This is a grate vore and digestion storie and I'd love to see more of your work in the future.
I think that it would make a interesting store series involving thees characters and I hope they will be as good as this store
This interactive story is pretty awesome, it's ashame there isn't more people adding chapter's to your story. If there was a way to get more people to see your story and add their own things like a add on other website or get some frends on writing.com to spred the word that would be awesome.
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