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Review by gladiola
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello DarkDragon59
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your story entitled Allerednic and her mom Allavera.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

*Reading*Overall impression :*Reading*

I think there is a similarity between this story and that of Cindrella. I liked reading it especially that it was written in 4th grade. That is a good talented author and you would probably continue to write amusing staff on your own.


*ThumbsUp*What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
The idea of their clothes changing to rugs after the time they were suppose to come at was a nice one.


*Sun*Suggestions/Comments :*Sun*

The story had some unexplained incidents, like who spanked Nej when she got home, because I understood that she arrived home before Allerdenic and Allavera. However I understand that a 4th grade student wouldn't give a reason for everything and for that age, that story is a great and interesting read. the swapped end looked great as well. *Smile*



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Review of Nude Bowling  
Review by gladiola
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hello Tim Chiu
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your poementitled Nude Bowling.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

*RollEyes*Concept/Premise :*RollEyes*

A girl bowling while being nude. That is a strange story to tell!


*Reading*Overall impression :*Reading*

I liked this poem. Its idea is new and I loved how you well expressed what you wanted to say. I could imagine this girl and how she plays. I know she does that for more attention but probably she won't get enough though. It is an interesting read!

*Sun*Suggestions/Comments :*Sun*

I couldn't quite get "Not like nudeness, she can't stand… " How doesn't she bear nudeness when she herself played as a nude?




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Review by gladiola
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *CakeP*

Hello Jim
I am here to offer my review for "What If Roles Were Reversed?" . I chose it because I wanted to give you a review on your second account anniversary and also the title seems interesting. Happy account birthday!

Tone: A mainly sarcastic tone with a bragging and careless trend when the military spoke and a responsible and assuring way when it comes to the athlete. The tone is a very creative one here applying to reversed places and adding a humorous effect to the story.

Mood: That is smart and funny. Describing the attitudes of each of the guests and the great contrast is just perfect.
The tone and the mood remained in agreement throughout the story.

Tense: Present as it is a dialogue. It is a correct choice which doesn't confuse the reader.

Point of view: First person point of view where each of the guests and the broadcaster had the opportunity to speak for himself.

Plot: Swapping the attitudes and the salaries of the athletes with those of the military people doing their duty.

Conflict: I guess not applicable here.

Story structure:
Introduction & Exposition: It became clear from the very beginning what the story was about. It was an interesting swapping and so it kept the reader hooked.

Rising action, climax and falling action: not applicable due the nature of this story as a TV show.
However everything was pulled together for the reader to understand and it was so funny to see a spoiled and rich military not caring much about their country but athletes who dedicated their lives for their sport and would do whatever it takes not to let their fans down.

Characterization: Each one had his own and distinct voice. However I think a more physical appearance description might add a bit of fun here. You could describe the military wearing the most expensive brands and having their hair style and colour just suitable to their popularity, on the other hand the athlete would be a serious average guy and dressed in rather modest attire.

Dialogue: The dialogue was amusing. I just think that some hand gestures or eye brow raising would augment their attitudes according to their new positions. However it served its purpose very well.

Conclusion: The story is a fun to read and I definitely enjoyed how creative it was. It proves how some people get a lot of glory while others who really do missions that their people can't do without, are just not much as lucky.
For that great message and great story, I would give a 4.5 stars.
If you search for the missing half, you'll find it in the suggestions above.

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Review by gladiola
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Dear Prosperous Snow celebrating
I am so happy ( and i do mean so happy) to have read this essay. It filled me with joy. It was extremely amusing and I adore cats and know their nature. I loved how that cat attacked you by mistake but she felt sorry that she harmed you and kept trying to befriend you and apologize in her way. Cats are really sweet creatures but not everyone gets to understand them. I loved how you described this cat as a fearless one but i would love to know more about her courageous situations *Smile*. I am glad you could forgive your cat so quickly and get her in your lap again. that means you have a great heart.
write on! and take care of animals on and on. *Delight*
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Review by gladiola
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hello Sssssh! I'm not really here.
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your poem entitled Instincts of My Inner Animal .
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

*RollEyes*Concept/Premise :*RollEyes*

What kind of animal are you? That is an interesting question indeed.

*Reading*Overall impression :*Reading*

I loved that poem that speaks about nature and its beauty. I loved how it clearly described how a wold is smart, and uses its senses skillfully. I love how it is cautious and how it enjoys the surrounding beauty. That poem is refreshing to read. It raises a great colourful image in the reader's mind. Great!

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Review of inspired by Jesus  
Review by gladiola
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello guenice
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your poementitled inspired by Jesus.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

*RollEyes*Concept/Premise :*RollEyes*

Some words Jesus want to say to his kids. I believe he has a lot to say and saying what we need to hear most is a great thing. Well done!


*Reading*Overall impression :*Reading*

The poem is a great one, it has a powerful message and it is aimed at encouraging people to move on. I liked how you used bible promises and how you wrote in capital what you wanted to express most. I love your poem and I like how it is simple and easy to get.


*ThumbsUp*What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
your frown I'll turn to smile.
your weakness I'll turn to strength
I loved these lines most.



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I just think it needs a bit of time to fix the glitches by revising the spelling mistakes. You just need to read it aloud again but it is a minor issue.


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Review of Is It Worth It?  
Review by gladiola
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello BIG BAD WOLF is hopping
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your poementitled Is It Worth It?.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

*RollEyes*Concept/Premise :*RollEyes*

Is parenthood worth all the hard and exhausting time a person gives to it. I really wonder and have that very same question and that is in fact what made me want to read your poem once I got alerted in my updates that you posted it. I had no intention to review today but that is just coming in time.


*Reading*Overall impression :*Reading*

That is perfect, really perfect. The way you say the story is very true and it is fast paced exactly as life is. I felt you perfectly described how it feels at every stage of one's life and through the different hardships, I guess many doubt if it is worth going on. I don't really know if everyone has that question or not but I do have it so much, I mean I can personally relate to that. I always wonder why a girl would go through so much pain and maybe lose her life to have a baby that will take a lot of efforts and deprive her of enjoying her life. Your poem showed me that each generation has the same question.

*ThumbsUp*What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
} I love the end when the father of the bride felt he was proud of his family and realised it was really worth it.

*Sun*Suggestions/Comments :*Sun*

This is just one of the best poems I have ever read. That is stunning and you are so talented. Believe in yourself.



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Review by gladiola
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Rated: E | (4.5)
*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*

Hello booklover3
I have read your article "Advice to College Freshmen" and I am offering my opinion.
I believe it is well written and well edited. You discussed a vital issue which is life of college freshmen, when students start their college and independence. It is good to address that subject and warn students out of your own experiment. Your article was simple and straight forward, yet it was wise and had practical steps that can lead to success. I am a graduate actually but I agree with all what you had to say.

My favorite sentence was "Remember, the decisions you make regarding your priorities can make or break your future career." That is very wise and I couldn't agree more.

Thank you for sharing this and I wish you a very successful career and life.
Thanks For sharing and remember to write on!
Gladiola
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Review of WHY I LOVE WDC  
Review by gladiola
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello SHERRI GIBSON
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your itementitled WHY I LOVE WDC.


Sherri I love those simple and deep words. You are a published author, yet a very friendly and modest person. I love how you still like to know the opinions of different readers here no matter how professional or not they maybe. You also like your friends and you say you are always willing to have more.
I want to thank you for what you do here, for your extreme generosity and kindness to us all. I have an upgraded membership now and it wouldn't have been possible without your group's support. You are a true angel Sherri and we truly love you.

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Review by gladiola
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*

Hello Colin Barry
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your articleentitled Internet Privacy No Longer Exists .
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

*RollEyes*Concept/Premise :Internet privacy. This is certainly a vital issue to discuss because who doesn't use the internet today?


*Reading*Overall impression :
This is well written. Your words sounds logical and you have proof for what you say, not just claims. You also explained it very well that it is easy for anyone to understand. You didn't use complicated terms used nowadays. I believe you also didn't write it in a way to make the reader panic, it is a mature way of discussing things. However, yet it is convincing and believable.


*ThumbsUp*What I liked most : I liked how you explained why things the customer is interested in always appear to them. It was explained thorougly.



*Magnify*Spelling and grammar :
It was written neatly and correctly.

*Sun*Suggestions/Comments : I would just recommend modifying the title to be something like "Does Internet Privacy really exist?" This will grab more attention and make the reader curious to find out your answer and your proof.



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Review by gladiola
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Rated: E | (4.5)

*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*

Hello Trish P. Murray
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your articleentitled My LP Experience.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

*RollEyes*Concept/Premise :How lumbar puncture feels. This is an interesting thing to know and you made me curious to find out.


*Reading*Overall impression : I think you experience was a hard one. You scared me a bit of this procedure. I am a coward when it comes to surgical procedures so it isn't new to me. I love however how you managed to describe it very well and encourage the reader at the end to bear it. I guess it is beneficial after all.

*Sun*Suggestions/Comments : I would just recommend clarifying more about the fact that they help remove pain, because you have been talking about how it felt like stabbing all through the passage but you just give a quick sentence at the end to say that it helped you. I guess that needs a bit of adjustment to be balanced.



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Review by gladiola
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Rated: E | (4.5)
*BalloonR* Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" ! *BalloonR*

Hello Elisiabetta Gabriella
I have just read your piece and I'd like to say my impression.
It is a good and contemplative thing to write, you kept describing those graceful little creatures that are so beautiful to watch. They truly make Earth a beautiful place. I love how you wrote about simple creatures and thanked the Lord for creating them.
Write on and always see the beauty in small things.
Gladiola
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Review by gladiola
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello LuciDreamer
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your poementitled The reason I love her.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

*RollEyes*Concept/Premise :The reason of loving your wife. Everyone loves their partner for a reason and it is time to hear yours.

*Reading*Overall impression : I enjoyed reading it. It is simple and straight to the point. You showed many reasons why you love her and you showed how delicate and beautiful she is. The love and infatuation are clear. She is definitely a partner and a support.

*Magnify*Spelling and grammar :
I didn't stumble anywhere.

*Sun*Suggestions/Comments : I can't think of something to improve it, you seem to have spoken up for yourself.



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Review of Side by Side  
Review by gladiola
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello guenice
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your poementitled Side by Side.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

*RollEyes*Concept/Premise :Broken friendship. That is a good choice to write about because it is always a tough experience we face. We all need someone to depend on and we feel so bad when we lose our friends.


*Reading*Overall impression : I think you described the emotions well. I can feel how the friendship was a strong one and how you regret losing it. I feel the deep sorrow and the wish to be there for each other once again. You spoke in a frank tone and we as humans need what you have discussed here.


*Magnify*Spelling and grammar :
There are few mistakes that need correction which are
Should love and cae (care) be tossed aside?
I never ment (meant) to go this far

*Sun*Suggestions/Comments : You did a good job here. Please keep up the good work and write more poems. You have a talent but you jut need to write.



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Review of Fighting Myself  
Review by gladiola
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello LG back to the writing board
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your story entitled Fighting Myself.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.


*Reading*Overall impression:*Reading*

Aw...I felt those children were just playing around me. This sounded so true Theresa, I could feel I could imagine their images fighting really hard for nothing other than practicing their strength.
The story sounded so realistic and true of kids in that age.
You did a great job in the flow of the story which seemed logic and you did the description justice without mentioning any unnecessary details.

*ThumbsUp*What I liked most *ThumbsUp*

I found you a very skillful author knowing how to manipulate the feelings if the reader and change his mood very quickly, without losing his attention or making him feel bored.
I loved how I was shocked by the fight, then sympathized with that girl who was gonna have a brain surgery that seemed really dangerous then just finding out it was a mere imagination of a kid who misunderstood what her mother was saying.
I loved how she really sounded so wise and was trying to convince her friends that she was the one who knew more.

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Sarah could{n't} hold her tears back any longer,


*Sun*Suggestions:*Sun*

I loved that story but the one thing that left me puzzled is the title. I couldn't really get how Sarah was fighting with herself. I thought I was about to read about a girl who doesn't know what is unique about her or is struggling in some way, which doesn't apply to that story. I wonder why you chose that title for that story.


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Review of Ice cream night  
Review by gladiola
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello LG back to the writing board
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your story entitled Ice cream night.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

*RollEyes*Concept/Premise *RollEyes*

A night when a family decided to go and have ice cream. Wow

*Reading*Overall impression:*Reading*

That is a real good story. I had good time reading it and imaginning those young ladies giggling as they eat ice cream. I could feel that family bonds and feel how much they were enjoying their times. It was a simple thing to do to go and have ice cream, yet it was so pleasant and everyone had fun. You did a great job showing detailed description of those kids and their parents feeling about them moving away.

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That was perfect. I didn't stumble anywhere. lol


*Sun*Suggestions:*Sun*

I guess that story is a wonderful one that I don't think I have anything to add.


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Review of Desires..  
Review by gladiola
In affiliation with Let's help each other grow...  
Rated: E | (4.5)

Hello Shibani Sanwal
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your poem entitled Desires...
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

*RollEyes*Concept/Premise *RollEyes*

The desires of a heart in love. I was so curious to know what they are.

*Reading*Overall impression:*Reading*

I reckon it is so romantic. I love the different desires that heart had and I could imagine a lover looking forward to these things. Wow it is love that chamges a person lifetime.
I love how you wish to be together, forget everything else and forget the world but just hold hands and look at the moon and the beauty nature has to offer. This is breath taking.

*Magnify*Spelling and grammar*Magnify*

I didn't find any mistakes.

*Sun*Suggestions:*Sun*

I think you did a good job here so I can't think of any suggestions for your piece.


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Review of Brain Teasers  
Review by gladiola
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *CakeP*

Hello Liam
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your poem entitled Brain Teasers.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

*RollEyes*Concept/Premise *RollEyes*

Brain teasers. That is a unique thing to wrie about because I have never come across anything on WDC about brain teasers. This idea is interesting.

*Reading*Overall impression:*Reading*

This is innovation. Using second letter acrostic to write about a unique subject is a great idea. I found the poem so cool to read. I loved how smoothly it flowed and how you described what brain teasers are like to users. I agree with you and I love that poem although I am not a fan of acrostic.


*Sun*Suggestions:*Sun*

Keep up the good work!


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Review of DEAR ME  
Review by gladiola
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Rated: E | (5.0)

Hello SHERRI GIBSON
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your essay entitled DEAR ME.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

*RollEyes*Concept/Premise *RollEyes*

Dear Me for 2010. I am always to know what everyone has to tell himself and so I was keen on reading this.

*Reading*Overall impression:*Reading*

I think this letter is one of a kind among those "dear me" letters. I find it talking to yourself in a heartful way and trying to remain strong. I like how you mention the people who you play a part in their lives and I feel it is beautiful to be a shining star in their lives.

*ThumbsUp*What I liked most *ThumbsUp*

Count your blessings everyday as always.
This is my favorite sentence and the perfect ending. I loved that.

*Sun*Comments:*Sun*

I just want to let you know that yeah you are a great member here and I depend on reviewing for your group to earn gps for my membership so to me, personally, you are a star. Thank you Sherri. We love you!


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Review by gladiola
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)

Hello acecorona
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your essay entitled My life in the year 2000.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

*RollEyes*Concept/Premise *RollEyes*

How you joined WDC. Each person here has a different story and it is always sweet to know them. Your story is a real outstanding one and it is worth reading.

*Reading*Overall impression:*Reading*

I am amazed. I can see how life isn't so easy for you, but how fate brought you here. I feel that writingis your passion that you were attracted quickly to the first interactive story you saw here. I can feel how rewarding it is to have one of your items published, in fact I wish that happens with me one day. I loved how you told your story plainly with the good times and the bad times. You have a good message to tell readers and I feel your story is an encouraging one. I hope you do get to a moderator again soon though it isn't what matters most after all.

*Sun*Suggestions:*Sun*

I just wanna urge you to keep on writing and speaking about yourself.


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Review by gladiola
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello VictoriaMcCullough
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your article entitled How Writing.Com Changed My Life.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

*RollEyes*Concept/Premise *RollEyes*

The impact of writing dot come on your life. No one here can ever deny that Writing.com has been of a great help to them but each of us has a different story and thus a different experience. I was really curious to know yours.

*Reading*Overall impression:*Reading*

I am completely amazed by your story. Your story started similar to that of many of us, where we had discovered that passion for writing at an early age, however it had much more to tell that what I would imagine. It is stunning to read these awesome achievements you made here. I loved how you had a chance to be published once more and had a contract and an ability to have books on amazon.com. I could also feel how it is interesting to have great friends who taught you alot here on WDC. I believe that WDC is more than one could imagine and I look forward to seeing what my future holds for me since you have a tendency of making your reader optimistic and eager to go on with writing and reviewing.
I don't want to keep saying too much but your piece is simply amazing. It is rather a story of success.

*Sun*Suggestions:*Sun*

I suggest wanna urge you to write on and believe in yourself. I think that you didn't think you would be what you are now years ago and so ou should really be so proud of yourself.
This is review 3 of 3. I hope you enjoyed your package. I know it is not a huge one but I was really thrilled when you bid on it with 20k. That was really so generous of you. You encouraged me and I am glad I had a peak to your awesome collection of pieces. *Delight*
Till we meet again,
gladiola


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Review by gladiola
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello VictoriaMcCullough
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your essay entitled Diana: One Woman For The World.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

*RollEyes*Concept/Premise *RollEyes*

Diana Spencer. She is definitely a celebrity that has a lot to be said about. Her name as an essay title is an eye-grabbing element as Diana's life and death had a lot of mysteries. I believe she deserved to be mentioned a lot. I love Lady Diana and that's why I chose to read that essay.

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I loved how you talked about Diana's early life as a kid. I love how you drew a clear image of her as an elegant lady which is true of her. She is definitely charismatic that she you can't take your eyes off her. I remember the great shock of her death, just as you pointed out.

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I didn't come across any mistake.

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I can only say that your essay is a nice one. I love your simplicity and straight forwardness. I loved how you said you Loved Lady Diana at the end.


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William Wordsworth



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Review of The Cat's Meow  
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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hello VictoriaMcCullough
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your essay entitled The Cat's Meow.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

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Cats. I love cats and that was what made me so attracted to this essay and wanting to know what you have got to say about them. Your essay seems to be the result of good research, it is not an ordinary one. I believe your essay will have so many people who want to read it.

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I enjoyed reading it and knowing about your lovely cats. I liked how you described your own cats and mentioned some of the celebreties that loved cats and those who hated them. I loved the fact that many cat lovers were artists and that many cat haters were domineering characters or dictators. I believe that having compassion for other creatures indicates elegance and sensitive feelings that are part of artists.

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I laughed at that show cat specially when she peeped out of the christmas box to have a photo. She looks very keen on being photographed.

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perfect

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great job so I can't think of anything to make it better.


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Rated: E | (4.5)

Hello Jim
I am gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your essay entitled My Ideas On Writing A Review.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

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Reviewing and your personal opinion about reviewing. I guess I was not surprised by many things you had to say about reviewing because I did expect them. I know what made you pissed off in reviews and what you'd never like to have so I did expect some of what you had to say.

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I loved your friendly manner that is typical of an instructor. I loved how you added the comments that you expected the reader to have and even replied to it. You wrote your article well and in a humorous friendly manner and made your point clear in concise six points. Your review was your personal opinion to it so it was like the "Jim" version of reviewing.
I also never used that "spell Check" tool in reviewing before now and figured out 2 mistakes, so my past revews must have been a shame sometimes. Thank you for adding that.

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I try to give very few five start ratings


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I just have this single issue: that I should provide reasons whenever I give a rating that is less than 5 stars and I don't feel I agree with this. I sometimes feel the piece deserves a certain rating but I can't figure out how that rating can be improved, or maybe it needs complete rewriting not just polishing. I don't know, I maybe mistaken but it is just how I feel.


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Review of Finding Me  
Review by gladiola
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello eskay
I am once more reviewing your work. I can see how much you are interested in philosophy and how you have a philosophy of your own. I can feel that you have your own beliefs which are valuable and interesting.

I can see that you did a great job by talking about rediscovering one's self and you used great imagery (especially in the last stanza) to describe what it is like to recover powerfully and regain strength.

I urge you to keep up the great work.
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