|Hi there JWG!
I am Ghadean, a fellow newbie and I was reviewing through the Read a Newbie Page of this website. With the title alone, I thought all the while that your piece would tackle more into having nothing to do, or shall I say, the writer was feeling lazy at this time. But I was wrong, I never thought it's all about spiritual, life and death.
The rhyming scheme is superb as it follows AABB pattern. This piece is something worth to ponder upon. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece. Write on!