I enjoyed your story very much. It's a different take on a vampire and human meeting. I enjoyed the characters. Both characters were distinct and had unique voices. I liked that you distiquished Edgar by giving a lisp. The budding relationship between the two characters is sweet.
I enjoyed your poem very much. The rhyme scheme was consistent throughout the poem which aids the poem's flow.The main character has a distinct voice and a clear personality. Though there is humor in the poem , I can hear the character's frustration , which is both understandable and relatable.
I enjoyed your story very much. The titles were well utilized and made sense where they were place in the story. The two main characters were distinct and each had a unique voice. Their friendship was made clear through the way the speak to each other. Well done.
I enjoyed your poem very much. The rhyme scheme and syllable format are consistent. The poem expresses how and why you write poetry as well as what inspires your poetry clearly. Five stanzas were enough for you to say what you wanted to say without struggle. Well done.
I enjoyed your poem very much. The rhyme scheme was consistent throughout. The syllable format also remains consistent. Both work well together and help the poem flow. The poem is well thought-out and well written. It speaks of faith and letting faith guide through rough times. Well done.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and the rhyme scheme is consistent throughout the poem. The poem does very well in bringing the life of Stagecoach Mary to life in stanza. I personally had not heard of her and I'm glad I learned about her through your poem. Well Done.
I enjoyed this story very much. The story is well-written and the characters are distinctive from each other. You did a good job creating a very creepy story within the contest's word limit. The ending only added to the overall creepiness of the story.
I enjoyed your story very much. It's definitely an interesting read. The characters are all distinct and fit well in the story. The story is engaging throughout and the slight twist at the end is well done. I did notice a possible error in the second paragraph. When you mention that it's Ellie's first time flying, there's a comma between 'time' and 'flying' that's unnecessary.
I enjoyed your poem very much. The theme of love in multiple forms remains consistent throughout and is well expressed. Even though the poem isn't very long the length works well for the poem. I can't tell if the end of the lines are a rhyme or not, but that might just be me. It's still very well done.
I enjoyed this story very much. This is a well-written flash story that does a lot with a little but the length doesn't take away anything. There is the implication of a larger world beyond what is depicted in the story. I would enjoy reading a longer version of this story. Well done.
I enjoyed your poem very much. The rhyme scheme was consistent and thought-out. The rhythm was also well-done and consistent as well. The rhyme and rhythm work well together to create a poem that flows smoothly from stanza to stanza. Well done and good job.
This is well-written and very informative. This article is clear and easy to understand. I learned some new things about this current virus outbreak and some older outbreaks as well. I did notice one spelling error. When you first mention the CDC under causes, you wrote "Canters" instead of "Centers". That was the only thing I noticed. This was very well-done.
I enjoyed your poem very much. Even though it's short, you express a lot in only few lines and you express it well. The joy and love you felt meeting your soulmate for the first time is made clear. The poem is well-written and the descriptions were utilized well. Good job.
I enjoyed your short story. It works well as a good introduction to you and to your Writing.com path. This was an interesting take on a short story. I've haven't read a short story in the form of a blog. I look forward to reading more of your work. Good job.
I enjoyed your short limerick very much. It utilizes both the poem form and the prompt well. The rhyme scheme is consistent and well-thought out. Even though the limerick is short, the length works well and it does a lot with a little. Very good job.
I enjoyed your three micro poems. Though the title implies that they are three separate poems, together they read like one poem. There is a theme of seeking peace that flows through each one and ties them together well. They are very well written and calming. Well done.
I enjoyed your story very much. It demonstrates growing up learning multiple languages well. It also displays the connection that one has with family members who speak different languages. There is also the connection between three generations of this family which was well done. Good job.
I enjoyed your story very much. It's very well written and engaging. The characters are distinct and unique. The mystery is well set up and wasn't bogged down. The twists in the story were well done and made sense. The story was all tied up in the end as well. Good job.
I really enjoyed your short poem. It utilizes the prompt very well. It also showcases the relationship between owner and cat well. Writing a poem, even a short one, where it requires a specific rhyme scheme and with only a certain number of syllables can be difficult but this is well done. Good job.
I enjoyed your poem. The rhyme scheme works well for the poem's theme and remains consistent. I like that each stanza has a separate rhyme at the end. It doesn't hinder the poem's flow at all. The poem portrays the love between the speaker and their significant other clearly. Good job.
I enjoyed your poem. There is a good flow between the stanzas from beginning to end. The need for balance and the struggle it often takes to find it. The poem is well-structured and thought out. The way you view a balanced life is clear and concise.
I enjoyed your poem very much. The rhyme scheme works well and is consistent throughout. It's a fun poem about diner where all the cool dinosaurs go to eat. I did notice that you capitalized the word 'then' in the fourth line. That's the only thing I noticed that may be a typo. Overall, a good job.
I enjoyed your poem very much. The poem is very well-written. It's descriptive and creates a clear picture. The description draws the reader in from the start. The poem remains consistent throughout so it flows well. The way the final stanza is written adds to the overall theme of the poem. Good Job.
I enjoyed your story very much. It didn't go the way I was expecting it to go when I read the first couple of lines. It's a different take on androids and placing human brains in android that I really liked. The story deals well with things that don't usually come up in such stories, like the adjustments and counselors for those who have gone through with such a transplant. Good job.
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