|Wow! I don't know what to say! I felt sorry for the poor guy, so confused and questioning everything. Things changed so quickly that at first I thought, wait, what am I missing? But as I kept reading, it evolved into a surrealistic dream, or nightmare. This goes along the lines of Twin Peaks, so many strange things that upon second look are normal at the moment. I liked the off beat adventure, even though the first couple of paragraphs I wasn't quite sure, but it is unique and on the most part well constructed. I spotted a couple of typos or maybe a faux pas in present tense vs. past, otherwise very good.