Hi, Soldier_Mike 🎺
Greetings! I'm your WdC friend Samberine Everose
and I'm here to give you a review as one of the goodies in the Teddy Bear Gift Basket 5 that I donated in the Ice Cream Social of Pat.
Congratulations on winning my package.
Please note that I am not a professional reviewer, anything I say here is just my humble own opinion and views, don't forget that this will be changed by others perspective and opinions also. Take it if you like and drop if you don't like.
MY THOUGHT & IMPRESSION:
Below are the elements of a short story that I reflected most while reading this piece of yours. Please pick if you like and just disregard it if you don't like. I hope you will find my humble review to be useful to you and will encourage you to write more.
The given title reminds me about a hero, using the word rescue, a hero's job or characteristic is will always rescue.
There are only a few characters in the story, but you did well in handling each their personality, in the way they move and talk as well as they perceive. The grandma often shares wisdom with his grandson, and though Jimmy was still a very playful kid, he respects and listens well to his grandma.
You did not emphasize more about the setting here, but mentioning more about the subject, and the story that included in the story, it reminds me spring or summer. This is where beautiful stories were being good to be heard.
The climax is in the part where Jimmy left and the grandma has a friend fairy. That really surprised me too.
The dialogue is just fine and its quantity too to make the story to be alive and moving. It's like watching a scene in the television.
MY DOUBT & SUGGESTION:
I didn't find words that distract the fine flow of the story and no doubt arise.
Thank you for sharing this beautiful story of yours about fairies.
I hope to see and read more of your works again!
Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING!