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Review of The Old Bookstore  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Graham Diuglas. I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem painted a picture from a second hand store.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
Your poem is one I fully enjoyed especiailly including a nuance of poetry. The imagery I really loved, eg the owner was gesturing that I write something afresh. Rhythm creates, A readaloud can be read aloud. You create a good flow of words. Rhyme is a a scheme written across the page.


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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Its JustMe.......  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Stillwarerz, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your piece is imaginative , with no apologies for misspelling or anything else.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
Your piece is delightful! Your imagery is excellent and vivid, eg no apologies for your imagination.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Consumed  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Consumed. I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. The Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem, describes a spark ans a tree.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem and the poetry nuances. Your flow of a good flow and the read aloud Is pleasant. Your scheme is nature. It creates a good flow of happiness. Thank you for your good work.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi, I am McEodth, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the review pages of the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of a future that fade with memories.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem, as it made all kinds of to sense to me. Your imagery as it was vivid, eg immortal waves of time. Rhythm is well written and creates as good flow of words with a nice read aloud. Your poem is sprinkled with rhyme. Thanks!

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Neva, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem painted a picture of a limerick.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, a poetic nuance. Imagery in your poem is vivid, eg you will find your verses serene. Rhythm creates happiness in any limerick with a read aloud. A smooth flow of words creates wondeful rhythm.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Harry, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. . Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of the odd way birds behave in groups rather than alone.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem, especially poetic nuances. Your imagery is vivid, eg today the yard is devoid of movement. Rhythm creates happiness a flow of words, a read aloud. Your rhyme scheme is scattered all over. Well written.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Tim, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the. public review pages. . Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes a poetic salute to Mom and Dad.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem about Mom and Dad, and the fact that no one is perfect, Tour imagery is vivid, eg God has blessed me with a world class mom and dad. Your pattern is fairly consistent and happiness is a good read aloud.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Controlled Burn  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Fyntastic, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found by the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes a controlled burn.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, with poetic nuances. Your imagery is vivid, eg consume the fiber of my dying heart. Rhythm creates a good flow of words and creates happiness with a read aloud. Your rhyme scheme is carried throughout.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of A Love Poem, Life  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Tim, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of a poem of humility.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, with poetic nuances. The imagery of your poem is vivid, eg, splashing bubbles and youthful laughter. Your read aloud and natural nature brings a good flow for happiness.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Tim, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem is painted with the dream of professional writing.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem of rhyming about writing in general. Your imagery is vivid, eg, live those lives to the full. The rhyming poem is a read aloud and strikes our hearts with dreams. Reading stanzas is one one my favorites. A flow of words and reading aloud helps create happiness and a well written poem.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of My love  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Chris Breve, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public reviewers pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a poem of love and romance.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem today, especially the romantic nuances. The imagery of your poem is vivid and expressive, ex I grow to love you more each day. A good flow of words with a read aloud, creates a kindness. The lovely thoughts of your stanzas inspire romance.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Greater Things  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Cody D, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture, a type of unknown magic.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, including the poetic nuances. The imagery in your poem is vivid and expressive, eg a dreamer's view offer a greater vies. Your poem is sprinkled with rhyme. Rhythm creates a good flow of words especially with a read aloud. Beautiful thought. I loved this poem. I hope you write more of this.


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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Introspect  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Terry L. Finch, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a poem of introspect.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed your poem including the inclusion of poetry. Your imagery is wonderful, eg some thought on a fall day. I love your pattern of poetry and found it delightful. The flow of words is smooth flowing. Well written indeed!

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Shiver  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Winklett, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of picture Unrhymed shame

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, especially the part of poetry included. Your imagery is vivid, eg especially wings of desire inspired. Your poetry is sprinkled throughout your your poem...Lovely. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.


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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Sound of silence  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
H, Geomancer, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the Public public review pages . Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of the silent of silence.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, complete with poetry nuances. The imagery of your poem is vivid, eg the crickets raise the voice of defiance. Rhythm creates a good flow of words. The rhyme of your poem overall is some non-rhyme.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Cusp  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Fyntastic, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your , which I found on the. . Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture like a photo of perfection.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, and poetic nuances. Your imagery is vivid, eg a lone leaf begins its fall. The rhyme scream is rhyme creates a lovely fall to the floor.


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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Tim, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture like a poem paints a picture without your rhyme scream.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem. The rhyme pattern you painted was perfect. The imagery you included was vivid, eg a cool woman needs a cool man. Your restricted pattern is excellent. Rhythm creates a smooth flow of words. Well written.


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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Hwrry, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of delightful free verse, .

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem of the power of words. The imagery of your poem was gracious, eg, power to evoke evoke strong emotion. Your poem is ununrhymed free verse. Rhythm scribes a good free flow of work.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi, NikkiNoFriends, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem NoKindOfFriends gives poetic nuances.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT: gives imagery , eg in darkness of silencing the screens of snakes. .
In darkness we find a friend. Rhythm creates a flow of words.


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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi. I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your , which I found on the. . Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of a complete circle.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, full of poetic nuances. Your imagery was vivid, eg, you bring see
Nose it to an existence.
Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates s good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi. I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems,which I found on the public reviewers pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:{//b}
Your poem still paints a picture for your for your thinking.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I find reading your poem is enjoyable. Your imagery is vivid, eg not hearing the world's voice, only its sound. Your rhyme is consistent. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.
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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of A Rush Of Wings  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi DakotaSkye, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of entertaining Angels.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I really enjoyed reading your poem, about the nuances of poetry. Your imagery is vivid, eg I sit beside a cool refreshing stream. Rhyme is throughout your poem. Rhythm creates a flow of words.with a read aloud.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Neva, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of tlistening to the trees.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem and being part of the nuances of your poetry. Your imagery is vivid , eg voice of the trees themselves speaking to humanity. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a flow of worde with a read aloud.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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GerMac

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Review of Wonders of a Pond  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Ryarn Titan, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of a haiku of a water lily.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I truly enjoyed reading your poem, including the 5, 7, 5 syllable count. Your imagery is vivid, eg thoughts of a floating lily. Your haiku is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a good flow of words with a read aloud.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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GerMac

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Review of Readers Remorse  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi DakotaSkye, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of so many books, so little time.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, with its many books and so little tlme. Your imagery is vivid, eg surmounted odds beyond belief. The many books are just too many in a lifetime. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm creates a good flow of words with a read aloud.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

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GerMac

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