Good morning Sherri, this is Funnyface. You have accomplished much as an author, and I know it was not without hard work. I congratulate you for all your works you have published and your accomplishment here on Writing .com. You have a wonderful look on life as you shared here in "This Bit About Me" God be with you as you continue on the road of life.
Heart touching. I was a foster child, I relate to each and every word you write here. I wonder how many homes he had to live in. Being a foster child one seldom feels loved or wanted. I would like to know how a parent can reject their own flesh and blood. Thank you for caring about this lad.
Hello friendship this is Funnyface. First I would like to welcome you to Writing.com. If I can help you in any way I am just an e-mail away. I just read your poem about the sky giving silence and peace. The sky is very beautiful. I love looking at it when the sun is shinning and the sky is so peaceful. The sky becomes very dark at night time. It is usually a time of silence. Keep writing.
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Good morning Jeshu. Welcome to writing.com!It is a great site. How lovely to be able to start my morning off with reading this spiritual writing. Each verse you have written here are wonderful truths..ones we would be blessed and wise to heed to. I see no error in your work.
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Hello Shay, Love is so beautiful when things are going smoothly and it tears the heart nearly in two when it turns sour.There is nothing that can hurt more than a broken heart. If he is with another girl, I think he is being selfish. There will be someone that will come along and treat you as a fine piece of china..something to love and treasure. I hope you find that person soon.
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Hello God's Pen Pal this is Funnyface. I enjoyed reading this poem about love and romance. I really believe that God does have a special friend for people, if they only ask God for it and wait for Him to send him to them. I am so happy you relied on God and he answered you with someone that is EVERYTHING you wanted.
Simply beautiful. I hope whomever you wrote this for has been able to read it. Yes we have all dreamed of many things but we have not all have our dreams come true. I am happy you have met such a person. Poem well written and rhymes nicely. I hope all your dreams come true.
Hello Danielle, This is Funnyface. I just read this poem. It is very sad and heartfelt. I don't know a whole lot about drugs but I do know it is a powerful addiction. I hope you are beating it. I am sure your children understand and they will be waiting for you to be come well. The only suggestion I might offer is to change the fonts from capitals to lower case. My suggestion only
Good morning Latia-Janel,this is Funnyface. I don't know a whole lot about drugs, but I do know they are addictive. It must be hard to have to work with someone that is hooked on them. I didn't like what the police officer said about arresting her, and all of you guys. That seems unfair. You have done a nice job showing us how drugs were affecting Rachel and her life. I did see a couple typo errors If you proof read this it would be much stronger. Off now to next chapter.
Good morning God's Pen Pal, this is Funnyface. I want to tell you how much I admire your pen name.
I read chapter 1 of "The Dark"., and it was delightful. Your opening is nice, as you tell us about the upcoming move you and your family were about to make.
Your plot is well developed and you have used fine details. I sense sadness on your part as you left your old area, and excitement on your Dad's part. I enjoyed you arriving and settling in to your room. Your discovery of the chest and the clothing has added mystique to the story.
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Your closing had me longing to read more. Great job.
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I so enjoyed reading your Personal. You have had an interesting life for a thirty year old. I loved how you met your wife and how you got married in Italy. You have made great use of descriptive writing and filled our emotions. I felt sorry that you and your wife went through a hard time in your marriage. It must bee so hard to be away for so long. Love repaired it all for you even up to now 9 years later. Your closing paragraph is perfect.. You have a vase amount of knowledge about many things.
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Good morning Postal, This is Funnyface dropping in to say hello. It has been a while since I dropped by.
"Your short story "Life On The Sea's " let us view the morning task of your morning chores while out at sea. I realize how you guys must of felt as people keep walking through your dirt that you swept up in a pile. It made me recall the actions of my young kids. Thank Goodness for vacuums.Your events that occurred while cleaning the bath made me smile. You have a nice sense of humor.
I enjoyed reading this story, we seen a bit of what life at sea is like in the mornings, and enjoyed your humor. I se no errors. Nice job.
God morning Joy, what an inspiring personal experience you have shared. I am so pleased I read this as my first item for the day, as it has lifted my spirits. We all wonder about death, and I love how your Granduncle told you what it was like. He made it so exciting, I too will have no fears. Thanks for the wonderful inspiration.
Oh Princeday this little poem is simply adorable. I really like the words you use here. I also like how it was you first than he speaking in this poem. Isn't love so beautiful. I really like my cheer.. I have never thought of cheer when it comes to love. The last line is perfect as it fits the title nicely/ A nice job here.
Hello and congratulation for writing this first place winning poem. The pictures you have painted here in your words are filled with vivid imagery and beauty to behold. I also must tell that your image is precious. The colors in the sky and the lovely lady are beautiful. Simply a wonderful job!
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I am not very good at reviewing Science Fiction, it is not usually the genre that I read, but I think this one reads nicely. Keep up your writing, and all the best in the contest. I seen on grammar errors. You have fine details in the part where you told about the scaly creatures. A good job ending this story!
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"Ohio Night" is a nice title for your vactation to the Ohio River.Where I am from eastern Canada, I have never been to the state of Ohio. If I ever get to travel there I would love to see and hear the sounds of this site of beauty. I really like the personal name you have for the Fog.. Mother Fog. another essay with fine details.
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Hello Cherrish this is Funnyface. Thank you for letting me know you have added to your portfolio.
My First Game is wonderfully written. I can sense your excitement. I felt as if I was doing the running from base to base as the tension mounted. Congratulations. Baseball is a wonderful hobby to take part of. You have done some lovely descriptive writing.
A very inspiring poem and it is alway a great way to start a morning reading about how much our God cares for us. This summer we have been blessed with beautiful sunshine,last night we had the liquid kind, to day is the pale light grey look. We so desperately needed water, as our flowers and lawns were drying out and withering away. Your love for our Creator is amazing it is shining through in every word of your poem.
A heartfelt poem. You have used your emotions vividly. I know how heartbroken you must be to be waiting for a phone that doesn't ring. Your poem here is strong. I liked the last verse the most. Oil and water is toxic but it can work out. Don't lose site of that. All the best!
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Wow peanut, this poem is so heart touching it made me weep. I know what it was like to be an orphan, unwanted and unloved. I would have given the world for a Mom such as this beautiful lady. Thank you for loving her, for giving her the great honor that you do here in this poem. I hope you gifted her this tribute.
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Once again you have used a lot of descriptive writing here. This is wonderful to weave imagery into a story like that. I like the storyline, your plot is well thought out, and your ending is solid. I can see the street people in the hall eating a feast.
The only suggestion I would make and remember it is only my opinion is to use paragraphs. I would also leave a line between each paragraph. It makes it easier to read. This is just what I would suggest..it is your story to do as you please. I guess I have review all your works here. I will be back again. I enjoyed my visit.
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I want to congratulate you for beginning a novel. I just know I could never write one, so I envy anyone that trys it.
You have done a nice job here into your introduction. I like the descriptiveness in your writing You have done a great job describing the forest, you made good use of many colors.. white bark, sky blues and cruel reds.. etc. Your theme seems fitting for a novel, and I will return again to see how it is progressing.
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Good morning writes-a-lot777, this is Funnyface dropping by to say hello. I read your cute little poem here "Golden Bow"
I sense this is a very meaningful treasure of yours. To be able to wear it around your neck and know that it holds a lot of data is reassuring. Things you might need to know at your finger tips. Simply lovely.
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Hello Renegade _Angel this is Funnyface. I took a peek through your port, and I want to tell you I know you are going to do well here. I like your writing style.
I am reviewing a story of yours to thank you for reading an item of mine. I chose this one. I was drawn to read on because of the title and brief description. I can picture these men sitting around gambling the winner choose by the rolling of the dice
Oh I can imagine there had to be a lot of excitement when the knocks came to the door. I would have ran out the back door on into the woods as well... To bad his bills were flying away and what a surprise he was in for when he fell in to the hands of the two FBI agent. An enjoyable story well told!
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