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#4409429

Review of The Giraffe and the Orangutan

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, Tim Chiu

I'm Samberine Everose your friend here in WDC, and I'm here to give you a review. I am strolling down in the review section lane of WDC and there where I found this piece of yours.

Please remember that these are only my humble thoughts and opinion, it may change in another also. Just pick and leave, cause you much more know your works than I. Thank you.

The first impression when I saw the title is funny, because the characters you used are opposite, just only their appearance, so its really funny and gave me an interesting impression to find and know more about it.

The way how you created the body is fine and proper, the rhyme and rhythm were naturally flow and not in force the way you express it. I also liked the story within the poem and the most I liked or my favorite is the good lesson or thoughts that you want to portray or give. You introduce it in a funny style but making me thinking at the end.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours. I hope to see and read more of your works again.

Regards and have a great wdc days as always.

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#4407049

Review of Spring

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, Mena

I'm Samberine Everose

your friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my way of welcoming you here in WDC.
I hope you will share more of your writings and finding your way up here.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I stumble your piece in the review and read section of WDC and I was hook to read and give my review because its about spring as the title said already. Spring always gave a good impression and imagery and it shows and stated here in your poem. You did well in describing the beauty of spring, its vibrancy and colors of this season. I liked also how you feel it like using strong verb like "wrestling in your feet:, I mostly like summer that spring, but reading this poem of yours, it reminds me that spring have its own beauty and greatness. Well done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4404612

Review of The Great Crayon War

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, Genipher

I'm Samberine Everose

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I was really hooked on this piece of yours when I saw it in your portfolio, as the given title said already - about crayons- crayons are beautiful because they produce colors and using them in animation, I think its going to be interesting, and just like I've expected, though the story is short but its good, and gives a good thought specially the last part of it. You created and build well their characters and what they personify. It doesn't have much more on the dialogue but it holds and the story was showed clearly and the sequence flow smoothly. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4404323

Review of Messy House

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, Genipher

I'm Samberine Everose

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I've fond this piece of yours i your portfolio, its interest me so I pick it and give my third review as part of the goodies of the TBGB, what really hook me is by reading in the brief description that this was in tune in the famous song Jingle Bells s it gave me an impression that this will be funny and fun, even if the given title reflect a bad impression of a house, and as I read the created words in the body, it gave me an imagery about a typical routine of a home/family, and I was glad to see while reading it, because it reflects a family though its messy, on it story goes, but its fine because it composed a family. Words are fine and the rhyming is good, it reflects imagery and the emotions naturally. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4401040

Review of The Fork in the Road

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, Genipher

I'm Samberine Everose

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I found this piece while strolling between the pages of your folders and it hook me to pick and give my review. I already have a clue about the narrow and wide road- its a parable right and as I read and ponder the scribbled words in the body, I can say you did well in showing and emphasizing it about the narrow and wide road and reflect smoothly its emotion- or in other words the difference between the two kinds of road. I feel the deep repentance of the speaker here, the poem have strong verbs and adjectives that properly define and express the emotion within. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4400498

Review of A Prairie Christmas

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, 🌕 HuntersMoon

I'm Samberine Everose

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and I'm here to give you a review.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Its not yet Christmas, but seeing this piece in the review section and reading it, makes me again to miss Christmas.

I can say the emotions that reflected are happiness and joyfullness and that are one those moods in times of Christmas you did it well in reflecting it, by using those strong verb and adjectives that really enhance the emotions to come up. I also liked the rhyming and the created story within this piece. Well Done! You are really a poet by heart.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4400497

Review of Love’s Rose

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, Prosperous Snow celebrating

I'm Samberine Everose

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and I'm here to give you a review.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I was hook immediately when I found this piece of yours in the review and read section of WDC because of the great and beautiful imagery reflected. I think this is very good specially valentines season or people who are in love, because it reflects well the emotion. Specially the lat stanza, and the mysterious rose that symbolize love. I also love the way that you formed it. The enjambment style helps to enhance the emotion within. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4400487

Review of Behind Every Man...

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, Genipher

I'm Samberine Everose

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I've found this piece of yours behind the pages of your folders in your awesome portfolio, what makes me hook is the given title and the brief statement - I was wonder why Santa Claus is not making this year. And as I read the story, I admire the smooth way of showing the sequence of it, until I reached the last part which gave the conclusion why Santa don't make it to come to give gifts for kids. It brings suspense to the reader for not stating or specifying it immediately the reason. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise, the awardicon deserves well. Congratulations!

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

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#4396879

Review of Unclear

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, IAMWATIAM

Welcome to the wonderful world of Writing Dot Com! I hope you will share your writings here, as well as finding your way here.
I'm your friend Samberine Everose, and I'm here to give you review as my gift to you for being a newbie author here, but first of all, I'm not a professional reviewer, anything that I will say here are only my own observation and thoughts, please pick if you like and just ignore if you don't like.

I stumble your piece in the review and read section of WDC, and find it very interesting, as as I've finished reading the scribbled words in the body in which it links in the given title-though its in few words, but I got your thoughts and points.
Unclear or undecided but in the last line which I mostly like the given thought that when we cast or let God to help and direct our path, surely we will be following the right direction or path.

Thank you for sharing this inspiring piece of yours,
I enjoyed reading it and I hope to read more of your works again.

Samberine Sig.

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#4394826

Review of Real Tears

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, Whisper

I'm Samberine Everose

your friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my way of welcoming you here in the wonderful world of WDC!

. I hope you will going to find your ways here and share your writings!

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I found this piece while strolling in the review and read section of WDC, and it hook me to pick it and have some read, Though the given title is simple but it gives an emotional thoughts. Tears can be linked to happiness and sadness and as I read the scribbled words in the body I think this is in emotional or in sadness part, and you are right shedding a tears will always be bringing out the way we express our emotions. The way how you made it in the enjambment form of lines enhanced the emotion of this piece and creates its own rhythm in the natural way and not been forceful. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4394802

Review of You're a Beautiful Person

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, Loonuh

I'm Samberine Everose

your friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my way of welcoming you here in WDC World.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I have found your piece while strolling in the review and read section of WDC world, what hook me for that simple title that gives a good compliment that anyone passing by will give a second look because of the good imagery that brings it.
Anyone will always love to hear if we can say about being beautiful person, its a simple greetings but gave an enlightenment, encouragement and inspiration.
And just like the scribbled title, the given words in the body are more encouragement, and anyone that will read it wil create a smile in their lips because of the enlightenment and simplicity it brings of this simple poem.Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4394142

Review of Winter's Touch

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, kerrimiller

I'm Samberine Everose

your friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review because I have the time to stroll in the review and read section of WDC.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title gives an impact even if its in few words only and though the given image of winter is cold but it balance the word touch, and just like the given body, words are in few but gives an impact and great imagery. The format is fine also which creates its own rhythm and enhanced the mood. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4394128

Review of Winter's Waif

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, ~Sue~

I'm Samberine Everose

your friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review because I have the time to stroll in the review and read section of WDC and I found this piece of yours.

Please remember that I'm not a professional or an expert in reviewing, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion and thought as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the uniqueness of others thru their works. You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

The given title is interesting, the word waif is a new word for me, so I first find its meaning in the dictionary, and as I comprehend it, it really link to winter like a season of lost or stray.
And just like the given title the scribbled words in the body are full of colorful imagery and thoughts too about winter to spring.
I liked the way how the words with rhyming and rhythm were used, it gives and emphasize a natural beat which enhanced the mood of the piece. I can say good job in scribbling this piece and how you properly sketch well on how we lost in unique beauty of seasons like winter to spring.

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MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4393242

Review of Psalm 23; Revisited

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, ~MM~

I'm Samberine Everose

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

One of my favorite verse in The Bible is Psalm 23, so I was enticed to look and read this piece of yours while strolling in your awesome portfolio, and I liked how the way or format you did it here, the original verse and your reflection about it, and they are almost the same, specially the given thought. It enlightened one's heart as well as have an inspiring message. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4384080

Review of Stepping Down

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, textual

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
Hiya! I am giving review on all the entrants of the contest Search for a WDC Heart Throb Poet and its your piece chance to have its review now as a preparation for the opening of the said annual contest for the season of heart here in WDC!
I hope you will encourage more to write and find my review to be helpful. Thank you for letting me review your work.

The given title is simple and its meaning is not showy, it should be read first the scribbled words in the body to capture its real meaning.
Words in the scribbled body are not prosaic, they are in depth and in metaphors, so some lines is hard for me to get its real meaning, but my though after I read, it reminds me about cupid the angel who are spreading love to everyone, the words were showed and described him in an elegant manner. The rhyme and rhythm too are just fine, they were naturally used and not force full.

MY FAVORITE LINES:
Sound, orchestrated chaos with me,
while I twirl and flutter all round.
Blasting furnace of life, keeping
pace like a loyal squire.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the piece, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4380609

Review of Sunrise Sensations

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, 🌕 HuntersMoon

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I find this beautiful piece again while having my port raid review in your homefolio as part of the Teddy Bear Gift basket. You really excelled well in nature structured form Poetry, this one is so beautiful again because it was structured well, proper rhyming and rhythm are there already, lovely words that blended and naturally reflect which flow smooth and gave a good thoughts, the way you begin on the first line is like pulling me more to read and to know to other lines until I didn't aware that I already finished its end. Well Done again!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

No wonder they've voted and chosen you as Heart Throb Poet 2017. Congratulations!

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4380582

Review of The Anniversary Trip

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: 13+

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A pleasant hour, 🌕 HuntersMoon

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I picked this piece in your portfolio because the given title sounds interesting to me, Anniversary always reminds me a celebration, as well as I would like to know what happened with the trip on this anniversary celebration.

So, this is a dialogue formed story. This kind of form in story telling for me is active, not just because it only contain the dialogue or the moving scenary but the story just flow within only one scene.

I admire that you did well in controlling its scene speed by stating in detailed the things that might be show or tell in the narrating form.

Dialogue formed also limits a character, and you did well in making the character have and perform their own that will not make confusement to the reader. Well Done!

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

The awardicon deserves well. Congratulations!

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4380402

Review of April Shower Magic

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, eyestar~*

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
The month of April is still too far, but when I saw this beautiful piece of yours in your portfolio, it hooked me so I picked it to have a read and give my review.
The given title gives a good impression and act as an interesting opening line, just like the first line, because it remind me summer and spring.
We are still in the winter season, though we don't have snow here in the Philippines, but the cold and windy atmosphere took me to missed April and May Months the summer and spring.
And as I ponder the scribbled words through the lines, it gave a vivid imagery and pictured in my mind summer and spring and the fun and happy days that brought these season, and you are right its like magic and in wonderland. Well Done!

MY FAVORITE LINES:
potholes on the road make for puddle play:
children clad in raingear splish-splash and jump;

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the piece, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4379402

Review of Spring Awakens

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, 🌕 HuntersMoon

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Nature theme poetry can always hook a reader specially nature lover like me, so when I see in the given title the word spring, it charmed me to see what's inside this piece, and just like the nature's bring for its great beauty, that is what I saw and pictured this piece of yours. Following a poetry form specially acronyms is ingenious and clever because there there is a set of limit and rules to follow to express creativity. And you did well in following the form. Great Imagery were viewed also as well as the uplifting spirit while glancing in my mind the imagery that the scribbled words bring. Well Done!
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MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

The awardicon deserves well. Congratulations!

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4377875

Review of Monthly Poetry Contest

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)

A pleasant hour, sunnystarr

I'm Samberine Everose

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

I've found this piece again while raiding in your homefolio because the word Poetry enticed me to see it. Poetry always fascinates me.
And I found out that this is one of the awesome contest in poetry that can encourage one to create poems specially if will have some prompts to follow. The rules are vivid and clear and prizes are just fine too.
But I'm so sad to know that its close now, I wonder where will be this awesome contest be opened again, because this is a great idea and awesome encouragement forum poetry contest.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4377863

Review of Poetry is...

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, Dave

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
Each one have its own definition of Poetry, and when I found this piece while sneaking around in your portfolio, i was delighted to know what poetry means for you.
And you are right, you had described here all the definition of poetry inspired through our experience, as a hobby, fascination, and likes. Poetry is an art of words, it has its own depth like a riddle or puzzle, and have the ability too to draw out different meanings or messages from the readers.
You did well in creating this piece of Art in free verse. Well Done!

MY FAVORITE LINES:
Poetry is
a mason jar to capture
those fleeting moments in life,
like fireflies that flicker in the night
and then are gone:

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the piece, and no doubt arise.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4377680

Review of Winter Blossom

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, 🌕 HuntersMoon

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HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I found this piece when I sneak on your homefolio, I think its one of your latest poem creation, so I got hooked to see it specially its about nature and the season. Nature always gives a good impression and view to our mind.

Winter have its own unique beauty and feature, and it shows here on how you stated well in this lovely crafted piece of yours, you did well also in choosing words that doesn't common to test and give a kind of mystery to the reader.
It has a smooth flow by using a free form rhyme and rhythm between the lines that enhance to reflect naturally the emotion within. Lovely Words that reflect beauty of Winter.

MY FAVORITE LINE:
gentle prayers for tomorrow float
in the quiet perfumed stillness.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the piece,
I have some few doubt for you to consider-

thought as tiny florets seek dreams
of candent possibilities.

You might mean cadent which mean rhythmical.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4377376

Review of The Constant Heart

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi, 🌕 HuntersMoon

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I am reviewing this piece of yours as part of my contest "Search for a WDC HeartThrob Poet "

which will be opened again this February, and I am trying to review all its entries in the preparation of its opening, so your piece chance now to get my review.

As I ponder every line, every line can stand alone and it has its own unique meaningful good thought, and when I think them all as a whole it reflects that a true love can't be fade even years may wither. True love will always renew and not to be olden by years.
If no more dawns arrive, I'll be content
with all the years of loving you I've spent
This is sweet and beautiful, no wonder that it got the grand prize. Congratulations once again!

MY FAVORITE LINES:
We've shared a life of laughter, love, and tears
yet each new day renews my lover's guise.

If no more dawns arrive, I'll be content
with all the years of loving you I've spent.

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the piece, and no doubt arise.
The Awardicon deserves well. CONGRATULATIONS!

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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#4377370

Review of Sunny's Review Forum

Review by Samberine Everose

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

A pleasant hour, sunnystarr

I'm Samberine Everose

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MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION

Hiya!, I'm here again sneaking within the pages of your folders and notes and my eyes catches this wonderful forum of yours. Reviewing always built a good and friendly gesture in the community, this is where we can gain friends as well as improved our writings because everyone have their own opinion and views on it. It's always been good to hear a comment what they think about our creation, Right.
So, I can say this is a good forum to encourage everyone here to review, because creativity is already in us, we will always be motivated when we are in the creativity mode, but we need also a review booster, like this awesome forum.

MY DOUBT AND SUGGESTION :
I didn't find words that can distract the flow and no doubt arise.

The awardicon deserves well. Congratulations!

Thank you for sharing this good piece of yours, and the happiness and enjoyment I feel while looking and reading it.
I am looking forward to read more of your works again.

Just keep On smiling while stay in WRITING and REVIEWING.

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#4376673

Review of The Breath of Love

Review by Samberine Everose

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi, Dave

HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"

I'm Samberine Everose

your little Garden Fairy Friend here in WDC.

and I'm here to give you a review as my

to you for being so awesome here in WDC.

Please remember, I'm not expert in reviewing, these are just only my humble opinion and thoughts as a reader, who just like to read bits and pieces of everyone. Please try to chew and just ignore, if doesn't fit to your taste.

MY THOUGHT AND IMPRESSION
I am giving my review to all the participant's entries in my heart season contest "Search for a WDC HeartThrob Poet "

and now its your entry chance to receive my review, this is in the preparation for the opening of the said contest for next year again. Thank you for entering and looking forward for your participation again.

This lovely piece of yours even if it was scribbled in few words but the chosen words stir and gave an impact. It is like a quote- it reminds me of a beautiful note that best to post in a card and bring a smile to any one who receive it. Its beautiful.

MY FAVORITE LINE:
tattoos your name

COMMENT AND SUGGESTION:

I didn't find word that can distract the flow of the piece, my only doubt is its fewness, though it gave an impact but I am expecting for more, it leaves the reader to crave for more lines on it.

Thank you for sharing this piece of yours,
I am looking forward to see and read more of your works again.

Until next reviewing, just keep smiling while stay in writing and reviewing.

Regards,

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