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Review by Detective
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's a colorful, descriptive look at the solstice and summer itself. It brings all the images of the flowers , the shores and the mountains forward. I also enjoyed the image of nature being an artist bringing color back to the world after winter's chill.
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Review of Frost Wraith  
Review by Detective
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed your poem very much. It captures the spirit of winter clearly. The rhyme was consistent throughout the poem. The words used were descriptive and created clear images. I'm very glad you decided to share this poem with us. Keep up the good work.
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Review of Rich Man's Folly  
Review by Detective
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
I enjoyed your story very much. I found the story entertaining and the characters interesting. I did notice two spelling errors. The first is is when the female board member is speaking. I believe it should say "an", not "and". The second spelling error was in the second to last sentence which says "hoe" instead of home. But it was overall a good story.
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Review of The Star  
Review by Detective
Rated: E | (4.0)
I enjoyed your story very much. Even though it's short the word count was well utilized. Each character is unique and displays distinct personality. The slight twist at the end was unexpected and well-done. I did notice one small thing. The last sentence doesn't have the second quotation mark. Overall, well-done.
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Review of Dog Parade  
Review by Detective
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed your poem very much. I enjoyed the way you describe the variety of dogs that pass through your neighbor's home. I also like the way you talk about the neighbor and her kindness. The poem flows well and the rhyme scheme aids the flow. Very well done.
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Review of Story Structure  
Review by Detective
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed this newsletter very much. It's well-written and informative. The more in-depth detail on both the three acts and the separate subsections makes the structure much clearer for me than just the basics. I also liked that you gave examples and that you gave examples from two different movies. It really helped make sense of the structure.
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Review of Edgar  
Review by Detective
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed your story very much. It's a different take on a vampire and human meeting. I enjoyed the characters. Both characters were distinct and had unique voices. I liked that you distiquished Edgar by giving a lisp. The budding relationship between the two characters is sweet.
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Review of Harry's day  
Review by Detective
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed this piece very much. I found this story adorable and very sweet. The character has a distinct voice and personality. There's a lot of fun in this story. Very good job.
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Review of Halloween Holiday  
Review by Detective
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed your poem very much. The rhyme scheme was consistent throughout the poem which aids the poem's flow.The main character has a distinct voice and a clear personality. Though there is humor in the poem , I can hear the character's frustration , which is both understandable and relatable.
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Review of No Treasure Here  
Review by Detective
Rated: E | (4.5)
I enjoyed your story very much. The titles were well utilized and made sense where they were place in the story. The two main characters were distinct and each had a unique voice. Their friendship was made clear through the way the speak to each other. Well done.
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Review by Detective
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed your poem very much. The rhyme scheme and syllable format are consistent. The poem expresses how and why you write poetry as well as what inspires your poetry clearly. Five stanzas were enough for you to say what you wanted to say without struggle. Well done.
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Review of YOU MUST SWIM  
Review by Detective
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed your poem very much. The rhyme scheme was consistent throughout. The syllable format also remains consistent. Both work well together and help the poem flow. The poem is well thought-out and well written. It speaks of faith and letting faith guide through rough times. Well done.
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Review of Lindsey's Jewels  
Review by Detective
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed this story very much. The story is well-written and the characters are distinctive from each other. You did a good job creating a very creepy story within the contest's word limit. The ending only added to the overall creepiness of the story.
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Review by Detective
Rated: E | (4.5)
I enjoyed your story very much. It's definitely an interesting read. The characters are all distinct and fit well in the story. The story is engaging throughout and the slight twist at the end is well done. I did notice a possible error in the second paragraph. When you mention that it's Ellie's first time flying, there's a comma between 'time' and 'flying' that's unnecessary.
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Review by Detective
Rated: E | (4.0)
I enjoyed your poem very much. The theme of love in multiple forms remains consistent throughout and is well expressed. Even though the poem isn't very long the length works well for the poem. I can't tell if the end of the lines are a rhyme or not, but that might just be me. It's still very well done.
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Review of Work  
Review by Detective
Rated: E | (4.0)
I enjoyed this story very much. This is a well-written flash story that does a lot with a little but the length doesn't take away anything. There is the implication of a larger world beyond what is depicted in the story. I would enjoy reading a longer version of this story. Well done.
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Review of Come  
Review by Detective
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed your poem very much. The rhyme scheme was consistent and thought-out. The rhythm was also well-done and consistent as well. The rhyme and rhythm work well together to create a poem that flows smoothly from stanza to stanza. Well done and good job.
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Review of CORONAVIRUS  
Review by Detective
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is well-written and very informative. This article is clear and easy to understand. I learned some new things about this current virus outbreak and some older outbreaks as well. I did notice one spelling error. When you first mention the CDC under causes, you wrote "Canters" instead of "Centers". That was the only thing I noticed. This was very well-done.
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Review by Detective
Rated: E | (4.5)
I enjoyed your short story. It works well as a good introduction to you and to your Writing.com path. This was an interesting take on a short story. I've haven't read a short story in the form of a blog. I look forward to reading more of your work. Good job.
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Review by Detective
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I enjoyed your short limerick very much. It utilizes both the poem form and the prompt well. The rhyme scheme is consistent and well-thought out. Even though the limerick is short, the length works well and it does a lot with a little. Very good job.
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Review of 3 Micro Poems  
Review by Detective
Rated: E | (4.5)
I enjoyed your three micro poems. Though the title implies that they are three separate poems, together they read like one poem. There is a theme of seeking peace that flows through each one and ties them together well. They are very well written and calming. Well done.
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Review by Detective
Rated: E | (4.0)
I enjoyed your story very much. It demonstrates growing up learning multiple languages well. It also displays the connection that one has with family members who speak different languages. There is also the connection between three generations of this family which was well done. Good job.
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Review by Detective
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed your story very much. It's very well written and engaging. The characters are distinct and unique. The mystery is well set up and wasn't bogged down. The twists in the story were well done and made sense. The story was all tied up in the end as well. Good job.
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Review by Detective
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really enjoyed your short poem. It utilizes the prompt very well. It also showcases the relationship between owner and cat well. Writing a poem, even a short one, where it requires a specific rhyme scheme and with only a certain number of syllables can be difficult but this is well done. Good job.
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Review of A Beautiful Woman  
Review by Detective
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed your poem. The rhyme scheme works well for the poem's theme and remains consistent. I like that each stanza has a separate rhyme at the end. It doesn't hinder the poem's flow at all. The poem portrays the love between the speaker and their significant other clearly. Good job.
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