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Review of Where I belong  
Review by gladiola
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Ida_Matilda_Wright Help
This is gladiola from showering acts of joy and I am pleased to offer my review for your short story entitled Where I belong.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.
This is your newest item and I am the first one to read it. I am so excited.*Smile*

Title
The title is a great one becuase it shows how important the story is. We always ask ourselves this question and feel revieved when we find an answer to this question. Since I don't know where I belong, I chose to read this to see the experience mentioned.

Theme *RollEyes*
Moving to a better place.

Overall impression: *Reading*
I think it is great diary and you describe how you feel and end with a final wish.

What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
*Bird* I liked the starting romantic description of nature. I could see a clear vivid picture of a lovely place and a nw beginning.
*Bird* Feeling safe is really a great thing, a thing that people crave. I believe that the best place is where someone feels safe and free and you mentioned that here.

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"Here I don't smell the sent scent of the rotting"


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I don't have anything here to add.


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Review by gladiola
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Jim
This is gladiola from showering acts of joy and I am pleased to offer my review for your poem entitled Sammy And Fast Freddy.As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.
I chose to read this because I love children stories. I think you already know that.*Smile*

Theme *RollEyes*
A beautiful story of a snail and a mouse. Well, it has much more than that!
It includes a favour, a wish and friendship.

Overall impression: *Reading*
*BigSmile* *BigSmile* *BigSmile*
From the very beginning, I had a wide smile on my face. This is adorable and so sweet. Every part is marvelous and it was going from nice to nicer and the end is the nicest. What is that? How did you get such an idea? It is really brilliant, moral, amusing and funny.
I am a fan!
What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
*PartyHatV*The heros are completely different but it doesn't matter. They are still friends.
*PartyHatR* The names are so cute. I love them.
*PartyHatP* Freddy is so naughty. It appealed to me.
*PartyHatO* Being helped by a friend is really great.
*PartyHatG* The end is marvelous. The wish the snail had is a reasonable one. I believed it and I loved it actually.
*PartyHatB* The end is incredible because they became friends to rely on each other, which everybody needs.

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I think the title could be Slow Sammy & Fast freddy. But it is not essential. Just to show the contrast.

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Review by gladiola
In affiliation with Let's help each other grow...  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Persephone
This is gladiola from "Let's help each other grow- Closed"  and I am pleased to offer my review for your poem entitled My little Evangeline.As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

Theme *RollEyes*
A poem to a daughter, which has not been born yet.

Overall impression: *Reading*
I really like this because it is emotional and so affectionate from a mum to her newborn.

What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
It is full of hope and wishes.
The mum has great expectations and wants to show her little girl a lot.
I believe this to be so sweet and innocent.

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*Sun*Suggestions:*Sun*
I don't have any here.


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Review of Intoxicating  
Review by gladiola
In affiliation with Let's help each other grow...  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hello ParrotHead
This is gladiola from "Let's help each other grow- Closed"  and I am pleased to offer my review for your poem entitled Intoxicating.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

Theme *RollEyes*
A man in love, but it seems to be, too much!


Overall impression: *Reading*
I think you are so romantic. I am glad to see this poem well written.
I never thought of love to be intoxicating this is really new and I love it.


What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
It is full of motion, and evokes the senses. I can see the image of the lovely lady, smell love and feel the pride the lover felt among others.
It is sweet and simple.

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My love, my goddess, my Aphrodite,
untamed and wild, my harlot, my gypsy.

I suggest you re-arrange the second line to keep the rhyme.
My love, my goddess, my Aphrodite
my gypsy, my harlot, untamed and wild.

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Review of My Night  
Review by gladiola
In affiliation with Let's help each other grow...  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello ParrotHead
This is gladiola from "Let's help each other grow- Closed"  and I am pleased to offer my review for your poem entitled My Night.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

Theme *RollEyes*
Describing a beautiful night by the campfire.


Overall impression: *Reading*
This is romantic and marvelous. The image I see is a vivid one of a real beautiful place with beautiful weather, laughters, romance and going more exciting with dancing.

What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
The description is nice and refreshening. Well done!

Spelling and grammar *Magnify*
This is something you have to take care of. yes, the content is what matters most, but there is no need to score less rating when your same content can score better.
In the brief description, I think you meant (don't take too serious)and I didn't know why. Also I couldn't really understand Meant to by light.
You should take care here because the brief description will greatly affect if the reader would be attracted to read this or not.
"I just cant help but love,"....can't

*Sun*Suggestions:*Sun*
I think other than spelling it is great.
You can use the spell tool at the top right when you finish to spot any mistakes.
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Review by gladiola
In affiliation with Let's help each other grow...  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Kelsey
This is gladiola and I am pleased to offer my review for your Assignment entitled 9/11: Through the Eyes of Death.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

Theme *RollEyes*
An angel of death speaking about 9/11 tragic events.

*QuestionB* Title*QuestionB*
I don't usually comment on the title. However, the one used here is one of the best. It is serious and sad just as the subject is. It is also an eye-catching one. I wanted so much to see through these eyes of death and I am curious to know what will be available for me to see. *CheckR*

Overall impression: *Reading*
I liked it and enjoyed it. A different way to look at things and I think a smart way too.


What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
*PartyHatR* You talked about death in a completely different way. It is described here as pure joy and freedom from pain and sorrow. This is fabulous and not traditional thing to mention. Bravo!
*PartyHatR* The job the narrator had is really a smart tricky one. Wt first I thought, he was an undertaker, but then an angel of death. Brilliant!
*PartyHatR* The feeling of helplessness is a true one. We are sorry and we don't have anything to offer. It is a pity.


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People were always go to die;....going


*Sun*Suggestions:*Sun*
The ending didn't seem to be to be so fitting. I think you can have a better choice.
The reason is that you made me, as a reader, love the angel of death. I sympathized with him and loved him, for feeling for others and being just fulfilling the orders he recieved. The way you mentioned death, which is a good way, away from the blach side usually used makes me feel that the angel will not give up his mission. Yes, he was so sorry for what happened but may be he should discuss that and come to know that God is there and lives are his own responsibility. I hope you reconsider that.

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Review by gladiola
In affiliation with Showering Acts of Joy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Simple Dykie
This is gladiola from showering acts of joy and I am pleased to offer my review for your Short Story entitled The Life of William Conrad Chesterton.
As a reviewer, I only offer my point of view and it is up to you to decide what fits.

Theme *RollEyes*
The life of a great boy, smart and kind, who felt for others and was supportive and understanding.

Overall impression: *Reading*
I am actually speechless. The story is a perfect one with many moral lessons. At first I thought it was a true story about a genius boy but then I began to realize that it had much more to offer. The lessons there are incredible. I loved the boy, it is not a secret anymore.*Blush*
I am also curious to know what would happen next in his life.

What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
*StockingV* Being a character who refused violence, yet with a kind and calm manner.
*StockingV* Helping a handicapped child. This is really a gret thing to talk about, not much mentioned but yet very important. The image I see of a boy trying to make another disabled child play and laugh is a marvelous one.
*StockingV* The fact that he lost his parents and that life doesn't usually go as we expect is true.
*StockingV* His life at the farm was so hard but still it showed how he felt for others rather than feeling sorry for himself.
*StockingV* Finding promises in the bible is inspiring.

Spelling and grammar *Magnify*perfect and great word choices.

*Sun*Suggestions:*Sun*
I have 2 suggestions here.
1)the character appeared to be genius and kind as he was born that way. I recommend that you show that he insisted on learning (music or the bible or whatever) although it was patient but still he was patient. This is because if he is genius, then I am not and I can't learn from him, but if he did his best and exerted efforts to learn, then I will do the same.( as a reader I mean)

2) The character seemed a real one and I kept searching google till I found out that it was your idea. I suggest that you mention at the beginning that it is fiction but with goals and inspiration.

Please when you add to it, I would love to know to continue reading.
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Review by gladiola
Rated: E | (5.0)
Arpita the forum is great
Newbies are beginning to interact and this is nice.
You also give gift points to the reviews very quickly and this is definitely a bonus since it means you are there for the group and following closely.
This is better than waiting for a long time and then coming to reward everyone for what they have done.
This is encouraging and I am looking forward to see it a huge group.
Cheers
gladiola
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Review by gladiola
In affiliation with Rainbow Madness ~ Reviews and...  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Miron
I am honored to review your poem entitled Returning to the walls. *Delight*
As a reviewer, what I offer is just my opinion and what I know so you are free to take it or drop it. You know better than anybody what fits.

Theme *RollEyes*
Feeling sorry for a previous love with a girl after breaking up.

Overall impression: *Reading*
I liked it although it is sad becuase it sounds true.
The regret her is vivid and I loved it when you said that you kind of doubted from the very beginning but you tried to ignore that. We really sometimes feel uneasy about somethings but we try to ignore although it can be better to listen to our instincts.

What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
I like it when authors write down their problems and I believe it is a great way to express feelings by writing them. Good job!

Spelling and grammar *Magnify**CheckG*

*Sun*Suggestions:*Sun*
I don't have any here.

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Review of Daddy's Girl  
Review by gladiola
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Kevin
This is gadiola and I am honored to review your poem entitled Daddy's Girl. *Delight*
As a reviewer, what I offer is just my opinion and what I know so you are free to take it or drop it. You know better than anybody what fits.

Theme *RollEyes*
A poem from a father to his girl.

Overall impression: *Reading*
This is so sweet and full of emotions.
The love there is very clear with a true ever lasting care and trying to pamper her.
It is heartful and loveable.

What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
*BalloonGo*Believing that being with your baby girl is the best place in the world.
*BalloonP* Always wanting to see her happy and smiling.
*BalloonY* The message is great and honest.

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*Sun*Suggestions:*Sun*
I wanted a hint about how she looked in dad's eyes. What is most beautiful in her?

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Review of In The Grass  
Review by gladiola
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello nightflower
I have been reading In The Grass and this is just my opinion.


Theme *RollEyes*
Witnessing 2 snakes mating at your yard.

Overall impression: *Reading*
I love nature observations especially when it comes to animals.
The way you described how they looked is fabulous, and I could see their image in my mind.
Your poem is concise and to the point and you leave it to the end to get what it was about.
Well done indeed!





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Review of Lost - One Memory  
Review by gladiola
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hello Victoria
I have been reading Lost - One Memory and this is my opinion.


Theme *RollEyes*
Forgetting.

Overall impression: *Reading*
I loved that. Honestly, this is one of the best essays I've ever read and for this, I am becoming your fan.
I really laughed at what you said and what I like most is that they are true things. You state things that happen all the time, like forgetting why you came to a room or what you wanted to buy from the supermarket or what you said before. The way you mentioned this is really attention gripping and amusing and I definitely enjoyed the read. You rock.


What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
I liked it all especially standing in the supermarket "like a lost child". This is a funny similarity but again true. Also not knowing where the list was at the end seemed perfectly fitting.*CheckV*

Flow *Hourglass*great

Spelling and grammar *Magnify*
I didn't find any problem with that.

*Sun*Suggestions:*Sun*
Your style is nice and easy so keep it up.


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Review by gladiola
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Hello mysterious
I have been reading The beast within... and this is just my opinion and what I know so you are free to take it or drop it. You know better than anybody what fits.
*Ornament4G* I am happy to review you on your 7th year account birthday. *Ornament4G*

Theme *RollEyes*
Anger and trying to take revenge of people who annoy us.

Overall impression: *Reading*
I like that I didn't know what the beast was and couldn't expect it till I read your poem. It is nice and true. Many people regret that they couldn't control their anger and regret changes nothing.
It is thought provoking and a good piece of advice.
I enjoyed the read.
Flow *Hourglass* good

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I don't know if you are still willing to work on it, after about 6 years of creating it, however I think it is worth it.
I feel you should add to it; like warn from the drawbacks of letting this "beast" free.
Just by answering a simple question, what does that beast do? or why should I refuse to listen to it.
I hope that you write more from now on and make the best use of your gift.


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Review of Fred the Fish  
Review by gladiola
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello Harry
I have been reading Fred the Fish and this is just my opinion and what I know so you are free to take it or drop it. You know better than anybody what fits.


Theme *RollEyes*
one fish saving its friend ( the fish) its honey.


Overall impression: *Reading*
I loved the idea because I am a fan of children stories, especially the ones including living creatures like fish that you used in here. I loved the idea that fish was drinking honey, which is new to fish. I liked also the up to date fish that oredered the honey online.


What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
I loved when the fish chased the evil one to help its friend have its honey back. It sounds funny and more importantly moral. A story with a message is great.

Flow *Hourglass* good

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For the spelling:
tasting his friends honey by spreading some on should be friend's
Bob said indicating a pot of fresh honey he order online from should be ordered.

I think that grammar requires a quick review to fix any glitches.

Well, all the creatures think it’s a town but between you and me, it’s a pond should have a comma added to become
Well, all the creatures, think it’s a town but between you and me, it’s a pond


Also when you are done with a story, use the spell tool at the top right of the screen to check any spelling mistakes there.


*Sun*Suggestions:*Sun*
Just take care that spelling ang grammar are important things here. Try as you can to show more than tell.
I know that you are new here and it is great to have one of your first stories like that. When I was new, I had many more mistakes, so don't be disappointed by the ratings. They are to help you improve because if everybody got 4.5 and 5, these ratings will lose their value.
So please write on and don't hesitate to contact me for any comments or questions.


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Review of Prisoner  
Review by gladiola
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Hello Gracie Jackson
I have been reading Alive and this is just my opinion and what I know so you are free to take it or drop it. You know better than anybody what fits.


Theme *RollEyes*
a beautiful song about love.


Overall impression: *Reading*
I would love to hear that being sung. This is really romantic and I loved that love will make you survive. I agree because who doesn't need love.


What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
How you compared between being lonely and its bad impact on you with love and how it fills your life. I really liked it.

Flow *Hourglass* good

Spelling and grammar *Magnify*good

*Sun*Suggestions:*Sun*
just add a little more to it.


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Review by gladiola
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hello Countrymom - Just Passing Thru
I have been reading IN THE SHADOW OF THE CROSS and this is just my opinion and what I know so you are free to take it or drop it. You know better than anybody what fits.
You have been a judge for my work before and I am glad to review yours now.

Theme *RollEyes*
my words can't be more powerful than the title, the shadow of the cross. Beautiful missions fulfilled on the cross.


Overall impression: *Reading*
I loved this.


What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
for I know He cares for me, even when I've lost my way
this really affected me personally, it is relieveing to know that when we are lost, for any reason, God is there by our side. He would never let us alone.

Flow *Hourglass*nice

Spelling and grammar *Magnify*correct

*Sun*Suggestions:*Sun*
Leave it untouched!

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Review of Valentines  
Review by gladiola
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Gotta Be Me
I have been reading Valentines and this is just my opinion and what I know so you are free to take it or drop it. You know better than anybody what fits.


Theme *RollEyes*
Beautiful and precious words that you wrote to your husband.


Overall impression: *Reading*
This is really so romantic and heartful. Your joy to be his wife, and how you feel is really well said in fine words.


What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
I liked the poem because it is the best valentine gift anybody can have.

Spelling and grammar *Magnify*
And now Ive finally started seeing
It is supposed to be I've


*Sun*Suggestions:*Sun*
Please write on again. Why did you stop? You have so much to offer and so please don't waste your talent.


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Review of Lost Soul  
Review by gladiola
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Angela_Ashes
I have been reading Lost Soul and this is just my opinion and what I know so you are free to take it or drop it. You know better than anybody what fits.


Theme *RollEyes*
searching for love and expressing your suffering without it.

Overall impression: *Reading*
I am greatly influenced actually. I could feel how sorry the poet was and how desperate for love. Love is really needed by everybody, whether good or bad, storng or weak.

What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
The warmth and tenderness of being needed by another,
This part really evoked my emotions. You have been successful to express the realitic feeling of being without love.

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The poem is sad and I think a poet should see hope and beauty even where there is none. Therefore, I suggest giving a happy ending to it, like for instance saying that despite all this, but you are still waiting and sure that one day you will find it, no matter how late it comes. Somethings are worth to wait!


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Review of Wedding in White  
Review by gladiola
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Purple n Emerald Clovers
I have been reading Wedding in White and this is just my opinion.


Theme *RollEyes* A girl who meets her old love at her wedding.
Overall impression: *Reading*
wow
The idea is great and realistic.

What I liked most : *ThumbsUp*
the story was told with nice details, still in a very small space and few word count.
This is perfect.

Flow *Hourglass* Excellent.

Spelling and grammar *Magnify*Excellent.

*Sun*Suggestions:*Sun*
Too perfect to have any.





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Review of Night, God  
Review by gladiola
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dear MissDenise
I have been reading Night, God and this is just my opinion .


Overall impression:*Reading*
I loved the poem, the words are well chosen and you thank God for the dreams which is new to see someone thanking about them. They are really useful to us whether we realize it or not.
You used suitable words to describe the words and the words greatly fit.
What I liked most :*ThumbsUp*


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Review by gladiola
Rated: E | (4.5)
I definitely agree with you. Being creative should not mean using lousy language. Stumbling on typos and grammatical mistakes, which I am still working on to eliminate, would drive many writers away. It may even make things appear to be meaningless. Writing correctly is also respectful to the readers or otherwise, the author can write to himself.

Also it is not a shame to learn from other authors, no matter better or less.

You have elaborated thses facts quite well.
Thanks and write on.

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Review by gladiola
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Dear MoralityKid
I have been reading The End and this is just my opinion so you are free to take it or drop it. You know better than anybody what fits.


Overall impression:*Reading*
I enjoyed your story chapter very much.
Great narration of the way back home with different things the guy cam across. The way you described things appealed to my senses and I already could see images of what was going on.
I really believe that it is a good beginning chapter and I urge you to keep going.

What I liked most :*ThumbsUp*
The connection of the purple eyes and the purple light he saw at the end seems interesting.

*Sun*Suggestions:*Sun*
simple typo and grammatical mistake need correction, here what I found.
I live on Thorney Leys, so you’re not too much of a burden mate” He assures me, as if he had read my mind. It should be assured.

“Wierd nickname” I confessed. It should be weird.


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Review of The Tick Tock Cat  
Review by gladiola
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello again Sticktalker
I have been reading The Tick Tock Cat and this is just my opinion .


Overall impression:*Reading*
So happy and excited. I even became a fan of the item. I love cats and I do agree that cats are different. Like humans, each cat has its personality.
Nice description of how it acts. I simply loved it.
What I liked most :*ThumbsUp*
I loved it all actually from the beginning to the end. Especially the part when it spread the dust becuase really cats are naughty. And the end about scratches also suits the story heroine, the cat, very much.

*Sun*Suggestions:*Sun*
Just write on and on.

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Review of Dear Me - II  
Review by gladiola
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Sticktalker
I have been reading Letter to Me for 2010 and this is just my opinion so you are free to take it or drop it. You know better than anybody what fits.


Overall impression:*Reading*
I liked it very much. It is an organized letter and to the point.
You know what you achieved and what you didn't.

What I liked most :*ThumbsUp*
The idea is nice to write a letter to yourself with what your goals are for a coming year, not just let times pass.
Your optimism in believing that you can write a novel better than your NANO is contagious and I liked it very well. I am thinking of writing one to myself when my goals become clearer.

*Sun*question:*Sun*
why or how did your writing output decline ??and are you working on that?

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Review of Stopgap  
Review by gladiola
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi Nicki feeling healthy
I have been reading Stopgap and this is just my opinion .


Overall impression:*Reading*
This story is really impressive with accurate description. All the problems were covered at the end. I had mixed feelings, from excitement about taking the money, then sorry for the unlucky boy whose father is hardhearted and finally relief when I knew they didn't get away with it.
The ending seemed realistic and not known earlier.
I loved it.

What I liked most :*ThumbsUp*
I loved how Van saw himself in the young boy. I think it is true as sometimes we see ourselves in children and we know how they feel about it. Different feelings could be evoked like anger, misery or fear.

The word-pictures you mentioned really appealed to my imagination.

*Sun*Suggestions:*Sun*
It seems too perfect to have any.
Write on and on and on.
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