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Review of Storm  
Review by Raven claus
Rated: E | (3.0)
I like that you define both haiku and senryu but you don't say whether you've written is haiku or senryu. It has good imagery. I especially like the use of opposing images in the final line of the poem it paints a very good picture. I also like the double image of impending blanket.
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Review of Mysterious Attic  
Review by Raven claus
Rated: E | (3.0)
This is a ghost story. But at no point was I ever really truly scared. The house and characters were well described. But it lacked the appropriate atmosphere for a ghost story.i also noticed some spelling mistakes aloud should be allowed breathe should be breath
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Review by Raven claus
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I like this story though the the amount of violence puts it slightly above the 13+ rating puts it slightly outside the range of I write in December January February. it was also a tad perditable when I saw haw vain esmerelda was I knew that the Kings childeren were the key to the riddle
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Review by Raven claus
In affiliation with Activity Bank  
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like your description of Mildred, but you don't describe moly, you explain how Molly came to be there but why would their mother sacrifice her younger daughter by sending her through one way gate way. Where she should not be able to survive, their mother is not even given a name.
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Review of Mad sincerity  
Review by Raven claus
Rated: E | (3.0)
i like the imagery


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Review of Arlene  
Review by Raven claus
Rated: E | (4.5)
it is a beautiful love poem


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