I have to say this, its was pretty beautiful on how you described yourself. It was very in depth to how you let others see yourself. I mean it was pretty amazing about how descriptive this poem was. I wish to see more words from you signing out your friendly reviewer.
Wow this was a good read, I wonder what its like to be married. Then again I've read about marriage and its not worth it unless its the right person. Anyway this was a good read so far, I've been reviewing a lot of stories so this is in the top ten. I hope to read more like this
Well this story was a good read. Out of the current stories I've read, this one seems more tamed than the other ones. Was this from the writer's point of view? Because it was all in First-person narrative. Still this was the best story from you ever.
Oh my god, this was a f***ing I, Robot but with a darker twist! See this is why humanity should take a break from advancing their life. I mean after what Mike and Roy just went through its better to take it slow and enjoy the things we have. Was that the lesson? Anyway good story
This was beautiful, I felt sorry for the little kid at the beginning. He reminds me of my nephew Junior. It was kind of sad that the kid didn't know his moms name. That foster mother sounds like a cruel woman. Or a cartoon villain. I hope he never goes back to her.
This was a good read, the title fits the story perfectly. I wonder why does greed turn people into the embodiment of evil. I guess it would make some sense, since greed is a sin, and people pay for it with their souls. Anyway I hope you liked this review as much as I liked your story
This was a nice description of the dollar bill, I hope to read more like this whenever I get the chance. I wonder if you'd like to chat if you ever get the chance to be online. IM me. Its that little speech box next to that plus sign next to that E-Mail square.
Wow, well finally I get the chance to read part two. I'm glad you got to meet your online BF in person so you can get serious with him. I can understand why you were nervous about meeting him in real life. I wish you both the best of like on your quest known as love.
Wow, this was deep and beautiful. You are right, nothing can be earned without a sense of purpose so I can understand why you wrote about it. I'm not much of a baseball fan but when it comes to poems, their alright. I wish to read another poem from you.
That was beautiful. I can understand why you would want to meet him after all you've been through, plus the break up must've been hard at the midpoint of the story. I hope to read more of this story to see how it turns out for you and Ru. I wish you the best of luck
This was nice. I can understand why you wrote this. I actually have two reasons why you wrote this. One is out of boredom and you wanted to do something. Two was you were tired and felt a creative spark ignite inside your mind and you wanted to write it out. Either way its still good
Wow, that was beautiful. This poem describes Life's thunderstorm does it not? If so then you really captured it perfectly, I hope to read another poem from you whenever I get the chance, also if this did not reflect life then I'm sorry for wasting your time
Wow this is really deep. I am glad I clicked on Review to see this. I hope to read more poems like this in the next few days. So this was a dedication to people who were guest at the dinner table? If so then it is really deep, sorry for sounding redundant.
This is in awesome poem. It speaks on some many levels. This is what people should read when they move to a new place. I love this. Staring Over is an awesome poem. I hope you make or have another one of these poems. Like Hoping for a better tomorrow.
This poem has spoken to me, it says the person who made me should be rewarded for their integrity. Such writing should be a gift for you. YOu must have made this with your eyes closed. I can tell this is about the families who lost loved ones in the war.
Nice poem. I can say this was well written. No grammar mistakes. No Punctuation issues. This actually made my day. Thank you for brightening up my world you wonderous person, this is award winning right here. Award winning indeed. I must say this is a very written
This is one awesome story or letter so to speak. It speaks on numerous levels such as self-congratulatory. It even borders on the mirrored life of everyone who likes this website. You have captured the lives of many people. And for that I commend you my good man or madam.
This interactive is the most interesting I've seen out of the bunch. It is unique due to no one posted something like this. I have to say you kept the originality of this interactive. You kept the character punished which proves your honest in the title
Well this is a very interesting read. I like the chapter give to her mother. I also thought some of the choices were few but that's alright. I found it hard to believe that her dad gave her $100 dollars for her birthday. Maybe 20 or 30 dollars. Still I think this is a very good read and look forward to read more in the near future.
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