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Your poem is touching. I know so many people that go into love only to find out it is not what they expected. I am sorry that you had to learn about love this way. Love is so beautiful when it is treated with affection, and respect but so hurtful when it goes sour. A nice job in your writing, and I see no errors.
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I will start off by thanking you for this inspiring true story. It gives great hope to other parents that have children that suffer these disorders. I don't agree with foster homes for children that have loving caring parents. I was a foster child..I say no more. I know how very proud you are that Richey is doing so well at his job. A well written personal short story.I am pleased he got the medication that works for him.
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I was drawn to read this poem because I love the title. There are so many people that cry and for so many reasons. There is not much that can cause us to cry out more than emotional pain. I am sorry you are crying in the night, but your last two lines gives great hope as I am sure the healing will be granted. I am an e-mail away if I can help or even listen. I must say your poem is haunting and wonderfully written.
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You have done a nice job here writing about depression and how it effecting you. I am so sorry you are going through this struggle. There are so many reasons why we are plagued with bouts of this. Often it is caused by illness, loss of a love one, and even a sense of despair. If I can help or even listen I am a e-mail away. Thank you for writing this poem on this subject!
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Just three short lines but what a message it contains.I am so sorry that your world is being colored black. Depression is a very hard thing for people to cope with, and there are so many reasons one has it, illness, loss of a love one, and no way out of a situation. If you want to talk I have a good listening ear and am just an e-mail away. I am sure you will find many friends here on this site. Simply a powerful poem.
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What a way with words.This poem is beautiful and it touches my soul.. I was drawn to read it because of the brief description, and I am glad I did. My favorite is your last verse. Congratulation on the awardicon. This poem is deserves it.
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I really do like the poem you wrote here for the contest. I certainly would enter it and I wish you the best. Abuse is a subject that is touches me, as there are way to many innocent people that are scared for life from it. I hope you have never gone through this in your lifetime. I see no errors.
I am looking forward to reading more of your writings in the near future. I invite you to drop by my port anytime.
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A subject that is dear to my heart. There is nothing any worse than abuse, be it physical, emotional or carnal abuse.I can only guess what it would be like for this tot to be laying in bed knowing what was awaiting him. I know these terrible things happens but I can not understand why.A good job or a subject that needs writing about.
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Good morning T.L.Finch, this is Funnyface. I just read your tribute to Corporal Jason L Dunham. 3
God must give these men and ladies serving over seas special strength. What a courageous man Jason was. Your words are outstanding. Thank you for honoring this Corporal, they sure deserve the honor and more. Congratulations on the awardicon. A great write.
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A chilling poem here. Abuse is something no one should ever have to go through with. This tells a story of desperation for a situation to stop, and it did with the death of the young girl. I am sure if anything can change this man, it would have to be the death of the one he abused. I must admit I liked the way of your surprising closing.
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I can feel your hurt, and heartache wanting to be with the girl and her with another. There is a fine line between love and hate and I can understand how you seem to be criss crossing this line as your emotions keep plaguing you. A nice job expressing your feelings in the words of this poem. A spelling error in the last line of the third verse. Good luck!
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A nice preface. I will be interested to read the story as you have perked my appetite. Why are the girls going to the forest what are they hiding from.I wonder who was/is coming for the girls anyway. I can see this is going to be a good story! All the best in writing it.
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Simply a sweet poem. Dancing is a nice subject to write about. I like the opening, I can almost hear you singing these words out beckoning for the partner you want to come hither and dance. Your plot is developed and I really like the last two lines of your third verse. A fitting closing verse. I somehow sense loneliness here, or maybe a bit of wishing. I enjoyed!
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I sense loneliness in each verse of this poem..loneliness for the one that has captured your heart. It is hard to be separated from the person that means so much to you. I hope the time will be very near when the the two of you will be together. A poem written from your heart!
Hi Funnyface here again. I was drawn to read Potato Soup as when I was a child without parents , my siblings and I lived on potatoes, ..potato pie, potato hash and potato soup. It brought back warm but sad memories. It touches my heart to think this may be a true situation, little kids going hungry and dying on the streets of London. Your writing talent shines through here.
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I really felt sad that the puppet was alone and so lonely and only death set her free. I somehow wonder if this might not be an analogy. Your writing is very well done. You have given feeling in this poem. A nice job.
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Hi Funnyface here again.This poem here made me smile, yea this is certainly what a internet date could be about. I like the last line. Many people seem to use the internet to meet people and some have ended up married., but I bet there is more that ends up like the words here in this poem.
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I appreciate this poem, it reminds me of spring, of nature and of children. You started this poem off with great descriptive writing, the big white house, chain fence and lawns wider greener and etc. Vivid details as you tell us how she cared for these lawns. A lovely strong ending.
I am looking forward to reading more of your works.
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Hello Jeff, this is Funnyface. I just read this poem and I think it is great, I think it is the best I read today, Your poem has vivid imagery. I can picture you by the lake with the seagulls soothing your eyes and the ducks being sweet. Your closing verse is excellent.
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Snowflakes are falling outside, winds are blowing and I might loose my electrical. The lights went out for just a few minutes. I like this picture you painted on a writing scroll.I can picture your "tear of joy." Great job with descriptive writing. Vivid imagery.
A sincere love poem. I n each line I read I feel your love for this special girl. I especially smiled at the two last lines.They say love is patience, i guess you will need to have patience until she makes up her mind. I hope that things work out nicely for you. Good job rhyming here! I invite you to drop by my port anytime.
Wow, I must say I find the poem to be very inspiring. I especially love your first verse. I like how you said Cathedrals of oaks and the Pillars of pine, another favorite is" ..cacophony of chanting. You have presented nature at it's best in this delightful poem.
Good evening Dianne, I like the Journey 111. Evelyn is a true friend to you. The type of friends we know to be true friends even when we are not always chipper and happy around them. I understand how worried you were about having chemo. I like the concern Evelyn has for others maybe even strangers,that while waiting for you , she went and gave blood. Keep healthy.
Good morning Becky, the poem you wrote here about your father is heart touching. I have tears streaming down my cheeks. I lost two brother to cancer, so I know just a wee bit what your Dad went through. I am so pleased you told him you loved him He died happy for to hear his Daddy's little girl say I love you is so beautiful
Good Morning Caitlin this is Funnyface. I want to thank you for sharing the wonderful news of your Poppy surviving kidney cancer. It is so inspiring to read such stories of success and it offers a lot of hope for other patients. I would say your Poppy is not only a survivor but a fighter as well. May he have a lot of healthy times ahead of him
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