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Review by sup
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This was very funny from beginning to end. To be honest, there were some parts I didn't fully understand like the naming bit, but the part at the end with the kiss and him stating that it was the worst one it ever was, Ha. It was the icing on this cake. I loved this a lot.
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Review by sup
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow...I really enjoyed this. A sort of blossoming into adulthood by sharing ones first kiss with the one they love. And the ending, watching the fireflies dance as the protagonist returns to normal...it was breathtaking. I hope to see more works like this.
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Review by sup
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I gotta this, this is some pretty interesting info on horror film genre's. At first, I thought it was just some made up story about saving a few cats from actual monsters. But this is just as good as it lets the readers gain an understanding on horror.
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Review by sup
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow...this hits me on so many different emotional levels. I know how it feels when a family member leaves and how it feels that you may end up being a burden on your family. This is a real work of drama. I enjoyed reading all of these heartfelt paragraphs.
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Review by sup
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a unique approach to good and true sci fi classic. Making it more of an office workplace comedy than some sort of science fiction story given how the main character behaves. I do enjoy this and perhaps I will consider looking into more of your work.
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Review of The Creators  
Review by sup
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I like the realistic approach as to how our planet would react if they were to meet with life beyond our planet as well as our supposed creators. As hard as it is to admit, if we were to have this scenario in real life, it would definitely be shoot first, ask questions later. Not bad.
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Review of Accept  
Review by sup
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow...this poem really says something about society as a whole when you are growing up. How all are just made to obey the system and never go against it like some emotionless machine. It even covers the points when a person breaks down. Some very emotional stuff here.
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Review by sup
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I have to say, this is some piece of work you have here. A sort of screenplay type format with hopes that this work will become a feature film or play...it would be amazing if something from this site ever got adapted. I enjoyed all of the drama and comedy from this.
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Review of River of Death  
Review by sup
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
At first, when I looked at the description for this story, I was for sure thinking it was going to be about hunting for a shark like in jaws. But I was surprised. The alligator twist just came outta nowhere. And the cliffhanger at the end. Wow...just...wow. Nicely done.
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Review of The Micro Spies  
Review by sup
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a pretty fun little interactive you have. I like the idea of tiny little spies getting into all of those places a normal sized person could never infiltrate and take back all of those secrets back to their base. Hope to see it grow more and more.
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Review by sup
Rated: XGC | (3.0)
I've looked over the previous additions you have made to this piece of work you are currently working on. The premise seems to be good in a way but I feel as though that there could be more to these powers. I notice a common theme you have is possession and souls but the best way to get people to add more is to include more variety like ice manipulation or flight or something along those lines. Also, starting one of the storylines doesn't hurt either. Helps get the blood pumping.
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Review by sup
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow. This is some pretty deep stuff here. It really goes into the darkness one feels when they are trying to get to sleep but cannot because of the fears we all have inside of each of us. I know this feeling personally as I often lay awake fearing the future.
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Review of Oneka: Chapter 1  
Review by sup
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really like this approach you've taken here. I do enjoy anything from the Sengoku period so I could really enjoy reading this. I also like the approach you did with going with a female lead since most samurai during that era normally picked male heirs. I will enjoy reading the other chapters.
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Review by sup
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really did enjoy this one, only cause I really like groundhogs and groundhogs day is one of my most favorite of holidays. Plus I always wondered how he would feel every groundhog day where he's forcibly dragged out of his hole just to be displayed to the masses.
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Review of Heart Heavy  
Review by sup
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This was a very tragic story written here as one could feel the emotion between the two are and how things soon soured as they lived their lives together only for one of them to end up losing their lives to the senselessness that seems to surround the world.


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Review by sup
Rated: E | (5.0)
The struggles of how one with beauty and one with a handsome physique must struggle against this large and vast world in order for them to try and achieve their dreams of living a very comfortable life. But as long as they have one another, things will always work out.


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Review by sup
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a very emotional piece of work here as it laments to those who have lost their lives to foolish battles and wars as well as those who were lost to accidents that may not have been intentionally caused by others or by the forces of nature itself.


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Review by sup
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is from reading this short little poem that one can really understand the calamity that comes about within and outside of the mind that causes a number of problems for people. Especially when the problems tend to cause more harm than good for others.


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Review by sup
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem really seems to speak out to me as someone who has repeatedly failed at most things time and time again, but it is with the power to continue even after falling time and time again. Because it is with the power of continuous tries that one can achieve their goals.


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Review by sup
Rated: E | (5.0)
Its amazing how nature can be a connecting factor between a couple who likes to take their love of the environment to a whole nother level. Always risking their lives in order to make others listen to how the world can be improved as well as saved from man.


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Review by sup
Rated: E | (5.0)
When I read this poem, I can tell how much athletes can risk their own bodies and spend all of their free time in order to make sure others can enjoy seeing them perform at their peak in order to enjoy seeing their respective teams reach their topmost points.


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Review of Ella  
Review by sup
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This a very chilling story that just gave me goosebumps with every word of it I read. I can also see how a mother can summon up incredible strength in order to help others in a dangerous situation, especially if the other happens to be the child of said mother.


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Review by sup
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Another powerful continuation into the series that is the fingers of betrayal. But now things are getting much more darker it seems as it has not lead to murder as well as hiding the body to avoid anyone discovering it. All in order to keep some huge secret.


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Review by sup
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow...this chapter seems to be of very powerful importance of loyalty and how to keep your own priorities straight, especially at the end when Liam left Ron to his own devices when he decided enough was enough and needed to get out as fast as he could.


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Review by sup
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wow...it really puts in prespective as to how ones lust for power can end up costing them so much importance in their lives. There are never any actions that can go consequence free. As there will always be an important price to pay in order to gain something great.


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