Why I chose this piece I found this in philosophy and found it interesting. I am a Christian, but I like to encounter everyone here where they are.
Overall impression of piece. I had time as a Navy medic. I had 40 years doing Pathology which means, alot of autopsies
Grammatical and spelling errors Reads well. No errors
What I liked?. You do have this right. Seeing death as much as I have, there are no emanations from another world. I do believe that the other worlds exist, but I am not sure how to deal with them. Death might not be the place.
Points to Ponder: The author of Dr Zivalgo had the opinion that no one ever dies. We live on in the hearts of those that loved us. I go along with that. This might be the last moment to remember the loved one. You are right--it has no purpose for them. Life is always for the living
How the piece made me feel This kind of comes acrossed judgmental. I am not sure if that's what you are looking for. I don't understand all of life well. There is room for some question
Hope this helps. Use my ideas as your creativity alchemy deems fitting.
Peace and beauty in freefall