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Review by Mikki
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very clever. Almost like the Velveteen Rabbit, the POV of an inanimate object. Makes me wanna write something new myself...
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Review by Mikki
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hot diggity dog!! And I thought the Grapes of Wrath was an excellent book all by itself!

You are a very brave and bold poet. To reconstruct John Steinbeck into a poem, it is not very much short of genius and I sincerely hope you go far with your writing. Amazing!
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Review of The Sense of Non  
Review by Mikki
Rated: E | (4.5)
Oh my! I am FLOORED by this poem. It is just about the most perfect piece I've seen on the site so far.

I especially loved the "When lack is so abundant
That void is filled with naught,
The hopes of all the nothingness
Elusively are caught..." BRILLIANT!!

A philosophy class in meter and rhyme. WRITE ON AND ON!!
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