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Review of Winter Dawn  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Neva, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your form poem describes a morning in Las Vegas.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your form about a morning in Las Vegas.

The imagery in your poem is expressive, eg morning's chill laughs at darkness and penetrates dawn. Your poem is Unrhymed verse, a shadorma, a form consisting of six lines of 3,5,3,3,7,5 syllables. No set meter or rhyme is required. Rhythm has a nice flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Brom21, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes God's beauty and graciousness.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem of God's graciousness and beauty.

The imagery of your poem is expressive, eg To highest peaks and valleys low, your truth shall ever thrive and never go. The rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Flow  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi JEMac, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems,which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of water cascading.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem about water falling. The water cascades and so do you as you participate in water sports.

The imagery in your poem is vivid and expressive, eg
Flowing, flowing,
The torrent ever growing,
Against the surge I stride.

The rhyme pattern in your poem is consistent. Rhythm creates a nice flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Schnujo,           I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes man's uses of our precious resource, water.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem about our resource, water.

Imagery in your poem is expressive, eg water in my pool, water for my stroke. The rhyme pattern in your poem is consistent. Rhythm created in your poem is upbeat.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi ConnieAnn, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes a little boy's birthday party to a tee.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem. I was entertained all the way through the birthday event.

The imagery of your poem is vivid and expressive, eg race cars that speed, backhoes that dig, airplanes that soar. The rhythm of your poem is upbeat and enrrgetic, just what a little boy loves! The rhyme pattern of your poem is consistent and oh so happy. Thank you for bringing back precious memories!

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Harry, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes the life of a poet as well as several other occupations.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed your clever poem about several occupations. The best of all was the poet, in my opinion, who had many different tools, all of them words. The imagery in your poem is vivid and expressive, eg I cannot apply paints to canvas to create a picture that leaves an impression of the soul of those who view it. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. The rhythm creates a pleasant cadence.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Neva, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of the Nightengale's love of the Rose.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I truly enjoyed your poem and the nightengale's song of praise. The imagery in your poem is vivid, eg He loves its Corolla and its thorns, He loves its leaves and its aroma. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. The rhythm of your poem creates a pleasant flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Embracing Spring  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Sum1, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints an exquisite picture of the renewal of spring.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem about spring, a time of peaceful new life with many new baby animals and brand new flowers. The imagery in your poem is vivid and expressive, eg It's a time of renewal, for everyone. The form, the rubaiyat, has a most appealing rhyme pattern, aaba. The rhythm created in your poem is pleasant and reads well. .

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of " Cold "  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi T. L. Finch, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of the cold of winter, spinning yarns in front of the fireplace with cherished friends.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your very descriptive poem and felt like I was one of the participants warmed by the fireplace and telling skiing stories.

The imagery in your poem is vivid and expressive, eg for being snowed in for the night can be so much fun. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. The rhythm of your poem creates a pleasing flow of words. The form of the poem is very appealing.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Serene Beauty  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Audra, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes a beautiful sleeping woman.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I truly enjoyed your poem, which was inspired by a piece of artwork.

The imagery in your poem is vivid and expressive, eg God's miracle of perfection rests before my eyes. You have description in your poem which is very appealing. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. The rhythm in your poem is very pleasing and soothing.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Coffee Diss  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Pamela Sue, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes a dream the poet had.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading about your dream in your poem entitled "Coffee Diss". I'm always glad to wake up and discover my dream wasn't real. Dreams are rarely something I want to continue so I can savor it.

The imagery in your poem is expressive, eg he grumbles a greeting between clenched teeth. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Reading your poem aloud should help your rhythm.

Suggestions/Corrections:
Stanza 1: night's NOT nights
Stanza 4: mom's NOT moms

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Carly, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the.public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your delightful poem paints a picture of gratitude and peace.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem entitled "Grateful Hearts Bring Peace". What a pleasure it was to read. I anticipated every word and thought and could hardly wait to read your next line. The rhyme pattern in your poem is consistent. The rhythm is upbeat and moves as smooth as glass.

Suggestions:
In the last four lines you have used lighter and light then light again, and whiter and white. I was slightly distracted by what seemed redundant. You might want to change those words to eliminate a redundant sound. Your choice, of course.

The imagery of your poem is vivid and expressive, eg slow down and see what's there, what really matters in your life.
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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of My Life  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi cpgal1984, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the.public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes a young girl's acceptance and conquest of cerebral palsy.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed your poem about your battle and conquest of cerebral palsy. You have done a great job adjusting in your lifetime.

The imagery in your poem is expressive, eg my mother that I have now found me, gave me a home and set me free. The rhyme pattern in your poem is consistent. The rhythm created in your poem provides a good flow of words.

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Winter Fires  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi T. L. Finch, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
This poem paints a picture of winter's fires burning.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed your poem of the winter fires and the cold winds blowing.; spring's yet to have a turn.

The imagery of your poem is vivid, eg flames of orange burning low, there's magic in this place. The rhyme pattern in your poem is consistent. Rhythm creates a smooth flow of words.

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Mary Ann, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poem, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes a blue sunset, an amazing reflection of blazing colors on the sea.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem entitled "Blue Sunset". I am quite enchanted with this thought, as I've never seen a blue sunset.

The imagery in your poem is very expressive and vivid, eg the reflection of the color blaze in the water its beauty shows. Rhyme in your poem is sprinkled throughout. The rhythm in your poem creates a good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of 5 Haiku  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Schnujo, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints an exquisite picture of winter using haiku.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed your delightful snapshot of winter. I'm wondering if your title could be more descriptive about the season.

The imagery of your poem is vivid and expressive, eg crystal haloed moon, bright white against the night sky, offering comfort. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. The rhythm created in your poem has a good flow of words.

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Do you see me?  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Sher, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes a romance now unrequited.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem of romance now unrequited. Life has its way of passing us up and making us want to ask questions of the past beloved.

The imagery in your poem is expressive, eg Are you happy holding her hand or do you regret now where you stand? The rhyme pattern in your poem is consistent. The rhythm of your poem creates a good flow of words. You might want to correct language usage problems below.
Suggestions/Corrections:
Stanza 2: do NOT does
Stanza 3: used NOT use

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Review of The Cow  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Shaara, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your children's poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes a dull bull, who never does much exciting.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed your children's poem about the bull that was dull as can be. Maybe if the bull were a cow and gave milk, the cow would be a little more exciting. Maybe if he were vivid yellow and played a cello or said "hullaballo" instead of just "moo".

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of The Angels Crying  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi HuntersMoon, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your songs/lyrics, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your song/lyrics describe the Angels crying, a way of grieving.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem, although I grieve with you for your loss.

The imagery in your song will not be forgotten, eg a song of love that's undying that will never set me free. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem in a delightful way. Rhythm in your poem creates an excellent flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Fyn, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poem, which I found on the.public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes the night Annie died.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I truly enjoyed reading your poem memorializing the beauty of the night that Annie died.

The imagery in your poem is lovely, eg The Stars were dimmed by the bright expanse of moon surrounded by a silver faery light. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm in your poem creates a very nice cadence and flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Fyn, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the. public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes a very special notebook given to your spouse on Valentine's Day.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I really enjoyed your poem about your very clever notebook you created and gave to your husband. What a wonderful idea! I like your thoughts that were included from day to day.

Your imagery in your poem is vivid and expressive, eg scribbled some days in colors of rainbow hues. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. The rhythm created is a nice flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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GerMac

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#1300305 by Maryann - House Martell

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Tim, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the.public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of love and family ties.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem about the giving and taking among family members. Imagery in your poem is vivid and expressive, eg on this God-given splendid jewel we call home. Your poem is Unrhymed and your rhythm creates a good cadence.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

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GerMac

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Review of Unforgotten  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi are wordsmith, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem "Unknown Poem" paints a picture of darkness or lifting you from the ground to the stars.

*Idea*CREATIVIT//STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem showing different ways of looking at life. The imagery of your poem is vivid, eg the light of the moon breathes with the whistling breeze. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Your rhythm reads well when read aloud.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

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GerMac

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Review of I feel the wind  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Thefleweedink, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to honor you with a review of one of your poems for your account anniversary. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of sensations we feel in moments of brilliance.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed your poem which shakes up the soul and revives the spirit. The imagery of your poem is vivid and expressive, eg a joy that fills he mind with ideas up on top of that mountain. Your poem entitled "I feel the wind" is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm moves from peaceful to dramatic.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

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GerMac

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Review of Memories Past  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Samiam, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to honor you with a review of one of your poems for your account anniversary. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of the bittersweet pain of letting go of your grown children.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed your poem about letting go of your grown children. The imagery in your poem is very nice, eg Heartfelt respect freely given now is silence. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. The rhythm of your poem is unique and creates a good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

Regards,
GerMac

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