Greetings Humble_Poet PNG !

I am currently sailing through the Read and Review section of this page and your poem appeared. I enjoyed reading it and decided to give it a review. May you'll find this review to be helpful and encouraging.

After reading your poem, here are the things that I noticed:

The poem doesn't just mention unrequited love, it validates the profound impact such love can have. Even if a specific romantic outcome isn't realized, the speaker recognizes love's power to transform the individual and shape their experience of the world.

The focus isn't on "winning" a loved one's affections, but on the love itself as a transformative force. It portrays a type of love that isn't transactional, but exists almost as its own self-perpetuating entity within the lover.

The poem suggests that emotional experiences are significant in and of themselves. Rather than being solely a means to an external end (like a relationship), feelings themselves offer value to human existence.

Beyond the traditional style creating a pleasing aesthetic, the poem's structure contributes to its message. The tight stanzas and deliberate word choices give emotional weight to each line, further reflecting the speaker's deep, and internally focused, capacity for love.

Ultimately, this is a lovely piece. Thank you for sharing this to us. Write on!

Best regards,
Gervic

Greetings Jatog the Green !

I am navigating through the Read and Review section of this page and your poem appeared. I enjoyed reading it and thought of leaving it with a review. May you'll find this review as helpful and encouraging.

Delving deep into your poem's content, here are the positive thing I noticed:

It celebrates the importance of fun and play in early childhood education. The poem's opening lines express the goal of having fun for children starting school, which is an important part of early childhood education. Play-based learning has been shown to be beneficial for cognitive, social, and emotional development.

It challenges the use of fear and extortion to motivate children. The poem expresses concern about the use of threats and fear to motivate children, such as the idea that children who don't believe in Santa Claus will not receive presents. This type of motivation can be harmful to children's emotional well-being and can create a negative association with learning.

It promotes critical thinking and reason. The poem encourages children to question their beliefs and to think for themselves. This is an important skill for children to develop, as it will help them to make informed decisions throughout their lives.

Additional thoughts on the poem:



Overall, "Desk Psychology" is a poem that celebrates the importance of play, joy, and critical thinking in early childhood education. While it does raise some concerns about the use of fear and extortion to motivate children, the poem's overall message is positive and uplifting. Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful piece. Write on!

Best regards,
Gervic

Greetings sindbad !

This is your fifth day port raid as part of you "A Week of Port Raid Package" from "Magical Express Delivery Wagon"  gifted to you by your Secret Valentine. May you'll find this review an inspiring and encouraging one.

Without much a do, here are the things I found out after reading your offering:

This poem delights in turning common worries about aging into lighthearted punchlines. Forgetfulness isn't a burden, it's a source of humor. Instead of feeling pressured to perform or achieve like when we were younger, the poem revels in the lack of obligation.

Many lines illuminate the pleasures found in small moments. This shift of perspective highlights the value of savoring everyday things we may have taken for granted in our youth. A nap morphs from punishment to vacation, going to the bathroom becomes a worthy accomplishment, and wisdom replaces impulsiveness.

This poem possesses a delightful undercurrent of rebelliousness. From scaring drivers with the car horn, to subtly defying social norms by renaming common terms, it suggests getting older doesn't mean becoming sedate. The humor has a mischievous quality hinting that those reaching their senior years might still have tricks up their sleeves.

The poem connects with people of all ages. Younger audiences might visualize themselves enjoying a worry-free "Senager" lifestyle while older audiences will appreciate the honesty and relatable scenarios woven into the verses. This multi-generational appeal gives the poem an enduring, even classic quality.

Perhaps the most positive message within the poem is about attitude. Rather than lamenting physical changes or lost abilities, it presents getting older as a time for shifting priorities, finding a unique brand of humor, and appreciating the simplest aspects of life.

Ultimately, this is a good poem. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing your works to us. Write on!

Best Regards and Happy Valentine's Day!
Gervic

Greetings sindbad !

This is your fourth day port raid as part of you "A Week of Port Raid Package" from "Magical Express Delivery Wagon"  gifted to you by your Secret Valentine. May you'll find this review an inspiring and encouraging one.

Without much a do, here are the things I found out after reading your offering:

Your poem's power lies in its stark presentation of suffering. The relentless barrage of images showcasing societal breakdowns creates a disquieting tone. Instead of a traditional narrative or an argument, the poem relies on an accumulation of disturbing moments. These range from large-scale chaos ("malls burning") to chillingly personal violations ("female molested turn mute"). This structure doesn't allow for light or positivity to enter the picture.

The writer, although confronted with overwhelming societal collapse, doesn't look away. This act of observation could be seen as its own form of defiance. Even when feeling powerless ("clipped conscience"), the speaker documents the events, suggesting a refusal to let these traumas be erased or forgotten.

Although the poem itself might not evoke positive emotions, its bleakness could provoke a powerful empathetic response. Readers could be disturbed to the point where they're motivated to take action against the kinds of injustices portrayed. The jarring nature of the poem may even inspire introspection about one's own complicity in similar, even if smaller-scale, societal failures.

Your poem exhibits a painful emotion. However, its unfiltered approach could have merit from an artistic standpoint. Some audiences value an authentic depiction of darkness as it forces confrontation with unpleasant realities. Its refusal to offer false comfort or platitudes can even be seen as a kind of brutal honesty.

Ultimately, this is a great piece. I enjoyed reading it and I learned a lot from this. Thank you once again for sharing your works. Write on!

Best regards,
Gervic

Greetings sindbad !

This is your fourth day port raid as part of you "A Week of Port Raid Package" from "Magical Express Delivery Wagon"  gifted to you by your Secret Valentine. May you'll find this review an inspiring and encouraging one.

Without much a do, here are the things I found out after reading your offering:

Implicit in the poem is the power to stop destructive patterns. If a child sees only criticism and hostility, the poem posits they'll perpetuate those. Conversely, nurturing love and support has the potential to break chains of negativity that may have plagued families for generations. This unspoken aspect is incredibly optimistic.

As the poem acknowledges children learn from both light and dark, it hints at something within ourselves drawn to the better qualities. A shy child may still yearn for acceptance, a child surrounded by hostility may still instinctively know something isn't right. This suggests that on some level, humans gravitate towards what the poem promotes, making it a message of nurturing rather than forcing unnatural change.

Consider how those nurtured by the poem's principles go into the world. They become the patient teacher, the just community leader, the compassionate friend. While an individual focus, the poem also reminds us the good we instill reverberates far beyond a single child, potentially impacting countless lives across a community.

Truly, this is a magnificent poem worth reading. It's a thought-provoking piece that bears meaningful content worth pondering upon. Thank you so much for sharing this. Write on!

Best regards,
Gervic

Greetings sindbad !

This is your third day review as part of your "A Week of Port Raid Package" from "Magical Express Delivery Wagon"  gifted to you by your Secret Valentine. May you'll find this review helpful and encouraging.

Delving deeper into its content, here are the things I noticed:

You masterfully navigates contrasting facets of Mumbai, weaving them into a cohesive narrative. The juxtaposition of rich and poor, fast and slow, sweet and sour creates a vivid tapestry of the city's diverse experiences. It's not just a description, but an invitation to immerse in the city's dynamic heartbeat. This piece ​goes beyond words, painting a picture with vibrant sensory details. From the rhythmic "cooker whistles" and "traffic jam horns" to the steaming "tea kettles" and "spicy chutney," it engages the reader's senses, creating a truly immersive experience.

Though acknowledging the hustle and hardships, the poem shines a light on the unwavering spirit of Mumbaikars. From the "energetic mornings" to the "crazy nights," it highlights the city's infectious energy and determination, even amidst challenges. Lines like "people face hardships, but still say 'it's fine'" encapsulate this resilient spirit.

You beautifully weaves together the diverse cultural and religious tapestry of Mumbai. From the mention of Mount Mary in Bandra to Haji Ali, it portrays a city where people of different faiths coexist, celebrating festivals like Diwali and Holi together. This emphasis on unity in diversity strengthens the poem's message of inclusion and acceptance. The humor adds a relatable and lighthearted touch. Lines like "milkman mixing water is not a cheater" and "billionaire to beggars, all found in this city" inject a dose of wit, making the city's complexities more relatable and engaging for the reader.

The piece concludes by drawing a powerful analogy between Mumbai and a mother. This deeply personal touch resonates with anyone who has experienced the city's nurturing, challenging, and unforgettable nature. It evokes a sense of nostalgia and connection, leaving a lasting impression on the reader. While providing a realistic portrayal of Mumbai's life, the poem goes beyond mere description. It captures the city's essence, celebrating its spirit, diversity, and the unwavering human spirit of its people. It's a love letter to a city that, despite its complexities, holds a special place in the hearts of millions.

In essence, "Mumbai" is more than just a poem; it's a vibrant narrative that transports me to the heart of the city, inviting me to experience its energy, challenges, and undeniable charm. Thank you for letting me experience what life in Mumbai feels like while reading this piece. I have learned a lot about Mumbai and I'm glad to have found your magnificent work of heart and mind. This inspires me to also write something about my place and let everyone knows what our place has to offer. Truly, I had a wonderful read. Thank you for sharing this to us. Write on!

Best regards,
Gervic

Greetings sindbad !

This is your third day review as part of your "A Week of Port Raid Package" from "Magical Express Delivery Wagon"  gifted to you by your Secret Valentine. May you'll find this review helpful and encouraging.

Delving deeper into its content, here are the things I noticed:

The poem unfolds like a personal memoir, weaving together anecdotes and vivid descriptions to create a compelling narrative. We're transported to the speaker's childhood, experiencing their comfort in the grandmother's presence through details like shared snacks, bedtime stories, and walks in the park. This masterful storytelling fosters empathy and allows readers to connect with the emotional journey.

Your poem goes beyond simplistic depictions of love. It explores the multifaceted nature of love within families across generations. We see the unconditional and comforting love of the grandmother juxtaposed with the conditional love and expectations of parents, teachers, and friends. This nuanced portrayal prompts readers to reflect on the different forms and complexities of love in their own lives. While rooted in personal experiences, your poem transcends the specific and tackles timeless themes. The contrast between traditional and modern family structures resonates across cultures and generations. The poem prompts reflection on the values we inherit, the impact of societal changes on family bonds, and the importance of cherishing loved ones.

Your words are rich with sensory details and evocative imagery that bring the grandmother and her world to life. We smell the scent of spices in her kitchen, feel the warmth of her hand, and hear the soft whispers of bedtime stories. This immersive experience strengthens the emotional impact and allows readers to truly understand the speaker's connection with their grandmother.

You didn't shy away from the complexities of family dynamics and societal changes. Your piece contrasts the close-knit family of the past with the fractured families of the present. This poignant comparison invites reflection on the potential consequences of modern life on family bonds and encourages readers to consider how they can nurture strong family connections.

This piece serves as a beautiful tribute to the unique and irreplaceable role grandparents play in our lives. It celebrates their unwavering love, patience, and guidance, highlighting their ability to provide stability and comfort during childhood and beyond. This heartfelt appreciation resonates with anyone who cherishes their own grandparents or hopes to one day become one.

You take us through a range of emotions, from the joy of childhood memories to the sadness of loss and the concern for fractured families. However, it ultimately ends on a hopeful note, reminding us of the enduring power of love and the importance of cherishing the positive memories of those who have shaped us. This closure leaves readers with a sense of warmth and appreciation.

By skillfully weaving together personal anecdotes, vivid imagery, and timeless themes, "DEMEANOR GRANDMOTHER" offers a poignant reflection on love, family, and the passage of time. It celebrates the enduring power of grandparents and encourages readers to cherish their own family connections while acknowledging the challenges of the modern world. Truly a magnificent, thought-provoking piece bearing an unfathomable meaning about life. Thank you so much for sharing this. Write on!

Best regards,
Gervic