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Review of A Lonely Day in Iraq  

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Rated: E | (4.0)
So you have the same off-white stone tiles we have in our desert spot. Funny how the tracks all look the same and eventually the tiles turn off-tan.

Good job on the poem. I like the use of the four single "S" words as their own lines.

Good luck during your stay unless you have rotated back then congrats on your return.