I enjoyed your story very much. It didn't go the way I was expecting it to go when I read the first couple of lines. It's a different take on androids and placing human brains in android that I really liked. The story deals well with things that don't usually come up in such stories, like the adjustments and counselors for those who have gone through with such a transplant. Good job.
I enjoyed this poem. Even though it's short, it still invokes warm images of a visit to Grandma's house where the memory of a curtain ties it together. The words "Gradma's curtain" are repeated through out and tie all of the verses together well. It helps keep consistency in the poem.
This is a well-written story with an unexpected twist. I enjoyed it very much. The characters are distinct and consistent throughout. The twist was well-done surprise and it added to the story. The story also demonstrates the relationship between siblings well.
I enjoyed your poem about roses very much. It conveys the different meanings behind various colored roses well. The rhyme scheme was well-done and remained consistent throughout. While I knew some of the meanings, I didn't know all of them. Very well done.
I enjoyed your short poem very much. The rhyme scheme was worked well and was consistent. The form also remains consistent. It shows the thought that goes into poems where there are certain parameters. It conveys the image of the rainbow well. It also introduced me to a poetry form I hadn't heard of before.
I enjoyed this piece very much. Your characters are distinct and each has a unique voice. I can see Emily's concern and worry for Arlynn and her dislike of Lance clearly. Though Lance doesn't actually appear, his presence is clearly felt with in the context of the story, based on the reactions of the two characters who appears. I'm curious to see where the story will go from here.
I enjoyed your story very much. The concept is both intriguing and well explained. With so many apps and games being utilized for a variety of things, having a single app that contains a number of those that are most commonly used to keep one's life organized would be very useful. It would make things less confusing because instead of 10+ apps to keep track of , it would only be one. And to have it reward you for meeting goals would keep people motivated. Good job.
I enjoyed this story very much. It was easy to follow from start to finish. The point of view is consistent and works well for the story. The characters were distinctive and unique. They all sound like they belong both to the city and the period. Lou is a well-written lead character. Overall, very well done. I look forward to reading the other stories in the series.
I enjoyed this little story. Your short fiction story was well-written and clear. The characters were clear and the narrator had a distinct voice. The words were clearly marked and well-used. You did a very good job telling a story in under three hundred words.
I enjoyed this very much. The story is very engaging and the characters are believable. Duncan is a good example of how people don't always react to things the same way. There were no errors that I noticed. I also enjoyed the twists at the end a lot. Both twists were really well done and thought out. Good job!.
I enjoyed your poem. It's a very well-written poem. The short length of the poem doesn't detract from what's being expressed in it. The poem works well with the prompt given and with the poetry form used. Overall, it's a well-written poem. Well done.
I enjoyed this very much. The main character is distinctive and has a clear voice. The world building is well-done and gives a clear picture of the world. I only noticed one spelling error. In the second to last paragraph is the word "turing" which I believe is meant to be the word "turning". Also, some of the paragraphs could be broken up a bit better. For example, the first time your main character speaks should be a separate paragraph. This also applies to the short section between the first two times he speaks. Feel free to disregard anything about my review that you don't find helpful. I still enjoyed this. I look forward to reading more.
I really enjoyed these poems. They complement each other very well. The first poem express the joy of being in love along with the fear and uncertainty that comes with being unsure of reciprocation. The second poem expresses the need to take a chance. It's a well-written response to the questions and worries expressed in the first poem.
I enjoyed your poem very much. Teaching the children of the world is a job that doesn't get nearly enough credit. This poem demonstrates the influence a good teacher can have on their students. It reminds me of many of the teachers I know who have influenced me. Well done.
I enjoyed your poem very much. Despite being short, your poem was vivid and descriptive. It shows how much can be done with a few words and in only a few lines. It also gave me a new poetry form to look up and try out for myself. This is very well done.
I enjoyed this poem very much. The poem was well-written and enjoyable. The rhyme scheme was well-done and consistent. Keeping your feet one the ground is both a good philosophy and good advice. Giving people the benefit of the doubt is also good advice.
A poem about poetry is an interesting take. Though this poem is short, it does express that are many forms of poetry, each with their own distinct line counts, rhyme schemes and beats. Personally, I've never heard of two of the forms you mentioned. I'll have to check them out.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It captures the stress and worry that comes with facing a court decision, especially when the decision can change one's life drastically, particularly for the worse. Your poem does well in creating tension for the readers, especially for anyone who remembers this scene from Harry Potter.
I enjoyed this little story very much. I particularly enjoyed the twist at the end of the story. It wasn't the ending I was expecting when I started reading the story. Though it's not a particularly long story, it was still an interesting read. It could be a little longer. I'd like to know more details about the characters, both the main character and the two others mention. It's still a very good story.
I enjoyed this poem. There is a distinct difference between being alone and being lonely. Your poem express that distinction well, in addition to expressing the enjoyment that comes with being by oneself. I also enjoyed the use of different length stanzas. It helped to express the emotions used in the poem well.
I enjoyed this short story very much. It was well written and engaging. I liked General Havoc very much. I would enjoy seeing more of him and seeing what he does next.Even though this was written for a contest, I'd enjoy reading a longer version of this story with added details and expanded world building.
I enjoyed this poem very much. It's certainly a different perspective on Alice and Wonderland. I like that you drew inspiration from the books themselves.
I enjoyed this poem very much. I like the descriptions you used. It certainly painted a picture in my head of what the poem's talking about. The rhyming was well done and thought out. I also got a sense of how much you'd like to visit Colorado Springs.
I enjoyed this poem very much. It's well written and descriptive. The rhyme scheme is well done. I like how in the first stanza you rhymed dune and moon. They're words that rhyme without being spelled similarly. People often don't think of those particular words when they're trying to rhyme. Good job.
I enjoyed this poem very much. It's thought-provoking to try and figure out what's being described in the poem. My guess is that the poem is describing the ocean as it breaks upon either a beach or below a cliff.
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