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Review of Come  
Review by Detective
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed your poem very much. The rhyme scheme was consistent and thought-out. The rhythm was also well-done and consistent as well. The rhyme and rhythm work well together to create a poem that flows smoothly from stanza to stanza. Well done and good job.
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Review of CORONAVIRUS  
Review by Detective
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is well-written and very informative. This article is clear and easy to understand. I learned some new things about this current virus outbreak and some older outbreaks as well. I did notice one spelling error. When you first mention the CDC under causes, you wrote "Canters" instead of "Centers". That was the only thing I noticed. This was very well-done.
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Review by Detective
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed your poem very much. Even though it's short, you express a lot in only few lines and you express it well. The joy and love you felt meeting your soulmate for the first time is made clear. The poem is well-written and the descriptions were utilized well. Good job.
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Review by Detective
Rated: E | (4.5)
I enjoyed your short story. It works well as a good introduction to you and to your Writing.com path. This was an interesting take on a short story. I've haven't read a short story in the form of a blog. I look forward to reading more of your work. Good job.
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Review by Detective
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I enjoyed your short limerick very much. It utilizes both the poem form and the prompt well. The rhyme scheme is consistent and well-thought out. Even though the limerick is short, the length works well and it does a lot with a little. Very good job.
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Review of 3 Micro Poems  
Review by Detective
Rated: E | (4.5)
I enjoyed your three micro poems. Though the title implies that they are three separate poems, together they read like one poem. There is a theme of seeking peace that flows through each one and ties them together well. They are very well written and calming. Well done.
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Review by Detective
Rated: E | (4.0)
I enjoyed your story very much. It demonstrates growing up learning multiple languages well. It also displays the connection that one has with family members who speak different languages. There is also the connection between three generations of this family which was well done. Good job.
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Review by Detective
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed your story very much. It's very well written and engaging. The characters are distinct and unique. The mystery is well set up and wasn't bogged down. The twists in the story were well done and made sense. The story was all tied up in the end as well. Good job.
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for entry "Fur Play
Review by Detective
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really enjoyed your short poem. It utilizes the prompt very well. It also showcases the relationship between owner and cat well. Writing a poem, even a short one, where it requires a specific rhyme scheme and with only a certain number of syllables can be difficult but this is well done. Good job.
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Review of A Beautiful Woman  
Review by Detective
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed your poem. The rhyme scheme works well for the poem's theme and remains consistent. I like that each stanza has a separate rhyme at the end. It doesn't hinder the poem's flow at all. The poem portrays the love between the speaker and their significant other clearly. Good job.
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Review of Balance  
Review by Detective
Rated: E | (4.5)
I enjoyed your poem. There is a good flow between the stanzas from beginning to end. The need for balance and the struggle it often takes to find it. The poem is well-structured and thought out. The way you view a balanced life is clear and concise.
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Review by Detective
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed your poem very much. The rhyme scheme works well and is consistent throughout. It's a fun poem about diner where all the cool dinosaurs go to eat. I did notice that you capitalized the word 'then' in the fourth line. That's the only thing I noticed that may be a typo. Overall, a good job.
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Review by Detective
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed your poem very much. The poem is very well-written. It's descriptive and creates a clear picture. The description draws the reader in from the start. The poem remains consistent throughout so it flows well. The way the final stanza is written adds to the overall theme of the poem. Good Job.
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Review of Residual Effect  
Review by Detective
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed your story very much. It didn't go the way I was expecting it to go when I read the first couple of lines. It's a different take on androids and placing human brains in android that I really liked. The story deals well with things that don't usually come up in such stories, like the adjustments and counselors for those who have gone through with such a transplant. Good job.
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Review of Grandma's Curtain  
Review by Detective
In affiliation with I Write  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I enjoyed this poem. Even though it's short, it still invokes warm images of a visit to Grandma's house where the memory of a curtain ties it together. The words "Gradma's curtain" are repeated through out and tie all of the verses together well. It helps keep consistency in the poem.
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Review by Detective
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is a well-written story with an unexpected twist. I enjoyed it very much. The characters are distinct and consistent throughout. The twist was well-done surprise and it added to the story. The story also demonstrates the relationship between siblings well.
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Review by Detective
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed your poem about roses very much. It conveys the different meanings behind various colored roses well. The rhyme scheme was well-done and remained consistent throughout. While I knew some of the meanings, I didn't know all of them. Very well done.
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Review by Detective
Rated: E | (4.0)
I enjoyed your short poem very much. The rhyme scheme was worked well and was consistent. The form also remains consistent. It shows the thought that goes into poems where there are certain parameters. It conveys the image of the rainbow well. It also introduced me to a poetry form I hadn't heard of before.
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Review of Shimmering Stars  
Review by Detective
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed this poem very much. The several phrases that are repeated through the poem are utilized well and don't detract from the poem. It keeps the tone consistent and helps the poem flow. They express the desire for guidance and turning to the stars for it. Good job.
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Review of The decision  
Review by Detective
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed your poem very much. It talks about the way political talk moves in circles and goes nowhere. It accomplishes this without going in circles. This poem is a good example of a poem not needing to be long to make its' point. This is a well-written concise poem.
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Review of City of Dreams  
Review by Detective
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed this story very much. The characters are interesting and distinct. Each one has a unique voice and it was always clear who was speaking. I could picture the characters clearly in my head. The world building was very well done, being descriptive enough to paint a picture of the city without the story getting bogged in too much description. I was rooting for Jax through the whole story. I look forward to reading more about these characters.
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Review by Detective
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I enjoyed this piece very much. Your characters are distinct and each has a unique voice. I can see Emily's concern and worry for Arlynn and her dislike of Lance clearly. Though Lance doesn't actually appear, his presence is clearly felt with in the context of the story, based on the reactions of the two characters who appears. I'm curious to see where the story will go from here.
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Review of Game Models  
Review by Detective
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed your story very much. The concept is both intriguing and well explained. With so many apps and games being utilized for a variety of things, having a single app that contains a number of those that are most commonly used to keep one's life organized would be very useful. It would make things less confusing because instead of 10+ apps to keep track of , it would only be one. And to have it reward you for meeting goals would keep people motivated. Good job.
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Review by Detective
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed this story very much. It was easy to follow from start to finish. The point of view is consistent and works well for the story. The characters were distinctive and unique. They all sound like they belong both to the city and the period. Lou is a well-written lead character. Overall, very well done. I look forward to reading the other stories in the series.
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Review by Detective
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I enjoyed this little story. Your short fiction story was well-written and clear. The characters were clear and the narrator had a distinct voice. The words were clearly marked and well-used. You did a very good job telling a story in under three hundred words.
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