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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Wonderful story, nicely told. The changes from viewpoint to viewpoint were handled well. Jack's obliviousness is clear, and clearly explained. The initial situation, and then the changes that happen over time are reasonable, well-described, and well-timed. You've put in a lot of interesting detail while avoiding too much detail that would be boring - bravo.

You're also left room for a sequel, if you wanted to, with a couple of dangling loose ends. Still, the ending is satisfying.
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