|I like your work. I enjoyed this piece, fold. I love the first stanza. It really grabbed me. So simple and yet so deeply felt. Nice imagery.
Uhmmm... in stanza #15 the word go is plural. Was this intended, 'cause I can't quite gather in the meaning of the word play if it was. In #19 you do it again with "words" and "slips". It seems, to me, that one or the other of these should be singular. I dunno, fold, somthin ta think about, nothin major, that's for sure. And, let me reiterate, I really like this work.
Thank you, and I hope you win the contest.