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#4323650

Review of Broken Dreams

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!🌕 HuntersMoon

Congratulations!!! for winning my package in the "The Four Seasons Auction and Raffle"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little fairy friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as part of the goodies from the package you've won.
Congratulations again!

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHTS & IMPRESSION

Just found this piece of yours in your portfolio, it hooked me though the title gives an impression to be dark or somehow dull, disappointment, but it sounds interesting,and other than that I am a fan of English sonnet poem.

And as I ponder this in literal, specially in metaphorical, the given meaning is full of thoughts, and creates colorful imagery, it combines the imagery of the different seasons, mostly autumn and winter which gives or reflect a dull or sad colors, that is where I link it in the given title. The way how you weaved the words which creates beautiful imagery stimulate the emotion, and I admire how you handle the emotions you begin to portray without adding other emotion that can distract its smooth and fluency. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, I just only have one doubt for you to consider,
by using the word azured- I try to find it in the dictionary but I don't a word azured, you might mean azures or azure..?

other than that, I have no doubt already,
the awardicon deserves well. Congratulation.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4323622

Review of the life and times

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!lottie

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Hiya! I'm here popping up with my wings in your Portfolio, and sneaking this piece of yours that you would like me to review, now that I have a good internet signal, I will now fulfill my promise to you.

Everyone can relate on the given title, though these two words are realy link with each other, and sometimes they've been give an impression to be redundancy, but anyway any one can hook on the given title, because these words always gives an in-depth meaning, or have their own in-depth meaning.

And the created words in the body gives already and elaborate already the meanings of these two words,it explains about the basic character of human in their life and in their times.
I do like some words that are in rhyme and gives its own rhythm, though
some are intended to be in enjambment form but its fine and it helps to stimulate the emotions within. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4323420

Review of Irony

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: 13+

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!Majestic Mimosa

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your friend Samberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Just like I've promised to you, I will pop up now to give my review.
You only have one item in your homefolio and it sounds interesting through the given title.

In choosing a title of an item, this should be give an importance as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also in this part.

Hey, girl you have a talent, I liked the emotional impact while pondering the body of this piece of yours, I liked the story within, there are some minor things that bumps me while reading but its just only few things. I encourage you to write more because you wrote it with feelings, and that is one of the importance of poetry.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
Just like I've said there are few doubts for me that arise while reading it, please pick if you like and just ignore if you don't like. Thank you for allowing me to review your piece.

I marked my doubts in red and my suggestion is in green color.

I found myself walking in the darkness,
listening to the deafening silence,
wandering in the vast emptiness.
(space here)
There were no walls yet I can't escape.
There were signs but I failed to find the exit.
There were directions but I failed to follow.
{space here)
I kept on walking, clueless about my destination.
And I reached a point where my knees were about to give up.
My legs were exhausted from the long walk to take another step.
(space here)
I fell to the ground.
(space here)
But then, someone came.

He found me in the middle of darkness.
(Capitalizing the pronoun He, makes an impression to be this poem is an inspiration)
He picked me up and guided me the way out.
He brought light to my life.
He gave me a reason to continue living.
He gave my life a meaning.

But just like stories, my story appeared to be cliche.
Everything was not working the way it should be.
The smiles and the memories were gone.
He was gone, disappeared like ashes blown by the wind.
It was just a twist in my story, I hoped.
But it ended, I never thought it would.

I never thought that one who took me out of the darkness was the one who put me back there.

I never thought that the one who gave my life a meaning was the one who made it undefined.
I never thought that the one who held me was the one who let me go.
( lines above doesn't rhyme already and gave me a bump and its loosening,)
I would suggest you to make it tighten, or making it in few words,
even if in Few words if we chose a strong verbs and adjectives it will give an impact.

For example:
I thought he will stay and will give me the sunshine-
or if forever will be true,
but he turned away, letting me be carried by
storm strong winds again.

Now, I found myself walking in the darkness,
Listening to the deafening silence,
Wandering in the vast emptiness.
There were no walls but I did not bother to escape.
There were signs but I did not bother to search for the exit.
I did not bother to find my way out.
I don't want to be out of this darkness, just to experience darkness... once again.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4322055

Review of On the Farm Winter becomes Spring

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, Prosperous Snow celebrating

I'm Samberine Everose

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

There is an enticement and enlightenment between the created formed of words because it creates a good imagery. Sometimes a good imagery specially if it touch the readers heart through their experience, visions, dreams, likes and inspiration can stimulate their emotions to like and love and reminded them good impression on it. Though winter is my least favorite among the season, but reading this poem gives me an idea and imagery that winter have it own beauty specially in blooming it into spring. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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#4320347

Review of I Fell Down Yesterday

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour, Prosperous Snow celebrating

I'm Samberine Everose

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

This is an emotional and beautifully written prose that I link to surrounding or our environment. I liked the way how the main character expressed and how she showed what she see on her environment, specially the imagery created while stating the things she was seeing.
Using the first person point of view enhanced the story and helps to stimulate the emotions within the piece. .

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I just have few doubts for you to consider, I marked my doubt in red and green is my suggestion. This are only my own observation and opinion. Thank you for letting me to express it.

I would listen to the nightingale sang while back on earth bees and birds were dying for the lack of unpolluted air.

While reading this statement and reach the part that I see the word back it made me confuse to think the meaning on it.

I would suggest that you should use a more clear verb or my impression there is something that you omit to state its clear meaning.

I would listen to the nightingale sang when I returned back on earth, bees and birds were dying for the lack of unpolluted air.

but realized that I could not go back the way I came

back gives double meaning, using the word back in the above statement again gives a blur and a confusing meaning.

but realized that I can't return back the way I came from.

A rainbow that retreated as I advanced toward the mountain's flaxen crest.

using the word advanced here gives a blur meaning-
I stumble that word advance in studies or in upgrading or level up,
I would suggest to use a much more clearer verb
How about walk or step or tour

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4319866

Review of Regret and Sorrow

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

A pleasant hour, intuey of House Lannister

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Every one can relate on the given title, it gives a sad emotion, stating the two emotional feelings- regret and sorrow, the combination of these two dull emotions gives a some kind of drama, reading the brief description below the given title gives me an interesting impression which make a metaphorical statement specially when you add the description "road". = The road of regret and sorrow- it emphasize something more metaphorically.

I liked the scribbled words in the body that you chosen to express your thought and feeling about being in the road of regret and sorrow, you really did it well and you've created a good imagery about them, making me to think dull colors too, the enjambment format helps also to stimulate the emotions within. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I just only have doubt on the last stanza: I marked my doubt in red,

A plastered smile, unflinching eyes,
Have a great day. But do
step over the liquid of black molasses..

The given statement that I marked with the red color gives an impression to be a common or cliché that being used everyday, its a greeting. Right.
So my impression is it just distract the flow of emotion that you built from the beginning of the piece.

I would suggest that you may change or para phrase it, in a way that will not link or using that stated natural greetings that we used everyday,

or you might mean: having a great day

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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#4319527

Review of The Last Fifteen Years

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: 18+

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, Prosperous Snow celebrating

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I chose this piece of yours from your portfolio to give my first review as requested by your secret pal, why because the given title gives me an impression to be interesting, like a nostalgic, or a kind of flash back in time, makes me to think also about myself for the last 15 years, or this might be telling that what have done for the last 15 years.
And below are my comments on the elements of the story that I reflect while pondering the words within the body of the piece.

Setting The setting is good, you used the natural format or way in narrating, describing the surrounding in the first person point of view, the thing that I liked it is there is an emotion within while the main character is narrating or describing it, which means its not just typical emphasizing the setting to your reader but describing it with feelings and with sympathy or opinion.

Character You only used one main character, and its just fine because you used the first person point of view, though there's a limitation when we are using this first person POV, but the main thing is even if you only have one character but she handle well or you handle well on how you express the story using only one character.

Audience The words that you used are for everybody, so there is no distraction while reading it.

Thoughts/Plot - The given lesson or the thought of the story is fine, its gives a lesson and it links to our surrounding or how we protect nature.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4319474

Review of Absence of Time

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, Pat ~ Rejoice always!

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

While scrolling items in your portfolio, this piece of yours hook my attention because the given title using the word time and describing it as in absence gives an interesting view to me, absence of time can give an impression to left things in a sudden moment that we like to freed or relax ourselves.
And while I try to ponder the scribbled words in the body, just like the given title, it gives me a moment to follow the created imagery in the body.
I can say the given words creates a nostalgic feeling, and metaphorical thoughts.
The words that you chosen to describe the imagery gives an impact that reflects colorful imagery and it really links in the beauty of nature.
You do not used or follow a certain rhyme but the rhythm between the lines created a good beat while I read and stimulate the emotion within. Well Done!

I really love this stanza:

My heartbeat slows with the water's ebb and flow;
I renounce all control over what will or will not be

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. The awardicon deserves well. Congratulations!

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING here.

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#4316471

Review of soothing water

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, Chris Breva

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Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

There is an enticement between the created form of words because it creates a good imagery to the reader. Sometimes a good imagery specially if it touch the readers heart through their experience, visions, dreams, likes and inspiration can stimulate their emotions to like and love as well as hook on the given title and the created body of the piece.
I find the piece to have a relaxing thought or impression, water specially when it described to be soothe can give a good feeling of relaxation and as I read the scribbled words in the body, its only in few words but it gives an impact and linked on the created title. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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#4316459

Review of The Swings

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, intuey of House Lannister

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I found this piece in your portfolio and I was drawn to pick it to give my review as part of your goodies gifted from your secret pal, because the given title gives me an impression to be something special, maybe by using an article adjective, which emphasizing the main word- swing,and as I go along to ponder the created words in the body, it seems or I can say that this is metaphorical, all the created words were metaphorical its meaning and I liked how you narrate it where in the sequence are in proper and smoothly expressed through words that were really chosen and gives a good and different colorful imagery. I linked this to life that we have, and we have our own swing, and we have the ability to control it, on the way we may like. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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#4313783

Review of My Papa Gave Us Tulips

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Rated: E

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A pleasant hour, ♥Hooves♥

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Hey, I've found this piece of yours in the Verdant Poetry Contest and the given title sounds very interesting and definitely because it took the first place in the stated contest, so I'd try to read and give my review thoughts on it.
The given title draws me, other than the impression is really related to nature and spring using the word Tulips. Tulips are one of the spring flower and they always give a really nice view or imagery.

The created body is more beautiful and enlightening, the given imagery is colorful and links to spring, words like planting, digging, blooms, tulips helps to create that beautiful imagery of spring with the blend of some metaphorical word like patience, December, April. A sentimental memory to treasure that brings in every spring. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. The awardicon deserves well! Congratulations!

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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#4313103

Review of Research

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Hi,Ahmad Danial

,

I'm Samberine Everose

your friend here in WDC, and I'm here to give you a review as your request.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

THE TITLE

The given title gives an impression for me to be educational. I always stumble this word through paper works that links to educations or sometimes in a professional work specially in terms of paper works.
So in other word its already a common words that everybody can relate and know what they will be expecting on it.
Title is very important to a certain item, because this is where we try to hook our readers, so we should definitely chose a right title if we like to hook readers, and we must know also who are the readers that we are targeting to hook.
The word Research you used is fine, and maybe anyone who are in the field or was linked to any paper works like me will be surely hook to read it.

THE BODY-

I like articles, because articles are some kind of our own opinions and views about things, on how we see it, they different from poetry which poetry have its kind of art or emotion, and research is just plain opinions.

Well, I liked the thought that I reflect about this article of yours about Research.
You are right that some don't give importance in the research method before giving an exact conclusion. Research can be a kind of observation also.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I have some few doubts for you to consider. Pick if you like and don't if you don't like. I marked my doubts in red and green is my suggestion. Thank you.

Who's leading and who is lagging

I liked how you begin with an interrogative sentence your article, you gave your reader a chance to think and decide their vouch. But you forgot to add a question mark at the end of this sentence.

Research is something that only few people give importance to.

Drop the preposition to here its out of place, and make the verb give to future tense because we are stating a fact.

Research is something that only few people will give importance.

But why not everyone is inclined to it?
I don't think inclined is the best word to use here.

The answer to this question is lack of curiosity. Most of the people just follow what others are following blindly (comma here) they don't want a change and they don't go for innovation rather conventions prevail in our minds.People are reluctant to show up what's inside them because of insecurities and fear of rejection and that is the plague which is ruining the innovations.

Whenever we look for something innovative we indirectly speaks of research. Not each one of us is motivated for going in research {comma here} that's because our government seldom provides opportunities for research and even if they do (comma here) there are less facilities by which we can carry on our projects. There is so much talent and intelligence across the world. Great minds are not limited to few regions rather most of the brain boxes are neglected or they are never given the chance to share what they have got.

Please let me know, if you still have queries.
MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4312403

Review of Fountain of Youth

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, fyn

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I thought this is a kind of a fantasy or a magical place, I often stumble the title in some fairy book where they are searching for a fountain that makes the people to become young forever, so that impression makes me to hook this piece of yours.
And I found out in the scribbled words in the body the real source of fountain of youth, and that is through the youngster. Yup! this remind me of my little one who gives me a lot of laugh everyday.

I will not comment the way how you scribbled this piece of yours, because its fine and perfect specially the given thought that I reflect on it. Well Done!

MY FAVORITE LINES:
Laughter lines bespeak of humor.
There's no character to an empty plate.
Memories are formed from life well lived
and finally I point to that wondrous gate.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

STATIC

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#1981228 by Samberine Everose

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#4312393

Review of Memories

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, Chris Breva

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here again to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I found again this piece of yours while browsing some item in your portfolio and it gives a good impression to me, some kind of sentimental musing from the word memories so I pick it to give my read and review.
And it seems that you have some wonderful memories about winter, give me an impression that winter have its own beauty like the other season. Well Done!

MY FAVORITE LINEs:
Snow blanketed the ground all about
For us there was joy in the air

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.
just some few typos:
Each day anew they briing mme cheer.

Each day anew they bring me cheer.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

STATIC

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#1981228 by Samberine Everose

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#4312372

Review of God loves you

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, Chris Breva

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here again to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
While browsing again some items to read in your portfolio, this one enticed my attention. I always love to read writings specially about the Love of God, and how His great love been seen, and its so good that I have found a part in your port.
Any one can relate on the created title, though, this is not the first time that I encountered it, but every time I read and saw that statement, it always gives an impact specially realizing the things that defines and how God show His love to us.
The best thing that I liked in the scribbled words in the body is the proper used and chosen words that creates a good rhyming and rhythm.
It seems that the poem's words were naturally created and its very light when I read it, words used were not forcefully chose to fill in the lines so the outcome it gives a good end meaningful impact meanings to all. Well Done!

MY FAVORITE LINEs:
Sin is such an ugly stain
Yet none has to drown in its rain
Jesus died on the cross
So no soul should suffer loss.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

STATIC

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#1981228 by Samberine Everose

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#4312365

Review of After the Rain

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, fyn

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
Hey, I'm hook again in this piece of yours while browsing items in your portfolio.
The title- after the rain creates an imagery to be spring and a fresh morning, so I can say anyone can relate and can be hooked in this piece of yours.
And while I pondering the scribbled lines, I first noticed the enjambment style that you used which creates and formed well structured rhyming and rhythm. The sketched words which creates a wonderful imagery that really linked in the created title is well formed which produced colorful imagery that took me and forget a while here in my real world.

MY FAVORITE LINEs:
a faint plop as leaf sheds a drop
to fall silently into the moistened grass,
a mourning dove ruffles its feathers--

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

STATIC

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#1981228 by Samberine Everose

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#4312362

Review of Blue Roses

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, fyn

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I am always fascinated to roses flowers, so I am hook when I found out this piece of yours, as well as want to find out why this piece call it a blue rose.
My first impression while I take a look on the body of this piece is its quite long, but when I try to read it already, it glued my eyes and my mind begin pondering the colorful imagery that were created.
This is a lovely romantic story that was tested through years, and the ending is so beautiful.
True love never fails and that symbolize the blue rose I think. Well Done!

MY FAVORITE LINEs:
The blue roses nodded in the morning light
then turned red, and yellow and, finally, white.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

STATIC

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#1981228 by Samberine Everose

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#4312039

Review of My Blood Red Rose

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, fyn

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
This piece again enticed me to read it because of the given title, reminds me about Gothic beauty, maybe by mixing the word blood and red rose, gives an impression to be something dark and beauty.
The scribbled words in body is more beautiful the way how it was crafted, all the lines reflect colorful imagery as well emotion. The most thing that I like is the proper chosen words that creates a good rhythm. Well Done!

MY FAVORITE LINEs:
pricked by a thorn from enchanted vine
shall forever scatter petals
but until forever, she is mine.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

STATIC

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#1981228 by Samberine Everose

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#4312028

Review of Love Bread

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, fyn

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I just found again this piece of yours in your port and it sounds interesting, makes me think about valentine's day from the word love, mixing with bread, it will give an impression that this might be a food or maybe some kind of a delicious recipe.

I always like to cook also so I am fascinated to see and to know about what is this kind of recipe.

Well, as I read the words in the scribbled body, I can say this is a unique kind of recipe, the ingredients are limited and its hard to find it, we can only find within ourselves or thru a relationship.
And I just only discover while reading it that this love bread will be more delicious and sweet when we mix with our sincerity, understanding,and love that will make a harmony to our love one within the test of time.

I liked how you formed it which creates a good recipe of our love to others.
Well Done!

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

STATIC

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#1981228 by Samberine Everose

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#4311721

Review of Forever and Ever More

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi, Chris Breva

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
This is one of the awesome entries in my recent contest: WDC HeartThrob Poet, and I would like to give a review each one of the entry so I begin now to this piece of yours, as well as this is one of my gift to you for reaching your WDC Anniversary.

Well, the scribbled words followed the form: lyrical and you did it great.
The given thoughts are very sweet.
I'm sure your valentine will love this piece.

MY FAVORITE LINES:
You are like a spirit from above
My heart's flame your love ignites

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, there are some lines which are loosening to me like:
I love you forever and ever more
Loving you will never be a chore

Using the word I love you is just fine but there are some other ways to say and show I love you not in an obvious manner, it will give an impression to be cliche already.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

STATIC

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#1981228 by Samberine Everose

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#4311702

Review of Old Trees

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi,fyn

,

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HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY PERSONAL IMPRESSION & OPINION

I found this piece of yours while my little wings brought me into your portfolio,sounds interesting to read because trees always gives a metaphorical meaning and they are one to be considered who have the possibility to keep ages here on earth.
I think the stated lines in the body are all about good qualities of old trees and I liked how you personify some of them.
I liked also the way how this piece was formed, making it into enjambment form stimulate the emotions within.
The given imagery is good as well as the given thoughts reflect a good wisdom. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. The awardicon deserves well. Congratulations!

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

STATIC

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#1981228 by Samberine Everose

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#4310499

Review of Where Was My Angel Then?

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (3.5)

A pleasant hour!!Moody

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Hey, I've found this piece of yours in the news feed, it draws me to pick it and sneak and give my review because it sounds interesting, maybe the word angel gave me an impression to be interesting, and making the title to be interrogative is much more interesting, because you are giving a chance your audience to be a part of it.

The title serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

As I ponder the words in the body, I can say its like I'm reading an adventure or it reminds me about the story Alice in wonderland. The created emotion is lively, maybe the rhyme and rhythm within the line helps it.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I just have some few doubts for you to consider. Pick if you like and just ignore if you don't. I marked my doubt in red color and my suggestion is in green. Thank you.

Yesterday I got lost at crossroads of hells and heavens.

Yesterday I got lost at the crossroads of hell and heavens.

Neon signs flashed, The seventh of seven. No need to capitalize The

Neon signs flashed, the seventh of seven.

Where was my angel then? Only heaven knows. I think this is out of place here, unless if this is a thought, so you might like to make it italic.

They told me it's no place for you, it's no place for hoes.
I think adjective-place-there's is much better than its.
They told me, there's no place for you, there's no place for hoes.

I watched them watch them poles, wrapped in flesh, it's a beautiful show.

Use another verb here, you reiterate the verb watch.

Await not for Gabe, shall you rott in place.

Await not for Gabe, shall you rot in place.

Honey, angels know no time, they know no pace.
Honey, angels don't know time, theydon't know pace.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4310495

Review of Millennial Diaper Rash

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour!!jmagisano

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I think the given title is funny, using the word diaper rash literary, but when I ponder the meaning, its good and it state the latest problems of government. anyone will hook on it.

The title serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

For not using any punctuation marks makes the speed of reading to be fast, but its okay because it stimulate the emotions on it to be strong and firm.
The enjambment form helps a lot also.
This is all metaphorical about how government was. Well Done!

MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4308657

Review of Conquer

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (3.5)

A pleasant hour!!Hello-Im-A-Muffin

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble your piece in the newbies section, I pick it to have a read and give my review because the given title is interesting, its only one word but it reflects many meanings, it reminds me of a winner or into succeed.

The title serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

The scribbled words in the body is full of emotion, I think this is a prose, and its so emotional. I find it as inspiring and encouraging. The breaking of lines is also fine.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
The only thing that I doubt is for not using any punctuation marks.
Punctuation marks helps a lot to control as well as give a fine meaning of a piece, forgetting using a comma in a sentence it differs or already change its meaning.
Good meanings and views were reflect in this piece of yours, but it made me confuse on some of it, because of not using punctuation marks, like for example:

you forget the yelling screaming your soul was bleeding

without using a comma on the above line gives me an impression that the soul is yelling and screaming in which it just reiterate the two above description:yelling screaming.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4308628

Review of Love Isn't Scary

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A pleasant hour!!Rhi C.

Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !

CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.

Meet your friendSamberine Everose

, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble your piece in the newbies section and it draws me to pick it, to read and give my review because of the impression in the given title.

The title always serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

As I ponder the words between the scribbled body, I can consider this just like a good advice that we shouldn't be scared in love, I liked how you begin it with the word Don't, it gives an impression of the mood to be firm.
This is my favorite lines which you link it to nature or spring.

Let it remind you of the lilies
Blooming in the spring
It brings something new

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I have some few doubts for you to consider, I marked my doubt in red and my suggestion is in green color, take it if you like and ignore if you don't like. Thank you.

Don't let fear of - you forgot to add a pronoun you here
Don't let fear you

of an ending love,
which make you avoid it altogether.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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