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Review of Summer 's Palette  
Review by Angel Wolf
Rated: E | (5.0)
Touching and relaxing. You did good on the rhymes and describing the colors! Good job!
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Review of A Timeful Bot  
Review by Angel Wolf
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Very awesome. It's been a long time since I've seen anything Transformers related. What's your favorite 'bot? Favorite 'con?

My favorite Autobot was either Ironhide or Jazz.

My favorite Decepticon was either Starscream, Vortex, Grindor, or Bonecrusher.
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Review of Gnooooome!  
Review by Angel Wolf
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Lol. I used to think about what my Legos would do when I wasn't looking as a child. Hahahaha!
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Review of Sapphire Blues  
Review by Angel Wolf
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice job! It's nice, it conveys well, and it really gives me a nice feeling. Although the 8th, 4th, and 1st lines are a bit too short. Other than that, good word choice!!! I'm proud of this!!! You should be, too!!! Do you think you could write a poem about me?


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Review of Creation.  
Review by Angel Wolf
Rated: E | (4.5)
Really good! This is VERY awesome. Although on the second line, you could say "Out of the black, though, came something" or just put a word in the middle because the second line is just a bit too short. But overall, good grammar, and really makes me wonder!!!
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Review by Angel Wolf
Rated: E | (5.0)
It makes sense. I'm pretty sure it's something most everyone deals with. I find it relatable- sometimes I throw on a crop top and some short shorts when it's 90 degrees, and stay outside for about 30 minutes. Well, then a storm comes in and it drops to 40 degrees. But that's just because I live in Oklahoma. lol this made me laugh kinda.
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Review by Angel Wolf
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hmm, very good! I love it. It's cute, and heartwarming. Very good! It has great grammar and punctuation, EXCELLENT word choice. I like the story it conveys. I love it. It's kinda emotional, too. Still, very great, great word choice, good punctuation and grammar. Nice job!
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