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Review of I Would Do  
Rated: E | (4.5)

Hello, this is Funnyface. Welcome to writing.com, If I can be of any help
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This poem is very nice. You have done a lovely job here telling whomever how you miss them and would love to be with him. I wish you could be together..maybe you will become his girl. A nice love poem. I see no errors.



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Review of Are You The Man?  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

Hello Nirmi, this is Funnyface. Welcome to writing.com, If I can be of any help please don't hesitate to ask. I'm just an e-mail away.


Thank you for signing my guest book. I must tell you I think this poem suits whoever you are writing it about. I don't know why some people think they have it all..but if they are not careful they will lose the ones they has. Your poem made me smile. If he is out kissing others he sure wouldn't be my man. Nice work here.



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Rated: E | (4.0)

Hello, this is Funnyface. Welcome to writing.com, If I can be of any help please don't hesitate to ask. I'm just an e-mail away.


What a beautiful thing to do writing this poem for your sister that wants to be falling in love. I hope Prince charming comes along and sweep her off her feet, treating her like a piece of fine china, loving and treasuring her. I really like your first two verse . Very nice.



I am looking forward to reading more of your writings in the near future.


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Review of Night After Night  
Rated: E | (4.5)

Hello Little Momma, this is Funnyface. Welcome to writing.com, If I can be of any help
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How very sad. I know how hard it is to be so close to someone you love and yet so far away. I remember what it is like wanting to knock, wanting to call and doubts wondering what you should do. I am so sorry you are feeling this pain. I know it is hurting. Hugs little one.



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Review of Dreamland Love  
Rated: E | (4.0)

Hello, this is Funnyface. Welcome to writing.com, If I can be of any help
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Heart wrenching! I am so sorry this has happened to you.I know that even though he is not there you can still dream, a poor substitute for the real person. I hope he told you why he was leaving..maybe you will meet again. Once again I am sorry, I know how sad, how lonely, depressed and alone you must feel. Great emotions in this poem.



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Review of Lovelorn  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

Hello, this is Funnyface. Welcome to writing.com, If I can be of any help
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Your words touches my heart. I feel such hurt and pain, and anyone that has had a lost love know exactly what you are going through. I am so sorry. Your words are so well written, with deep emotions. I hope it will work out for you. I can not say which verse, or sentence I like best, the whole poem is written so well. Akll the best!


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Review of the truth  
Rated: E | (4.5)

Hello Sydalicious, this is Funnyface. Welcome to writing.com, If I can be of any help please don't hesitate to ask. I'm just an e-mail away.


Your poem is touching. I know so many people that go into love only to find out it is not what they expected. I am sorry that you had to learn about love this way. Love is so beautiful when it is treated with affection, and respect but so hurtful when it goes sour. A nice job in your writing, and I see no errors.



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Review of Lonely Boy  
Rated: E | (4.5)

Hello Tori Chatfield, this is Funnyface. Welcome to writing.com, If I can be of any help
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I will start off by thanking you for this inspiring true story. It gives great hope to other parents that have children that suffer these disorders. I don't agree with foster homes for children that have loving caring parents. I was a foster child..I say no more. I know how very proud you are that Richey is doing so well at his job. A well written personal short story.I am pleased he got the medication that works for him.



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Review of Those Who Weep  
Rated: E | (5.0)

Hello Ellen Walker, this is Funnyface. Welcome to writing.com, If I can be of any help
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I was drawn to read this poem because I love the title. There are so many people that cry and for so many reasons. There is not much that can cause us to cry out more than emotional pain. I am sorry you are crying in the night, but your last two lines gives great hope as I am sure the healing will be granted. I am an e-mail away if I can help or even listen. I must say your poem is haunting and wonderfully written.



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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hello Esau Jacobs, this is Funnyface. Welcome to writing.com, If I can be of any help please don't hesitate to ask. I'm just an e-mail away.


You have done a nice job here writing about depression and how it effecting you. I am so sorry you are going through this struggle. There are so many reasons why we are plagued with bouts of this. Often it is caused by illness, loss of a love one, and even a sense of despair. If I can help or even listen I am a e-mail away. Thank you for writing this poem on this subject!


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Review of MOODY BLUE  
Rated: E | (5.0)

Hello Joliea, this is Funnyface. Welcome to writing.com, If I can be of any help
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Just three short lines but what a message it contains.I am so sorry that your world is being colored black. Depression is a very hard thing for people to cope with, and there are so many reasons one has it, illness, loss of a love one, and no way out of a situation. If you want to talk I have a good listening ear and am just an e-mail away. I am sure you will find many friends here on this site. Simply a powerful poem.



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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

Hello Jadestdevil, this is Funnyface. Welcome to writing.com, If I can be of any help please don't hesitate to ask. I'm just an e-mail away.


What a way with words.This poem is beautiful and it touches my soul.. I was drawn to read it because of the brief description, and I am glad I did. My favorite is your last verse. Congratulation on the awardicon. This poem is deserves it.



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Review of Abuse  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

Hello Wildfire, this is Funnyface. Welcome to writing.com, If I can be of any help
please don't hesitate to ask. I'm just an e-mail away.


I really do like the poem you wrote here for the contest. I certainly would enter it and I wish you the best. Abuse is a subject that is touches me, as there are way to many innocent people that are scared for life from it. I hope you have never gone through this in your lifetime. I see no errors.



I am looking forward to reading more of your writings in the near future. I invite you to drop by my port anytime.


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Review of This Boy.  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)

Hello insanelytangible, this is Funnyface. Welcome to writing.com, If I can be of any help
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A subject that is dear to my heart. There is nothing any worse than abuse, be it physical, emotional or carnal abuse.I can only guess what it would be like for this tot to be laying in bed knowing what was awaiting him. I know these terrible things happens but I can not understand why.A good job or a subject that needs writing about.



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Review of Deepest Blue  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good morning T.L.Finch, this is Funnyface. I just read your tribute to Corporal Jason L Dunham. 3

God must give these men and ladies serving over seas special strength. What a courageous man Jason was. Your words are outstanding. Thank you for honoring this Corporal, they sure deserve the honor and more. Congratulations on the awardicon. A great write.

I am looking forward to reading more of your work in the near future.
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Review of He didn't get me  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello, this is Funnyface. Welcome to writing.com, If I can be of any help please don't hesitate to ask. I'm just an e-mail away.

A chilling poem here. Abuse is something no one should ever have to go through with. This tells a story of desperation for a situation to stop, and it did with the death of the young girl. I am sure if anything can change this man, it would have to be the death of the one he abused. I must admit I liked the way of your surprising closing.

I am looking forward to reading more of your work in the near future.

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Review of Lady  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello Frozen Tears, this is Funnyface. Welcome to writing.com, If I can be of any help please don't hesitate to ask. I'm just an e-mail away.

I can feel your hurt, and heartache wanting to be with the girl and her with another. There is a fine line between love and hate and I can understand how you seem to be criss crossing this line as your emotions keep plaguing you. A nice job expressing your feelings in the words of this poem. A spelling error in the last line of the third verse. Good luck!

I am looking forward to reading more of your work in the near future.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello Juliet-Of R, this is Funnyface. Welcome to writing.com, If I can be of any help please don't hesitate to ask. I'm just an e-mail away.

A nice preface. I will be interested to read the story as you have perked my appetite. Why are the girls going to the forest what are they hiding from.I wonder who was/is coming for the girls anyway. I can see this is going to be a good story! All the best in writing it.

I am looking forward to reading more of your work in the near future.

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Review of One More Dance  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello une lune bleue, this is Funnyface. Welcome to writing.com, If I can be of any help please don't hesitate to ask. I'm just an e-mail away.

Simply a sweet poem. Dancing is a nice subject to write about. I like the opening, I can almost hear you singing these words out beckoning for the partner you want to come hither and dance. Your plot is developed and I really like the last two lines of your third verse. A fitting closing verse. I somehow sense loneliness here, or maybe a bit of wishing. I enjoyed!

I am looking forward to reading more of your work in the near future.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
I sense loneliness in each verse of this poem..loneliness for the one that has captured your heart. It is hard to be separated from the person that means so much to you. I hope the time will be very near when the the two of you will be together. A poem written from your heart!
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Review of Gone  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Disaster piece, this is Funnyface. Welcome to writing.com, If I can be of any help please don't hesitate to ask. I'm just an e-mail away.

I really felt sad that the puppet was alone and so lonely and only death set her free. I somehow wonder if this might not be an analogy. Your writing is very well done. You have given feeling in this poem. A nice job.

I am looking forward to reading more of your works.

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Review of Internet Date  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Funnyface here again.This poem here made me smile, yea this is certainly what a internet date could be about. I like the last line. Many people seem to use the internet to meet people and some have ended up married., but I bet there is more that ends up like the words here in this poem.
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Review of Eden  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello, this is Funnyface. Welcome to writing.com, If I can be of any help please don't hesitate to ask. I'm just an e-mail away.

I appreciate this poem, it reminds me of spring, of nature and of children. You started this poem off with great descriptive writing, the big white house, chain fence and lawns wider greener and etc. Vivid details as you tell us how she cared for these lawns. A lovely strong ending.

I am looking forward to reading more of your works.

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Review of haunted peace  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Jeff, this is Funnyface. I just read this poem and I think it is great, I think it is the best I read today, Your poem has vivid imagery. I can picture you by the lake with the seagulls soothing your eyes and the ducks being sweet. Your closing verse is excellent.

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Review of How a Tear Begins  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Snowflakes are falling outside, winds are blowing and I might loose my electrical. The lights went out for just a few minutes. I like this picture you painted on a writing scroll.I can picture your "tear of joy." Great job with descriptive writing. Vivid imagery.
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