I liked your poem about music. The first stanza sounded good, then the next 3 stanzas were all shorter.
I could get used to the "beat" of the poem easier. I wish the first stanza was either shorter and flowed better as the latter 3 stanzas did. Or adding to the latter 3 to make it more comparable to the first lines.
These are my thoughts on this piece. You can change it if you want, it's yours to do so with.
On a lighter note, it spoke well of how the different kinds of music may suit ones own activity at the time.
I like nearly all kinds of music, if I'm in the mood! lol Today's country sounds more like glorified pop to me.
I like older stuff, 60's and 70's mostly. To each his own, but music can cross so many boundaries!
Again, these are my thoughts, but you still did a good job Tim.