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Review of My best season  
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#1300305 by Maryann

I'm Samberine Everose your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC. *Bigsmile*
and I'm here to give you a review as my *GiftP* to you for being so awesome here in WDC.*ButterflyB**Smile*
*Smile*

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*Reading* MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
This is beautiful poem about spring, the enthusiasm the energetic and smooth flow of words gives a feeling of delight and being refresh. I imagine a fresh morning in my garden surrounded by beautiful kinds of flowers, birds are chirping. Its lovely.

MY FAVORITE LINE:
Butterflies fluttering in the garden.
A rabbit plays inside the warren.
Winter just said goodbye to you.
Oh, My beautiful spring, I always love you.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.*Smile*

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#1300305 by Maryann


I'm Samberine Everose your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC. *Bigsmile*
and I'm here to give you a review as my *GiftP* to you for being so awesome here in WDC.*ButterflyB**Smile*
*Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.


*Reading* MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
We are still in our way approaching the winter season, but reading this piece of yours makes me feel missed already spring.
Leaves are really changeable in every season and the way how you sketched finely and smoothly gives an impression thinking and missing the spring season.
I like the way how you begin this piece, it links on how spring season begin, and every stanza expressed in a tender voice on how a tiny shoot can give meaning to spring. Lovely.

MY FAVORITE STANZA:
Morn
Greets you.
Feel her kiss?
Open to her,
And she will bathe you with delightful warmth.


COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.
The awardicon deserves well! Congratulations!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.*Smile*

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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#1300305 by Maryann


I'm Samberine Everose your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC. *Bigsmile*
and I'm here to give you a review as my *GiftP* to you for being so awesome here in WDC.*ButterflyB**Smile*
*Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.


*Reading* MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
This is beautiful, the word pitter patter gives me an impression about rain because I always stumble that when the topic is about rainy days, that hook me to pick this piece of yours.
The crafted lines reflect a good rhythm and rhyme just like how the rain was dripping,
maybe the way how the words were formed in which in creates a good sound as well as have its own comfortability while reading it. Well Done.

MY FAVORITE LINES:
Give me the summertime with refreshing winds and rain,
Pitter patter on the roof and gurglings down the drain.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I just only have doubt on the word gurglings you used.
I wonder why you made it as plural- adding an s,
when I try to search in the dictionary it means laughter,
does this mean that there are many laughter?

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.*Smile*

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Review of Stygian Souls  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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#1300305 by Maryann


I'm Samberine Everose your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC. *Bigsmile*
and I'm here to give you a review as my *GiftP* to you for being so awesome here in WDC.*ButterflyB**Smile*
*Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.


*Reading* MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
The word Stygian fascinates me to pick this piece of yours, it gives me an impression
to be a good name of a warrior. And as I ponder the thoughts between the scribbled words in the body, the mode is in slow phase by using the enjambment form in which it helps to stimulate and add a dramatic speed to give time to reader visualize and grasp it the created imagery. Though, this is something in dark or horror by using words that are link in that genre, but its okay, the format and smooth flow gives a tender feeling not to be scared on it, but just mystery. Well Done.

MY FAVORITE LINE:
The skies begin to threaten
the peace of the night,
and wipe out the light
of the stars.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.*Smile*

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Review of My Sanctuary  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour!!Gabby B *Smile*

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*BurstP**ConfettiG* CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.*BurstP**ConfettiG*

I'm Samberine Everose , and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here. *Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Every one can relate on the given title, sanctuary or kingdom, a place or a home that gives as peace at rest and finding our own self.

*Star* A title is one of the important part of a piece as well as the body because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

The scribbled body was narrated well, mostly its concentration is the thought or musing of the main character, I just only found some action in the last part of it because of its incidence or in other words I just only understand the story when I already red it. The thought of it found on the last part and its good.


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of A Fall Day  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A pleasant hour!! River *Smile*

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*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION

Fall or Autumn is one of my favorite season, next to summer, because of its magnificent nostalgic beauty. So I always fascinated to pick things and interested in those that are related in this season.
And as I ponder the created body, wow, you did well in describing the beauties of an Autumn season, the changing of natures view from summer to fall, the dramatic transformation of leaves and scent as well as the things that we always do when we reach this season. Thank you for bringing me in those beauties. Well Done!


*Heart* MY FAVORITE PART IN THE BODY OF THE ITEM:
Reflections of bright orange, deep crimson red and sunny yellow make the calmly flowing river blaze with colour.

*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC, and I'm here to give you a review as part of the WDC Kind hEart group.

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION

This is an awesome tribute for a friend, you did it good in describing her, stating her good qualities and why you like her as your best friend. Mentioning also your both hobbies, and things you have in common.
The most thing that I like here is the way how you express or introduced it through the words you chose, its for everybody. You did a good job in creating a good impression and imagery about your friend, specially the concluding part of it. Well Done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of a zombie hangover  
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Rated: 18+ | (1.0)
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I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC, and I'm here to give you a gift review.

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHTS & IMPRESSION

Eww!, as I read this piece, its very nasty on the imagery that gives. Thinking of these human brains and organs while eating and chomping like a delicious food. Yaiks!Its so hard to become Zombie and it explain here why. Honestly, I just only reach third stanza, it makes my foods upward in my esophagus. Well Done on this!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. The Awardicon deserves very well. Congratulations!*Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC, and I'm here to give you a gift review.

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION

It shows a good imagery between the created form of words because of choosing the right words that gives an active and in depth meaning.
Epic mostly have an structure of being like a prose and classy and It reflect that here in this piece.This is in metaphor and that explain this can be well as poetry.
The good thing is you did well in expressing good imagery of the lightness and dark in which at the end lightness will always prevail. Well Done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of A Leaf Not Fallen  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC, and I'm here to give you a gift review.

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION

The given title gives an impression of nature but I think this is a metaphor about life. I like that you used the leaf to symbolize it, leaf gives an impression to be flexible and changeable through the different season, I mean it goes with the season.
And as I ponder the created words in the body, I like words and the impact that it gives specially some words that are rhyming naturally when it blends to the other words and it gives a vivid and colorful imagery. Lovely.

Here's my favorite lines:
the veins of the calendar for a lifetime.
Built to withstand the courage of the oceans,


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of it's coming....  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION

I like the given title, its interesting to know what is coming, using the punctuation marks ellipse means that there's a continuity of the said title it lures the reader to find about it.
Though, words are quite few, but the theme was described it well, just like leaf that are flying and fading away because of the coming winter. There are repeated lines and words but it just quite fine, it makes an appeal that its moving and word playing in which it stimulate the emotion.


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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I'm Samberine Everose your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC. *Bigsmile*
and I'm here to give you a review as my *GiftP* to you for being so awesome here in WDC.*ButterflyB**Smile*
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*Reading* MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
This is a very interesting poem, it shows here the beauty and how you play it using words that is compact with thoughts and meanings. You expressed it in a playful tune. I like also the story within. Being an ESL my apology in not grasping immediately what the other stanza means but I think this is about our daily routine and we should face it everyday. Very Clever!

MY FAVORITE STANZa:
A tail flaps against my nose.
My cat meows demands,
so obligingly I pet
my furry-ball of orange.


COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.


Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.*Smile*

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Review of Red November  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Reading* MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I wonder why you link the color red to November, I just think maybe of its Autumn Season, but November is the beginning of winter. But the given title is fascinating to attract your readers.
Though, this is in few or mostly one word, an acronyms but the meaning is compact in which it describe truly how's November goes. Well Done!

MY FAVORITE LINE:
Misty rain and cold

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the poem, and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.*Smile*

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A pleasant hour!!dougo *Smile*

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I'm your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose , and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here. *Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I pick this piece in your portfolio, I pick it to have a read and give my review because the given title sounds interesting. Inhaling Happiness though its some kind of a metaphor but it gives some interesting thought to know about it.

*Star* In choosing a title of a piece, this should be given a great importance, as well as the body, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

And as I ponder and read at the crafted body, it amuse me at the end, and gave me an interesting about this person who have a sweat that gives happiness.
Are this person are normal like us? I don't have an idea about Samco place.
But, this experience is very amusing, and you just not narrate it but show it properly and vividly that gives a good view in my imaginative aspect.
I wonder if these are perfumes also. Good job!


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A pleasant hour!!Moona *Smile*

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Meet your Garden Fairy friend Samberine Everose , and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here. *Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title gives an interesting effect to any reader passing by and they might pick it to have a read and review, using the word curse as one of the word in the title, though, it gives an impression to be dark and alarming, but everyone would like to know what might be this curse of these bees.

*Star* The title serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

My first impression when I saw the body is its quite long, but when I try to read it and ponder the story, it made me to think that the length is just fine.
Its a combination of narrating with a mixture of dialogue. They are balance. though, I didn't grasp some words because of being an ESL but mixing it with word that are easy to understand gives me the ability to understand it vividly.
The impact is when there's an incident that cause an accident to the one of the Family member of the story.
At the end I thought that the curse that mentioned in the title is the accident that had happened that may caused by bees.


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour!! Jay O'Toole *Smile*

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*BurstP**ConfettiG* CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.*BurstP**ConfettiG*

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose , and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here. *Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I found this as a latest created poetry of yours, and its fascinate me with the word Friend. Because the word friend always creates a good imagery to me and I think all of us and gives a wonderful thought, thinking our friends here and there. *Smile* I also created one for you to check on "Friendship
The given title states also an impression of informing a good knowledge using the interrogative word how, and just like the other created awesome piece of yours teacher with your good rhyming and rhythm style just like you are comfortably playing with words but in order and creatively, I reflect a good insight and wisdom on it. Well Done Teacher!

This is my favorite stanza:
"If in your lifetime one or two
"are deepest, truest, best,
"Then keep a grateful heart in you
"for then you'll stand the test."



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of Lost in Thoughts  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour!!Naveed *Smile*

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I'm your friend Samberine Everose , and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here. *Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

This is a beautiful story, and so many emotions too that I reflect on it.
The way how the sequence was formed is in order, perfect using the first point of view.
You succeed in making your reader to be sympathize into your character.
I just wonder if this was based from true personal experience, because it has all the emotions here, the pain, the feeling of homeless, unloved. If this is a piece that being played in the piano it made me to cry already, I've been carried and sympathize to your character here.
But, just like I've said I wonder if this is not in fiction, because if this is a true story, this can be un-believable. The authenticity is not logical, because mostly nowadays there are many projects and benefits provided by the government for every citizen who in need of help like your character.
I'm sorry to say it, I just been carried away, because being a worker in a government and our own goal is to help those helpless and really in need individual, it breaks my heart not to extend my help and just seeing this character you built here in your awesome story. Well done!


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.
The awardicon deserves well! Congratulations!*Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of PREVAIL  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
A pleasant hour!!WakeUpAndLive️~🚬🚭2024 *Smile*

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Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose , and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you would enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here. *Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I chose this piece of yours in your portfolio to give my review as a part of the WDC kind heart, because the given title is very demanding to pick it. Prevail gives a strong impact or mood on the imagery as well as it sounds interesting, when I look up the scribbled words in the body which is more emotional than the given title, all the given subjects are link in the stated lines.
Every line gives an impact in meaning, I like how you repeated those lines, it gives a powerful tone or emotion.
Though, its just only in few words but as I've said it gives an impact.
Well Done!


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. The Awardicon deserves well! Congratulations!*Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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#2072181 by Samberine Everose

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Review of Vandal Eyes  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A pleasant hour!!Lakin *Smile*

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Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose , and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here. *Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

This gives me an impression of something dark, maybe because of word vandal you used in the title, but I pick it because there is a good reflection that I see when you mixed the word eye.

*Star* The title as well as the body is important to a piece, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.

And as I ponder the created lines, it gives a smooth and vivid imagery.
There are words that its hard for me to grasp but by mixing it with ordinary words it is balance.
There is its dramatic flow, it helps by using enjambment form or poetry.
Great work!


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.
The awardicon deserves well! Congratulations! *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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#1981228 by Samberine Everose

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In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A pleasant hour!!Jay O'Toole *Smile*

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*BurstP**ConfettiG* CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.*BurstP**ConfettiG*

Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose , and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here. *Smile*
*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Hey teacher, I have the mood navigating here in your portfolio, and this one enticed again my attention to see what's behind on it. Maybe I was charmed on the word butterfly you've used here as the title. Butterfly always creates a good imagery, they are one of the cutest little thing who have colorful wings.
And the the scribbled body gives a good and light tone, you successfully did it in adjusting your tone into a little child thought.
The created rhyme and rhythm are naturally flow within the words and not in forced,
specially the created emotion. Great Poem and very challenging in a child point of view.

*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, my only doubt is the last line on this stanza.

It's colors are so pretty, bright,
it's tongue so very round,
It floats for it is very light,
I sit upon the ground.

It makes me confuse because it gives another thought and not related on the third line,
because the first to third line is about describing the image of the butterfly but then when I reach the last line it change the imagery or it describe already an action.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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#1981228 by Samberine Everose

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In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour!!Jay O'Toole *Smile*

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*BurstP**ConfettiG* CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.*BurstP**ConfettiG*

I'm Samberine Everose , and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here. *Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I've found this new piece of yours in your portfolio, and the given title is very captivating, We always blessed with abundance gift when we Pray, its the only communication that is free,unlimited and yet it makes the impossible to be possible.
I always heard some miracle in prayers and I believe in that, reading this piece of yours gave me a thought that there is a miracle that goes while having this devastating hurricane, because Thank God you are all safe after this calamity. I really like the rhyme and rhythm created while reading it, its not been forced and it flows natural.
the meter of words are in exact and order also. Its so great when it read aloud, and have some tongue twisting. Well Done Teacher!


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of Happiness  
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour!!Edward Grey *Smile*

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*BurstP**ConfettiG* CONGRATULATIONS for being a Registered Author here in Writing Dot Com.*BurstP**ConfettiG*

I'm Samberine Everose , and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here. *Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble this piece of yours in the newbies Section of WDC, I pick it because the given title is very interesting to me.
Every one always like to know and curious where we will find happiness.
And we always have our own unique opinion on it, because each one have its own range of contentment-in which it links to happiness.
You have a good start in beginning this good article of yours, you already hook me on the first paragraph by using words that is comprehensible and stating the things that might think most in general people think about happiness.
Then smoothly showing in the second and third paragraph in stating some facts where we might get happiness. I like also that you give an example of a song lyric that will give a enhancing appeal to your reader specially if the song is familiar, because everyone likes music.
Until I reach the ending part where you already stated your own opinion, which is true and you have also the point about happiness or satisfaction. Well Done!


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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#1981228 by Samberine Everose

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Review of Winter  
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
A pleasant hour!!Rebecca *Smile*

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Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose , and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here. *Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

*Thought* MY THOUGH & IMPRESSION

The four Season have always its own beauty, and like the Autumn, though sometimes I'm afraid or don't find beauty of winter days because it gives a depressive atmosphere, maybe because of its blunt aura or color, but reading this lovely poem of yours gives me a good and colorful imagery that winter have its own beauty also like the other seasons.

*Heart* MY FAVORITE PART ON THE BODY OF THE ITEM:
Children are playing.
Snowmen are being built.
Children are sledding and making snow angels .


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow my only doubt is using a small letter in the title, I suggest you to make it in capital letter because its a title . *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of October Fall  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
A pleasant hour!!Rebecca *Smile*

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Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose , and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here. *Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHTS & IMPRESSION

I find this in your portfolio, and pick it immediately because I think this will talk about Autumn, through the given title October. Autumn/Falls is one of my favorite season because of its melodramatic or sentimental aura that we always feel on this season. It is like an afternoon after a lunch or sunset, the scent of an old book, the falling of leaves,and we heard their crisp like mellow old music. Its very beautiful. This always inspired me.
And my first impression is right when I try to ponder the scribbled body.
You stated here in vivid words all about autumn season, its beauty, its fun, enthusiasm.
Every line can stand alone and gives a good imagery, and you've sketched a colorful imagery through the lines scribbled. Neat and in order.


*Heart* MY FAVORITE PART ON THE BODY OF THE ITEM:
The vibrant colors of yellow, orange, and reds.

*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, I just only have doubt on the given title.
You used two title, one is the word October and the other is the Fall, and they are quite good and the same title. I would suggest to mixed them as the main Title so that it will give a more in-depth title- October Falls.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A pleasant hour!!Girlinwhite *Smile*

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Meet your Garden Fairy friendSamberine Everose , and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. I hope you will enjoy sharing your writings as well as finding your way up here. *Smile*
*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I like the word- unleash in describing letting things to go out or loosening things from the minds it blend it and gives a good impression as well as poetic effect, so it hook me to pick this piece of yours to give my review.

*Star* A title is one of the important part of a piece, because this serve as the main door in hooking a prospective reader before stepping inside the body of that item. First impression and expectation was created also on this part.


And the scribbled words in the body is more beautiful than the title, the enjambment format helps to create a slow and dramatic motion or speed while reading it, specially the naturally formed break line that stimulate the emotion.


*Heart* MY FAVORITE PART ON THE BODY OF THE ITEM:

Inhaling scents of deep red roses
Lilting in the soft ocean breeze
Beckoning me into the moonlight


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow, my only doubt is the word around that you used in line
The beauty around me.

I just think the word surrounds which is more stronger I think because you
are having an empathy to the beauty that surrounds in you.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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