This poem, I can tell it means to convey the beauty's feelings of being alone in this world and wanting to do what she felt was best in order to express what little free will she had left in her body as she always saw herself as just another pretty face that would never know how to truly decide for herself.
After reading over this neat little love song you have going on here, I can tell there a lot of feeling behind each word here like how the touch of the one you love seems to just knock you right into the breeze and how their image cannot seem to escape your very thoughts. But feels like there could be a lot more lyrics included, like a part that describes what she does with her time.
After reading this through all the way, all I can really say is just...wow. I mean, when you think about a story about some cancer patient with only so much time left, you would think just spending it with family would be enough, but he took it to a whole nother level by having someone kill him and his loved one. And the end bit where it talks about another way to cure him is really the icing on the cake. This truly is a twisted tale.
As a fan of video games myself, I think this story really speaks out on its own about the characters personal life being just like a video game, more than likely a choose your own adventure RPG type of deal where you are free to pick your own path in life.
I am going to be completely honest here. I'm not sure I can really get into the idea of a coin that can cause change. I mean, does it change you when you flip it, if you put it in a fountain. But this is still a huge hit with others here so don't judge it on what I say.
After going through this interactive, I think of it as an entertaining little spinoff of the Buttercombe Academy and the Davenport series by featuring at least two of their best protagonists in a situation where the two share a room with one another. Expecting good things from this.
After viewing several of the storylines within this interactive of yours, I can say that this is probably one of the best weight gain interactives I have ever seen. And to go over 900 chapters is just something else. I hope you continue making ones just like this.
After reading through this interactive, I can say that is is excellent. You were able to combine inflation with fruits no one has even thought of using yet. I hope you can keep up the good work.
After reading this story, it made me feel so heavy with heart. Seeing how you were able to connect the sparks between two internet users who had not seen eachother in ten very, very long years, made me feel so blissed. I hope you are able to keep up the good work.
After adding and reading this interactive, I would have to say that this is the best thing I have reviewed so far. The creator of this interactive is a genius for coming up with it. Keep up the great work. Because wothout this, I wouldn't have anything to add to.
After reading and adding to this interactive, I can say that this one is probably one of your best ones, Well in my opinion anyway. The theme of aliens and fattening are a great mixture. Hope more people start adding to it. I know I will. Happy writing.
This interactive features excellent plots, good characters and nice weight gain. But I will have to take off points for male gain. Its not that I don't like it, I just don't care for it that much. But I think the female parts will be great for this interactive.
This Interactive is the second best thing that I have ever read. Even though the creator of this interactive keeps deleting all of the chapters that I work hard on, I will still keep adding until my interactive chapters stay on this story.
Signed
Frown
P.S. If you have time, I would appreciate it if you would add to one of mine
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