Overall Impressions:
I really enjoyed reading this recent piece of yours. I believe in guardian angels. There have been a number of times I have been in grave danger and have gotten out of bad situations miraculously, and couldn't figure out why or how I was so lucky.
Emotional Impact:
I can relate to how frightful of an experience that must have been for you! You must have been so scared. I commend you for trying to rescue that poor dog!
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any grammatical, spelling, or punctuation errors.
Favorite Part:
The part where you made it safely to the side of the highway.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for another great story!
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Overall Impressions:
What can I say about this, except for, wow. This is a very emotional and dark piece. I enjoyed reading this.
Emotional Impact:
I can somewhat relate to the person's pain, althought I have never cut myself, I can feel for the person in this poem. Well done on displaying the emotional aspects of this piece!
Imagery:
Great job on the imagery and details of this piece.
Flow/Form:
Nice job on the flow of this piece.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Overall Impressions:
This is such a sweet and lovely poem about new motherhood. I hope to know that feeling one day. You did a wonderful job on this piece.
Imagery:
Well done on the imagery and descriptions of this poem!
Flow/Form:
This has good flow and reads smoothly.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Well done! Thank you for sharing this! Keep writing!
Overall Impressions:
This is a wonderful poem! I love writing poetry. It's one of the best ways to express one's self. You have mentioned forms in this that I haven't even tried yet. Maybe one of thse days when I have the inspiration to write again. You did an excellent job with this piece!
Imagery:
Well done on the imagery, you were very descriptive and detailed with your words.
Flow/Form:
Well done on the flow and form of this poem. It read smoothly.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this great write! Keep writing!
Overall Impressions:
This is a very nice attempt at a sonnet! I have never attempted this style, but would love to one day when I have the time. You did a wonderful job! This was a very cute and descriptive poem.
Imagery:
Nice job on the imagery and details.
Flow/Form:
Good job on the flow of this piece. It read very nice.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Overall Impressions:
I know all too well what this feels like....I have been heartbroken many times by men. I also know the feeling of being on top of the world and then have it be pulled out from underneathe my feet. I can definitely relate to this piece.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this piece.
Overall Impressions:
This poem is written in the Monotetra form. I have never heard of this form before, very interesting. This is a beautifully written piece. You did a wonderful job on this!
Imagery:
Well done on the imagery and descriptions.
Flow/Form:
Great job on the flow and form of this piece.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Good job on a great write! Keep writing!
Overall Impressions:
This is an interesting analogy on who would win a Gilligan's Island Survivor game! I am not going to say who you figured would win the contest. Readers will have to read for themselves.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this enjoyable read. Write on!
Overall Impressions: This was cute! How did I miss this contest!? I really enjoyed reading this story with all of the movie titles in it. Nice job! You even listed a lot of movies that I own!
Imagery:
Well done on the imagery, you were very descriptive in your story. Good job!
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this clever short story! Keep writing!
Overall Impressions:
I remember reviewing this once before, but I don't mind reviewing it again. This is an excellent read. Everything flowed smoothly and had great structure.
Emotional Impact:
This poem was so sad! I felt so bad for that little girl.
Imagery:
Well done on the imagery and descriptions.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this piece once again! Keep writing!
Overall Impressions:
What a really neat poem! I love dark and mysterious poetry. Midnight adds some sinister and dark aspects to a piece. I really enjoyed reading this!
Imagery:
Well done on the imagery and descriptions.
Flow/Form:
Nice job on the flow of this poem. Good job!
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Overall Impressions:
This is a wonderful tribute forum for deceased pets! I think that it's just great that you have set this up for members on this site for their dearly departed pets.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
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Overall Impressions:
I can totally relate to this poem. It doesn't look like you have too much trouble belting out poems. For me it's quite painful because I have a hard time putting things down on paper from my mind. Your feelings and words sometimes become diminished from your mind to the paper.
Flow/Form:
Well done on the flow of this piece.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for allowing me to take a glance in your wonderful collection of poetry! I am off to decide which one I shall grace with an award! Well done! Keep writing!
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Overall Impressions:
I love fireflies! I loved catching them when I was a little girl, and as an adult I love to watch them light up the sky during the summer.
Imagery:
Good job on the imagery. I love the image at the top, very cute!
Flow/Form:
Good job on the flow.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
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Overall Impressions:
What a wonderful tribute to autumn! Autumn is my favorite time of year! I liked your use of words throughout this entire poem, rain, rein, reign. Very poetic!
Imagery:
Well done on the imagery, I just loved your description of the leaves and the rain. Nice job!
Flow/Form:
Good job on the flow of this piece.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
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Overall Impressions:
This is a short and sad poem. I can only imagine what the person in this poem was going through.
Flow/Form:
Nice job on the flow.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Originality/Uniqueness:
This is a very unique poem in the sense that you use words that most other people don't, and I just love that about your work! Good job!
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