|MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
THE TITLE- The given title is simple but it sounds mystery to me, it creates an imagery of there is something's happening in that particular place, by highlighting the village as the given title.
Village reminds me of a small place or a rural, where in many mystical things were still taken place. That interest me and fascinates me to find about it.
First of all I would like to concentrate more most on the given thoughts and feelings of the story.
PLOT - The story is a scene about a certain Doctor of the village, and explain there why that place to be the focal point or the main interest, just because of the people living their and their activities,that makes to become a mystery.
IMAGERY -The proper using and choosing of words and blending them can create a vivid imagery and evokes emotions. This will enable the reader to be a part of the story.
The crafted words are good for me, it creates a vivid imagery.
CHARACTERS and the POV- The characters have their own standing, and I liked how you introduced them,
SETTINGS- just like the character, the setting is good also, they are not obvious too, they are normally been delivered through the activities of the characters.
DIALOGUE- One of the important part of the piece is this. I liked to read story when there is a dialogue, and correct spacing too of the paragraph. Dialogue can make the story to be lively, and in moving, just like when we watch.
MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. The awardicon deserves well. Congratulations!
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.
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