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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Nani, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints an exquisite picture of the sea.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, as I am one who loves poetry, especially when describing the spell of the sea. Your imagery is vivid and expressive, eg I knew from that moment that although there was no before, Somehow there would always be after. Your rhyme pattern is consistent. Rhythm creates a smooth flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Shine Like a Gem!  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Aniu, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of shining gems.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poems,as I am one who appreciates shining gorgeous gems. Your imagery is expressive, eg shine like gems, as they glisten and sparkle, yet no two are exactly the same. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm creates a good flow ow words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of "It"  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Harry, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poem, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of "it" that men hold over others.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, as I like being aware of how men treat their wives and dogs and cats. Your imagery is expressive, eg it can turn a reasonable man into a brute. Your rhyme pattern is fairly consistent. Rhythm creates a good flow of words with your poem read aloud.


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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Private Garden  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Dorianne, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review page. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of the private garden of your mind.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, as I am one who likes to focus on a single idea. Your imagery is expressive, eg the haze of sleepiness clears to become a brilliant clarity all around. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm creates a good flow of words with your poem read aloud.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of The Quiet Old Man  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Sum1, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poem, which I found on the public review Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of the life of a quiet old man.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem about the dear old man who essentially built the town and the stores. Your imagery is wonderful, expressive and vivid, eg I made this place that we love and live in others helped greatly, but they too are forgotten. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Visions  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Wolfbane, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of visions.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem about visions, as I am one who wonders how one can be so kind, yet cause so much despair. Your imagery is expressive and graphic, eg ,: Why do we share our minds with people who don't care? Rhyme pattern of your poem is consistent. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.
Suggestions/Corrections:
Stanza 3: mpetal man's nOT mortal mans


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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of What Love Is This  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Carly, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the.public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your romance poem paints a picture of your beloved's and your love for each other.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed your love poem, as I am one who enjoys romance in a poem and a Shakespearian sonnet is especially appealing, Your imagery is vivid and expressive, eg This love blooms and grows well tended. Your rhyme pattern is consistent. The rhyme pattern in a Shakespearean sonnet has perfect rhyme. Rhythm creates a smooth flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Neva, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem is a western haiku about a black masked friend of yours.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
Your black masked friend is a delightful haiku poem. I fully enjoyed reading your poem, as I am one that likes the nuances of poetry. I am familiar with your black masked friend. I had a family of these critters living on the rooftop of my life warranties concrete tiles. Your imagery is expressive in the western part of the world, eg knocked over my garbage dump cans and won my heart that night. Your haiku is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm is written in 5, 7, 5 syllables.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Jay, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on thepublic review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of a good and fine man (from Isaiah 41:10.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, as I am a student of the Bible, and need to study the Bible the rest of my life. The imagery of your poem is expressive and vivid, eg his smile could light up a room.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Devine  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Dween atheism, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public reviewers pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a spiritual picture.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your spiritual poem. The imagery in your poem is expressive, eg Divine God of light eternal. Your rhyme pattern is consistent with words beautifully chosen. Rhythm creates a smooth flow of words.

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Edge  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Pat, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem provides a canvas for a picture between hope and despair.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
Although I lamented for the situation, I was sympathetic and enjoyed your poem. The imagery is expressive and graphic, eg unfettered tears fettered down her cheeks. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem.. Rhythm creates a good flow of words with reading your poem aloud.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Maryann, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems for our May Challenge. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of the Milky Way and the starry sky.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem, as I always like the nuances of poetry. The imagery of your poem is vivid and expressive,eg the magnitude of stars is majestic, they say. The rhyme pattern of your poem is consistent. Rhythm creates a smooth flow of words.

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of A Winter's Kiss  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Life Lessons, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to% review one of your . Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints an exquisite picture of what winter is like, "A Winter's Kiss".

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, as I appreciate the nuances of poetic language. Your imagery is vivid and expressive, eg whirling winds of wintry drifts, placing kisses on my cheek.
Suggestions/Corrections: Stanza 2 and 3 it's should be its. Your rhyme pattern is consistent. Rhythm creates a smooth flow of words.

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Review of JUSTIFIED  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi A Wandering Faith, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems for our May Challenge. Please use my suggestions as you picture.ssee fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your acrostic poem paints a picture of a provider's thoughts.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem, as I appreciate the nuances of poetic language. Your imagery is vivid and expressive, eg Tell me something new. I have always provided for ~. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a good flow of words with reading aloud.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi LostGhost, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems for our May Challenge. . Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of the lure of settling down with the snow.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I truly enjoyed reading your poem about skiing through life, as I appreciate the nuances of poetic language. Your imagery is expressive and vivid, eg Racing against the passing of time, enjoying even the winter of life. Rhyme is sprinkled through your poem. Rhythm creates a smooth flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi Kjo, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems for our May Challenge. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:we are, slick and self satisfied.
Your poem provides a canvas for a picture about your thoughts of Africa.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I truly enjoyed reading your poem, as I thought it was sincerely written. Your imagery was expressive and graphic, eg like fat cats, slick and self-satisfied.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of The Jesters' Lie  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
H Sum1, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems for our May Challenge. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture for the young jester.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem about the young jester's lie. The imagery in your poem is vivid, and expressive, eg He's sick once again, and this time he knows he can't win. Title should be
The Jester's Lie..

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of I love you  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Anna Writer. I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your love poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of your love for your love.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
Your poem is a wonderful statement for your feelings for your beloved. I fully loved reading your poem of love. Your imagery is vivid and expressive, eg you own my soul, my heart, my very being. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm creates a good flow with reading aloud.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Revelation  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Elisa, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem provides a canvas for a picture of a barely noticeable change.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem entitled "Revelation". Benevelolance now has a different meaning in today's world. The imagery in your poem is vivid and graphic eg love and hate collide. It used to be a collage of dreams. The pattern of rhyme is consistent. Rhythm creates a good flow of words with reading aloud your poem.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of The Jester  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Sum1, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of a court jestor's job.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem about court jestors and their sympathy for children who are cancer patients and other jobs. The imagery of your poem is expressive, eg He's always worked hard to make others smile. Never caring about himself, yet all the while. Your rhyme pattern is fairly consistent. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of As Ye Sow...  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Fyn, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of sowing what might be unexpected.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem, as I always like hearing what a person might appreciate in life, especially seasons and locations that bring daffodils. The imagery in your poem is expressive, eg a taste of peppermint airborne. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a smooth flow or words. Nice job.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

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GerMac

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Neva, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem provides a canvas for a picture of a special prayer.

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I truly enjoyed reading your spiritual poem occurring in the valley of the shadow. Thank you, Neva, for teaching us how to pray, just what the Lord wants to hear, I'm sure. The imagery in your poem is expressive, eg I proclaim your name for all to hear. The rhyme pattern of your poem is consistent. Well done. Rhythm creates a smooth flow or words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Abyssal, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the.public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a sweet picture of your children.

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I enjoyed reading your upbeat poem about your children who are allowed to be themselves when so young. The imagery of your poem is vivid, eg sweet shrieks from the room behind me, doing what I told them not to. Rrhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm has potential for a good flow of words with your reading poem aloud.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi G. B. Williams, 
    I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group.  I am here today to review one  of your poems, which I found on the public review pages.    Please use my suggestions as you see fit.  My comments are opinions only. . 

 

 *ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:

 Your poem describes a beautiful picture of clear skies after the rain.  

 

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 I was enchanted reading your poem about one of the glories of Mother Nature, a clear blue sky.   The imagery in your poem is vivid, eg the sun took charge of the mist and the rest.   The rhyme pattern in your poem s consistent.  Rhythm creates a smooth flow of words. 

 

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 I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation.  This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious.  If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.  

 

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				Hi Jaiam,  I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group.  I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages.     Please use my suggestions as you see fit.  My comments are opinions only. . 

 

 *ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:

 Your poem paints a picture of a love relationship.  

 

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 I enjoyed reading your poem,  as I always admire hearing about a beloved.  The imagery in your poem is vivid, eg  if ever you were taken from me, I would not wish to live.  Rhyme is sprinkled through your poem.  Rhythm creates a good flow of words when read aloud.  

 

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 I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation.  This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious.  If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.  

 

 Thank you for sharing.

 

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