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Review of Unworthy  
Review by Ghade Ezekiell
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi there Messywriter!

I am Ghadean, a fellow newbie and I am reviewing through the review a newbie section of this website. The title "Unworthy" is way too simple but t he impact it will bring to the readers is immense. The description creates a preview of how this piece would appear as you started to inflict imagery from there.

I can see great metaphor in this simple and short piece. I love the way you associate shiny to that someone you saw at your school's hallway. Though it has to be spelled "shiny" not "shinny". Perhaps a typo.

Good one! Thanks for sharing! Write On! Cheers!


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Review of Killin Time  
Review by Ghade Ezekiell
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi there JWG!

I am Ghadean, a fellow newbie and I was reviewing through the Read a Newbie Page of this website. With the title alone, I thought all the while that your piece would tackle more into having nothing to do, or shall I say, the writer was feeling lazy at this time. But I was wrong, I never thought it's all about spiritual, life and death.

The rhyming scheme is superb as it follows AABB pattern. This piece is something worth to ponder upon. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece. Write on!

Cheers!


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Review of Dry Lightning  
Review by Ghade Ezekiell
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi there DragonWrites!

I was reading through the Read and reviews section of this site and found your wonderful piece. The title is kin of mysterious, it is catchy though. I wanted to know why you named it that way. I can't think of possibilities why lightning is dry, thus I was earnest to know why with your piece.

This is a very short narrative but have a strong and vivid imagery. Not bad for a writing exercise. I want to read more of your works. Thank you and Write on!


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