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Rated: E | (5.0)
I normally do not do verse or poetry reviews, but yours captured me with your first lines. I applaud you, Well done and unfortuinitely your verse is all true.

Forget that “enemy” soldier has a family.
Their blood runs red. They feel pain.
Maybe they are a different faith.
Yet we are all the human race.

It is so easy to over look the horror done to the so called enemy side. but they put their pants on the same way you do. They also just want to go home, hug their kids and kiss their wife. War is Hell and it always will be as long as it exists. There has to be a better way.

Thank You for you thoughtful verse
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Review of Alea iacta est  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Mike, Bravo! Good short historical story. You will now have me checking my information on the Caesar Assassination. It was a focused read, Thoughtful, Not hard to follow. And it left me on the edge of the actual workings of the assassination. It was a good length for a quick read. My suggestion would be, [And now Caesar's wife], Calpurnia, citing this disastrous news, as well as some dark premonition, wanted him to remain at home]. That was the only spot that lost me for a bit, and I had to re-read it. I will watch for other historical writings from you.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I am new at reviewing and normally do not read fiction. Your story did keep me interested. But for me it was a lot of characters in a shorter read.

"I was leaving the hospital I thought I had better go to see Kathy to break the bad news about the accident. I hoped the news wouldn't upset her too much".

For me that was a break point for another chapter. But like I said I am not a accomplished reviewer, Best Wishes
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Review of Garden Still Life  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Looks Good, God does provide as we need, Even after feeding critters.
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Review of On The Clock  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the article, It does make you think, Of time. I found your articles easy to read and follow your thoughts. I have always considered Time a persons most valuable asset, Yet it is squandered by many. The small blocks the 15 minutes here the 60 minutes there. It is so easy to loose so called "Track of Time" and a day is gone never to return. I consider myself am Old Soul, I am comfortable with the past and its values. I find the future troubling. People can embrace the future, But I want to keep some space so I can first think about what I am embracing. Thank You for your thoughts.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Thank You for writing your thoughts on Panentheism, God creating everything, including Time and Space. To me that means that his spirit is within all creation. He is all around us and within us. I can feel the Spirit of the Creator.
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