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Review of Patience  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Jaya, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes the Christian outlook on patience.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem about patience. It is wonderfully written and refers to the patience needed by Job, by Ruth, like the multitudes waiting.

The imagery of your poem is vivid and expressive, eg like Mother Nature looking for reformation in human hearts. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Tim, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poem, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of the risk surfers take and the skill they must have.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem about surfing. I've surfed a little when I was a young girl, only enough to appreciate what the surfers were doing. Mainly, I body surfed and attempted to surf on a 9 foot balsa surfboard.

The imagery of your poem is graphic and expressive, eg They progressively ride the fluid and forceful waves to near perfection. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, gramma. or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Withering  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Fyn, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes winter and autumn.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your about the seasons.

Your imagery is vivid and expressive, eg seeking what lies beyond winter's heel, Words of Poe come to my mind. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a good flow of words when read aloud.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi ~Sue~I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your lyrics paint a picture about a Country Music song, which describes your love for your beloved and search for a memory.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your song which searched for memories that will soon be gone forever.

The imagery and lyrics of your song are vivid and expressive, eg why I let my head rule my heart...instead of listening to you. The rhyme pattern of your poem is consistent. The rhythm creates a smooth flow of words.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Carly, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem provides a canvas for a picture of the poet's gift to her beloved.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem, describing all that the poet's beloved is.

The imagery of your poem is very expressive, eg Mend your mind, send it far, lend your heart, tend your soul. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm creates a good flow of words when read aloud.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Ulysses, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poem, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of your desire to get out of a relationship.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your well written poem about breaking away from a trapped relationship.

The imagery of your poem is vivid and graphic, eg But I grew weary of your mysteries and rites...took to sitting alone and gazing out to sea. Your poem is unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a smooth flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of House of Solitude  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Joy, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of solitude.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem and your feeling of being alone, no matter where you live.

The imagery of your poem is vivid, eg Its bay windows keep people at bay, threatening with the confines of a cage and the clatter of shutters. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi Princess Megan Rose, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of the wishes you have for your beloved.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed the romance and adventure of the Princess and her beloved.

The imagery in your poem is expressive, eg The Princess turned around and stood motionless for a minute. Your poem is Unrhymed. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Seashells  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi HuntersMoon, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your mirrored acrostic poem describes seashells.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem frontwards and backwards. Clever!

The imagery in your poem is vivid and graphic, eg softly schussing seashell sands. Your poem is unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Sadness and Hope  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Miss Sassy, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the.public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of hope, especially when you are sad.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem about sadness and hope.

The imagery in your poem is expressive, eg Hope is a destructive kiss while I reminisce the pure bliss. The rhyme pattern in your poem is consistent. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

Suggestions/Correction:
Stanza 1: lying NOT laying.
Stanza 3: "Schelp, please come help!" we did Yelp. NOT Schelp please come help we did Yelp.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Carly, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture about meeting the day and being grateful.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem entitled "Ealy Morning Dawn", a Saraband form, and holding about.

The imagery in your poem is vivid and exquisite, eg Early morning dawn awakens. It greets the day on fiery wisps. The rhyme pattern in your poem is consistent. The rhythm creates a lovely, smooth flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of The Ugly Truth  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi theunknowngirl, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture about pretense.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem, as it was about someone who pretended to be someone else in order to get attention.

The imagery in your poem is expressive, eg because the truth only crushes the dreams; and as it ruins, inside it makes you scream. The rhyme pattern in your poem is consistent. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Minute Acrostic  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi ILuvHorses, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your acrostic poems, which I found on the request review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your acrostic poem paints a picture of an emotion.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem about an immeasurable emotion.

The imagery of your poem is vivid and expressive, eg United in a tableau of endearments. Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a delicate flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Shadowsong  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi BD Mitchell, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the request review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of your fading relationship with your beloved.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem and thought it described sincere feelings about a poet who felt a need to let go of a long term relationship. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout most of the poem, but there is a couplet rhyme pattern in the last part of the poem. Rhythm creates a good flow of words when read aloud.

The imagery in your poem is expressive, eg When's it my turn to stand in the light?...Wander the world and learn how to plan my own pace.

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Review of Colors  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Caleb Rose, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, , which I found on the review request pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of the aura of the poet's muse.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem, and found that color reveals a person's mood and emotional state. In the poet's case, it is a simple green that wants to dance. The poet describes the light and knowledge of blue.

The imagery of your poem is vivid and brilliant color, eg, Like a prism hat refracts, though light can no longer hide. The rhyme pattern of your poem is consistent. Rhythm creates an harmonious flow of words.

Suggestions/Corrections:
Stanza 1: though NOT through

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Review of Black History  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Jarianna, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of the black person's background.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed your poem about the mentality of the black people and the oppression surrounding them.

The imagery in your poem is very expressive, eg the years of pain of my people ...and shame lasting a lifetime. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Tim, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the.public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes. the journey of seeking love.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem about partners of glorious yearning.

The imagery in your poem is vivid and expressive, eg to begin to educate others on their feelings of faith...for all of their joyousness. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm creates a smooth flow of words when read aloud.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Sum1, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poem, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your acrostic paints a picture of a rhyming poem about the wonder of winter.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I fully enjoyed reading your acrostic poem and found it hooked me from the beginning. It describes a fabulously realistic story of winter.

The imagery in your poem is vivid and expressive, eg Tired of shoveling, men rest in the streets...realizing at last the wonder of winter. The rhyme pattern in your poem is consistent. Rhythm creates a smooth flow of words and god cadence.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Kitchen table  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi SandyK, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of burning relationship.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed your humorous (I think) poem about your love relationship, the chocolate cake, and memories which became bittersweet.

Your imagery is vivid, eg our mouths sweating, as the smell of chocolate penetrates our nostrils. ( Imagine! This is only the setting for the poem.) Your poem is Unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a good flow of words when read aloud.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of Forgotten Tears  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
HI MaryAnn, I am GerMac, , affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to rhonor you with a review on your account anniversary. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of a child's tears.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem comparing a child's tears to a rainstorm..

Your imagery is vivid and expressive, eg when a child's crying is done, light sparkles on wet clover and out comes a happy sun. The rhyme pattern in your poem is consistent. Rhythm creates a smooth flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

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Review of The Little Things  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Shasta, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem describes how the world could be a better place.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem and felt that you had some important things to say. about how to make the world a better place.

The imagery in your poem is vivid and expressive, eg all the people in the world never slowing down to talk, whatever happened to the parks where people used to walk? The rhyme pattern in your poem is consistent. Rhythm creates a smooth flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

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GerMac

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Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Stormy Lady, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poem, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of goodbye to your friends and family.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
IAlthough I give a moment of silence for your passing and pray for you, I enjoyed reading your poem and hope for the best for your friends and family.

The imagery of your poem is vivid and expressive, eg My soul once bound to mortal crowds is now to dance among the clouds. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm creates a good flow of words.

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

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GerMac

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Review of A Do-Over in Life  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Harry, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of what a grandpa would change in his life if he had it to do over again.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem about what a grandpa would do to change things in his life if he could do it over again.

The imagery in your poem is vivid and expressive, eg I would appreciate my various family members more...They are such treasures that are sorely missed when they are gone. Your poem is written in free verse or Unrhymed verse. Rhythm creates a good flow when read aloud.

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

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GerMac

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Review of Declare Victory  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Daniel, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem paints a picture of victory which can be gained.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem about how gaining victory can be won in any fight.

The imagery in your poem is vivid and expressive, eg trampled under the damage done to those who wonder if mercy is shown for the fearless standing alone. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem.b Rhythm creates a good flow of words when read aloud.
Suggestions/Corrections:
traitor's NOT traitors

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I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

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GerMac

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Review of Life Under Water  
Review by GerMac
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Daniel, I am GerMac, affiliated with Power Reviewers Group. I am here today to review one of your poems, which I found on the public review pages. Please use my suggestions as you see fit. My comments are opinions only. .

*ButterflyB* OVERALL IMPRESSION:
Your poem provides a canvas for a picture of life's burdens.

*Idea*CREATIVITY/STATEMENT:
I enjoyed reading your poem about how we struggle just to breathe as life's burdens weigh heavily on us.

The imagery of your poem is vivid and expressive, eg in depths of my depravity I find the need to persevere and breathe the giving air. Rhyme is sprinkled throughout your poem. Rhythm in your poem creates a good cadence.

*Pencil*TECHNIQUE/LANGUAGE USAGE/GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION/SUGGESTIONS:
I was not distracted by errors in language usage, grammar or punctuation. This comment is a disclosure, stating errors are not obvious. If they exist and are not mentioned, they are not noticed.

Thank you for sharing.

Regards,
GerMac

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