Overall Impressions:
I really enjoyed reading this recent piece of yours. I believe in guardian angels. There have been a number of times I have been in grave danger and have gotten out of bad situations miraculously, and couldn't figure out why or how I was so lucky.
Emotional Impact:
I can relate to how frightful of an experience that must have been for you! You must have been so scared. I commend you for trying to rescue that poor dog!
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any grammatical, spelling, or punctuation errors.
Favorite Part:
The part where you made it safely to the side of the highway.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for another great story!
Ciao,
Gem
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Overall Impressions:
This is such a sweet and lovely poem about new motherhood. I hope to know that feeling one day. You did a wonderful job on this piece.
Imagery:
Well done on the imagery and descriptions of this poem!
Flow/Form:
This has good flow and reads smoothly.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Well done! Thank you for sharing this! Keep writing!
Overall Impressions:
This is a very nice attempt at a sonnet! I have never attempted this style, but would love to one day when I have the time. You did a wonderful job! This was a very cute and descriptive poem.
Imagery:
Nice job on the imagery and details.
Flow/Form:
Good job on the flow of this piece. It read very nice.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Overall Impressions:
I know all too well what this feels like....I have been heartbroken many times by men. I also know the feeling of being on top of the world and then have it be pulled out from underneathe my feet. I can definitely relate to this piece.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this piece.
Overall Impressions:
This poem is written in the Monotetra form. I have never heard of this form before, very interesting. This is a beautifully written piece. You did a wonderful job on this!
Imagery:
Well done on the imagery and descriptions.
Flow/Form:
Great job on the flow and form of this piece.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Good job on a great write! Keep writing!
Overall Impressions:
This is an interesting analogy on who would win a Gilligan's Island Survivor game! I am not going to say who you figured would win the contest. Readers will have to read for themselves.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this enjoyable read. Write on!
Overall Impressions: This was cute! How did I miss this contest!? I really enjoyed reading this story with all of the movie titles in it. Nice job! You even listed a lot of movies that I own!
Imagery:
Well done on the imagery, you were very descriptive in your story. Good job!
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this clever short story! Keep writing!
Overall Impressions:
I remember reviewing this once before, but I don't mind reviewing it again. This is an excellent read. Everything flowed smoothly and had great structure.
Emotional Impact:
This poem was so sad! I felt so bad for that little girl.
Imagery:
Well done on the imagery and descriptions.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this piece once again! Keep writing!
Overall Impressions:
This is a wonderful tribute forum for deceased pets! I think that it's just great that you have set this up for members on this site for their dearly departed pets.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
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Overall Impressions:
I can totally relate to this poem. It doesn't look like you have too much trouble belting out poems. For me it's quite painful because I have a hard time putting things down on paper from my mind. Your feelings and words sometimes become diminished from your mind to the paper.
Flow/Form:
Well done on the flow of this piece.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for allowing me to take a glance in your wonderful collection of poetry! I am off to decide which one I shall grace with an award! Well done! Keep writing!
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Overall Impressions:
I love fireflies! I loved catching them when I was a little girl, and as an adult I love to watch them light up the sky during the summer.
Imagery:
Good job on the imagery. I love the image at the top, very cute!
Flow/Form:
Good job on the flow.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
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Overall Impressions:
What a wonderful tribute to autumn! Autumn is my favorite time of year! I liked your use of words throughout this entire poem, rain, rein, reign. Very poetic!
Imagery:
Well done on the imagery, I just loved your description of the leaves and the rain. Nice job!
Flow/Form:
Good job on the flow of this piece.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
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Overall Impressions:
This is a short and sad poem. I can only imagine what the person in this poem was going through.
Flow/Form:
Nice job on the flow.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Originality/Uniqueness:
This is a very unique poem in the sense that you use words that most other people don't, and I just love that about your work! Good job!
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Overall Impressions:
What a spooky and haunting poem! It sent chills down my spine as I read through this!
Imagery:
Great job on the imagery! Cemetaries can be creepy at night. I never actually went into one at night, but I have actually passed one while walking one night, which can be just as eerie.
Flow/Form:
Well done on the flow of this piece.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this great piece! Keep writing!
Overall Impressions:
A very touching and lovely poem! You are very right about the words and message that you wrote in this. My dad said that when you're in love, Valentine's Day should be everyday. Well done!
Imagery:
Good job on the imagery and descriptions on this piece.
Flow/Form:
Nice job on the flow and form.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this beautiful verse! Keep writing!
Ciao,
Gem
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Overall Impressions:
Review 16 of 20. I couldn't pass this one up, since I was born and raised in Michigan. I just chose the one that said that I have been here my entire life. When I was 26 I picked up and moved to Dallas, Texas, and lived there for a year, and then picked up my stuff again and moved to Tampa Bay, Florida, and lived there for almost 3 years. Then my dad died, so I picked up my stuff my moved back here to Michigan. I am glad to be back. I wouldn't have it any other way.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Nice poll! Keep writing!
Ciao,
Gem
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You must have been so scared. I commend you for trying to rescue that poor dog!
Ciao,
I am not going to say who you figured would win the contest. Readers will have to read for themselves.
I really enjoyed reading this story with all of the movie titles in it. Nice job! You even listed a lot of movies that I own! 
I felt so bad for that little girl.
