I enjoyed your poem very much. It's a beautiful, well-written piece and it flows well without any snags. The descriptions paint a vivid picture of the trees as they grow and reach for the sky. The poem's length was well-utilized without being too short or too long. Overall, very well done.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's very well-written and the tone is consistent. I particularly enjoyed how most of the work was written in couplets. Cobine with the free verse style, this helped the poem's flow while also punctuating the poem's message. I also enjoyed the repetition of the line "son of the soil". This also aided in the poem's flow and consistency. Overall, very well-done.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's very descriptive and maintains its' flow throughout each stanza. I particularly enjoyed how you used several words beginning with the same letter in succession within some of the lines. This added to both the flow of the piece and its' descriptiveness. While there was some rhyming, there was no set rhyme scheme, but that didn't detract from the poem. Very well done.
I enjoyed your story very much. The two main characters were both clear and distinct. You utilized the prompt well, both with the title and within the story itself in a way that the title made sense. Overall, this is a fun, well-written story. Very well done.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and descriptive. The rhyme scheme was consistent throughout. You did well expressing both the joys of the past and the melancholy that comes with nostalgia when the places the memories were made aren't how you remember. Overall, this was an enjoyable read.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well written and consistent, maintaining the theme throughout. Free verse was a good choice for this poem and even though there's no rhyme scheme, it doesn't take away from the poem. The poem is descriptive, and the descriptiveness is well used. Overall, a very well written poem.
I enjoyed your story very much. It's an interesting concept that was very well executed. The characters were interesting and distinct. The story does well expressing the regrets the narrator has about how certain things turned out. The lack of quotation marks took me out of the story a little, but overall, didn't have an effect on the story.
I enjoyed your short story very much. It's very short, but it still has a fair amount of detail. I would suggest making the paragraphs clearer, either by indenting, putting a space between each paragraph or both. It would make the story a bit easier to read. Overall, a good story with a lot of potential. Keep up the good work.
I enjoyed your how-to piece. It's well-written and informative. It explains the game and how to play very well. It also does well explaining the game without being overly complicated. The game itself is interesting and creative. Overall, very well done.
I enjoyed your poem very much. The poem is well-written and descriptive. The rhyme scheme is consistent throughout the poem. The poem does well expressing both the feeling of having been left behind and possibility finding new happiness. Overall, very well done.
I enjoyed your poem very much. I particularly enjoyed the reptation of the line "I will remain ostensibly audacious". It ties the poem together and re-enforces the poem's topic. Though there's no rhyme scheme, it doesn't take away from the poem. Overall, very well-done.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's short, yet expressive. Though there's no rhyme scheme, that doesn't take away from the expressiveness of the poem. The use of free verse works well with the style the poem was written in. Overall, a well-written enjoyable poem.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and cohesive. The rhyme scheme was consistent throughout the poem. Even though the poem is short, you managed to express the courage of taking up a challenge very well in just two stanzas. I also enjoyed being introduced to a new poem form. Very well-done.
I enjoyed your prologue very much. It's well-written and descriptive. The descriptions paint a clear picture of what's going on. The main character is distinctive and well-written. You did a good job setting up the events that occur. Very well done. I look forward to reading more.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and descriptive. The poem flows well and even though there isn't a rhyme scheme, that doesn't take anything away from the poem. The descriptions create a clear picture in the minds of readers. Each bird is a unique and distinct character. Overall, a well-written and enjoyable poem.
I enjoyed your poem very much. The poem is descriptive, and the rhyme scheme is consistent between the stanzas. Even though the poem is short, the length doesn't detract from it and it does a lot with a little. Overall, a very well-written poem. Good job.
I enjoyed your short poem very much. It's well-written and concise. The poem is short, but the length doesn't take away from the poem. The use of free verse works well for the subject. Overall, a very well written and enjoyable poem. Good luck working on your masters.
I enjoyed your poem very much. I particularly enjoyed the use of rhyming couplets, which worked well in mataining the flow of the poem. I did notice a potential spelling error. In the second line of the fourth couplet, the "other" isn't pluralized making the line sound slightly awkward. Overall, good work.
I enjoyed this introduction very much. It's very well written and the descriptive details paint a strong picture of what's going on. Though it's short, it uses the length wisely, doing a lot with a little. The small taste of world building adds to the piece. I look forward to reading more of this story.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well-written and descriptive. The descriptions paint a vivid picture of those early days on the island. The varying lengths of the stanzas worked well and helped to emphasis the descriptions and emotions of the poem. I enjoyed the reptation of the line "One often wondered was Dad safe to battle the treacherous waters
So many oceans and dangerous obstacles between us.". Very well-done.
I enjoyed your poem very much. The description is simple yet effective and doing a lot with a little, without going overboard. I also enjoyed the reptation of the phrase "as the wind blows", which really ties the stanzas together. Overall, a very well written poem.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's well written and consistent. The rhyme scheme is consistent throughout the poem and helps express the thoughts and emotions of the writer. The use of couplets was also consistent and used to great effect to express the writer's experiences. Overall, very well done.
I enjoyed your poem very much. The form and rhyme are consistent throughout. This is a fun and silly about one of the hazards of golf. The poem's length works well, with it not being too long or too short. It definitely made me smile after reading it. Overall, a very well written poem.
I enjoyed your poem very much. The poem is very well-written and expressive. It conveys a number of emotions throughout without any of those emotions lessening any of the others. The poem is also precise and to the point without drawing to much out. Very well done.
I enjoyed your poem very much. It's short and sweet, but the length doesn't detract from the poem at all. The poem is a well-written piece of free verse. The poem does well conveying the inspiration taken from one of the most famous bands ever. It uses that inspiration to great effect. Very well done.
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