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11 Public Reviews Given
Review Style
Well, since I am so new my critiques mainly consist of my experience while reading the story.
I'm good at...
Looking at a story from a very basic point of view, I'll most likely read it as a student would read it.
Favorite Genres
Anything that isn't straight-up porn.
Least Favorite Genres
Straight-up porn
Favorite Item Types
Most items.
Least Favorite Item Types
Long poems need to be very capturing to keep me in.
I will not review...
Only porn really, it isn't what I am looking to read.
Public Reviews
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Review of A Mime's Poem  
Review by free writer
Rated: E | (4.0)
A great poem! I really don't have anything else to say, but this was an entertaining read for sure!
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Review of SNOW MAN  
Review by free writer
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi, I think it's great for you to be trying a language that is different from your own! First things first, the story is nice. Even though the grammar is choppy at parts, I really liked the tale and it was charming. There are lots of fixes I'm sure many people have told you, so rather than stating them I want to suggest Grammarly. Although there is a premium option, the free version will work wonders for you. I hope you achieve all your goals, and this is quite a good start!
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Review by free writer
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Now, I think the story here is quite interesting. The way it progresses is nice, and the characters are interesting. I can see this being a good chapter if it was a bit longer. That said, as a prologue, I think it is not as good. Personally, I feel as though it throws us onto characters and has emotional moments that don't feel emotional. Having no connection to any characters, there is a severe lack of urgency. Being thrown into this situation at the beginning leaves no impression other than exposition. In my opinion(which is quite unprofessional), the hook falls a bit short for hooking you into the story. I suggest expanding a bit and giving the reader more of a reason to feel for the characters, as it is too short. This is, of course, assuming this novel is not a sequel, as it does say "return." Overall I think the writing is good but it could use more to feel interesting. I wish you good luck and happy writing!
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Review by free writer
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Very heartwarming. Though it did have some out of place phrases.
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Review of The Morning After  
Review by free writer
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I like it! It has a tone of regret and makes the reader feel bad for the character they are reading about. Well done!
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Review by free writer
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I like it! It has a great mood to it. For one, I was a little confused on the world this was set in, but I found out it was a magical world. Other than that well written indeed.
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Review of A Glass of Water  
Review by free writer
Rated: E | (4.5)
Aw, I love this story. The pacing is nice, and for such a simple plot to seem like a genius story is an incredible accomplishment! I love it!
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