Hi,
This is a return review
I chose this one because i was attracted by the name of it
Writers Wonderland
It got me thinking, what could be a writers wonderland?
And it only took me less than a minute to get my answer
A very nice poem
I guess this applies to all those who writes!
A daily thing for a writer to go through and you did put it all into words.
Hi, this is a return review
I chose this one, i liked it very much
The story begins in a very curious way, Enlightenmen born as a fish
I read it all the way through, very nicely written details about a fish, weather, land, water and eventually, life...
It all flows very smoothly, i enjoyed reading this.
Not sure what to say
But this is by far the most satisfying writings i ever got to read here on the site
I feel happy and blessed to getting the chance to come across this
Hi, this is a great story
It has all the right words to grab the reader from the start and the story flows very well to the end
I liked the ending part twice as much!
I enjoyed reading this
This is a wonderful poem
I read it all the way along with the flow and it didn't distract me one bit!
The way you have written it is nice too, very easy to read and understand.
I had to read it a couple of times to actually understand the whole message in it,i didn't want to miss anything at all
And i must say that i truly liked it very much!
Hi, this is a wonderful poem
You have a good start and it flows very well all the way through to the end.
I enjoyed reading this
However, i personally think you could have ended in a different way though.
Like a happy ending, or an ending with some sort of hope?
Because that's how life is, good things will come.
But its just an opinion though, not even a suggestion to actually to change the whole poem.
You are very welcome to keep it the way it is, it's a master piece!
This is very nice, especially the way you have written it.
I try to write this way mostly, it helps me to keep my focus on
Sometimes I do change them after writing is completed, to try different styles and ways.
Having read this has given me some ideas for my next work which I started earlier today.
I really love the dark theme, and the message too!
Thank you for this
This is very nice and you did a great job of keeping it short with the flow. I think you can make it longer though and add a bit of dark theme into it. Not saying to throw this away, please keep it here. Am just suggesting you can try to make the poems longer, just a little bit more. It's just to try new things and new ways...
Please, enjoy your time here!
At first it was abit difficult for me to get used to the flow of this poem, but once I did it was a wonderful experience.
As for the title
I think it's better I say this to you
We Found You!
Please, welcome and have fun 👍
Hi, and welcome to writing.com!
Please, enjoy while you are here and share all your work with the friendly people on the site. Everytime I ask for a suggestion for improvement, alot of positive ideas do come to me and in so many ways, I always note them down you know!
Just have fun
And I really love what you have written here, are you into dark themes or horror stories? I think you should try it:)
Hi Sadorose.
I enjoyed reading this poem. Nicely arranged, nothing to distract the reader from getting distracted. Read it all the way with my heart. I have never experienced snow, where I come from its just too warm (Maldives)
Thank you for this, I enjoyed it very much. Do enjoy yourself :)
Ah... the thought of Valentine's day...
You are very creative, being able to bring back memories of my past that Even I had forgotten!
Thank you so much, loved it.
I do have a question, have you tried writing poems or songs for Valentine's day? :)
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