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Review of Heart Heavy  
Review by sup
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This was a very tragic story written here as one could feel the emotion between the two are and how things soon soured as they lived their lives together only for one of them to end up losing their lives to the senselessness that seems to surround the world.


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Review by sup
Rated: E | (5.0)
The struggles of how one with beauty and one with a handsome physique must struggle against this large and vast world in order for them to try and achieve their dreams of living a very comfortable life. But as long as they have one another, things will always work out.


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Review by sup
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a very emotional piece of work here as it laments to those who have lost their lives to foolish battles and wars as well as those who were lost to accidents that may not have been intentionally caused by others or by the forces of nature itself.


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Review by sup
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is from reading this short little poem that one can really understand the calamity that comes about within and outside of the mind that causes a number of problems for people. Especially when the problems tend to cause more harm than good for others.


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Review by sup
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem really seems to speak out to me as someone who has repeatedly failed at most things time and time again, but it is with the power to continue even after falling time and time again. Because it is with the power of continuous tries that one can achieve their goals.


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Review by sup
Rated: E | (5.0)
Its amazing how nature can be a connecting factor between a couple who likes to take their love of the environment to a whole nother level. Always risking their lives in order to make others listen to how the world can be improved as well as saved from man.


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Review by sup
Rated: E | (5.0)
When I read this poem, I can tell how much athletes can risk their own bodies and spend all of their free time in order to make sure others can enjoy seeing them perform at their peak in order to enjoy seeing their respective teams reach their topmost points.


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Review of Ella  
Review by sup
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This a very chilling story that just gave me goosebumps with every word of it I read. I can also see how a mother can summon up incredible strength in order to help others in a dangerous situation, especially if the other happens to be the child of said mother.


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Review by sup
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Another powerful continuation into the series that is the fingers of betrayal. But now things are getting much more darker it seems as it has not lead to murder as well as hiding the body to avoid anyone discovering it. All in order to keep some huge secret.


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Review by sup
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow...this chapter seems to be of very powerful importance of loyalty and how to keep your own priorities straight, especially at the end when Liam left Ron to his own devices when he decided enough was enough and needed to get out as fast as he could.


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Review by sup
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wow...it really puts in prespective as to how ones lust for power can end up costing them so much importance in their lives. There are never any actions that can go consequence free. As there will always be an important price to pay in order to gain something great.


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Review by sup
Rated: E | (5.0)
I never would have imagined that this is how lighthouses were to be founded all across the world on every shore, allowing sailors to find their way to shore nice and safe. They have existed all around the world in order to make the sea a little less dangerous at night.


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Review by sup
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I found this story of yours to be very heartwarming and displays the importance of having family to watch your back. The sisters struggles to keep themselves from falling into this hunters grasp with one of them considered evil, it is more important to defend each other against the world.


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Review of Smith  
Review by sup
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I can truly relate to this story as a man who has love for his mother and tries to keep me from feeling depressed as well. It is with the help of a mother that many people can keep from falling into a spiraling state of depression that we always find ourselves in.


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Review by sup
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I found this short story of yours to be very chilling right down to the bone, leaving me on the edge of my seat with every word that I read. Betrayal, heartache, pain, this story had all of these things and more. All I can say is wow, just...just wow.


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Review by sup
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I think of this as a wonderful little science fiction story with a small amount of mystery thrown in to make it seem all the more enjoyable to ready. And the end part of the story, it leaves you with a sense of wondering if the two were really true partners or not.


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Review by sup
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I found this story to be incredibly funny after reading it all the way through. Going from chasing after a pet dog to end up getting stuck inside of a tree trunk in such an embarrassing position, its something that rarely ever happens, but when it does, oh boy. Hahahaha!


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Review by sup
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a very nice first chapter for a book I assume. This story has the right mix of action and adventure with an incredible sense of action to go along with it. I also liked that there was a sense of friendship and comradery that seemed to go with it.


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Review by sup
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is a heartwarming Christmas tale that gives one a sense of love and a passion for the holidays. And with how commercialized the holidays have become in the most recent of years, its nice to find a story that reaches to a happy conclusion such as this.


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Review by sup
Rated: E | (5.0)
I found this to be a very enlightening story and probably one of the only one I've ever read that involves a moose that is always on the lookout. I especially liked the part where his skills as a lookout ended up saving the live of a small little girl.


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Review by sup
Rated: E | (5.0)
The sea is always such a wonderful place, a vast collection of hidden mysteries and a serene beauty. From the coral reefs hidden within the oceans waves to the dark deep crevices that houses a number of mysterious fish and other creatures one must ponder about.


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Review by sup
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is my first time analyzing a Tanka poem but I will give the best feedback I can. From what I can understand, this poem discusses how one spends their days pining for their lost love and stuck between love and lost while hoping for the chance of getting new love.


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Review by sup
Rated: E | (5.0)
While it is nice to see a man to display some love for a woman, sometimes it would be more than helpful to know what your love would look like before professing your love. Not a matter of looks or anything of the such but it is a matter of making sure such love actually exists.


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Review by sup
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is truly wonderful to create a poem to help encourage your friend in order to push her to succeed with her desired career path in life. Encouraging a friend to get all of the best options in life is always something that other should try and accomplish.


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Review by sup
Rated: E | (5.0)
From this poem, I can tell how a person's beliefs can be tested whenever they meet an attractive idol such as a lovely girl or a number of treasures stand before them. Yet when they are so rare and you feel like you will never have another chance, you gotta take it.


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