank you for your participation in the contest.
I hope to see and read more of your works again!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, LegendaryMask❤️isExcited

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and I am reviewing your great poem being as one of the judges in the
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MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:
This piece of yours expresses sweetness, even if its only in few words, they are easy to reach, it is like a simple quote or a note.
It throb the heart. It is the same like cupid's character.
I like the way how it flows, it's simple but there is sweetness.
I'm sure you loved ones will going to love this.


MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:

I didn't find words the distract the flow of the poem and no doubt arise. Good luck!

Thank you for your participation in the contest.
I hope to see and read more of your works again!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, LegendaryMask❤️isExcited *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review as part of the gift basket that your Secret Valentines purchased it for you in the "The Teddy Bear Gift Basket-OPEN

*FlowerR*Happy Valentines Day!*FlowerR*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste. *Wink*

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I'm here again to give you a review and this one enticed me while looking of those treasures in your portfolio.
The given title is sweet and simple, it reminds me of a song- the scribbled words in the body has a good meaning and it reflects about missingness and longingness to a loved ones. The words has a smooth flow and they were blended with each other creating a good imagery.
I also like the natural beat and rhythm. Well done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, LegendaryMask❤️isExcited *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
and I'm here to give you a review as part of the gift basket that your Secret Valentines purchased it for you in the "The Teddy Bear Gift Basket-OPEN

*FlowerR*Happy Valentines Day!*FlowerR*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I was hooked on the given title while looking for something to review in your portfolio. What interest me is that I could sense that it was about Him.
And as I read the created words, I can say it's beautiful. There is a soft rhythm within the lines, and has a smooth flow which creates a good imagery.
Words were blend with each other, and I could also sense of His voice within the lines reflecting a good messages and good purpose. Well Done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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