Overall Impressions:
This is a very heartfelt and beautiful piece. My dad recently passed away in his home. I remember all of the times I would have dinner and hang out with him. I miss him deeply and will never forget the wonderful times I had with him.
Imagery:
Well done on the imagery and details of this piece.
Flow/Form:
Nice job on the flow and form.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing your memories. Write On!
Ciao,
Gem
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Overall Impressions: This was so funny! LOL! You did an excellent job with this piece. I love the first line of the first stanza....that made me crack up. This made a wonderful comic relief to my week. It's been a rough one for me.
Flow/Form:
Well done with the flow of the lyrics.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this hilarious piece with me and the rest of the WDC community! Write On!
Ciao,
Gem
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Overall Impressions:
You did a great job with this piece.
Emotional Impact:
This is a very sad story. I wish all of this would stop. If there was only an easy solution to all of this chaos.
Flow/Form:
Well done on the flow. I have seen the Gaines Verse forms around this site a few times. You seemed to have have followed this form perfectly.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this piece. Keep writing.
Ciao,
Gem
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Overall Impressions:
This is such a sad reality in our society. I am very thankful that I didn't go to school with people like that. This is so sad. Sometimes I wonder what our world has come to.
Flow/Form:
Nice job on the flow and form of this piece.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Keep writing!
Ciao,
Gem
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Overall Impressions:
This is a beautifully written poem about forgiving and learning to let go. I feel that in order to be at peace with one's self you have to learn to forgive and let go of the past.
Flow/Form:
Great job on the flow and form.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Well done! Thank you for sharing this! Write On!
Ciao,
Gem
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Overall Impressions:
I think that hummingbirds are one of the most beautiful and graceful creatures on this planet, next to dragonflies and butterflies. You did a wonderful job on this poem.
Imagery:
Well done on the imagery of this piece.
Flow/Form:
Good job on the flow of this piece. Very smooth and well-written.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece with the WDC community! Keep writing! I will make my decision shortly on which piece to award. I invite you to visit my poetry folder, when you have time of course. I hope that you enjoyed the reviews that you've received from me. Take care.
Ciao,
Gem
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This was a beautiful piece written about Spring. Spring & Autumn are my two most favorite seasons. Not too hot and not too cold.......most of the time. I love poetry about nature. I have written a few nature poems myself. You did a really great job on this.
Imagery:
Well done on the imagery and details.
Flow/Form:
Well done on the flow and form.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any spelling or grammatical errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece! Keep writing!
Ciao,
Gem
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Overall Impressions: I love football, hockey, basketball, and baseball, with my first love being hockey, because the first professional sporting event that I have ever been to was a hockey game. I actually love sports and can understand the excitement involved with each one. The only thing that gets me is the bare skin with the body paint on it in the freezing cold weather, lol. The rest I can understand.
Flow/Form:
Well done on the flow and form of this piece.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for this humorous take on how women react to the excitement of sporting events! Keep writing!
Ciao,
Gem
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Overall Impressions:
This is a very cute Halloween poem! I miss being a kid and celebrating Halloween with trick-or-treating. Dressing up was the fun part, and the candy, well, that was just a secondary treat. I say this, only because my parents would steal it and eat it themselves, lol.
Imagery:
Well done on the imagery and descriptions. I could just see the little kids out in their cute little costumes.
Flow/Form:
Nice flow and form.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this great piece and just in time for Halloween.
Ciao,
Gem
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Overall Impressions:
Spiders give me the heebie-jeebies too. I have had my run-ins with a common house spider to wolf spiders (which are big and hairy). I walked by a spruce tree in my dad's yard and a wolf spider jumped out at me and I must have jumped 10 feet into the air. There was another account when I was lying in bed and a black spider tried to land on my face. I screamed of course, and it scurried back up it's web, lol. Now, at my apartment, there is this big tan spider with a black and white shape on it's belly that has spun a web on my balcony. I have no idea what kind it is, but it scares me anyway. I would say that spiders and snakes are my biggest fears.
Imagery:
Well done on the imagery and details.
Flow/Form:
Good form and flow.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this creepy poem, lol. Keep writing!
Ciao,
Gem
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I am in complete agreement with you on this whole mess that Bush and Cheney have put upon this country. They make me ashamed to be citizen of America. It's a total embarrassment that we attack other countries unprovoked. Then sending our work to other countries to save money, because they don't want to pay us what we are worth. They are responsible for the poor economy. Okay, I better stop before I spin off into a deeper tangent, lol.
Flow/Form:
Well done on the flow of this piece.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Good job on a well-written piece!
Ciao,
Gem
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Overall Impressions:
This is very sad piece that you've written. This is the very thing that you would read in the paper or see on the 6 o'clock news. This was well-written and told in great narrative form.
Flow/Form:
Well done on this free verse form.
Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.
Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.
Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this piece! Well done!
Ciao,
Gem
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Ciao,
This was so funny! LOL! You did an excellent job with this piece. I love the first line of the first stanza....that made me crack up. This made a wonderful comic relief to my week. It's been a rough one for me.
I wish all of this would stop. If there was only an easy solution to all of this chaos.
Sometimes I wonder what our world has come to.
You did a wonderful job on this poem.
Come and Celebrate WDC's 8th Birthday with me! 
I miss being a kid and celebrating Halloween with trick-or-treating. 
I have had my run-ins with a common house spider to wolf spiders (which are big and hairy). I walked by a spruce tree in my dad's yard and a wolf spider jumped out at me and I must have jumped 10 feet into the air. There was another account when I was lying in bed and a black spider tried to land on my face. I screamed of course, and it scurried back up it's web, lol. Now, at my apartment, there is this big tan spider with a black and white shape on it's belly that has spun a web on my balcony. I have no idea what kind it is, but it scares me anyway. I would say that spiders and snakes are my biggest fears.