Hey there,
Eggplants happen to be one of my most favorite vegetables, I love making eggplant fritters with gram flour. I never knew it had so many different names and color variants, I've only seen and eaten the purple one. Thanks for the knowledge.
This is a wonderful treat shops for all the chocolate lovers out there, looks yummy too. However, the packages start from 20K GPS, which might be a little too much for the newbies out there. Also, if you could specify which packages contain reviews, it would be more noticeable in my opinion. Some packages are also way too expensive, you can break those into shorter ones. Overall, a nice little item to raise some funds.
I believe this is what happens in every Indian/Bangladeshi household, especially with siblings having a smaller age gap. We do miss the bickering once we grow up, right? I liked the father's intervention here .
You have a nice rhyming pattern, but toys doesn't really rhyme with eyes. Can you make that last line ending with joys, somehow?
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I wonder how Peter Parker would meet time out of the blue, though. I like the way you've painted a story in verses here, a nice way to say happy new year. Yes, Time wants to look good, but I'd also like to see her adorn herself a little, I wonder how she'd do that.
Ha ha, that was both fun and sad at the same time. I wonder how old the twins were, and I wonder what I'd have done if trapped in such a series of unfortunate events. Nice one, keep writing! A review from"Anniversary Reviews"
Hi,
I like the way you've described the girl feeling for that homeless man. Not many people would think that way, let alone make a difference. I enjoyed the last part in particular, it was a bit unusual.
I just adore the types of characters you create. And yes, definitely money must be the root of all evils, otherwise why would a medical student kill so many people, what kind of weird satisfaction is that? I liked the way this story flowed, and the journal type.
Wow! This was quite an enjoyable one. is it supposed to be a good mixture of fiction and fan-fiction? And yes, Santa does live amongst us, we just have to look for him. I've become a Harry Potter fan, thanks to you!
Keep writing!
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Ooops! That can be a real problem if it is an important official presentation. I'm glad he could at least save the situation before disaster happened. I enjoyed reading this story in verses. All the best with the Writer's Cramp.
Hello,
Flew into your port to read something, and found this one. Though this is quite long, it was worth reading, as it had a combination of suspense and romance, and the environment hooked me in. I enjoyed the ending most.
Keep writing!
Hello my friend,
This was a different kind of character, scary and reckless. Looks like the criminal would have his way, no matter what. I just wish the detective would not have to give up so easily. I enjoyed the suspense and thrill created throughout the story.
RAOK has helped me more than twice with my membership. and I actually like the "at least 10 reviews" rule here, because it will actually ensure real activity, and let us know who the deserving members are. Writing is a passion, that has to be entertained, not just getting a bold handle or storage of items.
Hello there,
I like the way this poem captures all the painting titles. I wonder why you said the painter was misunderstood, though. I enjoyed the wind whispering part in part in particular.
All the best with "The Writer's Cramp"
Hi,
If he had grown up in Berkeley, CA, then he should be somewhere in UC Berkeley, or maybe a Cal State campus? I'm just trying to visualize the kitty inside college, playing. I wonder how he demanded respect, though?
All the best with the Cramp!
Hiya there, big brother,
This appeared in my newsfeed out of nowhere today, and I'm so glad it did! Although it's quite long, every word is worth reading! If you try to cut it into smaller chapters, adding some more information inside, this has the perfect potential to become a children's book.
I think everyone needs a friend like Rusty, who'd inspire mending, instead of breaking things. I felt like walking through the park, observing all the animals as I read through this. I'd love it if you actually write a part 2 of this, maybe give Rusty a family? A lot of girls would love a boy like that!
One fact that does seem a little monotonous as a reader though, is the fact that Rusty only fixes things and accepts gifts or stories. Make him do some other things as well, maybe go on a picnic or something? Maybe make him chat some more with his human friends?
I love Rusty, am gonna go keep him on my shelf now!
Keep writing, I wanna keep reading more of yours!
Hi Andrea,
This was written in just 15 minutes?????? WOW!! This was such an enjoyable piece, and the repeating of the coat folding, showed it's significance. I wonder what she actually found in that paper though, how he was murdered, maybe? I like the slow unfolding of events here, and you showed way more than telling, which is also good. Was this written for a contest? Did it win anything?
So, what did they end up making? Pancakes and Tuna minus the syrup? I could actually visualize those two as I read. But batter on the ceiling? what magic did they do there? I hope the family did enjoy their meal that day after all.
Whoa! That was an entertaining, but grotesque scenario. I wouldn't want my loved one slurping blood out of packaged meat! I would love to know more about the couple before the incidents happened. They seem so madly in love, tell me more about that love if you can.
Okay, I'm definitely coming back for more of this. I love the headers here too. I'd rather comment on the stories as singles, instead of reviewing the whole thing.
Well hello there, soon to be birthday girl, that's the portrait of a literal monster husband, but maybe that's what cheating does to someone! I just wish the murder didn't have to happen though, the way it did!
Keep writing, this was another great story as always.
Curious mind wants to know, was this written specifically for someone? The Washer experience can be so frustrating, I don't know what I'd do without clean clothes? so happy at least you get to do your writing no matter what! This was a relatable, enjoyable poem!
Now that really was a cute one. I enjoyed the firefly part as we don't get to see that much here in our country. Why was the guy so shy, though? Rather the girl was clever with her strategy. I'd love to know what happens next though?
That was both heartwarming and heavily emotional at the same time. I can't imagine a girl killing her whole family killing her family the way it happened here in this story. And losing a best friend was also truly heart wrenching.
Ha ha ha ha! Two little naughty girls trying to hone their magical skills (maybe NOT!) I could actually visualize the girls dancing around the fire. Too bad the parents didn't teach them the pie spell, what would they do if they're hungry the next time?
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