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Review by Someone
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,
This is a very thoughtful and well structured poem.
I have read it a few times already and can't help it but read it again...
I will be back to read it again 😊
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Review of Love of Two  
Review by Someone
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi
This is wonderful poem
I read it all the way to the end, a pleasure to have read it.

Love of two

A true story indeed
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Review of My Yesterdays  
Review by Someone
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A wonderful poem
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Review by Someone
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I like this poem, it shows on telling us about the way life is. All have a ending
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Review by Someone
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A very thoughtful poem indeed
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Review of Royal Wedding  
Review by Someone
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I remember that day as well, anyone who could watch it, was watching the wedding live.
A day to remember
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Review by Someone
In affiliation with Newbie Help And Support Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi
I am reviewing your poem
"But the name I hold, "Husna",
because it was in my Read & Review feed.
Originally i was a bit unsure of your poem, so i had to read it a few times to get the whole picture.

Author describes about her feelings, how she feels about her name and to have a better name (or want to be a different person perhaps?)
You have expressed yourself well in this poem, its nice and written in Free verses.
Well done.

This maybe off the topic but you also have reminded me of someone with the same name, we were classmates but that was a very long time ago.
We were good friends too.
Thank you for reminding me about her.
Keep writing!
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Review of I Am My Enemy  
Review by Someone
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, and Welcome to WDC!
You have come to the right place to express yourself
I noticed your poem is of free verses from the very start
Currently i am on a mission to read and learn as much as i can about Free verses
I struggle a lot when it comes to symmetry and making sections; this is because of my bad grammer, i know.
Thing is though, i never knew i ever was a poet or even closer to becoming one till this last July when i joined here.
But by then i had already written like 200 poems alone!
I have tried editing them, but that proves to be too much
So now, i want to learn as much i can before i even think about writing another poem

Yours is perfectly fine though!
A wonderful poem filled with enlightenment
I am very happy that i got the chance to read this
And you were right about everything you wrote in it, in every single line
Keep writing!😊
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Review of To There  
Review by Someone
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh WOW!
I read this over and over like 5 times or more!
I am currently on a mission to learn about poetry as much as i can
I mean i didn't even knew about poetry at all till this year July
Coming here made me discover myself
So i thought going through other's work was the best way to learn,you know

My favourite part is the 4th section
The way you wrote is very thoughtful and productive
A masterpiece!
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Review by Someone
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, this is a return review

After reading this, i felt like as if you are going blind?
I hope not!

The poem is very nice indeed
Written in a easy to read format
It's quite normal for a person to live their whole life never to think what would happen if something was to happen to your vision
My little brother has some diagnosis with his vision
And as a result, we must take him to India for treatment once in a year
He talks to me about his problems, how difficult it is for him to stare at TV or even his smartphone as well
You reminded me of him the moment i read this line

My eyes will cease to see

I hope you are doing fine
A very thoughtful poem you have written here
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Review by Someone
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi
I normally don't read stories and i have bad grammer (so i just focused on the message it self)
But i really liked this story though, mostly the dark theme you applied to it with a brilliant ending combined with hope.

"There's nothing a candle, some wine, and the woman that he loves in his arms can't fix"

You got that right for sure!

I am not sure, this is the only writing you had published so far since July
May i suggest you try writing short poems as well?
Maybe a song too, or even shorter stories
This is so you can take your time to discover your true passion for writing you know
Don't be afraid, keep writing and never quit. You can change your styles or your mistakes in time with good reviews
Main thing to do now is just focus on writing, don't let your mistakes to hold you back. Because this is how everyone learns you know. I enjoyed reading this story!
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Review of The one for me  
Review by Someone
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a very thoughtful poem
The emotions are well aligned in every line, and its smooth to read.
I like the flow you applied, easy to pick up; a masterpiece!
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Review by Someone
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Rated: E | (4.5)
All of this is very true
All the way to the end of it

I wonder if you wrote anything about Trump as well?
If so, please do let me know! 😁
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Review of " Descending "  
Review by Someone
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a very thoughtful poem...
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Review by Someone
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
WOW
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Review by Someone
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
This is a remarkable poem
I really liked how you have written it
And i especially liked the whole message in it
I read it a few times already, and each time i do, i actually feel like each line is better than the other. It makes me wants to read it even more
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Review by Someone
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I read all of them individually
And i don't know what to say

I will focus on the first writing where its like a symbol
I recogonise it from a video game i played years ago
God Of war
I really loved that
Its a masterpiece on its own league
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Review of Stars Born  
Review by Someone
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
This is a return review
I picked this one since no one had reviewed it before

This is entirely different from all the other poems i had reviewed before.
The poem takes the reader into a describe life as in stars
To be born anew, start fresh and to be free as we desire to be
And how life is going to carry you to new things or experience, i think
This is how i feel after reading it

Maybe its what you really want to show us here, or maybe entirely something else
But that is fine because that's the beauty of it, to have some sort if an attachment to the poem

I enjoyed reading this
My favourite lines are

Stars born in bounds
Naturally without counts
Re-vitalising lives on earth abounds

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Review of Independent?  
Review by Someone
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Maria
This is a return review
I chose this one because currently no one had reviewed it

This is a wonderful poem
The author describes how she feels about life, that she feels a bit lonely and needs someone by herside. And also that to have someone's attention, she doesn't need keep working for it.

I love it, this poem describes the heart of a independent lady and how she feels about life (your reasons in the poem are easy to pick and understand)
Normally understanding a lady is quite a challenge for me but its really up to the lady herself in the first place.
I have come to realize that a Lady will simply not care to explain herself to anyone other than whom she deem worthy.

Thank you for the poem, it reminded me of someone i used to know
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Review by Someone
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi
I was going through "read a newbie" when i came to this poem
I have already read it twice because i didn't want to miss any details in it.

I don't want to say much about your style, am not really familiar with it(this is why am not giving you a full five star rating)

Having read the poem, it feels familiar for some reason. Like the time when i was lost and trying to find my way back to be a better person in life.
And who can you trust, to have faith with no doubt, and who can understand you more than the good Lord himself right?
Very true indeed
I really love this poem, its enlightning!
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Review of Don't be mean  
Review by Someone
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
This is a wonderful poem
I read it all the way through with the flow
It reminds me of my times back in school, when i was bullied. I learned to stand up to myself because of that.
While it is not nice to be bullied, this experience did made ne a better person in life.

I am happy to get the chance to read this poem
Its short, raw, honest and enlightening
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Review of The Sailboat  
Review by Someone
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
This is a wonderful poem
The poem the grabs the reader's attention from the first two lines alone

A tremor stirs the sea
Amid the darkening skies

It is very mysterious indeed
I enjoyed reading this poem
Its short, mysterious and terrifying too by the end of it
Nothing beats the mother nature right?

Well done
Keep writing

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Review by Someone
In affiliation with Newbie Help And Support Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi
Your poem is short indeed, but very creative as well.
The poem expresses the authors feelings how she could never meet the expectation of others.
And it is very true indeed
Expectation are what others think or hope you to be, like you leaving the school with the perfect grades; just study hard and you will pass for sure, right?

But often they forget how hard it could be to us, never to ask if you need any help with the studying
Or if there is anything they can offer to help us at all

Expectations could ruin a person

That's how i feel having read your poem, maybe you feel the same or a little something different, but that is the magic in it.
Everyone is different and rarely we could agree on something and a lot more to agree on other things.
I enjoyed reading this
Keep writing!
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Review of For Later  
Review by Someone
In affiliation with Newbies + Poetry Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi
You said this is your start to poetry
After reading it,i felt like reading a poem from an experienced writer
I don't want to say much about your written style, i too am very much new to this which is why i will focus on the message

The poem was very easy to read and understand, everything flows well and keeps the reader occupied all the way to the end.
As i read it, the poem felt mysterious, in every section the story takes a new direction and much deeper in to Adam's life.
It's a poem that came from your heart, no doubt about that for sure!
Keep on writing, its remarkable!
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Review by Someone
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi,
This is a return review
I chose this one because i was attracted by the name of it
Writers Wonderland

It got me thinking
What could be a writers wonderland?
And it only took me less than a minute to get my answer.
I am sure this applies to all the writers as well
You have put the whole process of a writer into words
It's simple, and brilliant too at the same time!
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