The Acrostic poem "Character" is awesome. Your words paint a vivid picture. I have never heard of character explained like this. I love how you use it to describe what each one represent,Adversity are gaping, run deep..rage and depression comes rilling while I am asleep! Each line only gets better put them together and you have perfection. A great strong ending line.
Good morning Furaha, this is Funnyface. I read your poem "All's Fair In Love And War". I like how you took our two most fears, love and war and used both to create this lovely poem. Love is something that we fear, fear that we will not have it or we will lose it. It is so amazing how we all need to be loved and to give love. Fear of war, yeah we need to fear that, that's for sure. Your poem is very deep it touches on many aspects of love and war. Congratulations on this pretty awardicon.
Good Morning C. R. Leverette this is Funnyface. I haven't been to your port for ages and ages, and thought I'd pay you a visit this morning.
"Parousia" is a very inspiring poem. Your life of grace is beautifully described in your words. How pleased the Blessed one must be when He reads your last lines of each verse" Change me; Mold me; Search me; Save me! oh yes, "How sweet the sound"!
Good morning Ghostwriter, this is Funnyface. It has been a long time since I have been by. I read your story "Last Chance" and must say it held my attention through out. The beginning is strong, your plot is well developed and your complete story held me in suspense. Your closing is nice, yet sad for the one who had no longer dreams of her and her friends being together. I really like the fact that she put her hurt aside to help the bride.She is a true friend.
"Scatter My Ashes" made me think of where I would like to have mine scattered. Everyone knows that I want I do not want my ashes laying around my house. I like the way you explain where and why you would like you to go. I like how you have the letters you were to use in youer poem in bold. I like your writing. Thanks for sharing the story of your pen name.
Hello, this is Funnyface again, I finished reading your collection of poems for your upcoming book. "Rainforest Symphony" is well done. I like how you describes the different sounds that one could here. Pelican is one of my favorites, it is beautifully written. When Dinosaurs rip and roar will be a hit and i am sure it will be a nice one to illustrate. Manatee is lovely. I don't believe I have seen a Manatee. There is a big market for children's books, hust look what is out there selling.
Hello Nanapocket, this is Funnyface. I really like the idea of you writing a children's book and the subject will make it salable. Kids love animals, and more so these extinct ones. The Tiger is a powerful cat as you started your poem off with. You have described the Tiger cat beautifully.Best of luck with your book.
Hello Frog this is Funnyface and I just read your poem "All For Naught" I am so very proud of you, I know making a decision between parents wishes and those of your heart is terribly hard, but I can assure you things will work out for the best for you.It is so hard when you have to make a choice between people the you love. If he is the one for you it will work out. God has a way of doing what is best for us even when we cn't see how. Hugs and prayers.
Hello Zachkoch, this is Funnyface. I just read your poem "Sweetest Girl Ever" and have tears flowing down my face. The poor little darling, I am so sorry she had to endure such hurt, pain and sadness at the hands of her Dad. She had gone through enough by loosing her Mother. The next thing she will know she will be with her Mother in God's kingdom.
Hello crazylegs, this is Funnyface welcome to WDC. I am sure you will have fun here, as this place is addictive. Congratulations for your determination for writing the book you always wanted to do. it sounds like it will stir up readers, and you will get a good response.
I just read "Forever and a Day. I had tears in my eyes as I was reading. It must have been hard being a single Mom and running a business as well, I know how proud and yet how sad you are for your son to go off to university. I know he will be an excellent student and I am looking forward to your upcoming book. Best of luck.
Hello Princess Megan Rose, this is Funnyface thanking you for visiting my port. I want to congratulate you for winning this Author Of The Month plague. It is very distinguish looking. I like how your name is displayed and the month and year that you won this prestiges award. What a wonderful way to begin 2007.
Good morning Humming Bird this is Funnyface. I went to each item on your portfolio and this is the only one I had not reviewed.
I am so sorry you lost someone so special to you..your sibling, your bro.. Your poem written for his memory is beautiful. He will live forever in your heart. Prayers of comfort.
Such a heartbreaking short story here. My heart felt the hurt and pain this dear girl was going through.When one loves someone they don't want them to leave and go away. I understand the tears running down her mascara cheeks. I am glad he was kind to her when he noticed her pain. Yes he knew what cold was like when she walked away, but will he know what he throw away. She will slwsys remember him.
Good morning Latia-janel this is Funnyface. I just read this story "Empty Room" and it touched my heart. I know how you must have grieved. I am sorry. I know what you mean when you said you didn't need a material object to let you know what you felt for the person you loved. The ring is a sybol of that love. I like your opening, your plot is well developed, and a solid closing.. I hope that room will be filled again soon, but it will never take away her grief.
Hello myladylibra, this is Funnyface. I read your poem "Angel Tears" and must tell you it touches my heart. You have done a wonderful job here writing this. The one part that touched my heart is about the children, abused neglected, and unwanted. I am concerned what our young children has lying ahead in the future.
{hello sis this is Funnyface. simply a beautiful story. I love to read tributes to ones family especially parents/grandparents. I am so happy to read the love and respect you have for your Mother. I am so sorry that she had the terrible accident and is left with so much damage. I will pray for her. Treasure her and show her your love always
Good evening DntdKnight this is Funnyface. I am reviewing an item of your because you shared the story of your pen name.
This poem is well written, and the story you tell us is a heart touching one. Your strongest part is where the girl ran into the room to be near the phone, only to fall cutting her throat. I love the last three lines. A super job here.
"A Walk In The Woods" is a delightful poem. I use to love to walk in woods. When my children was young it was our favorite pastime. I have been lost in the woods as well and I admit I was frightened. I knew God walked by our sides. I love the third verse. I can picture the sunlight filtering through the roof of green. Simply a lovely poem.
Good morning {user:judity, this is Funnyface. I read your item "Why do I write? Who Am I?" I want to start off by congratulating you on your writing success. It is lovely to see someone that puts their dreams and talents into practice.Your auto biographically is information about your writing, your likes and dislikes and filled with your dreams. I like the way you made it personal as you speak of your family. I know you will succeed at what ever you put your hand to. I agree writing is something a true author does spend their nights dreaming about. Al the best
Good evening Gracie--Ready for NaNo09 this is Funnyface. I am reviewing this poem to thank you for reviewing one of mine. First I want to tell you this poem really appeals to me. I love how you used the various words to tell your story.I felt badly when you said that you sat in your cell of a room..and then again .. my prison of a room. I was feeling so badly for you, but you have used it nicely to write this poem about Somebody Nobody Anybody and etc. I really am happy to have read this write. Keep writing, and Thank you.
Hi this is me Funnyface again. I love to read all I can about grandparents so it was with interest I read "What She Wanted" Being a grand mother five times I know that each of my grand children loves me unconditionally. That is a wonderful thing to know. I found this lady had many hurts and heartaches as she watched her youngest daughter and her premature grandson and worried they'd be well, and two granddaughters how she must have cherished them. It can be very heartbreaking to watch one of your children getting in trouble. I am sorry she had these things in her life. Addictions can can take ones will power over. I am so sorry for your lost.
Good morning kaleigh this is Funnyface. I just read your comments about "Funerals" "A funeral is a saddening time because we know we will never see or share time with this person again. It is so final. I myself am not one for funerals. I like to remember them as I last seen them/heard their voice on the phone. A nice job here telling us your views of funerals. Welcome to WDC. If I can help you I am a e-mail away.
Wow! This is simply a lovely poem. I love to read Acostics, but I find them hard to write. This seems to come naturally. On your left side of the page is a site navigator. If you hit gift points it will bring up various places you can go and there is a place to thank anonymous. forum there click it and you will go directly to it. Nothing could be sweeter than writing them this poem.
Good morning Rusty , this is Funnyface and I want to congratulate you for writing this delightful children's poem. "Can We Play In The Rain" is wonderfully written. I understand how it won first place in the contest, and is highlighted in the Newbie newsapaper. Congratulations. I am sure you are going to do well here on this site. I wish it was raining out today so "the child within me" could go out and live the fun things you did, and shared with us in the poem.
Good morning samibin this is Funnyface. I want to congratulate you for having your poem for children "Are You Afraid Of The Night" highlighted in the newbie contest. This poem is a delight to read. I think at one time or another all children can relate to this subject. You have written a poem that reads smoothly and I love youe closing lines in each verse.
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