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Review by GeminiStar
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*Note* Overall Impressions:
I really enjoyed reading this recent piece of yours. I believe in guardian angels. There have been a number of times I have been in grave danger and have gotten out of bad situations miraculously, and couldn't figure out why or how I was so lucky.

*Note* Emotional Impact:
I can relate to how frightful of an experience that must have been for you! *Shock* You must have been so scared. I commend you for trying to rescue that poor dog!

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any grammatical, spelling, or punctuation errors.

*Note* Favorite Part:
The part where you made it safely to the side of the highway. *Smile*

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for another great story! *Bigsmile*

*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review of The Cut  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hello! I am reviewing your piece on behalf of
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SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  (E)
A group whose mission is to spread positivity.
#1384154 by Simply Positive
! *Delight*


*Note*Overall Impressions:
What can I say about this, except for, wow. This is a very emotional and dark piece. I enjoyed reading this. *Smile*

*Note* Emotional Impact:
I can somewhat relate to the person's pain, althought I have never cut myself, I can feel for the person in this poem. Well done on displaying the emotional aspects of this piece!

*Note* Imagery:
Great job on the imagery and details of this piece.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Nice job on the flow of this piece.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Good job! *Bigsmile* Keep writing!


*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
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"Simply Positive" Template

Hello! I am reviewing your piece on behalf of
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SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  (E)
A group whose mission is to spread positivity.
#1384154 by Simply Positive
! *Delight*


*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is such a sweet and lovely poem about new motherhood. I hope to know that feeling one day. *Smile* You did a wonderful job on this piece.

*Note* Imagery:
Well done on the imagery and descriptions of this poem!

*Note* Flow/Form:
This has good flow and reads smoothly.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done! Thank you for sharing this! Keep writing! *Bigsmile*


*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review of Verse  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Group Review Templates


"Simply Positive" Template

Hello! I am reviewing your piece on behalf of
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SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  (E)
A group whose mission is to spread positivity.
#1384154 by Simply Positive
! *Delight*


*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is a wonderful poem! I love writing poetry. It's one of the best ways to express one's self. You have mentioned forms in this that I haven't even tried yet. *Blush* Maybe one of thse days when I have the inspiration to write again. You did an excellent job with this piece!

*Note* Imagery:
Well done on the imagery, you were very descriptive and detailed with your words.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Well done on the flow and form of this poem. It read smoothly.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this great write! Keep writing! *Bigsmile*


*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello! I am reviewing your piece on behalf of
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SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  (E)
A group whose mission is to spread positivity.
#1384154 by Simply Positive
! *Delight*


*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is a beautiful poem. I really enjoyed reading through this.

*Note* Imagery:
Wonderful job on the imagery and description of this piece!

*Note* Flow/Form:
Well done on the flow. You achieved the doubly-difficult double acrostic! Well done on that! I know that these are tough to master.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this lovely piece! *Bigsmile* Good job!


*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I am reviewing your piece on behalf of
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SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  (E)
A group whose mission is to spread positivity.
#1384154 by Simply Positive
! *Delight*


*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is a very nice attempt at a sonnet! *Delight* I have never attempted this style, but would love to one day when I have the time. You did a wonderful job! This was a very cute and descriptive poem.

*Note* Imagery:
Nice job on the imagery and details.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Good job on the flow of this piece. It read very nice.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done! Keep writing!


*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hello! I am reviewing your piece on behalf of
GROUP
SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  (E)
A group whose mission is to spread positivity.
#1384154 by Simply Positive
! *Delight*


*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is a beautiful poem and very unique. I am glad that I had the pleasure to read this! *Bigsmile*

*Note* Imagery:
Well done on the imagery! You had lovely descriptions in this poem.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Nice job on the flow and form.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Good job! Write on!


*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review of Death is Life  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello! I am reviewing your piece on behalf of
GROUP
SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  (E)
A group whose mission is to spread positivity.
#1384154 by Simply Positive
! *Delight*


*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is a very different and unique take on death. I find death anything but great. I can understand your point of view though. *Wink*

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I found a few punctuation errors;

In the first and fifth sentence you forgot to punctuate "they're".

In the sixth sentence you forgot to punctuate "that's".

I didn't spot any spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
I hope that my suggestions have helped you. Good job. Keep writing! *Smile*


*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello! I am reviewing your piece on behalf of
GROUP
SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  (E)
A group whose mission is to spread positivity.
#1384154 by Simply Positive
! *Delight*


*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is a very amusing advertisement. *Smile*

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I did spot a few grammatical errors:

In the second paragraph, first sentence, reword it to, "Do you have a cat or dog......"

Fourth paragraph, second sentence, take out the second "with", and put a comma after "walks".

Fifth paragraph, remove (or maybe just so the staff can enjoy it), it is irrelevant to the advertisement.

I didn't spot any misspelled words.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
Nothing other than my suggestions with the grammar. *Wink*

*Note* Closing Remarks:
I hope that my review has helped you. Thank you for sharing this fun animal advertisement! Keep writing!


*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello! I am reviewing your piece on behalf of
GROUP
SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  (E)
A group whose mission is to spread positivity.
#1384154 by Simply Positive
! *Delight*


*Note*Overall Impressions:
I know all too well what this feels like....I have been heartbroken many times by men. I also know the feeling of being on top of the world and then have it be pulled out from underneathe my feet. I can definitely relate to this piece.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this piece.


*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I am reviewing your piece on behalf of
GROUP
SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  (E)
A group whose mission is to spread positivity.
#1384154 by Simply Positive
! *Delight*


*Note*Overall Impressions:
This poem is written in the Monotetra form. I have never heard of this form before, very interesting. *Smile* This is a beautifully written piece. You did a wonderful job on this!

*Note* Imagery:
Well done on the imagery and descriptions.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Great job on the flow and form of this piece.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Good job on a great write! Keep writing! *Bigsmile*


*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I am reviewing your piece on behalf of
GROUP
SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  (E)
A group whose mission is to spread positivity.
#1384154 by Simply Positive
! *Delight*


*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is an interesting analogy on who would win a Gilligan's Island Survivor game! *Laugh* I am not going to say who you figured would win the contest. Readers will have to read for themselves.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this enjoyable read. *Smile* Write on!


*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello! I am reviewing your piece on behalf of
GROUP
SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  (E)
A group whose mission is to spread positivity.
#1384154 by Simply Positive
! *Delight*


*Note*Overall Impressions:
*Laugh* This was cute! How did I miss this contest!? *Confused* I really enjoyed reading this story with all of the movie titles in it. Nice job! You even listed a lot of movies that I own! *Wink*

*Note* Imagery:
Well done on the imagery, you were very descriptive in your story. Good job!

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this clever short story! Keep writing!


*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review of THE DARE  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello! I am reviewing your piece on behalf of
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SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  (E)
A group whose mission is to spread positivity.
#1384154 by Simply Positive
! *Delight*


*Note*Overall Impressions:
I remember reviewing this once before, but I don't mind reviewing it again. This is an excellent read. Everything flowed smoothly and had great structure.

*Note* Emotional Impact:
This poem was so sad! *Cry* I felt so bad for that little girl.

*Note* Imagery:
Well done on the imagery and descriptions.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this piece once again! *Heart* Keep writing!


*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review of Midnight Hour  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello! I am reviewing your piece on behalf of
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SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  (E)
A group whose mission is to spread positivity.
#1384154 by Simply Positive
! *Delight*


*Note*Overall Impressions:
What a really neat poem! I love dark and mysterious poetry. Midnight adds some sinister and dark aspects to a piece. I really enjoyed reading this!

*Note* Imagery:
Well done on the imagery and descriptions.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Nice job on the flow of this poem. Good job!

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done! Keep writing! *Bigsmile*


*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review of My Needs  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello! I am reviewing your piece on behalf of
"SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP" ! *Delight*


*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is a very unique and wonderful poem. I really enjoyed it! *Bigsmile*

*Note* Emotional Impact:
I really felt for the character in this. It was really sad. *Frown*

*Note* Flow/Form:
Nice work on the flow. It read smoothly.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this great poem! Keep writing!


*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for entering:

IN & OUT
The Best of the Rest  (E)
Happy 10th Birthday to the Angel Army! Angels of August 2016.
#1134192 by StephB



*Note* Overall Impressions:
This is a wonderful tribute forum for deceased pets! *Smile* I think that it's just great that you have set this up for members on this site for their dearly departed pets.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done! Good Luck!

Ciao,
*Heart* Gem
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Review of Poetsvision  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Fyn - !

I am here to fulfill 10 of 10 reviews from your auction win! *Bigsmile*

*Note* Overall Impressions:
I can totally relate to this poem. It doesn't look like you have too much trouble belting out poems. For me it's quite painful because I have a hard time putting things down on paper from my mind. Your feelings and words sometimes become diminished from your mind to the paper. *Smile*

*Note* Flow/Form:
Well done on the flow of this piece.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for allowing me to take a glance in your wonderful collection of poetry! I am off to decide which one I shall grace with an award! Well done! Keep writing! *Wink*


*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Gateway to My World!
Gemini Star's Mystical Realm  (18+)
The gateway into my world!
#1251950 by GeminiStar
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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Fyn - !

I am here to fulfill 9 of 10 reviews from your auction win! *Bigsmile*

*Note* Overall Impressions:
What a cute poem! Owls are always regarded with wisdom and intellect because they have this wise and studious look to them. *Wink*

*Note* Imagery:
Well done on the imagery and descriptions of this poem!

*Note* Flow/Form:
Good job on the flow.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Good job! Keep writing!


*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Gateway to My World!
Gemini Star's Mystical Realm  (18+)
The gateway into my world!
#1251950 by GeminiStar
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Review of Fireflies  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Fyn - !

I am here to fulfill 8 of 10 reviews from your auction win! *Bigsmile*

*Note* Overall Impressions:
I love fireflies! *Delight* I loved catching them when I was a little girl, and as an adult I love to watch them light up the sky during the summer.

*Note* Imagery:
Good job on the imagery. I love the image at the top, very cute!

*Note* Flow/Form:
Good job on the flow.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done! Write On!


*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Gateway to My World!
Gemini Star's Mystical Realm  (18+)
The gateway into my world!
#1251950 by GeminiStar
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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Fyn - !

I am here to fulfill 7 of 10 reviews from your auction win! *Bigsmile*

*Note* Overall Impressions:
*Laugh* This was silly and adorable! I loved it!

*Note* Imagery:
Well done on the imagery! I loved the splash of color that you added in this too, which made for a very fun read!

*Note* Flow/Form:
Good job on the flow of this piece.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any spelling or grammatical errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done on a cute piece! Keep writing!


*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Gateway to My World!
Gemini Star's Mystical Realm  (18+)
The gateway into my world!
#1251950 by GeminiStar
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Review of September Rain  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Fyn - !

I am here to fulfill 6 of 10 reviews from your auction win! *Bigsmile*

*Note* Overall Impressions:
What a wonderful tribute to autumn! Autumn is my favorite time of year! *Bigsmile* I liked your use of words throughout this entire poem, rain, rein, reign. Very poetic!

*Note* Imagery:
Well done on the imagery, I just loved your description of the leaves and the rain. Nice job!

*Note* Flow/Form:
Good job on the flow of this piece.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done! Keep writing! *Smile*


*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Gateway to My World!
Gemini Star's Mystical Realm  (18+)
The gateway into my world!
#1251950 by GeminiStar
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Review of Missing in Action  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Fyn - !

I am here to fulfill 5 of 10 reviews from your auction win! *Bigsmile*

*Note* Overall Impressions:
This is a short and sad poem. I can only imagine what the person in this poem was going through.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Nice job on the flow.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Originality/Uniqueness:
This is a very unique poem in the sense that you use words that most other people don't, and I just love that about your work! Good job! *Smile*

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done! Write On! *Bigsmile*


*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Gateway to My World!
Gemini Star's Mystical Realm  (18+)
The gateway into my world!
#1251950 by GeminiStar
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Review of Primal Sense  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Fyn - !

I am here to fulfill 4 of 10 reviews from your auction win! *Bigsmile*

*Note* Overall Impressions:
This is a very beautiful poem about nature, and also allowing to someone to see through a different perspective. Nice job!

*Note* Imagery:
Well done on the imagery! Very beautiful!

*Note* Flow/Form:
Good job on the flow.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any spelling or grammatical errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Great job! Keep writing! *Smile*


*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Gateway to My World!
Gemini Star's Mystical Realm  (18+)
The gateway into my world!
#1251950 by GeminiStar
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Review of Cliche Cache  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Fyn - !

I am here to fulfill 3 of 10 reviews from your auction win! *Bigsmile*

*Note* Overall Impressions:
*Laugh* What a fun and amusing cliche poem! The endind made me laugh, very cute!

*Note* Imagery:
Well done on the imagery.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Well done on the flow of this piece.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done! Write On!


*Heart* Ciao,
Gem
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Gateway to My World!
Gemini Star's Mystical Realm  (18+)
The gateway into my world!
#1251950 by GeminiStar
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