Cindy's (ghadean) Reviews

Hi there Messywriter!

I am Ghadean, a fellow newbie and I am reviewing through the review a newbie section of this website. The title "Unworthy" is way too simple but t he impact it will bring to the readers is immense. The description creates a preview of how this piece would appear as you started to inflict imagery from there.

I can see great metaphor in this simple and short piece. I love the way you associate shiny to that someone you saw at your school's hallway. Though it has to be spelled "shiny" not "shinny". Perhaps a typo.

Good one! Thanks for sharing! Write On! Cheers!

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Review of Dry Lightning

Review by Cindy

Rated: E | (4.0)

Hi there DragonWrites!

I was reading through the Read and reviews section of this site and found your wonderful piece. The title is kin of mysterious, it is catchy though. I wanted to know why you named it that way. I can't think of possibilities why lightning is dry, thus I was earnest to know why with your piece.

This is a very short narrative but have a strong and vivid imagery. Not bad for a writing exercise. I want to read more of your works. Thank you and Write on!

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