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Review of Planet Xion  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi, Angelica-Nanoing by hand 30k

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and one of the judges in the
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and I'm here to give you a review in your entry. *Smile*
Thanks for entering in the contest.


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MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:

The given title is interesting because it gives birth to a new planet- Planet Xion, it hooks me to find more about that planet.
The story flows well and smooth, you did well in giving a unique image to this planet and it's quite clear. The way how you introduced your character is fine also, and you concentrate more on the story settings.
My only issue is the transparency of words you used to your audience or reader that was used in the story, or in other words that level of understanding to your audience or reader in any level that being filtered through words that were being used especially in the metaphorical, other than that there are no any other doubts and words that may distract. Overall the story is good. Good Job!

MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:

Other than what I've said there are no other words or doubts arise. Good Job!

Thank you for your participation in the contest.
I hope to see and read more of your works again!

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Review of Entwined  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, HuntersMoon

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and I am reviewing your story as a judge for
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Thanks for entering! *Smile*

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MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:

TITLE:
The given title is in one word, but it gives an impact because it describe already all there the image prompt of the contest.

IMAGERY:
The created imagery within the scribbled words in the body of the poem flows smoothly and I can say there is a unique style that were used, maybe the way how the words used the enjambment style, and it perceive me that it links on the given title, that is why its called entwined or entagled. Beautiful.

TONE/MOOD:
The way how you weaved the words stimulate and reflect naturally the emotions of the poem. I felt a heart throb within the words, its beauitful and really poetic.

RHYME & RHYTHM:
You did well and using the poetry form that the contest required of, not only using it but you used it in your own style which made a creative outlook of the poem.

MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:

I didn't find any words that distract the flow of this piece and no doubt arise. Goodluck!

Thank you for your participation in the contest.
I hope to see and read more of your works again!

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING! *Smile*

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Review of Strength Beyond  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, teacher Jay O'Toole

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and I am reviewing your poem as a judge for
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Thanks for entering! *Smile*

*ExclaimP* Please note that I am not a professional reviewer, anything I say here is just only my humble own opinion and views as a reader, don't forget that this will change by others perspective also. Please pick if you like and just ignore if you don't like. I hope you will find my reviews to be helpful to you and encourage you more to write. Thank you for allowing me to review your work. *Smile*

MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:

TITLE:
The given title is short but gives an impact, it describes well the said prompt image, and also the brief statement below the given title. Giving an impression that hooks a reader to know about behind it.

IMAGERY:
The created imagery within the words is good, and it reflects sincerity and trust, it reflects different colors in the imagery which describes well about the given image prompt.

TONE/MOOD:
The emotions were enhanced through the imagery, I feel the heartthrob each and every line.

RHYME & RHYTHM:
You did well in using the required poetry form that the contes's one of its prompt and its really enhances to the emotions as well as the imagery.

MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:

I didn't find any words that may distract the flow of the poem and no doubt arise. Goodluck!


Thank you for your participation in the contest.
I hope to see and read more of your works again!

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi, Monty

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and I am reviewing your poem as one of the judges in the
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MY THOUGHTS & IMPRESSION:

TITLE:
The given title gives a poignant touch, it reflects sadness and pain, the word broken is an eye-catchy, and the word Valentine is in general, so the given title describes a valentine.

IMAGERY:
The reflected imagery of the poem reminds me about Valentine in the dull or on the negative side. Because of what I've understood about Valentine is a celebration of the hearts, there is a smooth flow within the words but I liked the last stanza in where there is already the happy ending or bright side.

TONE/MOOD:
Just like I've said the mood of the poem is sadness on the beginning, but when it reaches the end stanza, there is already brightness and hope.

RHYME & RHYTHM:
You did well in following the stated poetry form, which also enhances the emotion that reflects, making the poem so emotional.

MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:

My only doubt is I can't or didn't find a link to the said image prompt of the contest, other than that this piece will be awesome.

Thank you for your participation in the contest.
I hope to see and read more of your works again!

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING! *Smile*

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Robert Edward Baker

Greetings! I'm Samberine Everose and I am reviewing your poetry, as one of the judges in the
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#2110571 by Samberine Everose
Thanks for entering! *Smile*

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MY THOUGHTS & IMPRESSION:

TITLE:
The given title is in short words but it gives an impact because it defines and reflects love as well as its link to the given prompt image of the contest.

IMAGERY:
The imagery reflected is good, you did well in reflecting its two imagery in the literal and metaphorical in where its a choice by the reader to find it in their own respective perspective.

TONE/MOOD:
The mood of the poem is good, I can say its sweet especially in the third and last stanza.
You did well to draw words in enhancing its tone by combining the imagery and emotions where it flows naturally. I see romance and feel the Heart Throb on it.


RHYME & RHYTHM:
You did well in following the given poetry form prompt of the contest which enhances too, the emotion and imagery of this piece.

MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:

I don't find any words that distract the emotion while reading this piece and no doubts arise.
Well Done!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, IceSkatingSugarCube *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION


The given title is interesting, the blending of the words fragrance and fiction reminds me of an old book with its scents and its yellow pages. And as I read the scribbled words in the body, the line space enhanced more the given emotion as well as the imagery.
This also reflects a new journey in a romance and the romance itself. Well Done!




*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

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Review of Early Morning  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, LdyPhoenix *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*

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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The element of poetry that I reflected here most is the emotion. The way how you weaved the words creates good imagery that brings me to the beautiful scenic and serenity that shows in the said piece.
The line space is also fine it enhances the emotion leaving the reader space for breathing and pondering the given scene.
I found this as a beautiful nature prose. Well Done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*The awardicon deserves well. Congratulations!

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, Bubblegum Jones *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I was enticed to read this article while strolling in your portfolio as part of the Secret Santa 2018, what made me hook is the given title about the season other than I know this is educational.
And you did well in creating this article, I just only know now the meaning of Xmas that mostly honestly we are using it because it abbreviates the words especially when we are in a hurry, especially now that text is trendy, but thanks to you for writing this article and reading it too, now I know and I will not use that word anymore.
Other than that it is much better also to write the whole word because it stated there and we are proclaiming our Lord- Christ and mass is a celebration. Right which means its the celebration of our Lord, the birth of our Lord.

Thank you for writing this educational article. Merry Christmas and a Happy New year too, friend.



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, PandaPaws Licensed VetTech *Smile*


I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I was enticed to pick this to have my review as part of the Secret Santa 2018, what makes me hook is the given title- I also have a poem about seasons, other than that seasons give a good imagery and impression because it talks about the different times of the year and have its own beauty.

I didn't expect that the body has a form poetry and it draws the eyes to see more about it. And when I started to muse the created words it gives a good imagery and story behind it. I liked how the different season changes in a smooth and in a slow phase giving the reader to give a minute to comprehend the words within.
Every stanza has its own emotions also in where it makes the reader follow it until it ends Well Done!size}


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. Congratulations for the awardicon.*Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour, Azrael Tseng *Smile*

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC. *Fairy*
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*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

This one caught my attention while having a great time strolling in your portfolio, because of the word birthday in the given title and in the brief description that this is for Sally. It's a birthday gift cake, Right in a poem. Adding the word Impromptu too gave an impression that this is different from other birthday presents.

The scribbled words in the body is light, and have an emotion to be like kiddy, of course birthdays will always make us younger because of its aura that most birthdays especially when it is celebrated was for kids, because when we are already becoming adult we often not or sometimes chose not to celebrate it because maybe it will remind us of our age. I often heard it that when I gave greetings in my real life, the often said "birthdays are only for kids". *Smile*
But, creating this simple and birthday poem gift is so sweet making your friend young again like the birthday when are celebrating in those kiddie times.

I really like the emotion and the aura that brings within the words of this poem. It reminds me of a fun and a kiddies birthday as well as it reflects also the sincerity within the words.
I know your friend Sally will going to love it. Well Done!




*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. The badge award deserves well. Congratulations!*Thumbsupr*

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of Meteor  
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I had found this piece while strolling in the review section of WDC, and it enticed me to look and read as well as give my review, because I know this talks about the universe.

This is just only in few words, a haiku but you captured it well and expressed as well as described nicely and artistically the message.
I imagined about the universe- created by God.
Using those stars imagery and how it traveled- a billion years.

Well done!

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Review of To the Rescue  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Soldier_Mike 🎺 *Smile*

Greetings! I'm your WdC friend Samberine Everose
and I'm here to give you a review as one of the goodies in the Teddy Bear Gift Basket 5 that I donated in the Ice Cream Social of Pat. *Smile*
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MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:

Below are the elements of a short story that I reflected most while reading this piece of yours. Please pick if you like and just disregard it if you don't like. I hope you will find my humble review to be useful to you and will encourage you to write more. *Smile*

TITLE:

The given title reminds me about a hero, using the word rescue, a hero's job or characteristic is will always rescue.

CHARACTERS:
There are only a few characters in the story, but you did well in handling each their personality, in the way they move and talk as well as they perceive. The grandma often shares wisdom with his grandson, and though Jimmy was still a very playful kid, he respects and listens well to his grandma.

SETTING:
You did not emphasize more about the setting here, but mentioning more about the subject, and the story that included in the story, it reminds me spring or summer. This is where beautiful stories were being good to be heard.

CLIMAX:
The climax is in the part where Jimmy left and the grandma has a friend fairy. That really surprised me too.

DIALOGUE:
The dialogue is just fine and its quantity too to make the story to be alive and moving. It's like watching a scene in the television.

MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:


I didn't find words that distract the fine flow of the story and no doubt arise.


Thank you for sharing this beautiful story of yours about fairies.
I hope to see and read more of your works again!

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING! *Smile*

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Review of Autumn  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Jellyfish


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I'm Samberine Everose your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC. *Bigsmile*
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*Reading* MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
Autumn is one of my favorites season next to summer because of the classical ambiance that it gives, so when I found this piece of yours while roaming in your portfolio, I got interested to read and see inside.

The way how you formatted the poem is elegant, like waving. I do like that you mentioned here the colors of Autumn and stating counting before Christmas, it gives hope for that. But the second stanza evokes sadness by mentioning the word death but gives an imagery to be sentimental. Well Done!


COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find a word that can distract the flow of the piece, and no doubt arise.


Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to seeing and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while staying in writing and reviewing.*Smile*

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Review of Earth's Poem  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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I'm Samberine Everose your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC. *Bigsmile*
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*Reading* MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I found this piece of yours in your portfolio and it interests me to read it ad give my review. I think this is about nature stating earth as the title.
I do like that you state different kinds of animals in the body of your poem, it reflects really the image of nature.
I also liked the last stanza, giving a conclusion and sincerity. Well Done!

MY FAVORITE LINES:

Honey bees, you are my friends,
Into my scenery you blend.
Through meadow, forest and field you go
And help the wilderness to grow.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find a word that can distract the flow of the piece, the only thing you missed is the comma between scenery and you and forest and and

The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to seeing and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while staying in writing and reviewing.*Smile*

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Review of Fantasy Lovers  
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi,Princess Megan Snow Queen Rose , *Smile*

*CakeB* HAPPY 18 th WDC Festivity! *CakeP*


I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC, and I'm here to give you a review.


*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just likes to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it doesn't fit your taste.

*Thought*THE TITLE
The given title creates a good impression as well as a story. I pictured a fairy tale maybe by emphasizing the word fantasy. Fantasy always interest readers especially children and those who like an adventure.

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THE BODY-

This piece stimulate the emotions as well as the imagery because of the good proper and arrangement of words, and it links to the given title, It gives an impact to the reader because you denote here some famous romance lover, and the last stanza shows the sincerity and the reality of the feelings reflected.Well Done!


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi,Sand Castles Shopgirl 739 , *Smile*

*CakeB* Happy 18th WDC Festivity! *CakeP*



I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC, and I'm here to give you a review.

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just likes to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it doesn't fit your taste.

*Thought*THE TITLE

I stumble this piece of yours while browsing in your portfolio, what makes me hook is the given imagery of the title-it gives an impression to be history, or like a landmark.



THE BODY-



This piece stimulates the emotions because of the Good proper and arrangement of words, and it links to the given title, It gives an impact to the reader because it creates a good imagery just like the given title.

The story was narrated in the first POV which makes the story to be more interesting, making your audience to link to the feeling and the way the character think in the story.

The sequence of the story is fine too, the scene smooth flows,and every scene have its own emotion.


*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I have only one doubt for you to consider. I marked my doubt in red and green is my suggestion. Thank you for letting me review your work.

They have become so popular with the tourists; there is talk among the conductors and the engineers about adding a third run next year.

the verb talk here is in out of place.
It weakens the sentence as well as its shows vulgarity.

They have become so popular with the tourists; the conductors and engineers decided adding a third run next year.

There is the talk there already on the above statement, but the verb talk has more powerful because its already decided.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Review of Life with You  
for entry "Musical Heart Strings
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Amanda ☺

*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews*CakeP*



I'm Samberine Everose your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC. *Bigsmile*
and I'm here to give you a review as my *GiftP* to you for being so awesome here in WDC.*ButterflyB**Smile*
*Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit your taste.


*Reading* MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I wad hook on this piece of yours while dropping around in your portfolio, the one that enticed me to read is by mentioning music and link it to strings, it reminds me of the music of guitars where in they use it as for serenades to woe a heart.
And as I read this piece of yours, I can say its sweet, amd the thought is sincere. Your love one will love this.
Well done!

MY FAVORITE LINES:

And when the music in my heart sounds sharp and distorted, I still only want to be with you.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find a word that can distract the flow of the piece, and no doubt arise.


Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to seeing and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while staying in writing and reviewing.*Smile*

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Review of Glory Awaits  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi, Amanda ☺

*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews*CakeP*



I'm Samberine Everose your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC. *Bigsmile*
and I'm here to give you a review as my *GiftP* to you for being so awesome here in WDC.*ButterflyB**Smile*
*Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit your taste.


*Reading* MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I was enticed to read this piece when I found it in your portfolio because the given title promise of its true, and I didn't know that it was inspired by a verse in the bible.
And I can say that the scribbled words are in few words, but it flows smoothly, and poetic, as well ad there is its natural flow of rhyme and rhythm which enhance the emotion within this poem. Well Done!

MY FAVORITE LINES:

That the things of this life won’t get me down,
For one day, I’ll be in glory with the Lord, renowned.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find a word that can distract the flow of the piece, and no doubt arise.


Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to seeing and reading more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while staying in writing and reviewing.*Smile*

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94
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Amanda ☺


*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews*CakeP*



I'm Samberine Everose your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC. *Bigsmile*
and I'm here to give you a review as my *GiftP* to you for being so awesome here in WDC.*ButterflyB**Smile**Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.


*Reading* MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title is so adventurous, as well as it gives a story, and as I read the created body, it really tells a story.
You did well in holding the emotion, as well as portraying the character of a butterfly.
I liked the way the poem smoothly flows and like a story that creates a scene and imagery.
The rhyme and rhythm flow naturally also and not forceful which enhance the emotions. Well done!

MY FAVORITE LINES:


My mind floating from thought to thought,
Like a butterfly in a flower garden.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find a word that can distract the flow of the piece, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to seeing and reading more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while staying in writing and reviewing.*Smile*

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95
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Amanda ☺



*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews*CakeP*



I'm Samberine Everose your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC. *Bigsmile*
and I'm here to give you a review as my *GiftP* to you for being so awesome here in WDC.*ButterflyB**Smile*
*Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit your taste.


*Reading* MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title is very interesting, though, there is it was said a nightmare but adding and blending it with colorful, it gives an amusing imagery.
And as the scribbled words in the body go on, this piece describes new years eve. Right? s very exciting moment, while waiting for the clock to say its new years already.
I do like the dramatic effect of those powerful verbs and adjective you used. It gives and makes the poem so fun like the given theme. Well done!

MY FAVORITE LINES:


The colors are beautiful in the night sky,
But every time, I ask myself “whyyyyy?”
Especially, when I’m trying to sleep.
When the fireworks, again, start to leap.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find a word that can distract the flow of the piece, and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to seeing and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while staying in writing and reviewing.*Smile*

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Review of Peace of Mind  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Amanda ☺


*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews*CakeP*



I'm Samberine Everose your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC. *Bigsmile*
and I'm here to give you a review as my *GiftP* to you for being so awesome here in WDC.*ButterflyB**Smile*
*Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit your taste.


*Reading* MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
The given title reflect what we always want, and you did in portraying it creatively. I can say it was in detailed, but you showed it in a smooth manner and neat, which reflects different emotions with each stanza. The rhyme and rhythm flow smoothly also and not in forceful. Well done!

MY FAVORITE LINES:


When I step up to the fight,
It’s not to prove my strength or might.
Instead, it is to calm my mind,
And release me from the chains that bind.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find a word that can distract the flow of the piece, and no doubt arise.
Congratulations on the Awardicon!.


Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to seeing and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while staying in writing and reviewing.*Smile*

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97
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Hooves 😊

*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews*CakeP*



I'm Samberine Everose your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC. *Bigsmile*
and I'm here to give you a review as my *GiftP* to you for being so awesome here in WDC.*ButterflyB**Smile*
*Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit your taste.


*Reading* MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I can say that this is a beautiful poem that reflects sadness, pride and choices.
The way how you made and form event line gives a good imagery which reflects emotions.
I liked the way how the rhythm and rhyme were naturally reflected in the poem without any forceful on it. Well Done!


MY FAVORITE LINES:


Hearts shattered, on the ground
Shredded paper
in your rearview mirror
Never Seen

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find a word that can distract the flow of the piece, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to seeing and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while staying in writing and reviewing.*Smile*

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Review of Strawberry Smiles  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, K. Ray *Smile*

*Flowerw* This is also a review in celebration for the WdC 18 Anniversary. *Flowerw*


I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC, and I'm here to give you a review.


*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just likes to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it doesn't fit your taste.

*Thought*My Thoughts and Opinion
I had the time to visit your portfolio and find this piece of yours while browsing the various folders, what makes me enticed to read it is because of the sweet and interesting imagery reflects in the given title. We always like strawberry, and we always smile even when in a glimpse on it.

And as I read the poem, you've sketched a beautiful snapshot or a candid shot that reflects tenderness and innocence.
I liked the repeating of some words in the two stanzas, it reflects creativity, and enhanced the rhythm. Well Done.

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*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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An Activity by the WDC Authors for a 'Cause
#2127637 by Samberine Everose

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Review of The Rose  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A pleasant hour!eyestar~ *Smile*

*BurstP**ConfettiG* Happy WDC 18th Festivity!*BurstP**ConfettiG*

Meet your friend Samberine Everose, and I'm here to give you a review as my GIFT to you for being here in this wonder full and color full WRITING World of WDC. *Smile*

*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just likes to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it if doesn't fit your taste.

*Thought*MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I found this piece while dropping in your portfolio and interests me to readvand give my review because it's about my favorite flower-rose.
And as I read and ponder the lines, I link this in metaphors which gives me a meaning about time and life that sometimes because of our wordly cravings we forgot that time pass by so quickly, and at the end we wake up and regrets things that we didn't have the time to accomplish what is important.

This is beautiful, the way how you formatted and weave the lines are not vulgar, but theres a sense of sophistication. Well done!



*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.
Congratulations on the Awardicon. *Thumbsupr*

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,🌻 pwheeler love, joy, peace , *Smile*


*Flowerw* This is a review in celebration for the WdC 18 Anniversary. *Flowerw*


I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC, and I'm here to give you a review.


*ExclaimB* Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just likes to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it if doesn't fit your taste.

*Thought*My Thought and Impression
I have the time to visit your amazing portfolio and looks like you've done so far already. I'm glad you've keep On shining.

I got interested when I saw this piece of yours highlighted in your portfolio, do I think it would be great if i will send also a review.

When we are in His loving hands, we are
assured that even anything come in us whether it's good or bad when we are in His hand, everything will going to be fine.

And just like the title, it shows in the body the complete reflection of the title. Every stanza gives a good thought and sincerity. Every line has its own good imagery, comfort and a way of enlightenment. Well Done!
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*Question* *Idea* MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I have only one doubt for you to consider:

We can obey him with love expressed

please capitalize the letter h in him because we are referring to Him.

We can obey Him with love expressed

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING. *Smile*
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