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I had to smile as I read the notes the two girls wrote in Math class. I can remember us writing a few when I was in school..I can only picture how embarrassed the two were when the teacher started to read it out loud, and the kids started to laugh.
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Hello lady_lily what a sad picture, sad but a true picture of war. I can only imagine what it must be for these soldiers who know they face death all the time both night and day. I can not imagine the fear their parents, mates, loves, or sibling is going through. Thank you for showing what it is like for the Fallen Soldier.
Hello Lorilady, what a delightful poem about your Maple tree. I have many trees on my acre lot but I do not have majestic ones such as the maple. How lovely a picture you paint of this lifelong friend the tree with all the squirrels and bird. I can see the colorful fall leaves on the ground. Wonderful scenes you have painted with your words.
Hello RainStar this is Funnyface. Falling is an emotional poem full of very descriptive writing and deep meanings. I wonder if you are in love with the one you were thinking of as you wrote this poem. I really like how you said that you had a pain in your head and a fire of sorrow in your heart. A nice job here in this poem.
Hello Suki, I found this poem cute in a sense. I can only imagine what must have been going through his mind when he realized he had came face to face with a she devil. I really like these lines "Her apple in the cart
Of personal traits
And she can't wait
To use that on you
An nice read.
c:plum}Good morning Bill, this is Funnyface. I am reviewing a few of your items because you are this months Mod on the I Remember When Group.
I guess I a little early or a little late reviewing this item, since Christmas is in December. I was drawn to read this poem because of all the various colors you used. I have tried this and it does take attention and time, but the end results are worth it. I had to smile at the gifts that your family gave to you. Simply a delight to read
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You have painted, with your words, a picture of a home all children should be raised in. I like the instructions you gave parents in the last verse. A nice job here.
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This poem is very nice. You have done a lovely job here telling whomever how you miss them and would love to be with him. I wish you could be together..maybe you will become his girl. A nice love poem. I see no errors.
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Thank you for signing my guest book. I must tell you I think this poem suits whoever you are writing it about. I don't know why some people think they have it all..but if they are not careful they will lose the ones they has. Your poem made me smile. If he is out kissing others he sure wouldn't be my man. Nice work here.
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What a beautiful thing to do writing this poem for your sister that wants to be falling in love. I hope Prince charming comes along and sweep her off her feet, treating her like a piece of fine china, loving and treasuring her. I really like your first two verse . Very nice.
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How very sad. I know how hard it is to be so close to someone you love and yet so far away. I remember what it is like wanting to knock, wanting to call and doubts wondering what you should do. I am so sorry you are feeling this pain. I know it is hurting. Hugs little one.
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Heart wrenching! I am so sorry this has happened to you.I know that even though he is not there you can still dream, a poor substitute for the real person. I hope he told you why he was leaving..maybe you will meet again. Once again I am sorry, I know how sad, how lonely, depressed and alone you must feel. Great emotions in this poem.
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Your words touches my heart. I feel such hurt and pain, and anyone that has had a lost love know exactly what you are going through. I am so sorry. Your words are so well written, with deep emotions. I hope it will work out for you. I can not say which verse, or sentence I like best, the whole poem is written so well. Akll the best!
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Your poem is touching. I know so many people that go into love only to find out it is not what they expected. I am sorry that you had to learn about love this way. Love is so beautiful when it is treated with affection, and respect but so hurtful when it goes sour. A nice job in your writing, and I see no errors.
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I will start off by thanking you for this inspiring true story. It gives great hope to other parents that have children that suffer these disorders. I don't agree with foster homes for children that have loving caring parents. I was a foster child..I say no more. I know how very proud you are that Richey is doing so well at his job. A well written personal short story.I am pleased he got the medication that works for him.
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I was drawn to read this poem because I love the title. There are so many people that cry and for so many reasons. There is not much that can cause us to cry out more than emotional pain. I am sorry you are crying in the night, but your last two lines gives great hope as I am sure the healing will be granted. I am an e-mail away if I can help or even listen. I must say your poem is haunting and wonderfully written.
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You have done a nice job here writing about depression and how it effecting you. I am so sorry you are going through this struggle. There are so many reasons why we are plagued with bouts of this. Often it is caused by illness, loss of a love one, and even a sense of despair. If I can help or even listen I am a e-mail away. Thank you for writing this poem on this subject!
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Just three short lines but what a message it contains.I am so sorry that your world is being colored black. Depression is a very hard thing for people to cope with, and there are so many reasons one has it, illness, loss of a love one, and no way out of a situation. If you want to talk I have a good listening ear and am just an e-mail away. I am sure you will find many friends here on this site. Simply a powerful poem.
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What a way with words.This poem is beautiful and it touches my soul.. I was drawn to read it because of the brief description, and I am glad I did. My favorite is your last verse. Congratulation on the awardicon. This poem is deserves it.
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I really do like the poem you wrote here for the contest. I certainly would enter it and I wish you the best. Abuse is a subject that is touches me, as there are way to many innocent people that are scared for life from it. I hope you have never gone through this in your lifetime. I see no errors.
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A subject that is dear to my heart. There is nothing any worse than abuse, be it physical, emotional or carnal abuse.I can only guess what it would be like for this tot to be laying in bed knowing what was awaiting him. I know these terrible things happens but I can not understand why.A good job or a subject that needs writing about.
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Good morning T.L.Finch, this is Funnyface. I just read your tribute to Corporal Jason L Dunham. 3
God must give these men and ladies serving over seas special strength. What a courageous man Jason was. Your words are outstanding. Thank you for honoring this Corporal, they sure deserve the honor and more. Congratulations on the awardicon. A great write.
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A chilling poem here. Abuse is something no one should ever have to go through with. This tells a story of desperation for a situation to stop, and it did with the death of the young girl. I am sure if anything can change this man, it would have to be the death of the one he abused. I must admit I liked the way of your surprising closing.
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I can feel your hurt, and heartache wanting to be with the girl and her with another. There is a fine line between love and hate and I can understand how you seem to be criss crossing this line as your emotions keep plaguing you. A nice job expressing your feelings in the words of this poem. A spelling error in the last line of the third verse. Good luck!
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A nice preface. I will be interested to read the story as you have perked my appetite. Why are the girls going to the forest what are they hiding from.I wonder who was/is coming for the girls anyway. I can see this is going to be a good story! All the best in writing it.
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