First of all, welcome to WDC! I hope you find your time here well spent.
I saw this poem in the read and review section, so here are my thoughts for this poem. It's my opinion to help you, so take it or leave it the way it is.
Overall: You did a nice job conveying your loathsomeness for the sun.
Grammar/editions: In the 1st stanza, face and dazed aren't really working as a rhyme. This is a sight rhyme, but doesn't sound good to the ear. Perhaps race or case would work better?
In the 3rd stanza, sun and gone could also be redone. Perhaps done, run, etc.?
And the very last word, end should have an "s" to rhyme with friends.
(If I get in a bind I like to use rhymezone for a reference at times)
My favorite part: The hotness, the dryness of the land. Making me wet for opening my sweat gland. Love these lines!
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Again, these are my thoughts. I found that saying my poems out loud helps with rhymes better. Have a good day and a great weekend!