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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I can understand your concerns on rating an item 5 stars or not. Sometimes this is left to the opinion of the reader themselves. Your readers might think that your work is perfect in their eyes. *Smile* This is just my ideas anyway. Thank you for voicing your opinions on the rating system.


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Review of At the Mall  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is a great suspenseful short story. And wow, how scary!

*Note* Emotional Impact:
I hate the feeling of someone following my every move.

*Note* Imagery:
Well done on the imagery and details of this story. This well written and easy to read through.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing such a great read! Write On!


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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Note*Overall Impressions:
What a great story based on a picture prompt for a contest. *Smile*

*Note* Plot Comments:
Nice flow to the plot.

*Note* Character Comments:
I loved the expressions of the little kids, especially the Birthday boy, Jimmy.

*Note* Imagery:
Well done on the imagery and descriptions. You did a great job based on the picture given.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing such a sweet piece! Write On! *Wink*


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Review of ENCHANTRESS  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Note*Overall Impressions:
What a lovely piece! I love the color and graphics that you set in this.

*Note* Character Comments:
I love the concept of the enchantress. It's almost like pleasant dream.

*Note* Imagery:
Again, great job on the imagery, font color, and graphics. I love pink too. *Bigsmile*

*Note* Flow/Form:
Well done on the flow and form of this piece!

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece. Excellent job! *Heart*


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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is a very heart-wrenching and very sad piece. This also raises a lot of questions.

*Note* Emotional Impact:
Unfortunately we live in a world where this keeps happening. Luckily there are still good people in this world.

*Note* Imagery:
You did a great job on the imagery and description.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Excellent job on the flow and form of this piece. Nice meter and rhyme scheme!

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this well written piece. Keep writing!


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Review of The Climb  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*Note*Overall Impressions:
I can't expect anything less from you than a thriller/suspense story. *Wink* As always you do a great job with your work!

*Note* Plot Comments:
You have a great plotline. I love the ending of the story......I didn't see that one coming!

*Note* Character Comments:
I think that you gave the male character the perfect last name. LOL! Although, I can sympathize a little with the poor man.

*Note* Imagery:
Well done on the imagery and details of this piece!

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Favorite Part:
Definitely the ending.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing yet another wonderful piece! Write On!


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Review of Cats  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello warriormom! *Bigsmile*

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#1384154 by Simply Positive



*Note*Overall Impressions:
I love this piece! I also love cats. I have written one of these before. They are pretty fun aren't they? *Smile*

*Note* Imagery:
Well done on describing the ways of the cat.

*Note* Flow/Form:
You followed the Cinquain form perfectly. I have written in this form, and I have also written in Cinquiano form as well. Very fun.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this fun piece! *Bigsmile* Keep writing!


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Gem
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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Jane ! *Smile*

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#1384154 by Simply Positive



*Note*Overall Impressions:
This was a very sad but memorable read about your dad.

*Note* Emotional Impact:
Even though your dad had a bit of a meanstreak, I feel that he meant well, and fought his hardest not to be abusive like his dad was to him. I can tell that you miss him and your mother deeply.

*Note* Imagery:
I loved your descriptions and imagery in this piece.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any spelling or grammatical errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this emotional piece. Keep writing.


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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello GYPSYROSE- Grateful 2 WDC ! *Bigsmile*

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#1384154 by Simply Positive



*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is so lovely! I really enjoyed reading this piece.

*Note* Emotional Impact:
This had such a tranquil and beautiful feeling to it.

*Note* Imagery:
Well done on the imager of this poem.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Well done on the flow and form!

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this spiritual piece with us! Well done!


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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Just an Ordinary Boo! ! *Bigsmile*

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#1384154 by Simply Positive



*Note*Overall Impressions:
This fictional piece was rather amusing to me. I had my fair share of run-ins with those when I lived in Texas and Florida.

*Note* Plot Comments:
This had a smooth plotline.

*Note* Character Comments:
I thought that it was rather humorous that a lady was actually conversing with an insect. *Laugh*

*Note* Emotional Impact:
I squirm at the thought of bugs in any house. This story rendered a few snickers from me. *Wink*

*Note* Imagery:
Well done on the imagery. You gave great detail and word usage in this piece. I love how you gave the insect intelligence.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing such a fun read! Good job! *Smile*


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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello NickiD89 ! *Bigsmile*

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#1384154 by Simply Positive



*Note*Overall Impressions:
This is a beautiful poem written in Pantoum form. I simply loved it!

*Note* Imagery:
Well done on the imagery and details of the poem.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Great job on the flow and form of this piece. You have followed the Pantoum form perfectly!

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this great piece! Keep writing!


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Review of Winter's Breath  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Shannon ! *Bigsmile*

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#1384154 by Simply Positive



*Note*Overall Impressions:
What a beautiful poem about winter and romance! Winter is one of my favorite seasons too, except for maybe driving it.

*Note* Imagery:
You did an amazing job on the imagery of this piece.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Nice job on the flow and form of this piece.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Favorite Part:
"I close my eyes and fall asleep.
My lover’s kisses on my cheek."


I loved the entire piece, but this was my favorite of all stanzas.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing such a beautiful piece! Well done!


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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*Note* Overall Impressions:
This is a great poem. I love dark/gothic poetry.

*Note* Emotional Impact:
A very morbid piece, but I liked it. *Pthb*

*Note* Imagery:
Well done on the imagery and descriptions.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Nice flow and form.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done on a great piece!


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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note* Overall Impressions:
I always wondered what the word "beatnik" meant. Now I know. *Smile*

"Beatnik" Refers to someone who was a part of the "Beat Generation" in the 1950's.

*Note* Imagery:
Well done on the imagery. I could just picture everything that you were describing in this piece.

*Note* Flow/Form:
Nice job on the flow and form.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this educational piece with WDC! *Bigsmile* Well done.


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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*Note* Overall Impressions:
This is a very detailed short story about a car. *Smile*

*Note* Narration/Dialogue:
You did a great job on the narration and dialogue.

*Note* Character Comments:
I love how you described your car as if it were a person, and how you even gave "her" a name. *Wink* Very cute!

*Note* Emotional Impact:
This story reminded me of my first car that I had when I turned 18. It was fine for awhile, but after a couple years of driving it, I finally came up with a name for the car after it started having a multitude of problems. I came to call the car "Thorn in My Side" *Pthb* I couldn't help it. I just became so annoyed with it that I sold it and got another car in place of it. LOL.

*Note* Imagery/Description:
You gave great description and details in this piece. As always you do a great job in this area.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any grammatical or spelling errors.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
As always, great job!


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Review of Thunder Day  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
*Note* Overall Impressions:
This is a well-written piece of poetry. I loved it!

*Note* Imagery:
This has great description and detail.

*Note* Flow/Form:
I loved the form that you wrote this in. This has excellent flow.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Suggestions/Improvements to be Made:
None.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done on a great piece! *Smile*


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Review of Road To Danger's  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*Note* Overall Impressions:
*Laugh* Ah, family trips across the U.S.! Fun. LOL! I can remember arguements on a few trips with my grandparents. Hearing old people bicker is funny. *Pthb*

*Note* Narration/Dialogue:
Well done on the narration and dialogue. I especially enjoyed your inner thought process.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Favorite Part:
The "Big Ass Circle"! *Laugh*

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this amusing short story with me! I had a lot of enjoyment reading it! Well done!


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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*Note* Overall Impressions:
This was a very insightful and fun read. Yikes! A bear! I am glad that all of you got away safely. I must walk about 8-9 miles everyday, but not up any mountains. *Pthb*

*Note* Narration/Dialogue:
Great job on the narration and dialogue.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done! *Bigsmile*


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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Note* Overall Impressions:
Thank you for writing such an informational article about tennis. I learned a lot by reading this short piece.

*Note* Narration/Dialogue:
Well done on the narration and dialogue.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this! Well done! *Bigsmile*


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Review of Determined  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
*Note* Overall Impressions:
I never played tennis before. It seems to be your favorite. *Smile*

*Note* Narration/Dialogue:
Well done on the narration and dialogue.

*Note* Emotional Impact:
I love the comical approach that you took in this short story. *Bigsmile*

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this with me! Write On!


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Review of Madam I'm Adam  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
*Note* Overall Impressions:
What a cute and funny story! *Delight* I am glad that you had fun, lol. I couldn't imagine anyone calling me by a guy's name, lol. I thought it was cute how everyone had fun calling you "Adam".

*Note* Narration/Dialogue:
Great job with the narration and dialogue.

*Note* Imagery/Description:
Well done on the imagery. I love the photos of you and your daughter. She looks so much like you. *Smile*

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't spot any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this!


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Review of Keep The LIne  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
*Note* Overall Impressions:
This is a great place to keep all of your ideas for poetry and short stories. I like a lot of your ideas. *Bigsmile*

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing your thoughts and ideas with us. I hope a lot of these have turned into great stories and poetry. Well done!


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Review of Sports Arena  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
*Note* Overall Impressions:
What a cool forum! *Delight* I like this very much! I like watching sports, especially hockey, football, basketball, and baseball. I think this is a great place for all sport fanatics to gather and socialize.

*Note* Imagery/Description:
Well done on the imagery and graphics.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Originality/Uniqueness:
To the best of my knowledge, there isn't another forum like this one on the entire site. Nice job on making something unique. *Bigsmile*

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for creating this forum! Well done! *Smile*


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Review of The Lucky Strike  
Review by GeminiStar
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
*Note* Overall Impressions:
I can definately relate to this short story, lol. I can't stand men that are that much older than me, and think that they can win me over with gifts and spoiling. I think older men who try to pick up much younger girls are yucky! *Sick* lol. I hate getting gutter balls, lol. I get embarrassed if I don't do well in any kind of game, no matter what it is. *Pthb*

*Note* Narration/Dialogue:
Well done on the narration and dialogue.

*Note* Imagery/Description:
Well done on the description and details.

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Thank you for sharing this with me! Very funny and cute! Keep writing! *Wink*


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Review by GeminiStar
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*Note* Overall Impressions:
*Laugh* Very cute. I don't care for Winter or Summer.......too cold and too hot for me. I prefer Spring and Autumn weather at all times of the year! *Wink* Winter doesn't really bother me, it's the ice that I don't like to drive on.

*Note* Plot Comments:
Very well layed out. The plot runs smoothly. I didn't have any trouble reading through it. Nice work.

*Note* Narration/Dialogue:
Great job on the narration and dialogue. The throught process of the character was very good.

*Note* Imagery/Description:
Well done on the imagery and description. You painted a very presentable picture for the readers. Good work!

*Note* Grammar/Spelling/Punctuation:
I didn't find any misspelled words or grammatical errors.

*Note* Favorite Part:
The ending paragraph and the last sentence were so cute! *Laugh*

*Note* Closing Remarks:
Well done! You seem to be a great writer! I can't wait to read more of your work! *Bigsmile*


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