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Review by Master Sergent M
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the imagination, its vivid and colorful and full of references to fairy stories and folklore. I appreciate the imagination especially he the flying pig part up to the pot of Gold. I am no expert author myself but i saw something original you can use to make the story yours, what if the protagonist is a thief who deludes himself that all this happened while in fact he actually stole.
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Review of Food For Thought  
Review by Master Sergent M
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Interesting analogy. So beauty = danger, avoid at all costs!
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Review of My Daughter  
Review by Master Sergent M
Rated: E | (4.5)
Its a good start and captures the imagination. Horrifying and sad at the same time. You should continue, but i suggest before you post use the spell check, it helps alot.
Don't stop writing.
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Review by Master Sergent M
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
That is touching. I have a brother who went through 3 duties of tours. messed him bad, though he will never admit it.
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Review by Master Sergent M
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice, very very Nice
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Review of The Scheme  
Review by Master Sergent M
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
That is very funny, watch out; That boy is going places he needs a business school
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Review of OLD MAN  
Review by Master Sergent M
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
That's some deep stuff right there. Let this not be the end.
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Review by Master Sergent M
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow! Hands down. That is what i call an original.
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Review by Master Sergent M
Rated: E | (4.0)
Good start. Keep on writing.
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Review of The Saw Mill  
Review by Master Sergent M
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love it.
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Review by Master Sergent M
Rated: E | (4.0)
Deep. Heartfelt.
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Review of JOHN FLANERY  
Review by Master Sergent M
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very very nice. It transports you to a world past and yet makes it romantic and adventurous. The mist, docks smell of fish reminds me of the books i read when i was young, mostly from British authors of yore.
Continue writing, i want to read more.
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Review of "My Angel Lady"  
Review by Master Sergent M
Rated: E | (3.5)
Good one. Keep on writing.
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Review by Master Sergent M
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wow! I scared
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Review of Her First Time  
Review by Master Sergent M
Rated: E | (4.5)
funny with a hint of ...
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Review of The End of Time  
Review by Master Sergent M
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I will be honest with you; i am impressed. You should be a movie writer. That stuff is made for theaters. I am a sci-fi fan and this made my day. You should finish the story and never stop writing. That part of dying and waking up in the alien apocalypse is simply original. Even the following scenes never leaves someone bored. Always there is new original stuff that is left unexplored. Portals, the edge, end demons, Ghost, etc Great stuff.
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Review of The Scarecrow  
Review by Master Sergent M
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really liked it. I bet this is you and you are trying to come out of hiding your true talent. Its inspirational and a lovely piece just like the scarecrow's music. It joyfully tackles the undercurrents of fear that runs through our lives, what if we tried to be our true selves? what would be people think? would they laugh at us or applaud our efforts? will they like how we look? tall? short? gangling? a scarecrow? we do not know until we try.
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Review of Double Wide  
Review by Master Sergent M
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Loved it. Very Funny yet poignant
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