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Review of He and She  
Review by gmcferon
Rated: E | (3.5)
A good story in a short poem, consice and heart felt. I like the Hemmingway like bursts of thought.
Each sentence could be turned into a story.

Well done, Keep writing
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Review by gmcferon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Inspirational, great content. Seems like you started over with the line "I have dreams". I enjoyed it thank you.
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