Andrea Jones's (findyourfear) Reviews

Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/findyourfear/sort_by/r.review_creation_time DESC/page/2

Andrea Jones

Review Requests: OFF

112 Public Reviews Given

182 Total Reviews Given

Public Reviews

Previous ... 1 -2- ... Next

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#3164185

Review of What Is Alive?

Review by Andrea Jones

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi,

I think this is a brilliant poem, well done.

Write On!

Andrea x

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#3163993

Review of Let Me Plan Your Splentabulous Party

Review by Andrea Jones

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi there,

Wonderful idea, very original and delivered delightfully!

Thank you for the great read!

Write On!

Andrea x

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#3163985

Review of Treading on Dreams

Review by Andrea Jones

Rated: E

| (4.5)

Hi,

I really enjoyed this piece, you wrote it wonderfully and the ending was a nice touch!

Just a couple of words I might suggest you change; whither and boughour.

Please bear in mind that these are only my suggestions.

Write On!

Andrea x

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#3163970

Review of Heaven Cures Her Soul

Review by Andrea Jones

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi,

I really like this, you describe everything in detail but using as little words as you do.

Write On!

Andrea x

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#3162690

Review of The Home Sampler

Review by Andrea Jones

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hi,

I honestly liked this poem, the metaphors are great and you have done a fantastic job in writing this wonderful poem!

I have no suggestions for you as the way you wrote this is extraordinary!

I love the middle stanza!

Write On!

Andrea x

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#3160988

Review of The Giraffe and the Orangutan

Review by Andrea Jones

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Hello,

Hehe, a great poem, giraffe's are such party poopers.

Andrea x

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#3160409

Review of The Crunch Point

Review by Andrea Jones

Rated: 18+

| (5.0)

Hi,

This is really well written, You have described everything wonderfully but at the same time let the reader figure out some things for themself, and you hit the right balance.

You really let the reader into how Frank feels and this is a great story.

Write On!

Andrea x

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#3160405

Review of A letter to myself.

Review by Andrea Jones

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

Hi,

A great read, I feel you can expand on this to make it some sort of letter that has your experiences in life and then how you actually felt about it, kind of saying how you reacted then and how it makes you feel now, or something alone those lines.

Let me know if I can help in any way and Write On!

Andrea x

Only reviews from the past
14 days may be credited.

#3159139

Review of Two Little Boys

Review by Andrea Jones

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Hi,

Very nice poem, write on!

Andrea x

Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/profile/reviews/findyourfear/sort_by/r.review_creation_time DESC/page/2