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Review of 3 VIGILANTES  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Playing with words, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of finding your inner self.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem as I have always admired a person who can discover his inner self. The imagery in your poem is vivid and expressive, eg. I can hear the screaming of the casualties, as there is no way to evade the grind. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm would do well with your time spent reading aloud.

Suggestions/Corrections: The whole area on vigilantes needs to be re-worked. It would be well worth it to you.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of The Fall  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Wolfbane, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public reviews pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your Spenserian form poem paints a beautiful picture of nature.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem about nature at its very best, out near a stream off beauty. The imagery in your poem is vivid and expressive ,eg, rocks tall and smooth, I even found turquoise. Rhyme pattern is consistent. Rhythm creates a smooth flow of words. Well written.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi. Daniel Francis, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of yourpoems, which I found on the public review pages. . Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes a picture of Faint Apparitions.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:.
I enjoyed reading your poem and what it's like to come across frightening ghosts. The imagery of your poem is expressive and graphic, eg frozen and trembling, they're slightly resembling , a rendering in sorrow. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Sit Awhile  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Daniel Francis, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems,, which I found on the public review pages. . Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem provides a canvas for describing "Sit Awhile".

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem, as I have always loved sitting among the roses. Your imagery is vivid and expressive, eg no argument beneath the sky is why I stop to sit awhile. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm creates a smooth flow of words. Nice job.


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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Prosperous Snow (Neva)' I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of yourpoems, which I found on the.public eview era pagesm. . Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of an author's dilemma.

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I enjoyed reading your poem ,as I'm sympathetic to needing to finish an author's work, but having more mundane chores to take care of. Your form poem, fret alight, reads well and is fun to work with. The imagery of your poem is vivid and expressive, eg I have to answer text and repair a faucet's leak. Your poem is Unrhymed verse and rhythm is a smooth flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of New Feelings  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Miss Amanda, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to honor you with a review of one of your poems for your account anniversary. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem is delightfully written, painted like a picture that describes your feelings.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I lamented your time but I enjoyed reading your poem. Your poem is expressive and expressive too, eg Wishing for the time to spend with her and recognize what these new feelings mean. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of What do you do  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Zoe Graves, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to honor you with a review one of your poems for your Account anniversary. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a. picture of your life when it's all been done.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
Although I lamented for you, I still really enjoyed reading your poem. Your rhyme parrtern has a consistent pattern of words. The rhythm created produces a good flow of words. Well written and good choice of words. Your Imagery is vivid and expressive , eg What do you do when it's all been done and fresh new words never come?

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Greg, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to honor you with a review one of your poems for your account anniversary. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your sweet animal poem paints a picture of a cat, a dog and a squirrel.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem and especially like the animal genre. Your imagery is vivid and expressive, eg Soon the cat, the dog, and squirrel all decide to play today. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
H Typingrhyme, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to honor you with a review of one of your poems for your account anniversary. Congratulations. . Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem asking our Lord to guide you today is lovely.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem of sweetness. Your imagery is vivid and expressive, eg when I walk a long rough trail, give me patience to stand up when I fail. Rhyme is well suited to your subject matter, with a perfect choice of words. Rhythm creates a smooth flow of words. Write ok!

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Just an Ordinary Jyo, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your very short stories for our May Challenge. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your very short story describes an encounter of a close kind.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your very short story, which describes a flirtation that may have lead to another close encounter were it not for anything else.


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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing. I like your way with words. Write on!

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi Breach, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your short stories for our May Challenge. c:orange} Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your short story paints a picture of the treatment of horses by their riders.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your short story and felt it was a sincere account of a short story of Branston and the others, trying to get water for the horses at the river. It was the adventurous genre. They made their way. and had some sympathy for their horses.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing. Well written. Write on!

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Review of Shugotenshi  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Hi Dr Matticakes Myra. I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems for Power's 10th Birthday. . Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem is delightful and paints a picture of the gloom you and your brother had in your life.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem and was happy to hear you and your good friend were able to help you and you and your brother. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm is created in in your poem by a good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.Well written. Write on!
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Review of Forgotten  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi bas, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your short stories for Power. reviewers 10rh birthday. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your sweet poem is about a dog who lost his owner.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
Although I lamented your short story, I enjoyed reading it and sympathized with the dog who had a tragedy, yet gained peacefulness when he heard his owner's call and knew he'd see him in another place. Very good piece that really evokes emotion.

You have several language errors, eg language usage its should be it's. There is a comma splice needing correction. There are sentences in Paragraph 4 that need reworking. You need to edit these and other problems.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
HiJace, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to honor you with a review of one of your poems for your account anniversary. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes the prolonged passing of your wife's father, Bill.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
Although I lamented over what you had to say in your poem, I enjoyed reading what you had to say.

The imagery of your poem is very expressive, eg To strain your sight, your mind, your will, holding fast, slipping away from such a labored life. Rhyme is sprinkled through your poem. Rhythm created provides a smooth flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Life  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Ashley N. Smith, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to honor you with a review of one of your poems for your account birthday. Happy WDC Birthday! . Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes a friendship which is noble now, but which will come to an end in the future.
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*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:


The imagery in your poem is expressive, eg The downfall follows the pride when all must come to an end.
I enjoyed reading your poem, and although I was sad to think your friendship will end at some point, I have hope for you and your friend.

Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm created provides a good flow of words when read aloud.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Paradise  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Kennth, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to honor you with a review one of your poems for your account anniversary. Happy WDC Anniversary. . Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes paradise before sin and Adam's act of crushing the snake in paradise.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed your poem about paradise, the time when God gave us life as it should be with no sin when creation was harmonious. Rhyme in your poem is sprinkled throughout the poem. Rhythm created provides a good flow of words when read aloud.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Paradise  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Kenneth, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to honor you with a review of one of your poems for your account anniversary. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describe

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem and felt you were thoughtful about the Bible and what happened in paradise.

The imagery in your poem is vivid and expressive, eg no thread of falsehood lies in the woods, lies and sins are unknown for love never fails. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm created provides a good flow of words when read aloud.

Suggestions:Corrections:
Stanza 2: its NOT it's.
Stanza 3: His NOT his.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Zeke, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems for your account anniversary. I wanted to make sure I wished you a most happy WDC birthday. . Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a delightful picture of different kinds of perfection.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I truly enjoyed reading your poem about your wife's many perfections, especially your honest thought given at the end of your poem.

The imagery in your poem is expressive, eg If you were only perfect, your voice would inspire composers and your counsel would be sought be all. Your poem is unrhymed verse. Rhythm created provides a good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Star Bound  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Hi Zoey Rae, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to honor you with a review of one of your poems for your account anniversary. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem provides a canvas for a picture of taking or not taking risk in life.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I truly enjoyed reading your poem and found it thoughtful and sensitive.

The imagery of your poem is vivid, expressive and easily visualized, eg But why not aim for the stars. I don't know what my future holds. Even when life has me down though I'll always be star bound. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

Suggestions/Corrections:
Line 2: sense NOT sence
Line 3: Where am I? NOT Where am I at?

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Harry, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to honor you with a review of one of your poems which I found on the for your account anniversary. . Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes your daily poet's life.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem, which was partly humorous and partly not humorous. You were serious about your discussion of a poet's life. Your reaction to seeing the red ant was humorous. Your last comment said it all! Only a few poets make it big time.

The imagery of your poem is vivid, expressive and graphic all at once, eg
Writing poems that win wide spread acclaim ~
A desire that's set many hearts aflame,
A destiny that alludes all the rest ~
Is attained by the few, the best.

The rhyme pattern in your poem is consistent with well chosen words. Rhythm has a smooth flow of words and a good cadence.
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Review of A Slice For Elvis  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Elvis, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the. public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of your friendship with a horse named Elvis.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem about Elvis and Elvis' showing of gratitude to you for your treating him to apples.

The imagery in your poem is expressive and vivid, eg so stoic in his handsome pose and flowing golden mane. The rhyme pattern in your poem is consistent, lines 2 and 4. Rhythm creates a smooth flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

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GerMac

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jaya, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of a young girl's ability and love of the game of chess.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your poem about Sophia and her success in playing in a chess tournament.

The imagery in your poem is expressive, eg a talent well nigh floored us in style. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

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GerMac

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Review of Hold the Ground  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi A. N. Light, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your philosophical poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of what it is like to try to hold onto your ideals.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your philosophical piece. It seems to me one could apply your poem "Hold the Ground" to many of life's situation. As an example, if you were gravely or terminally ill, you could refer to your poem to communicate your thoughts, your battle, your perseverance etc. to others. Good management of emotion!

The imagery of your poem is vivid and graphic, eg Raise my shield to my opponents and hold my ground. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a good flow of words when read aloud.

Suggestions/Corrections:
I try to survive NOT try and survive (language usage)
I say rise and help. It's as they say... NOT I say rise and help, it's as they say...(comma splice)

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing. Well written. Write on!

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GerMac

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Review of Summer  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Pat, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your acrostic poem entitled "Summer" provides a canvas for a picture of summer breezes.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem about summer. My childhood years were spent along the coast of California. I spent many hours exploring the shoreline and the ocean.

Your imagery is vivid and expressive, eg Mothers chasing tiny footprints in the sand. Precious. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a smooth flow of words when read aloud.

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

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GerMac

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Review of Edgar Allan Poe  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Daft Punk, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of the master of horror, Edgar Allen Poe.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem which conjured up fond memories of the Rime of the Ancient Mariner".

The imagery of your poem is graphic and expressive, eg a raven attacks my eyes, but when I don't, corpses from the graves will finally rise. The rhyme pattern in your poem is consistent. Rhythm creates a smooth flow of words.
Suggestion/Corrections:
Stanza 6: What's worse NOT Whats worse

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

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GerMac

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